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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tahira-2013

first of all i'm sorry dear for such a late comment , actually i was very busy 😭 , but thanks for being sooo sweet and still you send me pm , i'm very thankfull 2 you 😊

coming 2 your story , its brilliant
taarey are just sooo sweet
they just can't live without eachother
yuvi , rey and taani friendship is sooo cute
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loved jealous taani soo much and kiya i started to like her but not anymore how can she talk soo rude to taani , and now even yuvi is jealous of rey
poor rey he don't even like kiya
i hope panchi will do something for taarey
brilliant story dear , evrytime when i read your story , i feel like i'm watching YRF
update soon and plzzz keep pm me

please dnt say sorry!!! its ok dear!
m happy u read it..and comparing it yrf...😲 m god!!! that dt was really the best compliment ever!!👏 god bless u dear!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: velvetrose

amazing update ..felt bad for rey why taani didn't listen to him
hope kiya doesn't bring more mu between taarey
update soon :)

thanks dear!! ur comment means a lot to me..thank u so much!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: paruls

This line was hilarious

"Taani putar, aise lag raha hai ki tum Gabbar Singh ho aur ye sabji Thakur k haath!! Itna gusse mein kyu kaat rahi ho inhe!" 🤣 🤣

And I LOVED this line
"Rey: Haan wo I like her. Achi dancer hai, aur'aur(thinking of some more qualities)aur, " ❤️ ❤️ .

It made me so happy that Rey couldn't think of any qualities of Kia 😳

And the Taani action sequence was amazing, it was brilliantly written .👏 👏

Loved the Taarey scene, specially this line
"All rey could see was Taani's twinkling eyes, those eyes which made him fall in love with her, those eyes which always showed concern for him"

LOVED the angry and jealous Taani part in the end . ❤️ ❤️

In the precap, hope there isn't a knife lying nearby around Taani. 😆


ufff...kisine toh wo line k baare mein bola.thanks so much dear!!!😃
m glad ur likin ma FF...god bless u dear... u commented separtly for 10th n 11th chapter...
made me feel rerally good...👏 god bless u dear!! it means a lot to me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

Oops,i'm late...Sry...Chptr 9,10,11 wr awsm...Kiya likes rey,rey pretndg to like kiya in ordr to nt crt prblms bw tani & yuvi...I'm so cnfusd wt may hpn if yuvi gts to knw d truth?Hw wl tr frndshp gt afctd?Wtng fr ur ans fr so much of que...Nice updates dr

its ok dear!! u read na nw...dt is imp to me...😊 well... u will get all ur answers as d story progesses...😃
m happy u liked d update...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
pehle toh so sorry...itni late reply kar rahi hoon...busy thi...sorrryy... 😔

cumin to d update

kya update tha...i felt like banging my head on the walll... 😆
yuvi, rey, taani and kiya...inn sab ka kuch bhi nahi ho sakta...kuch bhi nahi...well at the moment yehi lagta hai...

taani was so cutee...i was literally rolling on d floor after d part of "gabbar singh"...
i tried imagining her in dat get up along rey... 🤣 🤣 🤣
and taani ki aunt ko bhi uski taang kheechne mein maza aata hai... 😆
loved that part...

and next part pe i felt like yuvi ko kiya zyada pasand hai...kitna bol raha tha uske baare mein...😆
but rey ke liye bohot bura lag raha hai...i mean he shuldnt do this... *sigh*
and i loved the way u described d awkwardness between d duo...loved dat part... 😳
anyways, yuvi ko mera literally pitne ka mann kar raha tha when he called up kiya...
i was like, yehi baaki tha ab...
isiliye jhoot nahi bolna chahiye 😉 😆
but ab rey bura phass ne wala hai...


and ab rey iss chakkar ke baare mein kiya ko bhi nahi bata sakta...cuz she will be on the 9th cloud now...and wont understand him, i guess...pata nahi kya hoga...

pura suspense love thriller jaisa lag raha hai... 😆

next part pe, i was like thank god woh atleast taani se baatein clear kar lega...i so didnt know ki ulta hone wala hai... 😲

i loved the way she got ready to fight and when she hit him...aur marna chahiye tha usse ulte-sidhe kaam karne ke liye...😆 i culdnt stop laughing at that point...
bt bechara rey... 😆

*i having a rush of mixed emotions, so pata nahi kiski side loon...* 😳

and den d amazing cute sa scene of taarey...i was mesmerized...
u knw, as soon as dat part came, i slowed down the pace of reading...culdnt help but imagine d whole scene...i totally loved it

Rey" Kali maa kahi ki... <-- yeh line kaha se mila... my stomach started hurting u knw after reading this line 🤣

and felt bad for taani...she was so happy ki rey usse milne aaya tha... 😳 and den she finds out kiya ke wajah se 😡
and rey is also so sweet...he jus left...
i felt like taani ke muh pe usse tape laga dena chahiye tha... 😆

and d precap...ho gaya kaam tamaam...ab kya hoga? =(
taani toh gusse mein rey se baat karne se rahi...and rey kaise usse samjhayega ki he was lying...phirr explanation...

ab bas hopin ki intense sa kuch mile...it wuld be perfect...bt it wont be anytime soon, hai na?

jus gona wait to watch taani ka expression...hehe...and panchi bhi kya karegi ab..? *excited* 😉

update soon...and i loved d update, esp d night wala scene...actually the whole update as always... 😆

PS: sorry itne lambe comments ke liye...u knw d effect dis FF has on me...so sorry in advance.. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow wow i loved it alot...superb...plz dear update soon!!can't wait...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

pehle toh so sorry...itni late reply kar rahi hoon...busy thi...sorrryy... 😔

cumin to d update

kya update tha...i felt like banging my head on the walll... 😆
yuvi, rey, taani and kiya...inn sab ka kuch bhi nahi ho sakta...kuch bhi nahi...well at the moment yehi lagta hai...

taani was so cutee...i was literally rolling on d floor after d part of "gabbar singh"...
i tried imagining her in dat get up along rey... 🤣 🤣 🤣
and taani ki aunt ko bhi uski taang kheechne mein maza aata hai... 😆
loved that part...

and next part pe i felt like yuvi ko kiya zyada pasand hai...kitna bol raha tha uske baare mein...😆
but rey ke liye bohot bura lag raha hai...i mean he shuldnt do this... *sigh*
and i loved the way u described d awkwardness between d duo...loved dat part... 😳
anyways, yuvi ko mera literally pitne ka mann kar raha tha when he called up kiya...
i was like, yehi baaki tha ab...
isiliye jhoot nahi bolna chahiye 😉 😆
but ab rey bura phass ne wala hai...


and ab rey iss chakkar ke baare mein kiya ko bhi nahi bata sakta...cuz she will be on the 9th cloud now...and wont understand him, i guess...pata nahi kya hoga...

pura suspense love thriller jaisa lag raha hai... 😆

next part pe, i was like thank god woh atleast taani se baatein clear kar lega...i so didnt know ki ulta hone wala hai... 😲

i loved the way she got ready to fight and when she hit him...aur marna chahiye tha usse ulte-sidhe kaam karne ke liye...😆 i culdnt stop laughing at that point...
bt bechara rey... 😆

*i having a rush of mixed emotions, so pata nahi kiski side loon...* 😳

and den d amazing cute sa scene of taarey...i was mesmerized...
u knw, as soon as dat part came, i slowed down the pace of reading...culdnt help but imagine d whole scene...i totally loved it

Rey" Kali maa kahi ki... <-- yeh line kaha se mila... my stomach started hurting u knw after reading this line 🤣

and felt bad for taani...she was so happy ki rey usse milne aaya tha... 😳 and den she finds out kiya ke wajah se 😡
and rey is also so sweet...he jus left...
i felt like taani ke muh pe usse tape laga dena chahiye tha... 😆

and d precap...ho gaya kaam tamaam...ab kya hoga? =(
taani toh gusse mein rey se baat karne se rahi...and rey kaise usse samjhayega ki he was lying...phirr explanation...

ab bas hopin ki intense sa kuch mile...it wuld be perfect...bt it wont be anytime soon, hai na?

jus gona wait to watch taani ka expression...hehe...and panchi bhi kya karegi ab..? *excited* 😉

update soon...and i loved d update, esp d night wala scene...actually the whole update as always... 😆

PS: sorry itne lambe comments ke liye...u knw d effect dis FF has on me...so sorry in advance.. 😳

OMG... your comments always bring a smile to ma face...wen i read ur comments its like m analyzing ma FF!!😊
please dnt say sorry...i dnt mind reading ur comments!!😊 they encourage me always!! thanks a lot dear...god bless u!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DIV_ARHI_TAAREY

wow wow wow i loved it alot...superb...plz dear update soon!!can't wait...😛

m glad u liked it dear..thanks a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 12

Taani wakes up and as she opens her eys she see's Panchi sitting with her broken guitar. Taani abruptly sits,

Panchi: (angry)Taani di, kya aap muje bata sakti hai ki kal raat ko yaha kya hua tha?

Taani: wo Panchi, actually, (taani was about to say something when Kiya walks in their room)

Kiya: Good morning Barbie dolls…!! (she was happy, fresh and excited, she had a different glow on her face, something was different about her today)

Panchi: Kiya? Sab kuch thik hai na? I mean tum itni subah subah yaha?

Taani was not even interested in asking her, She keeps staring at her, She remembers how Kiya didn't allow her to enter the sets, Taani gets up from her bed and was about to go out,

kiya: (smiling)Nahi, kuch thik nahi hai, (Taani stops,she keeps looking at Kiya, she could sense something grand coming next)

Panchi: (curious) What happened?

Kiya: (smiling) Kuch thik kaise ho sakta hai Panchi! Sab kuch badal gaya ab, I couldn't sleep the whole night, main sirf aur sirf smile kar rahi hu, aaj mera outfit bhi deciede nahi kar paa rahi thi, itna confusion muje aaj tak nahi hua. Har time sochti , kya yeh Rey ko pasand ayega, kya ye colour usko pasand hoga? (starts giggling, Taani keeps staring at her, she was feeling like dragging her out from her house, Panchi was looking at Kiya, thn at Taani, She didn't know what to do)

Taani: (sarcastic) aur itna deicide karne k bad bhi tumhe ye yellow dress hi mila. Rey ko yellow bilkul pasand nahi.

Panchi: Taani di!!!!! (she gives her "why so rude"look) No kiya, aisa kuch nahi hai. Your looking very pretty.

KIya: Taani…tum bhi na..for a moment I thought ki muje jake change karna padega! (looks at Panchi) but then, kya farak padta hai, According to Yuvi, Rey ko koi farak nahi padta ki main kounsa colour pehnu…

Panchi and Taani: According to Yuvi???

Kiya looks at both of them

Kiya: now please..ab tum dono ye mat kehna ki Yuvi ne tumhe kuch nahi bataya! And Taani you? M sure tumhe toh sab pata tha, tumne bhi muje nahi bataya? Jab maine tumhe bataya that I like Rey, atleast tab muje bol deti tum!

Taani: tum aakhir kehna kya chahti ho? Maine tumhe kya nahi bataya?

Kiya: yahi that Rey likes me too!!!

Taani and Panchi: (shocked) What!!!

Kiya gets surprised looking at this reaction. Panchi was confused, and Taani, she couldn't believe what she just heard. She couldn't say a word.

Taani: (thinking) How could he do this? Wo kiya ko kaise like kar sakta hai? Mujse ek baar pucha bhi nhai, Yuvi ko bhi bataya, par muje nahi, but wo aise kaise? Main uski best friend hu, (she was feeling bad, shocked, her best friend dint tell her such a big thing, she was upset now, upset for two reasons, 1. Rey liked someone and 2. That someone was no other that Kiya, Kiya-the girl Taani hated the most !

Kiya : Taani!! I know maine tumse help mangi thi and all.i still need it. Jaise ki aaj u told me that Rey doesn't like yellow.Thanks, aise hi muje guide karti rehna. (looks at Panchi) ok girls, I need to go now, Shoot ka time hone wala hai. Bye(she gives them flying kisses and leaves)

Taani: Guide? My foot!! (looks at Panchi) Rey kiya ko like karta hai, I mean, wo kaise like kar sakta hai isse? (she storms out of the room)

Panchi : Yuvi Taani ko like karta hai, par Taani Rey ko like karti hai, Kiya bhi Rey ko like karti hai. Aur kahani mein twist, Rey bhi kiya ko like karta hai?par muje toh laga tha ki Rey taani ko like karta hai, God… ye ho kya raha hai yaha? This is so complicated. Ab main kaise Rey aur Taani ko ek karungi! Pehle toh sirf yuvi ka tension tha, ab toh Kiya bhi hai! Hey rabji, ap aakhir kar kya rahe ho! Sidhi sadhi love stories mein itne saare twists?

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Yuvi with kiya was waiting outside the sets for Rey. Kiya was blushing, Rey see's both of them.

Rey: (thinking) damn. Yuvi Kiya k saath kya kar raha hai? Kahi isne Kiya ko kuch bataya toh nhai? Oh god, Yuvi ne raita pehlane se pehle I need to tell Kiya ki maine Yuvi se juth kyu bola, warna bohot gadbad ho jayegi.

Yuvi: dekh Rey, main tuje janta hu, tu apne muh se toh Kiya se kuch nahi kehne wala, isliye maine tera kaam asan kar liya, tune muje Taani ko propose karne k liye help kiya tha na? now its ma turn to pay back! Isliye, maine bhi teri full on help ki hai, Kiya ko sab kuch bataya!

Rey closes his eyes,(in his mind) damn, ye tune kya kiya Yuvi!! (looks at Kiya who was smiling at him)

Kiya: Rey, I know its very difficult to confess your love to some1, Yuvi ne muje bataya ki u like me, aur I like you too. Hum dono ek dusre ko like kar rahe the and ek dusre ko bol hi nahi paa rahe the! But now everythin is clear, (she smiles at him) m so happy Rey, m really very happy. (she hugs Rey, Rey didn't know what to do, he knew he was too late, how is he suppose to tell her that he lied to Yuvi about it, She will definitely be heartbroken, and then Yuvi would come to know about it, and it would create a huge mess.

Yuvi on the other end was happy for Rey, he was smiling. His best friend got his love, atleast he thought he did. Just then taani comes with her scooty, she had come to speak to Rey about all this, but the site was even more heartbreaking, Kiya was hugging rey infront of her, Taani was terribly annoyed now, She felt like weeping now, Rey used to hug just one girl and it was always Taani. Bt now he was hugging kiya.

Kiya breaks the hug.

Kiya: I love you too rey!!

Taani felt terrible after hearing those words, Rey was shocked too. He didn't know what to say, He looked at Yuvi, Yuvi was smiling at him,

Taani: (thinking) I love you too?? Matlab Rey ne Kiya ko pehle I love you kaha? Matlab Rey ne Kiya ko propose kar diya? (looks at Rey) how could he do this?

Rey turns left and notices Taani,

Rey: (thinking) taani?? Oh god, ab isse main kaise samjau, Yuvi aur kiya ko toh main sach bata nahin sakta, par Taani, use to main sab kuch bata dunga! Main Taanni se juth nahi bol sakta, use dhoka?? No ways!! But agar maine Taani ko sab sach bata diya then wo muje avoid nahi karegi, phir se yuvi insecure feel karne lagega.. M sorry Taani, main tumhe chahte huye bhi sach nahi bol sakta.

Yuvi: Taani!! Sahi time pe ayi hai tu, humare best friend ko ab girl friend mil gayi, (keeps his hands on her shoulder) ab hum jabi kahi jayenge tab Rey ko akele nahi ana padega! Aur ab tu officialy Rey ki tension lena chodd sakti hai, uske liye ab Kiya hai na?

Taani was justing hearing what Yuvi what saying, she was not listening to him! Several thoughts were goin through her mind, how could Rey fall in love with kiya all of a sudden, why didn't she realize that, She knew Rey in and out, still she never thought in her wildest dream that this would happen.

Rey on the other hand was feeling guilty, he didn't know what exactly was happening, He lied to his best friends. He was in a difficult complicated confused situation. He didn't know whom to tell the truth now. Taani seemed upset, shocked, surprised. He knew she wanted many answers from him, he could read her eyes. Those puzzled, confused eyes.

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Today was the last day of the shoot. Rey some how managed to perform well. After the shoot, the choreographer called all the dancers and selected a few amongst them who got an opportunity to study dance from his institute. Rey and Kiya were selected too. Kiya was excited, Rey was happy, but still feeling miserable

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Late evening Rey goes to the place where he always goes when he's upset. And to his surprise, he finds Taani there too. He keeps staring at her, She looked sad, she was staring at the flowing water, he knows she was upset with him, he couldn't see her like this. But he was doing this for her sake. He smiles and walks to her.

precap:

Kiya: Rey!! Have you seen this place? Its amazing!! Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki, muje yaha dance sikhne ka mauka milega! I mean,Royal dance academy mein dance sikhna!! Its like a dream come true isn't it?

Rey: (smiles) your right Taani, ye ek dance academy nahi, Punjab k har ek dancer ka dream hai.

KIya just looks at Rey, he didn't even realized that he called her Taani, She ignores him once.

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Posted: 12 years ago
NYC one yr
Bechara rey
He z so stuck in btw taani Yuvi n dat kiya

Plz lt him realise dat he lvs taani
N Yuvi why can't he find out dis

All hopes on u panchi nw
Help thm...

Thnx fr d pm
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