Andankaaka Colony - Chap23/24 pg. 23!! Final

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JAYASHREE

@vjayam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

rofl shamz..ratna scared of shobi this time? and sri so naughty...and maha getting caught-super...first pot and now free ride too coming with 71/2! rofl...

finally children off--that's a challenge no doubt and finally who is catching shamz's eye? which girl in green?

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Shammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Chapter 2

Shemmo is seeing outside and mesmerized. He keeps on looking at that girl, who is wearing a green Minnie Mouse shirt and a black jeans. Shemmo couldn't take out his eyes and is still staring at her. He cant really express the feeling in his stomach. He sees a lady behind that girl, who is there with a thodapukattai andsweeps after sending off the girl. He suddenly hears his mom, Shobi calling him to come down. He looks at the girl while walking downstairs and few mins later *damal* *damal*. Shobi comes running and sees her son fallen on the ground. 😆 She says "Dei unaku kannu illaiya?". Shemmo is not giving attendance to his mother, but to the girl he has seen before. He looks back and notices that she left. He says "Amma amma, antha ponnu...". Shobi interrupts him and says "Entha ponnu da? Ethachum ponna parthuthiya? Sollu da kalyanam panni vekkuren, ipdi nadantha thaan unaku kalyanam aagum illathi nee samiyara thaan poganum". 🤣 Shemmo is irritated and pushes his mom out. He continues to look out.

Pearl is getting ready to work and is all ready to drop Jinju and Smiles in their college on her way to work. Smiles says "Amma a new family moved into our colony, do u know". Pearl says "I heard it". Jinju asks "Amma got a new friend to chat with and going to get more busy with exchanging recipes and testing them on us". 😆 Pearl says "U both got too much kozhupu. Enna over aa kindal pannufying". Jinju replies "Neenga panra sapadu sapithu thaan over kozhupu". Both kids starts laughing. 😆

Shemmo is still looking out at Jaya's house and got interrupted by seeing another 2 girls coming out of their house with their mom. Shemmo says "Amma got a nice house, aiii jolly evlo ponnunga intha colony la. Namaku nu oruthi set aagama irupala enna. First time mom did a good job in her life". 😎 He continues staring at them. Jinju notices Shemmo, but walks away.

Esther finally gets both of her daughters get ready and warns Hollie not to talk to their new neighbors till they know how they are. Hollie is curious to know who is their neighbor and runs out and see's Shobi's house and notices Shemmo and Hollie shouts "Amma someone is looking at me".😆 Shemmo runs away hearing Hollie shouting and thinks "Enna family da ithu? Chumma thaane parthen, athukulla antha Kuttipisaasu ava mom kitta fire pannithaa. Namma koncham control ah irukanum". 😆 Esther comes running. Hearing some sound Shobi comes and looks out of window. Esther sees Shobi and glares and drags Hollie. Shobi in mind-voice "Nejamave intha colony romba crazy thaan pola, anga oruthi enna parthu odural inga oru Amma ponnoda excibiton maathiri looking at my house. Enna colony oh, pera paaru Andankaaka nu". 🤣

After sending Bhaghi to school, Shubba gets tenses as time goes on cause her son didn't call her after reaching college. Phone rings, Shubba picks up. 😲

Freeze...

Edited by Shemmo - 12 years ago

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viswai123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Writers one big doubt...

Ellarum going to college / school, my son ne yenna panre!!! Apart from looking at girls and drinking sb...

What happened to Gisel and Maha too much suspense...

BTW Sri cut pannathu break wire thana illa Vera ethavatha...

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Gisel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Playboylan colony la vekurathu nalathu illa...all other families let's join and send this new family away😛!

Amma, ein mela ivalo pasama? Waiting everyday for me to reach college? Ena thavam seitheino...😆

Waiting to know wht happened to me😛..

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JAYASHREE

@vjayam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

shamz laughing at shobi's question still? why my son alone not going anywhere...good doubt!

all sharing shubba's concern abt gisel n maha..and gisel yr cmnt cracked me too..."enna thavam seitheno" -can just imagine shubba like that in real life too!

appo shamz first look vittadhu tanu thaana? of course soul mates all the way! better be good to me shamz...rofl!

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Mahadevan Venkitaraman

@maha2us

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Nice Chapter 2, Shammu. Is the phone call Shubba gets is from Gisel or anyone else? The suspense about what happened to Gisel and myself also can mean nothing bad has happened to both of us.

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Pearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Hahaha shammy 🤣🤣🤣 Oru Vazhiya planned to damage me through my kids Rofl 🤣🤣. My cooking avalavu bad aa 😲. Aiyoo pavam Jinju and Smiles 😆😆

Hahaha Shobi... paarthu your son ku kanum mannum therila when he sees a girl 😳. Ippadiya he will fall down... Rofl... Cute mom and son 🤣

Haha Esther pavam... Protective of her daughter Hollie... Amma pinna with Shammy around 😛😛.

Very written Shammy and Tanu... Excellent work 👏

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Esther John

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

I am as protective of my daughter as I am in real life ... grrr ... beware boys!!!! 😡... but shamz romba cute boy ... 😉 ... and I hope my daughters Hollie and Navetha are bold enough to take care of themselves ...😆

Paavam Shobhi ... totally confused ... don't worry keep your handsome son inside the house and we'll stop staring at your house ...😃

Sri ... and Maha ... what a day for poor Bhaghi!!!! waiting fo the next part

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Mini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Ha...Ha…hilarious story shammy and Tanu😛…Especially Pearl, Shobi and ester story was nice and creative ...Iam really surprised by the way u connect all the characters in the colony. Especially the colourful comical comments in between was apt.SV sekar padam partha mathiri irunthathu. Iam waiting for your next move … How you and Tanu are going to move the story forwardnu. Continue your great work😊👍🏼 Waiting for the next part..athuvum shobi handsome son...story eppidi move agapoguthonu..iam waiting...😊

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TTfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

🤣🤣 Well written Tannuu and Shammy darlings.. hilarious... Shammy looking for girls.. and Shobi akka telling ippadi yavadhu thaan katti vekka mudiyum aam.. rofl.. 😆

Waiting to know who is calling Shubba akka and what happend??? 😕 😆

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