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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Superb update
Manveer scenes were...utterly cute
Poor Akash and Jaynandini...dono ki band baj gayaa Serves you right
I just wanna say congratulation to Akash and Jay...dono perfect hain so never leave each other's sidešŸ˜‰

However, Manveer you are adorable
The guest was surprised and so was me😳
Just loved the update...update soon...



Thanks for the nice comment Hina šŸ¤—

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Awesome update dear

Jakash marriage wasšŸ˜†
their plan backfired very badly indeed!!



Thanks Anu šŸ¤—

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Loved the update Vibha, Thanks Navina...

it was awesome!!!!
Manveer scenes were cute and romantic😳. Glad you like it...
Pappu was adorable. His parents too were very kind people. Manveer are kind, so they got kindness in return...
The highlight had to be Jai & Akash . That was brilliantšŸ‘. I wish we could've actually seen something like that. The 2 "VERY BRIGHT SPARKS" ended up marrying each other šŸ˜† ... this saying is so apt for them - RAB NE BANA DI JODIšŸ˜‰!!!! Very apt way to describe them šŸ˜†
Please continue soon , today at 4.30
... thanx 4 the PM😊. Welcome



Thanks for this awesome comment Navina šŸ¤—

Originally posted by: Priya46

mindblowing update J and akash revelation part was absolutely funny



Thanks Priya 😃

Originally posted by: panchaali

SWeeet very very sweeet 😊


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Originally posted by: jia..manveer..

very yc awsome pplz pm me


Sure 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

reswa
for a looong
long
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Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: pia.raha

ha ha ha,j aur akash ki shaadii!!!!!!!!šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜† manveer sath mein hai,soo sweet!!!!!!!!😊😊😊



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Thanks Mahima 😃

Originally posted by: Karkit

Awesme dear...
J n akash ki shadi ho gai it ws so funny... I like it
manveer scene so cute ... I love it
thanx fr pm n wting fr nxt part...



Thanks Shruthi 😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey people...This is going to be a really small update..please forgive me for that..don't hate me for it..😭 i'll try making the next one longer, promise 😊

Chapter Seventeen

They had a very peaceful sleep thanks to the unpolluted air and pure environment of the village and most importantly because they slept in each others arms. Surely there's no comfortable place in the world other than one's partner's arms.

Manyata woke up to the sounds of chirping birds and loud crowing of the rooster. She smiled as she looked around. It must have been 6AM in the morning. Uday was still asleep. Aww..he looks so cute even while sleeping, thought she. Suddenly she got a wicked idea in her mind to wake him up.

The ground was full of grass and Manyata picked up a blade of grass and tickled Uday in the ear with it. He was really irritated and woke up with a start.

Seeing the confused expression on his face, Manyata started to laugh. Uday joined her in laughter and it turned into laugh fest of sorts.

'what a nice couple, how happy they are even after facing so many difficulties' thought Pappu's mother watching them from the distance.In the night, before going to sleep, Manyata had told her all about who they were and what kind of situation they were going through.

After the frugal breakfast of roti and sabzi Manveer set out home. Manyata kissed Pappu's forehead and blessed him. The farmer's family bid them a tearful adieu.

They were going in a hired car towards Mumbai and Manyata looked out of the window out of boredom and spotted a carnival by the side of the road.

"zara gaadi rokiye na, mujhe mela dekhna hai" she said.

As the driver stopped manveer got down and when they reached near someone told them that, the day was very auspicious and 'samoohik vivah'(communal marriage) was going on.

After one hour Manveer were a married couple all over again. It didn't matter that the place they got married was a temple rather than a palace or there weren't fake smiles and extravagant gifts at their wedding. They were meant to be together and no one, not even fate could separate them when they had each other.

They fed each other the Prasad of the deity in the name of wedding feast and started again. Manyata looked at her sindoor adorned forehead in the side mirror of the hired car and felt herself overcoming with emotion.

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While Manveer remained ensconced in their own happy bubble, their family was going crazy worrying about them. The whole wedding was obviously ruined and all guests had left talking in hushed tones. No one could sleep a wink and each person at the house had their own problem with this joke of a marriage.

Brijraj and Mrinalini devi were thinking about what the media would do to their already ruined reputation. Their shame was going to be paraded in public for sure. J had commited a blashphemy and she was going to pay for it.

Out of the ever watching glare of family, J managed to meet Akash in the dead of the night and she was more than murderously angry. "tumne mere saath dhokha kiya? Mera Veer kahan hai? Uska kidnap kyon karvaya tumne? Tumhare iss stupid plan ke wajah se aaj meri shaadi hote hote rehgayi!" J yelled.

"Relax wify, relax'agar kisine sun liya toh'." Akash said.

"ek baat jaan lo Akash, main tumhari koi wife nahi lagti samjhe'ab batao kahan hai Veer?" she asked him gritting her teeth.

They had a heated argument and almost came to blows. Had it not been for J's phone which rung at the right or rather wrong moment; there would've been a murder at the raj mahal that night.

"Kya?? Par tum logone bhaagne kaise diya use? Aur yeh baat tum log mujhe ab bata rahe ho? Mujhe kuch nahi sun na'tum log use kahin se bhi dhoondkar lao" J threw her phone in disgust. Her temper was enough to burn the house down.

"koun bhag gaya? Kise dhoondne ki baat kar rahi thi?" Akash asked.

"Manyata kidnappers ke haath se nikal gayi, agar woh yahan pohonch gayi toh pata hai kya hoga?

"kuch nahi hoga agar hum milkar kaam kare toh" Akash said.

They joined hands and devised a new plan which was not going to fail.

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This was it for today...😊
you can criticize me or beat me up for it, because i know its really bad🤢
Thank you all who liked and commented in the previous update šŸ¤—


(Samoohik Vivah or communal marriage means a marriage ceremony where many couples get married at the same altar, it is usualy held in a temple or an open ground...the people organizing the ceremony provide the couple with all the essential things required for the marriage)



Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
this update was mindblowing billu!
loved how manyata wakes up uday!!
and direct samuhik vivah!! haye bhagwaan!
thik hain! unke saamne abhi nahi to kabhi nahi situation hogi shayad! lolz!!
n firse ek plan!! offo!
isase pata chalta hain tu kitti badi plan master hain
saare plan tu hi pakati hain! bol aur kitne kitne logonko shaadi se bhagaya hain??
lolz!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣
update fast!!
Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
unres
awesome
manveer got married
ahhh and akash calling jai wifey
now that a real tourture
hahhahhahah
do update asap
loved it
thx for the pm
sorry for the late comment😃
Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£šŸ¤£ wow so awesome!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great Part Vibha
I hate J and Majnu how many flop plans will they make
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Vibha

So sorry for the late comment
The updates (16 & 17) were mind blowing, awesome
Thank you for the pm
😊 šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update VibhašŸ‘šŸ¼. I'm so happy that Uday and Manyata got married😳 , now I doubt Akash and Jai will be able to seperate them , despite their fool-proof plan😔! I liked how irritated Jai got when Akash called her "wifey"šŸ˜† , and I enjoyed the response she gave him.
Please update soon ,
... thanx 4 the pm😊.
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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