Rishabala FF: Love is pain! (Chap 1 pg 5)

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Hello MBians. I am back with a new FF. Most of you have read my other FF: Hate to love you. I hope u all will like this FF as well.

Note: Readers in this story the main characters are RK, Madhu and Sultan

But it's a Rishabala Fan Fiction



Character Sketch


Rishab Kundra/RK



He is a bollywood superstar. He is aggressive and loves to win at any cost. Words fail to describe how good-looking he is. He writes his own destiny and all devil will bow down in front of him. There is no space for any kind of emotions in his heart. He married Madhu for the sake of his so called marriage but can't bear to see her anyone else.


Madhubala Kundra / Shamsher Malik


She is very sweet and bubbly girl and she is mesmerizingly beautiful. She loved RK a lot but he broke all her trust. Now she lives with her mom Padmini and her sister Trishna. She likes Aryan (Sultan's son) a lot.

Sultan


He is an underworld don. He has a cute kid named Aryan whom he loves a lot. He is very strict with him. He has a dark past. Madhu and Sultan meet via Aryan. Later they meet almost everyday as Aryan is very close to Madhu and wants to spend time with her.


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Rest of the characters are same.

Will update the prologue soon.



Want PMs?

Then buddy me.


Love

Mally.





Index


Prologue (pg2)

Chapter 1 (pg 5)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start..
gosh i have to tolerate sultan here too.. 😆 😆
continue soon
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I want PM.

Waiting for it.
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Originally posted by: Marie_789

I want PM.

Waiting for it.


i shall PM u when i update 😊
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Prologue



"Things have changed. Was it so easy for her to move on? I wanted to teach her a lesson; that this is what you get when you mess with RK. This had to happen. I wanted her out of life! Wait do I really want that? If I wanted that then why the hell do i care if she is roaming around with someone else. Why should she? I am still her husband. How dare that Sultan touch her? But didn't I lose all the rights the day i broke my relationship with her. I shouldn't be thinking about her right now. I should be happy as I took my revenge from her. She should be out of my life. I don't care for her. Then I am I jealous when I hear her talking and laughing with that Sultan?" RK thought.

He gulped down another shot of whisky; hoping that this might divert his mind but whatever he tries to do reminds hi of her. Frustated with his unanswered questions he threw the glass down which broke into hundreds of small pieces, He wanted to see Madhu like a broken piece of glass but fate is something out of everyone's control. Now his life was like those hundreds of broken pieces of glass that can never be joined again.

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Here is the prologue. Hope u all liked it.

Will update the next chapter soon.
More comments means faster the update.
Pls leave ur comments and hit the like button.
Edited by SPNnIPKKNDlover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start dear. ...pm me whnever u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful prologue👍🏼...do continue soon...😊
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nice concept
update soon
thanks for pm
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Nice update

Update next part soon
Edited by alexrock - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice.
pls do continue super soon😃

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