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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-28

While madhu kept standing dere wid her one hand on her cheek thinking abt wht happened jst now n wht RK said to her………

Mujse pyaar ho gaya h

madhu looked up wid her hand still on her cheek n said kya sachi yeh sadu sai keh raha tha babaji?????asked madhu making baby face n den chidded herself for thinking like tht

Chi chi chi madhu kaisi baatein soch rai h tu???

Tu kaise uss sadu,akroo se pyaar???nai nai aisa nai ho sakta muje use pyar nah ho hi nai sakta

Wo toh RK h me usse pyaar kaise kar sakti hun h na babaji??

madhu was busy thinking all dis when RK came back to d room n stood near d door seeing madhu talking to her self n smilled pagal h bilkul

madhu kya hua???

Thts whn madhu came out of her trance n looked confusingly towards RK n asked wht

madhu tum aise statue bane kyun khaddi ho??

kya baat h??

Kya soch rai ho????

madhu fumbeled a bit n said nai nai kuch nai who toh bas aise hi

Meh abi ayi saying dis madhu left for washroom while RK lied back on bed closing his eyes smiling to himself n thinking

madhu soon very soon u ll realise ur feeings for me n thts my promise

Later in d day both RISHABALA came out n gave evryone d gifts which dey bought for dem

Wow bhabhi its so gud I jst luv it m sure yeh aap ki hi choise h bcoz bhai toh itna soch nai sakte said ayaan

While RK glared him

Kyun yeh meri choice kyun nai ho sakti??

Oh cumon bhai v all knw u u nevr bought dis kind of gifts for us it has allways been madhu who bought so many gifts for us on evry occasion

Oh yeah ri8 said RK rolling his eyes

Later dey had dere dinner n everyone retired to dere room

RK kal se tum office join kar rae ho????

Haan madhu kyun?????

Nai wo me soch rai thi k agar tum office jaoge toh colege ka kya hoga???

Don't worry madhu me subh tum sab k sath pehle college jaunga n den wahan se classes khtm karke office

Oh okh said madhu thinking sumthing

Whn RK noticed her lost sumwhere else n looked at her wid a frown RK came close to madhu n gently asked

Kya baat h madhu koi problm h kya???

Do u need sumthing koi baat h kya???

Nai woh

madhu u knw u can talk to me pls tell me whts bothering u????

RK kal marriage k baad mera pehla din h n m nervous n shaddi me jo kuch bhi hua uske baad,,,,,,

Firstly ye srf tumhara nai humara frst day h kal college me marriage k baad n secondly don't worry madhu shaddi me jo bhi hua wo tumhari galti nai thi so stop thinking abt it n wht people will say

U jst can't stop others from talking but u can careless abt dere talks n ignore dem if u knw tht u r right

madhu wht matters to us is wht u think wht I think n moreover wht our parents n our closeones think abt it

N u knw evryone supported us

So dere is nothing wrong so jst stop thinking abt all dis n relax okh

I ll b dere for u not only tommorow but always

Pakka asked madhu making a cute face

RK smiled luking st her cute innocent face n hugged her saying

Haan baba pakka

Chalo now sleep v hav to get up early in d morning

madhu nodded n lied down n RK came n lied down nxt to madhu

Gudni8 RK

Goodni8 jaan

Later in d night madhu again came n cuddled up wid RK hugging him

Nxt morning both rishabala got ready to go to college madhu was quite nervous n was taking all d time in world to come out,while RK was getting irritated due to waiting

Thts whn RK knocked d door

madhu...madhu cumon ab bahar aao me kitni dere se wait kar raha hun

Jaldi aao warna me tume yai chod k chala jaunga

madhu thought gadha isse kya pata k muje kitna dar lag raha h jab dekho darata n dhamkata rehta h babaji pls bacha lena,,

Praying to her babaji madhu opened d door n came out,

While RK was left shocked n stood dere looking at her widout blinking his eyes

madhu luked up n den luked towards RK thinking isse kya hua ye aise kyun dkh raha h muje???

MADHU touched RK's shoulder softly n called kya hua RK??

While RK burst out laughing………

madhu was shocked thinking has he gone mad why is he laughing like tht

madhu stood dere for a while watching RK laugh like a manic n den finally asked kya baat h RK tum aise kyun hans rae ho???

RK controlled his laugh n asked madhu tum kahan jane k plan me ho?????

To which madhu replied college but kyun???

Acha but tume dkh k toh aisa nai lagta,,,,,,

Kya?????

Haan tume dkh ke lag raha h k tum kisi family function ya kissi marriage me jane ko tyar hui ho

madhu looked at herself n den back at RK aisa kyun keh rae ho???kya problem h mere dress me??????

Jaan tumharai dress me nai tumhare dimag me problem h

RK????asked madhu angrily

Nai mera matlb h k madhu hum college jaa rae h kissi shaddi me nai joh tum itna tyar hui ho cumon in n change d dress

But dad ne kaha tha k muje nai dulhan ki tarah jana chaiye

madhu dad se me baat kar lunga tum abi change karo n pls ye suit change karke jeans pehn lo n ye bangles utardo

Nai ye bangles dad ne kaha h k 1n1/2 yr se pehle nai utarne h

Ye ek rasam hoti h

Okh but still ye suit change karke aao

madhu came back aftr changing n RK removed her jwellerry

Yeh kya kar rae ho???

Tum ruko

N made her wear a small chain wid her mangalsutra n small earings.

See now also u r luking like a newly wed

madhu looked at d mirror n smiled nodding her head n

Okh ab chale

Hmmm

rishabala came downstairs n took blessings frm dad

Bst of luck bte

Thnx dad

Bht pyari lag rai ha aap

madhushiedaway

RK madhu ka dhyan rakhiyega n college me une tang mat kariyega

Oh cumon dad apt oh aise keh rai h jaise hum pehli baar jaa rae h college

Offcourse aap humari bahu ko leke pehli baar college jaa rae h

RK jst rolled his eyes n left for d car

In car madhui sat quitly while RK was driving

Kya bat h madhu abi bhi nervous ho???

Nai wo bas thoda sa

Its okh madhu evry thing will b fine jst relax main hoon na????

Thts'it for now

ll b waiting for ur response

IMP NOTE

guys m very dissapointed with the response so now i ll update the next part only when i ll get 30 likes for this part n comments otherwise i ll not update on this thread n will send my updates through pm to those who comment n press like...

now the choice iis urs faster the likes faster d updates,,,aap log jitni jaldi meri like ka quota pura karoge utni jaldi mai next update dungi

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow nice update
😊

Thank for pm
Edited by alexrock - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update!!
pls do not discontinue. i like ur story.
i know how it feels when u do not get proper response.
hope u get 30 likes soon.😃
Edited by kendra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear..waiting for their first clg day after marriage..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Madhu nervous about college...RK promising to help her out...thats nice.Will b eagerly waiting 4 next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dont discntinue it i lk ur update dear.. Eagerly waitn 4next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
its nice and cute .just a little suggestion it gets a bit extra sweet sometimes,add a bit arrogance , attitude and possessiveness in it..
its just a friendly suggestion .no hard feelings,dont mind.ALL THE BEST👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
really amazing update dear...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-29

RK n madhu reached college n RK parked d car n asked madhu to cum out while madhu shook her head saying nooo

madhu cumon bahar aao

Nai RK me nai pls

madhu stop acting like a kid who is scared to go school for d frst tym

Now common come out n see me bhi toh hoon na tumharae saath n

Don't forget ye wai college h jahan tum mujse itna ladti thi n remember jahan tumne muje itne saare logon k beech thapad maara tha

Bhul gai kya???? Asked RK making a baby face n rubbing his cheek

Nai toh phr aao bahar

madhu cutely nodded for no

But maine baad me sorry bola tha na uske liye tume?????

Hmm

madhu opened her side of door n came out

RK smiled n gave her his hand

madhu jst took his hand n dey walked together inside

While everyone was jst watching dem

Girls were geeting jealous of madhu thinking tht she took away dere dreamy

RK was being very protective towards madhu bcoz he knew tht madhu was really tensed n nervous aftr wht happened in dere marriage

So he jst kept his hand on her waist n entered d class

All of dem were chatting n madhu started to get relaxed whn teacher came n d class started

both sat together n as usual RK started getting bored n decided to hav sum fun

N wht can b better den irritating madhu so he jst started annoying madhu scribbling things on her note pad

madhu glared RK asking him to stop his stupid activities while RK ignored her n continued his task

RK yeh kya kar rae ho??muje disturb ho raha h

Are yaar madhu me toh tume kuch bhi nai bola raha jo tume distub ho me toh bas apna kaam kar raha hun tum udhar dhayn do na jo professor bol rae h

But muje disturb ho rah h

Toh me kya karun saying dis RK again started annoying madhu

He jst took a hold of madhu hand under d table n started carsing it sensuously n lovingly

madhu looked towards RK but RK ignored her looks as if he didn't knw anything

RK

Hmmm

Yeh tum

Kya hua jaan tume acha nai lag raha h???asked RK slowly

Nai wo me

RK madhu wht u two r doing ???

Both got up

Nothing sir

I hav been noticing u two from sumtime u both r not paying attention to wht m saying if u two r not intrsted in studing u can leave d class

Sorry sir okh sir

Said both at d same time n teacher looked ta both n madhu glared RK

Get out of my class now

RK very cooly got hold of MADHU's waist n bought her out wid him

Once in corridor madhu glared at RK

Wht was tht?

Wht???

Don't try to act all innocent u knw very well wht I mean

Tht was d second time tht m out of d class jst bcoz of u

Ohoo cumon MADHU tht class was soo boring n u knw tht right n acha hi hua na k budhhe ne khud hi nikal diya awain hi pakka rah tha

RK

Kya h yaar,,,,,,RK was abt to say sumthng when he received a call frm ofice n he had to leave

Jaan u jst relax n njoy I ll b back in d evening office se call h n I need to go

Are agar tum chale jaoge toh me yahan kya karungi????

RK came closer to madhu n huskily said in her ear jo pehle karti thi jab me nai hota tha

N kissed her cheek n left saying bye to her

madhu stood dere for a while still in trance of wht happened did he jst kissed her in d college corridor whn a girl came n said

Hey madhu tht was a nice catch

Wht ????? asked madhu confused

Oh darling don't act innocent u knw RISAHAB KUNDRA n marriage

Hmmm nice game

Wht nonsense

Kya bakwas kar rai ho tum?????

Oh madhu everyone knew tht tum n RK kaise ladne ka natak karte the college me n den at our back u had sum diffrnt relations wid him

U hav gone mad girl

Jst stay in ur limits n dare u say a word against RK n me

Kyun madhu mirchi lagi

Sach suna nai gaya

Well too bad isn't tht true n bcoz of tht only tht so called fianc of urs left u

Thts not true wo muje dhokha de raha tha me nai

Oh common madhu n tume lagta h k hum RK lenge

No sweety we all knw k tum n RK bachpan k dost ho n family frnds bhi n then u guys used to show as if u both r d biggest enemy of each other n wud fight like cat n dog but still RK wud not take a word against u frm anyone of us

So wht does all dis means dat u two were pretending n fooling us

No no thts not true

madhu ab chupane se koi fayada nai h yeh baat pura college janta h k tumhare n RK k beech koi realation tha jiske wajh se tht fianc of urs brokeup wid u n jst to save u RK showed everyone tht karan was at fault jabki sach toh

Till now d classes were over n half of d college was dere listening dere talks n madhu was in tears other girls also started to talk nonsense

Btw madhu hume bhi toh btao k RK ko patane ka tarika kahan se mila tume n kaise kiya tumne ye sab

they were talking all rubbish whn bittuji came dere n heard dem talk like tht wid madhu n he came forward n shouted

Shutup all of u

Tum log hote kaun ho humari bhabhi se yeh sab kehne wale

Oh see her second savior came

Btw madhu yeh acha h kundra brothers ko pataya hua h n ab toh tumhari chandi hi chandi h

Kyun h na???

Thts whn bittuji shouted enough of ur nonsense

Jst shutup otherwise it won't b good for u

How dare u talk like tht to our princess janti hi kya ho tum humare bare me

Well muje jana bhi nai h kya yeh kafi nai h joh hum dkh rae h she said tauntingly

Tum iss layak hi nai ho k tume kuch bataya jaa sake

Common madhu lets go bittuji took madhu wid him but before going he turned n warned d girl agar agli baar mene tume se kissi ko bhi meri bhabhi k saath aise baat karte dekha toh acha nai hoga tume se kisi k lie

bittuji took madhu out n made her sit in d car he called RK immidietly seeing madhu crying so badly he knew tht its only RK now who can manage her n make her understand

Haan bittuji kahiye kya baat hai

Bhai aap jaldi ghar aa jao

Kyun kya hua sab thk toh h na??????

Bhai wo college me'''..

N he told RK evrythng

RK was fuming in anger

bittuji aap tum madhu ko leke jao me abi nikalta hun

Saying dis RK disconnected d call n

that's it for now

PRECAP

''while RK was lost in her pink tongue tht came out from her beautiful pink lips,,he was left staring at her dreaming abt kissing her

RK felt like taking those pink lips in his own n nibble n suck bite them till dey r swollen n playing wid her beautiful pink tongue in his mouth n kissing her sense less till she become breathless''😉😳

ll b waiting for ur response

so guys i hope u all like the update,now if u want the update soon the pls press like n comment

Edited by amrinderdhami - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am first
Your writting skills is Owesum
Thanks for such a lovely update

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