MG. NEW SS.NANDRI, PART-3/PG 17,JUNE 14 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Conratulation for new work and as well as u being a year old in forums LoLz
BTW I dint knew the meaning of Nandari before reading this...LoLz

I love such stories and the CS was owsome

will be waiting for an update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
love the concept n CS...
waiting fr the first part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Happy 1st anniversary for "Love Blossom"

Sorry for being late.

And congrats for d new story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
congrats for the new story...
nice intro..
lovely cs..
like is not working...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
happy 1st anniversary dear

awesome treat for all of us
loved the prologue n cs
waiting for it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Congrats and now update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
hellooo dear..
my 1st try to ur story
actually hell busy na so i ddnt get time to read anythg
i mst say name is attractive.. whn i read i thought its any girl name
bt it mnz thanku.. nice.
hmm mnz u too 4m tamilnadu

i mst i loved ur CS.
heheh madhuri, aamir
maaneet r bst frnds.. waoo.. hmm kon ayega dono ki life mein??

aree why u maid daya maid????
she is so cute yr. i love her show.
chlo its ur story
loved it.
pst part sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Congratzz .. nice intro and CS
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Awesome prologue
and CS
waiting for the update
please pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40





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PART-1




Early morning , alarm was ringing from two different rooms and two different hands switched off it,


KHURANA AND HANDA MANSION



Two voices from km and hm echoed te whole mansions.


Male : GM GEETU

GEET : GM MAANU

Maan : Geetu r u wake up?

Geet : hmm , u?

Maan : then wat im sleeping and talking to u, ok leave tat all. As we took decision yesterday , we should be perfect in everything.

Geet : hmm yes yes

Maan : we should fulfill te promise wat we given to our parents


Geet : yes yes , ahan we have to wake up early morning and we should study and get good marks and main thing we should not irritate our parents


Maan : hmm correct

Geet : so we are in mission MAANEET MISSION

Maan : HMMM

They voice echoed te whole mansion which wake up they parents too



Geet ki room







Maan ki room







Geet: now priya aunty and Madu maa will wake up and will prepare hot coffee and will cum to wake up to get our blessings, be ready to bless them


Maan : we will bless them later, first brushed ur teeth

Geet : now only im putting te paste on my brush

Maan : u go on put te paste till then I have finished my brushing

Geet : nawab wat paste r u using

Maan : ahan wooden stick and neem paste


Geet : oh , now ur daddy RAJ KHURANA and my daddy AAMIR HANDA started they jogging to reduce they tummy, so im ready to start studying, r u ready


Maan : now only u started to talk abt it, but me already sitting in te balcony with my book

Geet : madam already started to study before u

Geet cut te call , pull her duvet over her head started to sleep again hugging her teddy





At tat time, Madu came to wake her

Madu: oh babaji , see tis girl, without getting up only u talking tis much, get Geetu

Madu gave te coffee to Geet

Geet : morning itself I have to make him fool naa. Then how my day will go. He is also sleeping and trying to make me fool

Madu : Maan is not like u, he is very good boy, sitting in te balcony and studying

Geet chocked her coffee and open her mouth to ground




Madu : if u don't believe go and see in te balcony


Geet went to her balcony which was facing Maan ki balcony, Geet was fuming to see Maan sitting in te chair and placing his legs on te table and studying cooly



Geet kept her hands on her waist and started to yell at Maan





Geet : hey idiot why u did tis

Maan very cooly : wat I did

Geet : ok enough of ur drama u better cum here warna

Maan : sorry madam , I want to study here, if I study here only it will get set to me

Geet was shocked , But suddenly Geet notice were Maan ki gaze falling, . Maan pretending to study and peeping through his book and watching a girl who is studying in her balcony. he is drooling on her,





Geet open her mouth and watching Maan and tat girl and again Maan and tat girl, . but Maan didt notice Geet and relaxingly watching tat girl and smiling





Geet smirk



Geet : oh now I understand why u so much interested in ur studies

Maan stood :early morning study and little bit of sight will keep a man wise , wow wat a proverb


Geet : kurta , idiot for u r flirting u r spoiling a nice proverb, wait wait she started to scream, Priya aunty and raj uncle , u s son flirting with lawyer uncle ki daughter without studying


Maan was shocked and with a jerk his book fell down directly on te dustbin,




Maan tap his hand on his head , Geet started to laugh






Then te mens who came to take te dustbin , took te dustbin were book fell, and binned it in te lorry, with other rubbish, Maan showed a yuck face, Geet started to laugh loudly


Maan : shit

Geet : correct, u studies went to place were it belongs, dustbin

Maan gritted his teeth: Geet t t

Geet shows her tongue and went inside





Handa mansion





Aamir was having his breakfast and Madu serving him, Geet came running from te stairs

Aamir : be careful beta

Geet : gm Dad, gm mom hugs her dad

Aamir :gm beta

Geet : don't get jealous, I will hug u too

Geet saw te dish,

Geet : babaji today also same thing aloo partha , why u cooking every day

Madu : but love it naa

Geet : yes I love so u have to cook every day

Madu : yesterday I cooked noodles only

Geet : bus bus today I don't want to have aloo paartha

Aamir : why beta it was yummy

Geet : papa don't lie

Aamir : sorry beta

Geet : Im not in mood to eat aloo paartha

Aamir : then Madu give her milk and egg

Geet : wat am I looking lie snake to eat egg and milk, I don't want it

Madu rolled her eyes : aamir she wants to have her BF theer so she is showing nautankis, Geet u beter go there and have ur BF , my hubby is theer to eat my cooking

Geet : thank god great escape, bechare my papa he have to struggle

Aamir nodded his head

Geet : papa u bear all te struggle in te earth itself so there is seat coform for u in heaven

Aamir chocked his food, Madu glared at Geet, Geet runs away

Geet : enjoy love birds , bye

Madu : nautanki





Khurana mansion




RAJ , Maan having BF, Priya serving them Geet came running and hugs Priya

Geet : gm aunty

Priya kiss her on her cheeks : gm beta

Geet : gm Raj uncle

Raj : gm beta


Geet saw te dish: oh god aloo paratha , wow yummy, licking her lips, love u aunty, after so long im seeing aloo paartha , tat too with panner masala, wow superb combination


Priya served Geet too, Maan was silent avoiding to look at Geet, Geet notice Maan is not looking at her




Geet : Raj uncle why one monkey is looking sitting like he have swallowed his book

Raj : Geet monkey will eat only banana not books

Geet : uncle now its modern world monkeys will eat books




Raj saw Geet indicating to Maan, he understood tat she is teasing Maan, so he too started

Raj : yes ur correct Geet, it is modern world , monkeys will eat books computer , mouse , everything , naughty monkeys

Geet : Raj uncle , im thinking ur ladla son will soon fly away from

Raj : hearing u I think he will fly very far away from me

Maan : dad

Geet came near to Raj and pull his ear

Geet : uncle , te balcony which is on Maan ki room facing te road is neede

Raj : no

Geet : the closed it uncle

Raj : think it have been closed

Priya : wat Geet u r saying some thing im worried why Maan is going to go far away

Geet : aunty with out any matter Geet wont say anything u know naa

Priya nodded her head

Geet : in tis age , Maan ki heart will roam here and there , so he may slips

Raj : so u r saying he will slips from te balcony

Geet : yes uncle like his studies but before she completes

Maan : hello stop it Geet, who ask u to cum here , aunty didt burn te gas so u came here to burn

Geet : see see uncle how he is fuming wen I open te matter

Raj : leave him beta u burn te story of balcony

Maan stood up : ok im leaving to college u cuming or not

Geet : hmm in cuming dot show ur drama

Maan : hey wait wait wat dress u are wearing, u r going to cum with me wearing tis dress showing his yuck face




Geet : why wat happen to tis dress

Maan : it is not nice

Geet : u only brought me tis naa

Maan : wen I brought te dress was nice but after u wore it it look like a monkey wearing it

Geet : u only monkey , not me

Maan : dad u say who is monkey

Geet : ok uncle u say who is monkey

Raj was caught between two monkeys, he showed his two fingers to Geet to touch it, Geet touch te finger , and waiting for his reaction

Maan : dad who she touched

Raj : bechari geet accept she herself a monkey

Maan : wow

Geet : no no

Geet : go Im not cuming with u

Maan : ok then im going

Geet smirk : how wen im having ur keys



Maan : Geet ki bachi I wont leave , he started to chase her


Raj and Priya started to see they cat rat fight


They both reach to they colleges in they bikes




Maan ki bike





Geet ki bike





Adi : hmm there cum our twins

Pinky : twins

Adi : then wat always sticking together

Maaneet : hai friends

Friends : hai MAANEET

Geet : wat special today, all medias are surrounding our college

Adi : our senior Rohan wined te national competition in singing,

Maan : oh so he became hero of our college

Yash : hmmm

Reporters cam near then to ask abt Rohan, all decided to make fun

Rep : hai friends ur college students have won te competition wat u all feel

Adi : well I gve money to Rohan to catch te bus for his competition, if I have not given te money, he have not win te com

Maan : well we can talk abt Rohan yesterday , 2mor and day after 2mor, but today im not in mood

Geet : well today im mouna virth so 2mor I say abt him



Every one started to laugh, soon te bell rang for classes, but suddenly they heard a sound



BANG







PRECAP : NEW ENTERIES

Next part



Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago

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