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Posted: 12 years ago
its confusing me...seriously i m Hollaa confused now
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh now another death?
and the lady died in the earlier chapter is somehow connected to this man??
and voodoo curse??
oh man!!! this is gonna be a hell out of a story...
sooo excited to read more!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
shit,man! m so intrigued!

i love mysteries ...n arnav a detective? oh,wow!..

**tapping right foot***waiting fore nxt update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Seriously?. for now I am going to leave the story concept which is gripping by the way, and just say that when there is no obvious Arnav and Khushi references and my mind is not fogged over by their romantic drool worthiness...I notice other things...such as how beautifully you write. So clear and communicative.
Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Can't believe I didn't do this earlier 😆

Disclaimer -

All recognisable characters in this story belong to Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam

Doon?

The additional characters, the entire plot are mine, solely mine. It has not been taken from anywhere. For any other cases, a separate disclaimer will be provided. This story has not been inspired from anything other than the murder mysteries I read.

With this out of the way, I give you the next chapter -

Chapter Two - More questions

The chilly wind blows his hair into a whirling frenzy. The musty smells of the wet mud oozes out of the earth in waves and hits his flared nostrils. Arnav takes a deep breath. Oh, how he loves rains!

He quickly proceeds to snap on gloves, as NK walks upto him. "We were lucky this time"

"We were?"

"The victim's name Louie Rodriguez. Italian immigrant. Legal though, completely. Has his drivers licence on him. Like I said. Lucky."

"Yep. Which reminds me, any luck on the mystery woman?"

"Nope. She's a ghost"

"Okay then"

The duo cross the police line and then separate. NK walks to the cluster of uniforms, while Arnav proceeds towards Lavanya.

"So ...?"

"Look at this Arnav, what would you expect"

"Gun shot wounds"

"Not quite. I assumed the same, but then I turned him around. There were no exit wounds. So the bullets ought to be somewhere around in the body right?"

"Erm ... yeah?"

"Now walk two metres away from the body"

"Huh?"

"Just do it. I already demarcated the two metre line for you. Just walk to the white, chalk line."

Arnav, thoroughly mystified at the turn of events, strides to the pointed out line. He stands stiffly straight and looks at the body.

His eyes widen in amazement. For now he can see, that the gun shots make a pattern on his body.

The pattern of a thunderbolt.

He walks back to Lavanya. "I don't know what this means, Arnav" she says.

"But this would mean that the shooter shot from a distance of 2 metres, atleast. We can put down the range to 2 - 6 metres, for anything beyond that, the body won't even be visible, let alone make the pattern so fine in detail. But judging by the size of the entry wounds, the speed of the gun would be minimum ... 4000 metres per second. With a speed this high, there should be an exit wound"

The silence that follows is defeaning. The whole scene has stilled, as Arnav bends down to the body.

"Where is the exit wound?"

To be continued ...

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohk!!! so now the hero comes in picture with his full charm...and who is that?? for a second i thought, oh no!! not again his "gf" lavanya!!! this gal deserves much more!! and so i got what i wanted!!! she is an investigator, and a genuine one too!!

i guess i am goin to have the same kind of fun i used to have in childhood while watching weekend detective /haunted mysteries.😉
Edited by dilectus - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG !! This is so awesome !! Really really intriguing! So where is the wound now ?!! Wow ! Waiting for the next update badly !! Update soon Vee ! 😛 🤗
Edited by -sweetgal19- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What the F is happening here ?????????😲

Your going to make me mad with the anticipation V !!!😕


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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, this is some intense s**t!! I just hope I am able to make sense of all the supernatural stuff.. Great writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
The mystery just intensified ...
the man had an identity ...

The gun shots had made a pattern ...

"The pattern of a thunderbolt." ... but there was no exit wound ...


Intriguing ...


Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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