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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Hello meri pyaari BBs!!
Aaj mood bara hi off hai...
bohot se stories update to karna chahtithi...
par dimag ki dahi bani hui hai...
isiliye i want a change...
agar aaplogo ki sehmati miley..
to i wud lyk to keep a POEM challenge...
agr aaplogo k pas waqt ho to aap ek pyaara n lambasa poem post karenge...
n jis k poem pe sabse zyada comnts aye...
mai us k liye ek OS likhna chahungi as a gift...

aur agar aap logo k paas is nachiz k liye waqt nahi to koi baat nahi,
aap mujhe ek poem likhne ka chalng deyn...
mai poori koshish karungi, khari utarne k liye...
coz i luv 2 write poems...

Pls is post pe ek comnt zarur karna...
mere liye ek comnt to banta hai yaar PLEASE...
😳 🤣

i am waiting plz mujhe niraash mat kariyega... :)

meri halath tight hai bilkul...
so comnt pleaaaseee!!!!
P.S sory aapko pakane k liye

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

idea to bahut acha hein, but i really am bad at peoms😆

but go on😉

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

I will try dr..
mujhe bhi poem likhana bahoot pasad haiii...
per bardas ker lena...

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JeeLeZaraa

@JeeLeZaraa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

I am not that good at writing poems.. But i really like like short poem so thought i could share it.

Tuhanu yaad kar ki ajj akkh bharr gayee,
Buha kharkan di awaz navi aas bhar gayee,
Buha khol ki vekya ta koi nahi c,
Kismat nu ki kahiye sade nal ta
hawa vich mzaak kar gayee

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: supreet_dmg
I am not that good at writing poems.. But i really like like short poem so thought i could share it.

Tuhanu yaad kar ki ajj akkh bharr gayee,
Buha kharkan di awaz navi aas bhar gayee,
Buha khol ki vekya ta koi nahi c,
Kismat nu ki kahiye sade nal ta
hawa vich mzaak kar gayee

very nyc dear!!
punjabi utni to ni aati par itna to samjhgayi k bohot vadiya likkha...
___
twaddi akkhanu ae chamak vekhha..
dil wich halchal hogayi...
taynu ik var vekhan vaaste,
saddi neend chayn khogayi...

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Piyarani
I will try dr..
mujhe bhi poem likhana bahoot pasad haiii...
per bardas ker lena...

sure dear...
jab tumhara man kare...
n wen u want 2 write pls PM me.
n ISSI topic me post karna dear.
pg no bhi bata dena mai index mai add karlungi...

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Hop u like dr---
Kuch kehati hain ye khamoshiyan..
Kuch sunaana chahati hai..
Kuch batana chahati hain..
...
Sunker bhi ansuna ker de..
vo Dastaan batana chahti hai..
Kuch kehati hain ye khamoshiya..
Chupa hai jo naino main..
vo dikhana chahati hain..
Bund hain kise kone main..
vo batana chahti hoon..
...
kahatin hai ye khamoshiya...
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lolll dont laugh dr..
hahhaa..
ab bimaari main pade pade yahi yaad aayega..
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hiii me piya..
can i kno ur name..???
sorry meri poem ko bardash ker lena..

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

@piyarani.

wow bohot acha likha,
copyright wala
Lol! :P
nahi, sachme acha tha..
n i knw u r piya...
BTW me sumaya zaman.
Sumu bulasakti ho, par Pyaaarse ok! :P

BTW!!
Get wel soon dear.
P.S kya hua?
r u betr now

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Kyu?
Kyu aksar aisa hota hai..
Jo ho dil k sabse kareeb,
Wo kho jaata hai.

Talashte hai use har nagar mei,
Chup k rehta hai wo dil ki dagar me.
Dhoondte hai zameen par.
Jisse dhoonda falak pe...
Qurbaan hone ko raazi hai dil,
sirf uski ek jhalak mei...

Anjaan raaho pe chal parhe hai hum uski talash me.
Phool ho ya kaante,
chalte chalenge usko milne ki aas me...

Safar ye mera aasan to nahi,
Mushqil hi sahi,
par namumkin to nahi.
______________
pata ni aaplogo ko kaisa lagega..
par sehlena,
n pls yaar comnt to banta hai!

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