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Posted: 12 years ago

A little note - Khushi has a vital part to play in the story, but she shall not be introduced atleast for the next two or three chapters. :)

Interlude 1 - Born to Die

Late into the night, a man leans into the river, his nose touching the rippling surface of the water. A drop of tear, from his eye, mingles into the black river.

"Il tuo sacrificio non sar vano, il mio bambino"

(Your sacrifice will not be in vain, my child)

The man stands up, ignoring the gravel which sticks to him to like moths to light. He walks a few steps, the tears openly streaming down his face. It is strange sight to the passerbys. The relatively clean man, with gravel on his knees, walking down aimlessly around a road, with nothing but tears. The think it is money trouble.

If only they knew.

The moonlight shines onto the man, deep in thought. The tears have long run dry. She was his daughter, and she had died for the greater good. The lord would give her a place in heaven, for his daughter had repented her sins.

The old man realises that he has aimlessly wandered into a dark road, with no light. It is not a familiar place to him, which is surprising, he knows the town like the back of his hand.

He suddenly feels cold, as if he has been stuck in a freezer. The next moment, holes appear all over his body. Blood spurts out of his nose, his eyes, like little streams breaking away from a large river. He makes odd noises, like he is being crushed by some invisible force, and falls down dead.

Miles away, a hand, illuminated by the grimy lamplight, laughs and throws the voodoo doll away.

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Detective Arnav? Very interesting. And this chapter? It makes me feel that this is going to be a hell of a story. Can't wait for it to unfold! ;-)


Voodoo? So a supernatural-ish element too. I'm curious to see how you'll blend it with the story.
Edited by avantika_2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!!!! that was a super awesome chapter😊
plz add me to yr pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! Really intriguing! Waiting to see what will happen next! Thanks for the PM Vee ! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
A bit diff update...wil wait for story to unfold ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
what is with all these mysterious deaths.
first a girl dead for no apparent reason.
now a man like in some black magic film!😲
interesting!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Your FF makes me feel as if I'm sitting in the middle of a horror movie and I badly need a big pack of popcorn, that is on an automatic refill.
Okay so the woman in the prologue connected to this man? I know, I make a lot of guesses.
And black magic?
YOU'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME.

Am I badly hooked or what?
Bring it all, honey. BRING IT ON. ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a chapter! Now you have evoked my curiosity and I am impatient for the next chapt to this thriller.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its like a black magic thing.! The story seems very very interesting n mysterious...i am in to it now.!
Superrb..!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh, the girl who was dead has a connection with this guy, I guess!

And black- magic!?

All the more interesting now...!

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