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Posted: 12 years ago


After an hour...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Irum.

Hye.. ... ... ...

Their past ws so beautiful..
Tu inta acha likhti hai k esa lgta hai tu khud wahan present thi...jese main wahan yeh sb dekh rahi thi.
How beautifyl full described their love their emotions.
Pta hai oon ka itna khubsurat past read kr k mujhe or bhi dukh hota hai k wo ek dusre se itna pyar krtey they .apni ek nayi khubsurat zindagi shuru krney ja rahe they b oos bas***d Dhuv ki wajha se alag ho gaye .
They suffered alot.Kiney tarpay hongae yeh dono.
Khas kr jb Shriya thi Nupur k pass tu ose tu or bhi Mayank ki yaad ati hogi.
Or Mayank bechara os ne bhi tu sb kuch chor diya tha.
Sigh!!! !!! !!!!
Do update soon.
I want to read more.




Thank you so much for your such wonderfull words...


Thank you dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here is My Next part...


Hope you like it...


From now..present starts...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Love Never Looses

Note: As all you know...previously..Shriya had initiated a step towards Mayank by holding his finger and had started slowly accepting him... now from here the story proceeds...

Part 38


The morning..came spreading it's sunshine'to all over the place'Mayank get ready for his work and headed towards the kitchen only to be welcome by the warm smile of his life..Nupur'

Nupur:Good Morning'

Mayank..smiling to her:Good Morning'someone's seems..very fresh today'

Nupur:Hmmm'so to hain..'The smile is still playing on her lips'it seems she is seeing a very good dream..

Mayank:Wow..that's Good'.

Taking his breakfast he collectd his car keys and was heading towards the door when Nupur called him out,"Mayank'"Saying she moved towards him'and without any hesitation or embarresment'she hugged him and whispered in his ears,"Wish you a very happy day..and do come by Lunch..we'll be waiting for you.."

Mayank too reciprocated the hug..dipping his head in her hair'inhaling the fragrance of her long silky hair..,"Sure I'll be'"

They broke the hug and he turned to open the door when again Nupur called him,"Mayank.."

Mayank:Haan'

Nupur:Tum kuch bhool rahe ho'.

Mayank:Kya..sab kuch to le liya hain mene'kya bhool raha hoon'

Nupur:Vohi jo tum bahut der se chate ho'..but'fir bhi nahi kar rahe..

Mayank..getting confuse..:Kya baat hain Nupur saaf saaf batao please'.

Nupur..still giving him hint...:Door is open'make sure you won't wake her up..she is still not used to it'

Mayank..getting the meaning of her words:Are you sure'..

Nupur:Absolutely'.

He quickly rushed towards the room where his daughter was peacefully sleeping'with a smile appearing on her face'from morning he was dieing to see this'.with slow baby steps..he approached her..staring her for a moment'and then without making any furthur noise he neared her face towards her..glanced her a bit and give a sweet soft..and very light peck on her forhead'which just increased the length of her smile'Smiling to himself'he quitely moved out of the room'.no words were needed as the happiness was clearly reflecting from his eyes and face'he hugged her..conveying his joy and whispered bye..before closing the door behind'..

He was feeling so content today'and wished oneday'Shriya..to be calling him"Dadda.."indeed that day will be the best day of his whole life'smiling himself fully he drove his car towards office..

Finally the princess of the Shrama kingdom woke up from her deep sleep'with a sweet smile playing on her lips..she felt different today'very happy from inside she' brushed her teeth and called her mother,"Mammaaa'.."

Nupur'from downstairs:Mein yahan hoon'living room mein Shriya'"

Lest she knows that where they watch T.V. her..tom and jerry is the living area..so she took her tiny legs and moved towards her mother,"Good Morning Mamaa.."Hugging..she said..

Nupur:Good Morning shona'.!!!

Glancing her gaze all around she asked to her mother:Kya aaj bhi office'Giving a tinch of sadness'

Nupur..assuring her:Haan Shona'.Lekin aapke Dadda'jaldi aa jayenge'

Shriya..still in sad tone:Lekin jana zaluli tha kya'

Nupur..making her understand:Shona..mera bachha sab k Dadda office jaate hain..kam karte hain..aur fir shamm ko..apne bachho k saath khelte hain'..

Shriya'seems still not convinced':Okay..murmering to herself..but bata k to jana chahiye tha'bas chale gaye'.

Nupur:Kya hua'kuch kaha tumne'

Shriya:Huh'Nahi to..kuch bhi nahi'.

Nupur:Good'Tum yahi betho mein tumhare liye milk leke aati hoon'

Shriya:Mamma..aap kya pee rahe ho..

Nupur:Ye coffee hain'

Shriya:Mujhe bhi peeni hain'

Nupur:Nahi Shriya..it's not for children..aapke liye milk best hain..okay'mein laati hoon'

Saying she went towards the kitchen leaving Shriya alone in the room with coffee mug on the table'She glanced towards the kitchen to see whether her mother is coming or not..and sensing not..she picked up the mug and sipped a bit'as soon as the coffee..rested on her taste buds..she realise how'right her mother was..it actually taste yuck..!!!like..no sweetness in it'

Nupur had seen it ..giving her glass of milk she said:Mene kaha tha..na..lo ab apna milk piyo..

Having her milk..she regain the tastes of her taste buds which got detoriated due to the yuck and untolerable taste of that coffee'

After finishing heir breakfast..Mother daughter played abit..an also..cleaned their home..it was by the time..afternoon..and Nupur's lunch was almost prepared..Shriya..was again and again glancing towards the clock..and then resume herself in drawing'it seems she was waiting for someone..or she was waiting for her father to come..

The bell ring..jumping both of them to their feet'they both ran towards the door..but Shriya seems faster than Nupur..she reached the door before her and tried to open the door'which is at much higher position her hand could reach..she jumped twice'but couldn't able to open it..Nupur was actually got a little bit of surprised..but more than that she was very much happy'.specially seeing her excited for Dadda's arrival'she stood her place..watching her..when She called her,"Mamma..jaldi kholo na..khul nahi raha hain..please'Vo aaye honge..please.."

Nupur:Aaa rahi hoon'jaldi kya hain..thoda wait kar lenge to kya hua'

Shriya ..still in excited tone':Please jaldi karo na..please pleas please'

Nupur:Acha..baba..khol rahi hoon..peeche ho thoda'

She step aside..so that Nupur could open the door'.as soon as the door welcome..they saw..a their smile to get more wider and wider'Mayank was standing there leaning to the wall'giving his most sexy smile according to Nupur and most adoring smile according to Shriya'

Mayank ..not noticing the Shriya as she is behind Nupur:Kya baat hain..aaj itna time laga diya kholne.mein aur Shriya kya kholne ko keh rahi thi'

Nupur..fully smiling..question ignoring his :Well..you see'aaj hum dono tumhara besabri se intezaar kar rahe the..more than me..she was excited to meet you'

Mayank:Really..

Nupur:Yes'..!!! Tabhi to vo keh rahi thi...door open karne k liye'uska haath pahuch nahi raha tha vahan per'tabhi to mujhe bula rahi thi'

Mayank'.smilingly:Kahan hain vo'

Nupur'stepping aside:Yahan per..

Seeing his daughter standing there..fiddling with her finger's and were innocently looking towards him'he want to grab her and hug her close to his heart'.but controlling his desires..he gave his smile to her and bend down on his knees infront of her..and said,"Thank you..!!...For waiting for me'and sorry'for getting late'."

Shriya..looking down :It's okay'..

Mayank:Pakka na..naraz to nahi ho'

Shriya:Nahi'

Mayank..smiling to himself:To fir'.mere saath park chalo gi na'

Shriya..excitedly..looking to him:Sachii'Hum park jaayenge'

Mayank nodded her head'she so wished to hug him..but controlled her urges..and asked her Mother,"Mamma..jaldi khana laga do'fir hum park chalenge'chalo chalo jaldi'."

Nupur:Haan baba'chalti hoon'.

The happiness were returning to their house..converting it to a beautifull home'.it seems that it's one of the good day..for both Mayank and Nupur and specially for Shriya'but who knows'extra sweetness sometimes'works as poison'but yet more sweetness has to be yet to add in these happiness'to convert them into sour'and poison'but does.poison is strong enough to bring everyhting to square one'or bought a step closer..to the ultimate happiness'poison is never sweet'but sometimes..it cures biggest'.miseries'


Hope you Like it...

Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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shaffyyy- HUG HUG HUG

thank u so much or ur update yaar
kitna intezar kya hai maine ye update k liye
now finally got it.
muahhh jani

hey hey the update was superb as usual
hawww my sweet shreya. she was ery cute
hehehehee she dint want her dadda to go to office- so sweet.
she wants him to play with her

both nupur and shreya were damn cute
what an adorable family... kahi kisi ki nazar na laag jaye
loved the excitement that b/w shreya and nupur when mayank returned frm office.

awesome update
i was just too good

keep it up

aur ha ek OS likh de plzzz

i so miss ur OS
Edited by Faria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shafyyy
where r u????
r u updating

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

r u updating??????????????

yeee

HUG HUG HUG



Hope you like it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

Shafyyy
where r u????
r u updating



sorry for taking a bit time...
i had updated and also pmed you
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely muuuaaahhh...
Loving shriya
Edited by yashu_arti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yupees ohh balle balle
nacho yaar shaffy ne update kar diya
finally u updated
its really nice update deary
and i love its shriya's behavior, she is really cute and innocent
she slowly slowly accepted him as a DADDA
thanks for pm me a wonderful update


i always say to u i love u because of this reasons
that's why i love u


love u always


______


deepa
Edited by deepa5 - 12 years ago

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