New ss : I have learnt the true meaning of luv from u cha 3 [a ] pg 7

Hey friends i have decided to start a new ss on arjun . I have penned the first chapter . So please tell me should i continue or not . It depends on your comments .

Go ahead dear...post it soon

Thanks for the support my friends i will update within three hours. :)

INDEX
chapter one : page 1 Important note : page 2
Precape : page 3
character sketch : page 3
chapter 2 : page 5

<font size="1"> chapter 1 </font>
somewhere inside the mumbai forest .
Man : agar yeh baath boss ko patha chalega tho whoa thuje zinda nehi chodogi.
Girl : masak math kar mukesh. Tumari boss nehi tumari boss ke boss be muje kuch nei kar saktha.
Mukesh: mai yeh baath zaror boss se maalugi.
Girl : oh ok . Par iskeliyeh tum yahan se zinda waapas jaane ki zaroorath hai. Par for your kind information tum zinda nehi jaasaktha.[saying this the girl took a gun from her pocket and aimed at mukesh]
Mukesh: nehi muje chood tho. Tumari dusman hamari boss hai na . Tho kyun muje torture karahahon.
Girl : kyun. Iska javab tum nehi patha . Koi problem nehi . Ab suno maine tum se warn kiya na woh girls ko torture math karo . Par tum meri baath nehi suna . Tho iska sasa yeh hai DEATH . Good bye my friend . [ saying this the girl shoots mukesh]

Now the girl receives a call .
Girl : bolo robert .
Robert : scarlett kaam katham hogya ?
Scarlett : yea. Katham hogaya . Tum yeh baath humari boss se inform karo.
Robert : ok . Par woh laash ka kya karne walie ho tum.
Scarlett : don't worry . Kal subha zaror ETF will reach here .
Robert : ok . Par tum jalthe waapas aavo . It is not a safe place .
Scarlett : ok . Mai jalthe waapas aavongi. Tum fihar math kar. Ok bye.
Robert : ok bye .
So friends this is the first chapter . And please forgive for my mistakes . Because i not good at hindi . But i gave my best . So please comment .

Important note Hey friends please comment for this one . Atleast i want 20 Comments to continue this one . The comment may be positive or negative but please comment . Otherwise i will not continue this one . So please comment .

yayyy me first...
awsum start...
story is very interesting...
who was the girl scarlett was talking about??
continue soon...

Originally posted by: devildiva21

awsum start...
story is very interesting...
who was the girl scarlet was talking about??
continue soon...

thanks a lot for your first support dear . I will revel every thing soon. Thanks for your comment dear :-)

Superb start dear
very interesting
do cont soon
all d best..
n
thanx fr d pm ..!!

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Superb start dear
very interesting
do cont soon
all d best..
n
thanx fr d pm ..!!

thanks a lot for ur support . I will try my best to continue soon:-)