Thnk u so much anjali 4 dis awesome long comment, it really encourages me 2 write more n more..😛😃 I will definitely continue soon, n ur most wc..😊Originally posted by: cutiepie2244
Waoo dear one more awesome update.. how do u manage to remain the interest n thrill in ur both the stories same n every time... I always expected excellent n u give weldone update.. u r too good dear👏👏 Aww thnk u so much Anjali..sho sweet of u..😊
Now chalo cuming back to the update.. it was just speecless.. what should i say more.. The new twist is yet amazing n shocking.. The pain,, the cuteness,, the sweetness,, the emotions r very well written... Luved both.. virika n mannat.. Both r so adorable n cute...😊😊 Thnk u so much, glad u found dis interesting..😊
U always relpy to my whole comment n u also give pm 4 it to me.. i luv u dear.. u always amaze me with ur story as well as ur comments.. u r too awesome yr... u r an amzaing person n writer as well what should i say more...😊😊 Aww, Luv u 2 Anjali..Thnks a lot, dats really very sweet of u..Thnks a ton..😊🤗ur much more amazing person den I m..😊
hahhahah virika n rahul... what a fast forward kid.. bhai hai tou modern zamane ki bachi😆😆... Hahahaha virat scared from his own daughter.. bilkul maanvi par hi gae hai.. Sherni😆😆..Hehe,,yup modern zamane ke bacche,,😃😆yup lil Sherni..😊
Waooo the cute talking n the way she was talking i was so amazed... the way they both said.. (solly mannat ji humen maaf kar dijiye).. Aaahh just fantastic.. the way maanvi was teasing virika was so cute n funny...😆😆 Thnk u, glad u lykd it..😊
The way both jeman worried 4 virika was superb.. they both luved her to bits... the convo n scene of shlok was also awesome... This whole scene touched my heart.. this gesture was awesome👏👏 (
Mannat: (teary eyes) Maa...
Viraat looked at Mannat as she entered his room, looking all upset.
Viraat: (worried) Mannat, kya hua Baby? Aap udaas kyun ho?
Mannat looked up at her Dad and her eyes filled with tears yet again. Viren entered Viraat's room and saw Viraat sitting in front of Mannat.
Viren: (smiles) Kya chal raha hai yahan?
Mannat and Viraat turned towards Viren. Viren frowns as he saw tears in Mannat's eyes, he hurriedly walked towards her and knelt down, in front of her.
Viren: (worriedly) Mannat, kya hua Princess? Aap ro kyun rahi ho? (looking at Viraat) Viraat tune kuch kiya kya?
Viraat: (looking at Viren) Bhai maine kuch nahi kiya, pata nahi (turned to face Mannat) isse achanak kya ho gaya. (hands on her cheeks) Mannat, baccha kya hua, Papa ko batao.
Mannat: (tears rolling down her cheeks) Maa...
Thnk u thnk u thnk u Anjali ji,
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Maanvi and Jeevika's heart skipped a beat, they looked at each other with teary eyes.
Virika: (tears streaming down her cheeks) Mele Papa kahan hai? (where is my dad?)
Tears rolled down from both of their eyes.
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Mannat: (cutely/ teary eyes) Chab ke pach Mama hai, mere pach kyun nahi hai? (Everyone has a Mother, why don't I have one?)
Viraat eyes filled with tears, the past, which he was trying to forget, was once again in front of him as a question, that to asked by his own daughter.
Mannat: Bagwaanji ne mujhe Mama kyun nahi diya? (Why didn't God gave me a Mom?)
Viren looked at Viraat, who's tears were rolling down his cheeks, his eyes were still glued on Mannat. He placed his hand on his shoulder, and looked at Mannat with a fake smile.
Viren: (holds her hand) Mannat Beta, aisa kuch nahi hai, aap jao khelo.)
The way they both got worried... uff VV Bros r awesome... Both virika n maanat r missing their one parent😭😭... Felt bad 4 both.. Virman's child is with Virat.. n Virika's child is with Jeevika... Y they all got seperated.. its almost a shock n interesting plot.. just amazing... Hope that it clears soon...😊😊 Yup dey r separated wid only 1 kid...n willl clear da confusion soon..😊
Dear thanxx 4 the pn.. n cont soon.. plz dear soon soon soon soon...😊😊