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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
First of all a very very big congratulation for starting new thread.. ur previous thread was just out of the world n u r starting a new one too n i know it wil become super hit like before.. congo dear


N now m really sorry dear that i commented this late.. actually was very buzi n now m writting my own story so it will take much time so sorry dear...


Now coming back to the update it was simply n amazingly awesome.. loved it to the core.. u again made me speechless like always.. as m writting my story so plz give me sum tips i know that than my story will become more n more awesome😊😊
Awww loved the naughty n romantic virat..😳😳.. hahahah love marks uff great😳😳.. loved the dialogue of virat (dekhun tou).. he has become more naughty after the wedding...
Hahhahah (humare pyar ki nishani)😆😆.. Loved the convo held in the hall.. whole family is so naughty n funny.. Loved the convo of virman of ending.. so romantic.. sherni biwi ko gussa agaya..😆😆..
just simply fab.. no more words to say more.. each dialogue ur loving romance everything i loved to bits.. thanxx dear 4 this awesome update...
Dear i know that its short but i have to write next part of my story so thats y sorry dear...


N in the end i will say that thanxx 4 continuing this story...😊😊


Thanxx 4 the pm n continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishal310

wow artii what a update yaar it was brilliant👏👏

and no need to say sorry for the delay b'coz all of us know that everyone is busy in thier exams so it's okey
now coming to the update it was hot and romantic😳
i was blushing like hell when i read the last part of it☺️
i love the way when next morning everyone was teasing virat that was so cute and sweet na
i enjoy the every bit of it
it's a super update
thanks for the pm and cont soon😊

Thnk u so much...n thnks a lot 4 understanding...😆 gud thing u blushed after reading dis update...😛u r most wc...will continue soon thnks..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: cutiepie2244

First of all a very very big congratulation for starting new thread.. ur previous thread was just out of the world n u r starting a new one too n i know it wil become super hit like before.. congo dear Thnk u so much Anjali...😊


N now m really sorry dear that i commented this late.. actually was very buzi n now m writting my own story so it will take much time so sorry dear...
I understand Anjali, u dn't need 2 apologies..busy schedule 4 evry1..😊n ur story is an awesome 1, take ur tym but update soon...😛😊


Now coming back to the update it was simply n amazingly awesome.. loved it to the core.. u again made me speechless like always.. as m writting my story so plz give me sum tips i know that than my story will become more n more awesome😊😊 I dn't think u need dat sweety, ur an awesome writer, n ur doin an fab job on ur story..Thnks a lot Anjali..😊
Awww loved the naughty n romantic virat..😳😳.. hahahah love marks uff great😳😳.. loved the dialogue of virat (dekhun tou).. he has become more naughty after the wedding...😆Yup Naughty Viraat..😃
Hahhahah (humare pyar ki nishani)😆😆.. Loved the convo held in the hall.. whole family is so naughty n funny.. Loved the convo of virman of ending.. so romantic.. sherni biwi ko gussa agaya..😆😆..😆Thnks Anjali..m so glad u lykd it..😊
just simply fab.. no more words to say more.. each dialogue ur loving romance everything i loved to bits.. thanxx dear 4 this awesome update...
Ur most wc, m so glad u lykd it..😊
Dear i know that its short but i have to write next part of my story so thats y sorry dear...No prob Anjali, I understand, n trust me wateva u wrote in dis comments means a lot., its not stort at all..thnks a ton..😊


N in the end i will say that thanxx 4 continuing this story...😊😊Ur most wc sweety..😊


Thanxx 4 the pm n continue soon...

Ur most wc..n will continue soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello guyz,,m bck wid part 33...thnks a lot 4 ur comments guys...And I really hope u'll lyk dis part as well... juz wanna apologize 4 da delay, was busy wid sumthin else..ok so here we go...EnJoY..

VirMan...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 34...

~Recap~


Maanvi smiles at her Husband, and gave him all the rights that he has on her, willingly, all over again...


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~5 Years Later~


Jeevika: Mannu ja maharani ko utha de, warna mujh par hi chilaye gi.

Maanvi: (laughs) Di, kitna darti ho aap usse.

Jeevika and Maanvi, in their simple salwar suit, were in the kitchen making breakfast.

Jeevika: (smiles) Woh sab ki Dadi Maa hai, ja na Mannu, main yeh kar lungi.

Maanvi: (smiles) Thik hai Di, ja rahi hun humari Maharani ko uthane.


Jeevika smiled as Maanvi walked away. She walked into a room, where everything was pink, walls, bed sheet, curtains, and what not. In the middle of the bed, was sleeping a cute little girl, in her pink pajamas, her face was covered with her cute tiny hands. Maanvi smiled and tip toed towards the little girl and sat beside her on the bed.

Maanvi: Good Morning Angel...


No response.

Maanvi: (pulling her cheek, slightly after removing her hands) Angel com'on get up Baby.

~*~ (turns her face other side/sleepy) Shona hai..

Maanvi: (cutely) Arey meri Angel ko abhi bhi sona hai, uff..(pretending to be confused) but Baby agar aap uthegi nahi toh aap Rahul se kaise mile gi..???

~*~(sits up on the bed, with a frown) Lahul...aap ne mujhe utaya kyun nahi? (Rahul...why didn't you wake me up?)

Maanvi: Lo, toh main yahan kya kar rahi hun Virika Ji?

Virika Vadhera. Daughter of Viren and Jeevika, 4 year old, very cute and sweet. Loves her Mom and Maasi Maa, Maanvi a lot.

Virika: (holding ears) Solly Maasi Maa..main daldi se taiyal ho jaati hun. (Sorry Maasi Maa, I'll go and get ready quickly.)

Maanvi: (smiles/teasingly) Haan haan jao Virika Ji, warna aapka Lahul guccha ho jaye ga. (Yes of course Ms. Virika, or else your Rahul will get angry.)

Virika ran towards her bathroom, followed by Maanvi.

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Viren: (shouting) Mannu?

Viraat: (smiles) Bhai kyun khud ki band bajane pe tule ho?

Viraat and Viren were sitting in the main hall. Viren was reading newspapers, where as Viraat was doing something on his laptop.

Viren: Arey tabhi toh maza aata hai na, jab woh gussa ho kar danti hai, toh bahut hi cute lagti hai.

Viraat: (smiles) Soh toh hai.

Viren: (shouting) Mannu??

Viraat: (worriedly) Bhai abhi aaye gi toh mujhe bhi sau baate suna jayegi.

Viren: Kitna darta hai tu usse.

Viraat: Sherni se kam thodi hai.

Viren: Chup kar, abhi aur gussa karegi. (shouting) Mannu, jaldi aa.

Viraat and Viren turned around and saw a cute little girl running towards them, her anklet making sweet sounds as she was running. She was wearing a cute purple and black dress. She stopped in front of the Vadhera Boyz, with her tiny hands on her hips.

~*~ Kichne mujhe Mannu bulaya? Aul, Kichne Chelni? (Who called me Mannu and who called me Sherni?)

Viraat: (whisperes to Viren) Lo aa gayi Sherni.

~*~(angerily/looking at Viraat) Aapne mujhe Chelni bulaya? (You called me Sherni?)

Viraat: (smiles worriedly) Na..nahi Princess...

~*~ Toh Mannu bulaya?

Viraat: (nodding negatively) Nahi Nahi..maine nahi bulaya.

~*~(looking at Viren) Toh aapne bulaya mujhe, Chelni aul Mannu? (So did you called me Sherni and Mannu?)

Viren: (nodding negatively) Nahi toh..(looking at Viraat) Viraat tune bulaya tha na usse Sherni.

Viraat: (looked at Viren, disbelievingly) Haan toh aapne bulaya tha usse Mannu...

Viren: Mujh par ilzaam mat laga, mujhe kyun phasa raha hai...(looking at Mannu) Man
nu..
~*~(hands on her hips, yelling at Viren/cutely) Mannu nahi Mannat. Mela naam Mannat hai, Mannat Badela. (Its not Mannu, its Mannat. My name is Mannat, Mannat Vadhera.)


Mannat Vadhera. Daughter of Viraat and Maanvi, 3 years old, very cute and lovely. She is very naughty just like her parents. Loves her Dad Viraat and Bade Papa, Viren the most.

Viren: (laughs) Haan, haan, Mannat..meri Princess, (looking at Viraat) dekho na, aapke Papa ne aapko Sherni bulaya.

Viraat: (looking at Viren) Bhai cheating mat karo. (smiles at Mannat) Maanat, meri Princess, dekho aapke Bade Papa ne aapko Mannu bulaya.

Mannat: (hits her palm on her forehead/irritatedly) Uff..Kya kalun main aap dono ka. Main toh palechan ho gayi hun aap dono che. Bale Papa, aapko toh pata hai, mujhe Mannu nahi pachand. Aul Papa, main Chelni nahi hun. (Uff...what should I do with you two. I'm tried of you two. Bade Papa(Viren), you know, I don't like the name Mannu, and Papa(Viraat) I'm not a Sherni.

VadheraBoyz: (holding ears) Solly Mannat Ji, hume maaf kar dijiye.

Mannat: Aapko pata hai, main Dadi ke cchaat beji thi. Chambalna muchkil hai aap dono ko, aap dono ne mujh toh paleshan kal ke laka hai. ( You know, I was busy with Dadi(Vanshika Maa). You two are too much to handle, i'm just tired of you two.)

Viraat: (hands folded) Acha meri Maa, galti ho gayi, ab aap jao.

Mannat: Bye.

With that, she walked away, leaving Viraat and Viren amused.

Viren: (smiles) Kya ladki hai.

Viraat: (smiles) Sherni hai pura.


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Maanvi and Virika came down towards the dinning table, where Jeevika was already waiting for them. Virika hugged her mom tightly as Jeevika smile at her.

Virika: Good molning Mama. (Good morning Mom)

Jeevika: (hugging her back) Good morning Angel. Kaisa hai mera baccha aaj?

Maanvi: Aur kaisi hogi Di, (teasingly) Rahul ka naam sunte toh yeh hawa mein udhne lagti hai.

Virika: (pouts) Maasi Maa, Lahul kyun nahi aaya abhi tak? (Maasi Maa, why isn't Rahul here by now?)
Maanvi: (laughs a little, looking at Jeevika) Dekh lo DI apni Beti ki kartut...abhi se yeh haal hai iska. (smiles at Virika) Virika ji, aapka Rahul aa jaye ga, thoda interzaar kijiye.

Jeevika: Acha chalo, tab tak aap apna breakfast finish karo.

Virika: (smiles) Ok Mama.

Jeevika, Maanvi, and Virika finished their breakfast. After having their breakfast, Virika went to Rahul's house, as every Sunday they have dance classes at his house, and Maanvi and Jeevika started doing their house chores.

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Mannat: (stubbornly) Nahi, mujhe chocolate chahiye chahiye chahiye.

Dadaji: Arey Beta, sorry main pata nahi kaise bhul gaya.

Mannat was sitting on Dadaji's lap, with hands folded across her chest, looking away from Dadaji, stubbornly/angerily.

Mannat: Maine aapko yaad dilaya tha na Bale Dadaji, aap kache bul gaye? (I remined you Bade Dadaji, how could you forget it?)

Viren and Viraat came down and saw an angry Mannat, who was looking down with a frown on her forehead, and a sad Dadaji, looking towards them, helplessly.

Viren: Kya hua?

Swamini Bua: (smiles) Raj Kumari naraaz hai apne Bade Dadaji se.

Viraat: Kyun kya hua? (laughs a little) Dadaji fir chocolate laana bhul gaye kya?

Mannat looked up at her Dad poutingly, she got out of Dadaji's lap and ran towards Viraat.

Mannat: Papa, Bale Dadaji ne chocolate nahi laya, maine yaad bhi dilaya tha. Woh phil bul gaye. (pouts cutely) (Papa, Bade Dadaji didn't bring any chocolates for me, I even remined him, but he forgot.)
Viraat: (carries her in his arms) Arey mera baccha. Koi baat nahi, kal Papa aapke liye dher saare chocolates laa deinge ok. (smiles)
Mannat: Pal mujhe aaj khana tha Papa,,(sadly)

Kadambari Chachi: Arey meri pyaari Princess, aao main aapko chocolate deti hun.

Mannat: (smiles widely) aapke pach hai? (You have them with you?)

Kadambari Chachi: (smiles) Haan hai toh, chahiye aapko?

Mannat: (nodding cutely, with a wide smile) Chaiye. (Yes, I want it.)

Kadambari Chachi: (extended her hands, to pick her up) Toh aa jao.

Mannat smiled and went in Kadambari Chachi's arms. Everyone smiled looking at Mannat's cuteness.

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Jeevika and Maanvi was sitting in the main hall after doing their work.

Jeevika: Chalo kaam toh ho gaya. Maharani ji bas aati hi hogi.

Maanvi: (smirks) Kahan DI, uska best friend Rahul..(laughs) nahi, Lahul jo hai uske saath, hume toh bhul hi gayi hogi.

Jeevika: Kyun chidhati rehti hai meri Beti ko.

Maanvi: Issi mein toh maza aata hai Di, dekhna jab woh badi ho jaye gi tab toh aur bhi chidhaungi main usse.

Jeevika: (laughs) Tu bhi na Mannu.

Maanvi: Di ek sachi baat kahun..acha hua Rahul usse uske bacchpan mein hi mil gaya, aapko uske liye dulha nahi dhundhna hoga. (laughingly)

Jeevika: (laughing) Mannu..

Jeevika was cut off by the door bell.

Maanvi: Lagta hai Virikaji aa gayi, main dekhti hun...(getting up)

Jeevika: (stops Maanvi) Tu baith, main dekhti hun.

Jeevika got up and walked towards the door to open it. As she opened the door, she saw a sad and upset Virika standing in front of her, along with Rahul, a cute little boy and his Mom, Mrs. Sharma.

Jeevika: (worried) Virika, kya hua Beta? (looking at Mrs. Sharma) Mrs. Sharma, kya hua hai isse?

Mrs. Sharma: Pata nahi achanak isse kya ho gaya, dance karte karte bilkul sad ho gayi, maine pucha toh kuch bataya hi nahi.

Virika's eyes filled up and she looked up at Jeevika, who was busy talking with Mrs. Sharma.

Jeevika: (smiles) Oh, koi baat nahi Mrs. Sharma, main puch lungi. Aap andar aaiye.

Mrs. Sharma: Nahi Jeevika, mujhe jaana hoga, aaj kai(many) dino ke baad Rahul ke Papa ghar aaye hai, woh intezaar kar rahe honge, hume chalna chahiye.

Virika looked down as tears rolled down her cheeks.

Jeevika: Ji, Thank You so much Mrs. Sharma.

Mrs. Sharma: (smiles) Koi baat nahi. (looking at Rahul) Chale Rahul.

Rahul: (smiles at his Mom) Ok Maa...(looking at Virika) Bye Vilika. (Ok Mom..Bye Virika.)

Mrs. Sharma and Rahul went away. Virika walked inside the house, without looking at her Mom. Jeevika turned around and saw her upset daughter walking towards the sofa. Maanvi saw Virika came and sat beside her, without saying any word, which was actually weird. Whenever she came back from her dance classes, she would eat their head, telling about her day in the class, but today she was sitting all quiet, looking very upset and sad. Maanvi looked up at Jeevika, questioningly, and she nodded her head negatively.

Maanvi: (worried) Angel, kya hua?

Jeevika and Maanvi exchanged a worried glance. Jeevika walked towards Virika and sat beside her.

Jeevika: (stroking her hair lovingly) Viri, kya hua baccha? Kisi ne kuch kaha hai kya aapse?
Maanvi: (hands around Virika's shoulder) Mujhe batao kaun hai woh? Kiski itni himmat ki woh meri Beti ko pareshan kare?

Tears rolled down Virika's cheeks, Jeevika and Maanvi panicked seeing her like that.

Jeevika: (damn worried) Virika, kya hua hai Beta?
Maanvi: (palm on her cheek) Baby, aap apni Maasi ko toh bata hi sakhti ho na, batao na baccha, kya hua hai?

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Shlok was sitting on his bed, reading a book, while Kadambari Chachi was sitting beside him, feeding him some food. Mannat was standing at the door, looking at the Mother-Son duo, with a smiley face.

Shlok: (irritatedly) Bas na Maa, ab aur nahi.

Kadambari Chachi: Haye ni, koi bas was nahi haan. Pura finish karna padega.

Shlok: Mom, main ab koi baccha nahi hun, main 15 years ka ho gaya hun.
Kadambari Chachi: Tu chahe sau saal ka hi kyun na ho jaye, (pulling his cheek) mere liye baccha hi rahe ga.
Shlok: (annoyedly, moves her hand) Maa, please yeh dailogue marna band karo aur mujhe padhne do.
Kadambari Chachi: Haan toh padh na, maine kab roka hai, main toh bas tujhe khana khila rahi hun.

Shlok: Maine kha liya.
Kadambari Chachi: Shloku, pura finish karna hai tujhe.

Shlok: God Maa, pata nahi Bhagwaan ji ne duniya mein Maa kyun banaya hai.
Kadambari Chachi: (smiles) Bhagwaan ji ne Maa ko iss liye banaya hai, kyun ki woh khud iss duniya mein nahi aa sakhte har kisi ka dhiyaan rakhne ke liye. Isiliye unhone har kisi ke liye ek Maa banaya, jo apne bacche ka khayal rakhti, unki raksha karti, unhe har mushkil se bachati hai. Isiliye iss duniya mein unhone har kisi ko ek Maa de diya.

Shlok: (smiles) Thank you Maa, mujhe yeh samjhane ke liye, ab please khana khilao.

Mannat turned around and started walking away.

Mannat: (teary eyes) Maa...

Viraat looked at Mannat as she entered his room, looking all upset.

Viraat: (worried) Mannat, kya hua Baby? Aap udaas kyun ho?

Mannat looked up at her Dad and her eyes filled with tears yet again. Viren entered Viraat's room and saw Viraat sitting in front of Mannat.

Viren: (smiles) Kya chal raha hai yahan?

Mannat and Viraat turned towards Viren. Viren frowns as he saw tears in Mannat's eyes, he hurriedly walked towards her and knelt down, in front of her.

Viren: (worriedly) Mannat, kya hua Princess? Aap ro kyun rahi ho? (looking at Viraat) Viraat tune kuch kiya kya?

Viraat: (looking at Viren) Bhai maine kuch nahi kiya, pata nahi (turned to face Mannat) isse achanak kya ho gaya. (hands on her cheeks) Mannat, baccha kya hua, Papa ko batao.

Mannat: (tears rolling down her cheeks) Maa...

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Maanvi and Jeevika's heart skipped a beat, they looked at each other with teary eyes.

Virika: (tears streaming down her cheeks) Mele Papa kahan hai? (where is my dad?)
Tears rolled down from both of their eyes.


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Mannat: (cutely/ teary eyes) Chab ke pach Mama hai, mere pach kyun nahi hai? (Everyone has a Mother, why don't I have one?)


Viraat eyes filled with tears, the past, which he was trying to forget, was once again in front of him as a question, that to asked by his own daughter.

Mannat: Bagwaanji ne mujhe Mama kyun nahi diya? (Why didn't God gave me a Mom?)


Viren looked at Viraat, who's tears were rolling down his cheeks, his eyes were still glued on Mannat. He placed his hand on his shoulder, and looked at Mannat with a fake smile.

Viren: (holds her hand) Mannat Beta, aisa kuch nahi hai, aap jao khelo.

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Virika: Mama, mujhe pata hai, aisa hi hai. Aaj maine Lahul ke Papa ko bhi dekha, woh unhe itna saala pyaal kal lahe the. Mele Papa kyun nahi kalte mujhse pyaal? (Mom, I know its exactly like that. Today I saw Rahul's Father, who was showering all his love on him. Why doesn't my Father love me?)
Maanvi: (fake smile) Virika, Beta aapko Papa kyun chahiye? Aapke paas toh Mama hai na, aapki Maasi hai na, jo aapko itna saara pyaar karti hain.


Jeevika looked away as tears were streaming down her cheeks. Maanvi was holding back her tears in front of Virika.

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Mannat: Mujhe Mama chahiye Bale Papa. Aapke pach, Papa ke pach, Chlok Chachu ke pach Mama hai, silf mele pach nahi hai, (looking at Viraat) aicha kyun hai Papa? (I want a Mother Bade Papa. You, Dad, and Shlok Chachu have a Mom, but I don't have any. Why is that Dad?)

Viraat wiped his tears and looked at Mannat with a fake smile.


Viraat: Princess, (wipes her tears with his thumb) aap Papa ki good Baby ho na. Toh promise karo, aaj ke baad aap Papa se ya kisi aur se yeh baat nahi pucheingi. (extended his hands) Promise karo.
Mannat: (crying) Pal mujhe Mama chahiye Papa. Mama mujhe bhi waiche khana khilaye gi jaiche Kadambali Dadi Chlok Chachu ko khilti hai. Woh bhi mujhe del saala pyaal kalegi jaiche Dadi aapko kalti hai. (But I want a Mother Dad. My Mom will feed me the way Kadambari Dadi feeds Shlok Chachu. She'll love me the way Dadi(Vanshika Maa) loves you Dad)

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Virika: (crying) Mujhe Papa chaiye Mama. Sab ke paas hai Papa, mele paas hi nahi hai. Woh mujhse milne nahi aate, mujhe pyaal nahi kalne aate. Kyun Mama? (I want my Father Mom. Everyone has a Father, why don't I? Why doesn't he come to meet me, why doesn't he come to love me? Why Mom?)

Jeevika: (stands up/eyes closed as tears rolled down) Viri, maine aapse kaha na, mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai. (opens her eyes/looking at Virika) Promise me Virika, aap kisi se bhi yeh sab fir kabhi nahi pucheingi, kisise bhi nahi.

Virika: (looking at her innocently, tears rolling down) Pal Mama...(But Mom...)


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Viraat: (eyes closed) Mannat please.

Viren: (hands on her cheeks) Mannat., aap toh Papa ki ladli Princess ho na, Papa ki baat nahi manogi?

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Maanvi: (teary eyes) Maan jao na Virika, mere liye, apni Mama ke liye.

Virika smiled and hugged JeeMan.

Virika: (wipes her tears/smiles) I Plomise Maasi Maa, main aisa kisi se kabhi nahi puchungi. ( I promise Maasi Maa, I'll never ask anyone anything about this topic.)

Maanvi: (breaks the hug) Thank You Angel.

Jeevika: Acha ab aap jao khelo, main aapke liye kuch khane ko bana deti hun hmm.

Virika: Ok,,(kisses on JeeMan's cheeks, and rans away)


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Mannat looked down and then up at Viraat.

Mannat: (smiles a little) M solly Papa, main Plomich kalti hun, ab main kichi che aicha kabhi nahi puchugi. (I'm sorry Dad, I promise, I won't ask this question to anyone ever again.)
Viraat: (kisses her forehaed) Thank You Beta. (hugs her tightly) I Love You My Princess.

Mannat: (hugs him back) I Lub You Tu,
Papa. (I Love You Too Papa)
Viren: (pouts) Aur mujhe?

Mannat: (hugs Viren) I Lub You tu Bale Papa. (I Love You Too Bade Papa)

Viren: (kisses on her forehead) Ok, ab aap jao khelo.


Mannat smiled and ran away, out of the room leaving Viraat and Viren sad and upset.



Okk..so hwz it...?? Confused? will try 2 clear evrythin, but u'll hve 2 wait 4 dat...m sorry if u wanted me 2 extend their married lyf, but trust me I didn't hve ne more ideas...really sorry bout dat...n sorry if it was boring...The name Mannat n Virika was not given vy me, actually I read dese names in sum post/FF..i dn't remember, n I lykd dem a lotz..Plz leave ur comments and hit lyk if u lykd it..Thnk U...Tc...Luv Aartii...


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Edited by Artii159 - 12 years ago
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yayy im first!!!! wow aarti mind blowing update!!!!!!!!😃 i loved every part of it...
virika nd mannat r so cute😳 da way virika was behind her lahul nd mannat was talking 2 vv bros.. aww dey r jst lik der parents...😆
wat twist in da end yarr.. both virman nd virika split up.. bt y😕
jaldi confusion clear karo aarti..
plzzz plzzz cont soon nd thnx fr da pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg mannat is too cute just like manvi
I want this manaat aweee

viren virat and mannat's bonding was superb
liked jeevika manvi is virika convo too

hmm so they got separated
wanna know more
I think I missed the previous update lemme check that too

awesome ⭐️

congo for new thread 👏

Edited by preity_d - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE
MANNATH AND VIRIKA ARE AWESOME
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww very interesting...congo songo buddy...cntinue soobnnn
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Originally posted by: JESMY

NICE
MANNATH AND VIRIKA ARE AWESOME

Thnk u so much, glad u lykd da lil 1's..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: virumanu

aww very interesting...congo songo buddy...cntinue soobnnn

Thnks a lot...will continue soon..😊

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