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Farah

@farah53

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#501

OK, here I'd like to thank two persons for the following banners!

First up is Kalyaani... A big thankgs to her as I know she

doesn't do this often! Love you, K!

& the second one is by Nexus_13.. Thank you for your regular comments & now this treat!

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#502

Res :(

Edited:

I LOVE YOU RED! 😲

As I was reading I was forming a comment in my head. A comment of how this chapter was for Khushi. But no. How could I make this error?

Fari is writing SAY.

And Fari writes more for Arnav than for Khushi...

I liked your confident Khushi. She wants him and she lets him know that. She offers herself to him and is also the first to start undressing. She also takes the initiative in touching him, in making love to him. Not once does she falter or hesitate... She reacts to every touch of his, every kiss and every beat of the rhythm he sets for them... She is a woman confident of her love for the man. But more so, she is a woman who is confident of being loved by the man she loves. And I love her confidence in him.

All of it was so Khushi. But then you brought Arnav. An Arnav who wants the warmth of Khushi when he wakes up. An Arnav who wants to hold Khushi so that she doesnt leave him and go away. An Arnav who is emotionally dependent on Khushi. An Arnav who is also physically dependent on Khushi- he exists as long as she does.

Because he loves her. Nothing more. Nothing less.

Arnav told her that he would never cheat her. Wouldn't it have been cheating if he made love to her like he made love to the countless women in his life before? Wouldn't it have been cheating if sleeping with Khushi were the same as sleeping with anyone else?

The difference lies in love. And I love you for writing this ⭐️

PS: I loved the chapter so much I forgot to thank you for dedicating it to me... 😳 I love you Fari ❤️

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 13 years ago

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#503

You are right! We don't need a precap after this update and the precap does take away from the update

The whole scene was so beautifully written. You used the saansein ruk ayengi dialogue so well.

He has realised at last that he loves her.

I have a feeling he will fall off to sleep and the Gupta family will not find her in bed and panic.

This might lead to them being discovered.

Even more impatient then usual for the next update.

PS.- Loved the banners. K's banner suits this chapter so well.

Edited by 1chilly - 13 years ago

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#504

Is this Irony??? My 600th post for 60th update of SAY... I am happy about it... Before I get to the update, I would like to thank you Farah for SAY... I am from South India and we dont celebrate Holi... SAY has lot of colours to it and reading SAY always has given me the joy of Holi... Being an ardent fan of Arnav, I carry around with me the joy through out the day after reading SAY... I get excited and I wonder why... But girl your writing deserves all the excitement... Happy Holi!!!

Yet again another beautiful update... It was so beautifully written... It was so sweet of Arnav to give her the space to pull of from this if she had second thoughts... He thought about the consequences and ensured that she would be safe without protection😉... He wanted her next to him when he woke up and expressed the fear of her going away from him without any notice... And then, I cant help but quote the lines here... They felt more deserved here than when they were used in IPKKND... I feel the lines are at more rightful places here...

"Their breaths.. not only mingling together, but coming in the same rhythm too. As if they were following each other. & at that moment, he felt it. If she stopped breathing, his heartbeats would follow too. & the inevitable just tumbled out of his lips, "Khushi nahi rahi, toh Arnav ki saanse ruk jayengi!" He didn't know from when, but she had become his life for him. & as he felt her snuggling up to his body more, her hair mussed over his chest, something else left his lips, that shocked him more than everything else that had happened that night, "I love you, Red!"

he realised when they breathed in rhythm that "Khushi nahi rahi, toh Arnav ki saanse ruk jayengi!" and the words, "I love you, Red" just escaped from him to her sleeping form all so easily... just like that he realised what he feels for her is LOVE... what they share... this special bond is "LOVE"... Can this all get anymore beautiful??? I Loved it... Great writing and Thank you...

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

unresd on page 75!

so you planned to have this update on Holi??? the day Arnav and Khushi realised why their hearts raced like crazy when they were close to each other? awww...farah you love them both madly dont you?

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#506

I did a double "RES"... Sorry about it... But mera tho Holi rangeen hogay iss sal bhi because of "SAY"... Thank you Farah... here you go... This is for you for spreading joy in Arshi world...

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#507

me too

---------unres ----------------------
What did you do Farah? Holi pe muze bina bhaang ke hi chadh gayi!

haye.. I fainted while reading.. need to gather some wits to comment!!

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#508

This was beautifully written.

The love making came out very well. The emotions were very nicely described.

So Khushi finally decided to take a leap of faith and live in today.

I have a feeling that that the protection bit has more to do than mentioned. Natural protection is not 100% so does it mean that in future Khushi is likely to get pregnant which may create some problem?

This was a very serene phase in the story or is it the calm before the storm?

Really liked how you made your character finally realise and acknowledge his feelings, that it really is love. Not finding her by his side after sharing such intimacy surely was a step towards his realisation.

I hope that now Arnav takes a solid step and Khushi does not have to suffer after investing so much in this relation.

Edited by IronButterfly - 13 years ago

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#509

Farah that was beautiful !!! ❤️

Arnav and Khushi read eahcother's thoughts...

he gave her the chance to turn around and walk...she understud that and showed him that she is neva gonna walk away from him...

just as he thot she is gonna walk off...she shows her intentions are exactly the opposite...neva to let go ever !!!

their emotions...love care pain and the need to belong to each other !!! it reached the zenith today and exploded and they did become one forever !!!!

am happy to see Arnav shaping up the way I have wanting him to... 😳 its high time he took control of his feelings and accepted them and opened his heart for khushi !!!

she is his life...she resides in his heart and he needs to accept the invisible fact !!!

his pain thinkin that he wont see her when he wakes up...that was heart crunching !!!

yes arnav needs khushi like the air to breathe !!! she is his lifeline !!!

its hook line and sinker !!!

but my fav lines were...

"Their breaths.. not only mingling together, but coming in the same rhythm too. As if they were following each other. & at that moment, he felt it. If she stopped breathing, his heartbeats would follow too. & the inevitable just tumbled out of his lips, "Khushi nahi rahi, toh Arnav ki saanse ruk jayengi!" He didn't know from when, but she had become his life for him. & as he felt her snuggling up to his body more, her hair mussed over his chest, something else left his lips, that shocked him more than everything else that had happened that night, "I love you, Red!"

thats Arnav's realistaion and he better be a MAN and own up !!!

dont want to see him running away like a coward !!! Khushi has unconditionally given herself to him,her heart mind soul and body and its time he let her know that he loves her as much as she loves him or maybe even more !!!

its time for him to lay the world at her feet,give her all the happiness in the world that only he can give her !!!

awesome update farah !!! 👏

Edited by Jyo.Arshi.IPK - 13 years ago

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#510

Res

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this update was beyond beautiful.. Not only a mark in their lovestory, but a mark of their trust, love and passion!

Both proving each other of their love.. Arnav gave her a complete chance to re think.. He resisted, for he didn't want her to haste.. But khushi she is made for him, giving in the response that wud make him go ahead! To his each touch, his each kiss, and to him,. She gave in full..

They both got what they wanted.. Arnav got khushi, like he wanted aftr their first kiss, and khushi got acceptence of arnav's love for her by arnav himself (though she is sleeping;))

and i loved it the way arnav reacted , not finding khushi by his side! The thought of losing a loved one after just loving them in the most intense way you can is made him realise.. And his line"agar khushi nhi hui to, arnav ki sansein ruk jaengi"..this line was perfct!

Wid khushi's evry action, it took away a little of his heart as reaction..:D..

And now when khushi has given her all to him, he realised that his heart has been taken..;)

and the most awaited comes :
I LoVE YOU, ReD!

Edited by aashi12 - 13 years ago