SwaRon OS : True Love

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

FANTASTIC...

Story was truly awesom...loved it..

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Nisha...that was nice...I liked the approach basically...preset conceptions...inhibitions created by that...mistrust...calm understanding ... consideration for feelings..and finally her faith in his conviction...do write more...sorry for late comments

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Iman

@ArShiDelena

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

WOW Amazing OS 👏

Loved It 😊

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Hey nisha amazing os...luved it...luved the way how u described sharon...a girl who always hated men...n then how she fell for swayam...even the title was awesome...thnx for pm.

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

An amazin os.. Lovd how u described sharon's pov..
She gave in fr swayam as he was diff. N she cud trust him.. N swayam loves sharon frm all his heart !
U totally justified d title.. Lovd it !

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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

hey nish
firstly sory for repling so late
dis is soo sweet OS & d way swayam resolve sharon's insecurity & provide her love & made her to feel like heaven d way u hv created d magic was so good
once agn nice OS
Thanx for PM😃

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chimpukli10

@chimpukli10

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

hey srry nisha i m commenting late.but it 's a nice OS.d change in sharon was nice..

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

nice one yaar baar baar padthi hoon phir bhi padne ka man ho tha hain ,u have written sharon pov very nicely just like sharon
i loved it

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Awesome os Nish! That was very very well written.

I just loved the story. Sharon had a particular perception about boys which finally changed when Swayam came into her life and she finally began to believe in love and gave it a chance.

That was beautiful! And I loved Swayam as the guy who made Sharon fall in love!! That was "True Love" indeed!

Love,

XOXO
Amrita!!