****Veecha OS--5..You are my love,my life!****

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Posted: 12 years ago
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A very biG Hi to all Veecha fans!!I am back after a really really long wait(thanks to my exams!!😆😆😆😆😆) Sorry for that!!😉😉

So this is my 5th Version of VEECHA PARADISE!😳😳😳
Since I wont e coming that often to this forum anymore😭 I am in a bit haste to finish this OS so have started showing Veer's memory coming back but not wanting to show the lame slave of time I have or will try to potray veer who will strongly fight for his love with only partial memory coz I always wanted to see Veer like that..fighting for his Ichcha whatever be the circumstances and then the rest is..well...read on!😛😉😃😃
Hope you all love it!Do tell me!

"Hold on to me that I may not fall'Hold on to me that I may not lose myself,

Hold on to me so I may always be by your side..with you'forever"

"Ichcha!!" "Ichcha"!!! Veer awoke with a start.The dream was so true..it had to be true! He had seen it before' A hazy figure walking towards him..becoming clearer with every step yet more confusing..she was pleading "Veer! Don't forget me!I am your'" "ICHCHA"finished Veer.. He hurried to his desk..there was lying his beloved's diary..Ichcha's diary. Veer was in a deep thought "There is something I am missing..but what??"He hurriedly turned the pages but in vain..Veer had almost memorised the diary but this poor,withered diary was as helpless as Veer'with the very many pages being withered all these years which made him impossible to understand Ichcha fully'But he was sure of one thing.. "She loves me..Ichcha Veer Singh Bundela wherever you are your fate will make you meet me oneday for we two share the same fate"Pleased with the fact on which he could be sure that Ichcha had really loved him and that she had left him against her will Veer smiled at himself "Veer-Ichcha'" But then confusions and questions started creeping in "Why didn't teacherji give me this diary? She knew Ichcha is my wife and that I am searching for her..why then would she hide??"

He felt disappointed.he did admire teacherji a lot "Why didn't she? Doesn't she want me to reunite with Ichcha..no! that is such a stupid thought!should I go and ask her?? No!! that would be foolish" I am sure she is doing it for the greater good but why WOULD she do that??" Veer couldn't help feeling angry on teacherji inspite of reprimanding himself for that"Teacherji is above all doubts" Veer reassured himself..yet he decided not to tell Teacherji anything about the diary and instead search for Ichcha himself without sharing anything with anyone "Teacherji may know about my Ichcha..I will find out..tomorrow"

Suddenly Veer started seeing some events...hazy yet vivid...A lady walking...she wasn't unknown...Exhausted Veer sat down "Ichcha'I am remembering you Ichcha...trying to a lot...yet I just seem to get only this memory of yours...you are standing...and pleading me to remember you...I cant!Why cant I ichcha?"Angrily cried Veer! "You start to become so clear in my mind yet I don't realize when I seem to lose you...like reality. I...am'Sorry Ichcha..." Veer seemed to be drowning today...in his thoughts and confusions...He had no one to give him his answer yet he needed all of them...Teacherji also seemed so far from him now "Yet I cant really be angry on her...Wonder why..Maybe because it was never her fault...Always mine." Sighed Veer. "Always mine"

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"My diary??? Where's my diary???"Panicked Ichcha'did she leave it in the school?? Just then it dawned on her "Veer's car!what if it is in Veer's car???"A lump seemed to pass on her throat "No! tomorrow I will go and search in school..It surely must be there.."Ichcha didn't want to accept the fact that Veer could have got her diary for if he had he would know everything!! "well! not everything" thought Ichcha taking out a torn withered page dated 22nd March which she had purposefully torn away from her diary afraid of the events it held and the facts that it unearthed"Not everything"she replied with teary eyes.. "Yet I can't let Veer get hold of it...I ...cant'"

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In School the next day:

"Where is the diary??Oh! why cant I find it???Oh god help me!"Ichcha cried franctically, "Lost anything teacherji"Veer's voice was a whisper yet it starteled Ichcha! "What can I tell him?Oh his powerful gaze..always weakens me..does he know?? What'" "Teacherji!" Veer's voice broke the network of thoughts running through Ichcha's mind.. "Its..a diary..my..no..I" stammered Ichcha ..Lying to Veer had never been easy for her. "Whose?"Veer seemed to command her..for he was desperate for the answer..desperate for the truth. "Mine." replied Ichcha.. Veer's anger knew no bounds!! How could Teacherji lie to him about his wife? His ICHCHA? Veer was confused, sad and hurt.. "Is she then too like Mai?Does she also want Ichcha to be away from him? But why??I thought she was my friend who would help me find Ichcha" "Mr.Bundela!"

But Veer didn't seem to hear her..For he was lost in his thoughts...He was straining and trying hard to remember that clearly known face.It was the only picture that came to his mind which was linked to him 18 years ago. The smile...The beautiful Beautiful smile which looked so heavenly in his mind's vision...Veer's Ichcha's smile.

Veer started walking aimlessly.he didn't want to watch where he was going..for he wanted to be lost'only then maybe Ichcha would be recovered.

He started getting the flashbacks again..but this time it was clearer and Veer seemed to know who she was..yes! she had seen him!!He could understand but still it was difficult..Was it the sun that made him sweat or was it his excitement? For he had started remembering the only fragment of his lost memory..

Suddenly a truck came just in front of his way...Veer didn't realize what happened...nor did he realize why a woman shriecked "VEER!!!" He didn't understand how was he saved! The truck driver was shouting swears at him..but he could understand for he was slowly going far away..His head hurt..he was saved but his medical condition was never good..for that he couldn't bear the jerk on his head."Veer!! don't leave me!! See Veer! I am Ichcha..your Ichcha! So near! I wont leave you veer I promise!! VEER!!get up!!" "Ichcha! Ichcha!!"Mumbled Veer..He had to get up...open his eyes and see...But it was not for the jerk that he felt weak...it was the picture that became clearer and clearer! "Ichcha had saved him..how could he lie down?" With pain he opened his eyes but all he could see was a hazy figure..a hazy environment.. "Ichcha..don't leave me I love you "Ichcha gasped at Veer's reply..Yes she loved him too so very much..more than he could ever imagine!So much that she wanted to be in his arms forever...she wanted to tend him but fate always had its back to her...she couldn't let herself get overflowed by emotions!"Ichcha! Ichcha!"But by the time Veer managed to open his eyes she had gone..there was no one..only except teacherji. "Veerji,are you ok?we need to go to the doctor!" "Where is she??" "who?"replied a tensed Ichcha. "ICHCHA!" cried Veer "When I came Mr.Bundela there was no one..you must be imagining.." replied Ichcha.Then suddenly it dawned on him "The face!!The smile...The voice...All were hazy and blur but now crystal clear to me...Ichcha'" thought Veer...And Veer started getting flashbacks of nothing but the last time he met Ichcha...18 years ago...only the face was clear to him..very very clear ""TEACHERJI!!ICHCHA!!!!!!!" VEER GASPED!and then he remembered "Veer! I love you..DONT FORGET ME!" It was teacherji all the time..Ichcha!! who was begging him to remember her..and today she had come infront of him with a different identity."I WAS IN TEACHERJI'S ARMS! In ichcha's arms!! My ichcha!! But why don't I remember anything else?? O !what happened Ichcha that you need to stay as a different person infront of me? I will find out and I will give my love all the happiness she deserves! even if I have to keep this as a secret..I will remember everything..just like You Ichcha..I will remember everything related to you and get you the justice!!"thought Veer as he looked towards the one he loved the most.. "Veerji? Are you Fine?" asked an anxious Ichcha. "Yes! All is fine now"smiled Veer "All will have to be fine now"

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😊😊😊😊Hope you all enjoyed! That would be my best reward!
I would also like to give credits To Veecha AT for the awesome pictures of Veecha! THANK YOU!
My next OS will be posted real soon!
Till then keep enjoying and keep Loving the Eternal Jodi--VEECHA!!😊😊😊😊
Edited by --Ishani-- - 12 years ago

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shivani9 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dont worry, everyone has to die, Today Ichcha tomorrow whoever..so chill and enjoy life, dont take these soaps so seriously silly..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivani9

Hey dont worry, everyone has to die, Today Ichcha tomorrow whoever..so chill and enjoy life, dont take these soaps so seriously silly..

yea thats what!! you are right😃 but still it does feel bad to disconnect with the jodi you loved for 4 years..but ya you are right!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow isha its too emotional 😭 mine veecha 😭 love it frm core 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww Ishani!!! Its just awesome n veRy very emotional dear 👏 😭
Loved it very muchhh 😊
Teacherji!!!!!Ichcha!!!!! Omg no words to express
Missing Veecha badly 😭 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome ishani,no words to explain.just mindblowing.We gonna miss our all time fav everloving jodi Veecha na.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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isha superb yaar ,loved it. specially the way u slowly revealed teacherji's
identity to veer , his confusion and anger prior to it for hiding and yet he was not able to hate her. wow👏

thanks for pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful story ishani and very beautifully brought out. wish iccha would not be killed by our sadist cv's then we could get ur os in more parts. i know ur trying to finish off asap.

but inspite of that the os was so beautiful that i had actually started imagining veer and iccha talking to each other with the dialogues u wrote. i could visualise veecha scenes with the same amount of emotions love and affection with which u wrote them.

very wonderfully written and portrayed. 👏👏 hats off to u👏 my love for this os increased today👏
u ve written it from the bottom of ur heart. veru nce😃👏

wish iccha never dies and veecha os continues forever. but then everything has to end some day.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome awesome and awesome !!! no words ishani!!
u rock!!😉😎
loved this!!❤️👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: binurocks

wow isha its too emotional 😭 mine veecha 😭 love it frm core 😃

Thank you Bindu!! 😃😃I know why you are emotional!CryCryCry Its ok..all have to end..but just keep smiling!😃😃😃😃 loved that you loved it!😳😳😳

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