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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hira2050

Yapiee update after a long time..
I was Eagerly waiting for this update nd you didn't disappoint me...
It was simply superb...
Finally Prem met his father nd iam sure he will bring his father back..
Waiting for Arshi's meeting and their Rabba vey..
Devi maiyya again rocked this update..
OMG Iam so in Love with your DM..
UPDATE SOON... As i can't wait for Long time


I'm so so much happy dear
I was expacting your review
and i'm so happy that i didn't disappointed you
Thanks for leaving always long comments 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: GAURI29

amazing update dear...

i am glad prem asked arjun.."i can i met u again..."
tht indicate something is cooking in his small devil mind...


good dear you are the one who guessed it right something is for sure cooking in his mind 😉
Thanks for always commenting it means a lot of me 🤗
Edited by HK90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sana11

am so happy prem met arnav😃

poor khushi 😭
fantastic update👏
update the next soon dear😃


Originally posted by: -Sadi-

WOW WOW WOW

that was an awesome... superb update
loved it

hmm surely prem is arnav's son so smart

looking forward to the next part


Originally posted by: Akorshi

wow! awesome part...

DM is playing her role ...to unite family...
arnav was panicked to see prem like this...
poor baby...
khushi was shattered...
everyone was worried...
feel bad fr neha n karan...
prem easily recognized his dad...
arti going to khushi to give prem...
arjun feeling peace after meeting prem...
update soon...


I'm really really happy that you love the story
and that you leave wonderful comment they really make me smile
and meke write more and encourage me to improve my writing stile
THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
LOVE YOU ALL 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sooryalekshmi

I always wondered why his name was prem?

An chapter 5 really happened wid u???
I dont know what to say...

Nice update...
Aakhir he is prem singh raizada...
Woh apne manzil tak zaroor pahuchoonga...
Superb...
And khushi's pain was brautifully written..

And mohabbat!!!
We really need a super duper RABBA VE...
Pls...

And love you DM...
You are the best...

Update soon



yeah unfortanately, chapter 5 is my life 😭 when my Nani died I was the one how answered that damn call and i was just shocked like Prem, it took me a whole year to realize that she was no more and cry her death 😭
but coming to smiling things i'm happy that you like the way I wrote Khushi's pain
And yes Prem apni manzil tak zaroor pahuchooga he is a smart kid
yeah I have something special for their rabba ve moment 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -PariKC

SUPER DUPER CHAPTER


Father-Son finally met now Mother-Father meeting in full self- conscious
I'm waiting...

Thank you for this super Megaupdate...⭐️
poor Neha...but this is our ASR and not Arjun
I am sure, he is Arnav Singh Raizada and not Arjun Mehra...
I hope it also or else I'll be angry with you😡 and won't talk to you


Thank you Pari 🤗
Aagar tum sure ho tho apne confidence pe doubt you karti ho darling 😉
I just give you a hint
and if you stop to talk to me i will spam all your thread mere panga mat lena i'm crazy, just kidding 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rashika

Hope your feeling a lot better now preet. Personally I love your long updates and I for one would be glad to wait for your story. A sfor this update. Mindblowing girl. First Arjun aka Arnav reacting the way he did shows his heart and subconcious are fully aware that Prem is his son. Loved Prem he so knew Arjun was his father straight away. Cute how he said he will make him better. Poor Neha though. She really got the brunt off Arnav's temper. Karan pacifying her was sweet but even I have that question in mind like Neha why does it affect him when she is upset. If it is not love then what is it. Poor girl. Khushi having a go at Devi Maiyya was her right. First losing Arnav the way she did and now Prem. She doesn't deserve that.

Good that Arti went to Neha's place and heard Prem. Glad she is taking him back to RM.
Loving the whole Devi maiyya and mohobbat discussion. That is so brilliant.
Now can't wait for the ishq wala love that is on the way.


Rishika You know I simply love you ❤️ 😳
Your comment always make me smile like an idiot 😃 and I feel like being in heven
Yeah Karan has to tell her why he cares for her but I think you can
guess why?? 😉
Thank you so so much for the comment this one is the loggest one 🤗
Edited by HK90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update preeto...
I jst loved d convo btwn devi maiyaa nd mohabbat...! 😉
so Prem singh raizada met arjun nd he is so dam sure abt arjun being his dad...aha smart boy...truly beta kiska hai...!
Loved d update...
I am waiting for rabba ve momnts now...
Hayeee wat will b khushi's reaction wen she will meet up her arnav who now is identified as arjun...!
Nd wat will b arnav's reaction by seeing her...
Super xcited to read d nxt part...!nd wat will b their reaction is simply worth watchable...!
Jaldi update kardo preeto...
Cannot wait much now...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ara_000

superb update preeto...
I jst loved d convo btwn devi maiyaa nd mohabbat...! 😉
so Prem singh raizada met arjun nd he is so dam sure abt arjun being his dad...aha smart boy...truly beta kiska hai...!
Loved d update...
I am waiting for rabba ve momnts now...
Hayeee wat will b khushi's reaction wen she will meet up her arnav who now is identified as arjun...!
Nd wat will b arnav's reaction by seeing her...
Super xcited to read d nxt part...!nd wat will b their reaction is simply worth watchable...!
Jaldi update kardo preeto...
Cannot wait much now...


thanks a lot of the beautiful comment 🤗
Edited by HK90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally u updated i am so sorry about your nani hope you feel better soon and contuine
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm sorry guys, but since I'm busy and not fully well, and plus I'm going to have a hectic week, so I will not be able to write the next chapter, but I wrote just a little Teaser 😃
Enjoy it


Teaser

They was standing really close to each other, actually they were in a hugging position. Her back was against the SUV while his body was crushing on her. His hands were around her waist, and her hands were clutching his collar tightly, his face was buried in her hair, for a long moment, he get lost in her scent, she really smell's good, it seemed that he was familiar to this scent, to this perfume, in her scent and in her arms he felt like being at home, his heart for the second time, after so many years felt in peace and happy, and it was also beating at a different rhythm.

Khushi was having her eyes closed, and her heart was beating so fast that it looked like it was doing a marathon, it seems that at any time it would gallop out of her rib cage.

After a while he let the breath that he was holding and whispered in an almost inaudible voice "Thank God I reached on time".

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"Arjun she is married, so stop thinking about her in that way" said Karan looking at Arjun's dreaming face "what the" said Arjun shocked.


Chapter 9


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how was it? 😊 DO LIKE AND COMMENT 😃

Guys Agar teaser itna romatic hai, to socho baki ki update kesi hogi😉

I'm so sorry but I think for the update you will have to wait till Friday.

A Game

Okay till I didn't came back, what you say to do a game?😊 In my story, there are two clues, actually there are three - but the third it's not that important - which can help you to understand, at least up to a certain point, how the story is gonna progress. Let's see who of you is gonna guess them! I will give a suprise to that person😃. Okya i'm giving you a hint read the last 3 chapters 😉


Help

I need two huge, huge helps!

First I need someone who can edit a photo for me, it is not really doing an edit it, but it's like to create a complete new picture, so if you decide to help me, do it on your own risk😆, because my request is very strange and very, very particular, since I'm particular, only God can understand me🤣

And second I need someone who can told me in details how to make a VM, because after 2 or 3 updates I need one to show you something 😃

@ Thanu I know I could have asked to you, to make the edit, but it seems unfair, I already filled you with a lot of work, you've just made two huge favor to me, so in asking the third one I felt bad 😔


P.S. I have replied to same of your comments, check from page 73 to 75 😃


Okay guys take care, have fun and keep smiling 😊

Love your all 🤗


Edited by HK90 - 12 years ago

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