story: aakhir dil mil hi gaye (chapter 5- page 6)

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hey guys.
i have never atempted to the write a story. doing it for the first time.
hope you guys like it.
do comment and tell me if i should continue. 😃

Chapter 1

It was just another day in Khushi's life. She got

ready in the morning and drove to Sanjeevani

hospital. She went to the locker room and took

out her court. She met Anjali and Ridhima in the

locker room. The three of them went together to

the reception area, where their briefing generally

is done.

As they reached they found Armaan, Atul and Rahul waiting there.

As soon as they reached, Armaan and Ridhimma started their lovey dovey

romance. But it was interrupted as DR. Kirti came in and started briefing all

of them.

Dr. k: Good morning doctors, where is muskaan?

Everyone turned towards Rahul.

Rahul: I don't know. She said she is coming on her own.

Armaan: Tera phir se jagada hua muskaan ke saath?

Anjali: Zaroor tune hi kuch kiya hoga

Atual: Aaisa kyu..shayad muskaan ne hi kuch kaha hoga

Rahul: Guys hamare beech kuch nahi hua. Infact kal raat jab hum mile bhi toh

sab kuch teekh hi tha.

Khushi: Kal raat mile ha ;)'.kya hua kal raat ko rahul? ;)

Dr k: Doctors concentrate. Dr Atual aaj aap general ward mein rahenge. Dr

Anjali aap'

Muskaan comes in with a team of paramedics who are pulling a stretcher in.

There is a man on the stretcher who is bleeding a lot.

Muskaan's clothes have blood on them. She runs to doctor Kirti.

Muskaan: Dr. Kirti raaste mein ek accident ho gaya tha.

Patient ka kaafi zaada khoon beh gaya hai.

Kriti: Ok dr.muskaan. aap jaake apne kapde bada leejey aur phir dr atul ke

saath general ward mein rahiye.Dr ridhimma and dr. khushi app dono aaj ke

organ transplant patients ke paas jaiye aur Dr rahul aap dr shashank ko

surgery mein assist karenge. Dr armaan app emergency ward mein jaaiye

aur jo patient abhi admit hua hai use dekhiye. Now disperse

All of them go to their respective duties.

In the break time, all of them go to the canteen.

Khushi: God yar, I hate transplant duties. Log kitne dipreassing hote hai

waha. Har cheez par bhagwan ko yaad karke rona.

Muskaan: haha'.general ward mein toh bohot maza aata hai. Har koi sota rehta hai. Morgue bhi usse behtar hota hai J'by the way us patient ka kya hua armaan jo subah aaya tha?

Armaan: Who ab behtar hai. Guess ki wok on hai. Arnav Singh Raizada.

Woh is shehr ka sabse bada industrialist hai. Use hosh bhi nahi aaya ab tak

aur media pohach gayi uska statement lene!!

Khushi: (shocked)Arnav Singh Raizada?? Are you sure?

Armaan: Haan'.kyu?

Khushi: kuch nahi. Vo kon se ward mein hai?

Armaan: Private room main. 1904. Tu itni shocked kyu lag rahi hai?

Khushi: kuch nahi'guys main aat hu'

And she rushes out of the canteen.

Muskaan: Arre kushi'kuch kha ke toh ja!!

Ridhimma: Isse kya hua?

Khushi runs to the private room section. She goes to room no 1904 and she

sees through the glass.

Khushi: Arnav''


Chapter 2- Page 2

Chapter 3- Page 4

Chapter 4 - Page 5

Chapter 5 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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These are the charecters in the story

Dr Atul Manhotra

Dr. Anjali

Dr. Ridhimma Gupta

Dr. Armaan Malik

Dr. Muskaan Bhattia

DR. Rahul Khanna

And the main stars in the story

Dr. Khushi Kumari Gupta ( she is not related to anjali and ridhimma. they are good friends.
she is a modern girl in this story)

Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada
(He is a big industrialist. One of the top ten richest men in the world.
His character is described in the story)


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awesome!! superr storyy!!!
pls continue!
nd do pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nice start please continue soon.
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Wow nice!! Can u pm me plz when u update?
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Breathy
Please update it and send message
Pleaseee 😊
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Sounds interesting...
do continue soon and PM me also please
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Awesome..waiting for the next update...
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hey guys..thankyou for all your support 😊

heres the next part. sorry for the short update though

CHAPTER 2

All of them had finished for the day. Atul was assigned for night duty in the genral ward. The rest of them were in the locker room, getting their things ready to leave.

Armaan: Bechara Atul. Usse aaj night duty milla hai na.

Anjali: Haan. All thanks to muskaan.

Muskaan: oye anji' maine kya kiya??

Anjali: tune toh dr. kirti se kaha na ki atul ne apne rounds miss kiya.

Rahul: Atlast muskaan ne ek kaam tohacha kiya.

Muskaan: ek kaam matlab? Mein kya har kaam buri karti hoon?

Rahul: haan' tuje aaj tak pata nahi tha?

Muskaan: Tuje toh mein...

Muskaan goes forward to punch Rahul. Khushi comes in between.

Khushi: Guys chill yar. Bas bhi karo. Muskaan chal na

Ridhimma: Sahi keh rahi hai khushi. Tum log na.

They all start to leave the room when Atul comes in a hurry,

Atul: oye Armaan who patient jisse muskaan layi thi, uski halat karab ho rahi hai. I need help.

Khushi and armaan rushed to atul

Armaan: kya hua usse?

Khushi:(worried) Kya hua usse? Who teekh toh hai na? Usse kuch nahi hona chahiye atul. (saying this she runs towards the ward)

All of them are shocked and Atul And Armaan go behind her. By the time they reach, Dr Kirti is already with the patient. She is checking him. She finishes checking and is coming out of the room.

Khushi: Dr Kirti'who patient..

Dr kirti: who teekh hai abhi. Lekin patient par nazar rakni hogi.

Khushi: Main rahungi.

Dr Kirti: Ok.

Dr Kirti leaves.

Armaan: Khushi tu teekh toh hai na?

Atul: Tu isse janti hai KHushi?

Khushi: (stammering) haan woh'.nahi'.mera matlab hai ki'

Ridhimma: ( comes to them) kya hua? Who patient teekh toh hai?

Atul: haan teekh hai abhi

Muskaan: Khushi tuje kya hua ? Chal chod'.ghar chalte hai

Khushi: Nahi'main aaj yahi rehne wali hoon'atul main aaj ki tumhari duties le leti hoon

Atul: sachi?? I love you khushi ( gives khushi a hug)

Muskaan: Khushi'tuje kya hua??? Tu aur night duty?

Khushi: haan'.aaj bas kaam karne ka man kar raha hai

Slowly all of them leave.

Khushi turns towards the room. She slowly enters the room. The nurse leaves the room. She moves towards the patient and sits down on the stool near the bed. A tear drop slips from her eye.

Khushi: Ar'Arnav'..

She lifts her hand and runs it down his check.

Khushi: tumme kuch ho jata'.toh mera kya hota arnav'.main'.main tumhare bina kaise jeeti

She bends her head down and breaks down.

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wow nice update loved it please continue soon thank you.

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