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komal

@scarlet.moon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Usually we see love bonding two people together. Here we have pain, hurt, suffering bringing these two together. It all started from Saras giving Kumud the pain by rejecting the marriage for which she being her adamant self didn't show her face to him heck till date she hasn't forgiven him. And then it was Kumud's turn to cause him pain by dragging him to his traumatic past which brings him to a point that leaves him helpless and in deep agony.

Kumud, the girl with inflated ego is so regretful for her actions that she got down on her knees to apologize for the unforgettable dead. She is desperately wanting his forgiveness or even punishment would work for her. Her words of calling him selfish and someone without importance of relationships are coming back to bit her. The one who went to great length to not show her face is restless today just because he doesn't want to see her face.

They are playing this game of Tit-for-Tat, just when one of them tries to cope up with the pain given by the other, one of them ends up hurting themself. Saras was to the point when he asked Kumud whether she had forgiven him for his mistake which clearly she hasn't so why should he.

Like Kumud summed it up what is it that they end up hurting each other even if it is unintentional. There just doesn't seem a light at the end of the tunnel...the darkness, the pain, the hurt, the agony has taken a toll over them. This bond of suffering has pulled them together since the beginning and will always connect them.

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 12 years ago

You've NAILED it totally! It's not just now, they've been bound by suffering since the very first instance of their encounter. Kumud was taken by the pain she saw in his eyes and Saras was intrigued by the hurt in her voice over the chat. Even without seeing each other's faces, they were drawn together by mirroring emotions.

Oh and about the tit-for-tat part, that will work against them. Guman will take advantage of this new misunderstanding and this weakness of theirs will separate them

Edited by -BlackBeauty- - 12 years ago

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668837

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

Had this been any normal love story, the pain separates the couple but SWC being an exception, the pain is bringing Kumud and Saras closer. The story began with the pain she saw in his eyes. That's why, I find these two ultimately unique.

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gowri1712

@gowri1712

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Posted: 12 years ago

really unique
we dont get to choose on whose side to be as both has their own reasons to make us on their side

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komal

@scarlet.moon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -BlackBeauty-
You've NAILED it totally! It's not just now, they've been bound by suffering since the very first instance of their encounter. Kumud was taken by the pain she saw in his eyes and Saras was intrigued by the hurt in her voice over the chat. Even without seeing each other's faces, they were drawn together by mirroring emotions.

Oh and about the tit-for-tat part, that will work against them. Guman will take advantage of this new misunderstanding and this weakness of theirs will separate them

Completely agree with that part. From the very instant of a glimpse of the other one have made them intrigued. That little beep is surely to add fuel to the fire and make a mustard mountain of everything. The way she was giving vicious smiles when hearing Saras complain was just the beginning of her evilness.

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Gaganjot

@Gagan-06

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Posted: 12 years ago

What was surprising was that Kumud still had not forgiven him. In the midst of all this, we assumed she had forgiven him, but that was certainly not the case. Now this is interesting.

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komal

@scarlet.moon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luvbarunsanaya6
really unique
we dont get to choose on whose side to be as both has their own reasons to make us on their side

Ofcourse we don't as like every story there are two sides of it. Neither of them in this case are wrong though they do have their share of flaws no one in particular can be blamed completely.

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komal

@scarlet.moon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SkyLight
What was surprising was that Kumud still had not forgiven him. In the midst of all this, we assumed she had forgiven him, but that was certainly not the case. Now this is interesting.

I personally was taken back as well finding out she still hasn't forgiven him. Maybe she won't be able to till she finds the back story of his reasons to reject the marriage which are related to his past. Like Dukhba said he is really afraid to build new relationships.

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Gaganjot

@Gagan-06

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: scarlet.moon

I personally was taken back as well finding out she still hasn't forgiven him. Maybe she won't be able to till she finds the back story of his reasons to reject the marriage which are related to his past. Like Dukhba said he is really afraid to build new relationships.

lol Great I was not the only one. I think with the turn of events and the focus on SC - we did tend to assume she had forgiven him.. and I am not complaining. I am glad the CVs didnt just let it slide by and that they are trying to cover every aspect.

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parheezGM

@parheezGM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Beautifully written, I agree wholeheartedly.

But u always hurt the one u love. Opposite of love isn't hate its indifference. If either of them were indifferent then it would be a problem but here they playing this tit for tat game.

Kumud's hurt is understandable, rejection hurts pride like anything and she's also prejudiced against him because of it. It is her prejudice which makes her blind towards his noble nature but now that she knows she caused him hurt, she will feel terrible too.

And that she does...

But when a proud girl doesn't get instant forgiveness it raises her hackles since she also holds herself in high esteem and it is annoying for her too that why isn't the man she's crushing on not reciprocating in return?

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