*MY INNOCENT SURRENDER* #2 pt 17pg 111 17/7/2013 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Aaj bhi sick leave per hei kya Richa...??? </font>virus flu A[/DIV]

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MadhuMG4ever

<h3>CONGRATS DEAR ...Amazing Update ..!!!❤️ Waiting for the next part soon when you will be fine...GET WELL SOON !!😊</h3>


10x dear:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Get well soon devrji...
Lub u n tk cre...:)<3:*
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88


<font size="4" face="Times New Roman">awesome</font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman">fantastic update</font>
<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">loved a lot dear</font>
<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">continue soon </font>
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PujaShree

Get well soon devrji...
Lub u n tk cre...:)<3:*


love you tooo
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART - 13

MAAN following Armaan and gang in his car with Sam. He also moved to the same hall where they all 4 going. Viraj went to park the car while Armaan and 2 girls went inside. Maan was also behind them. He to had to go to parking area. Sam had some confusion coz it was not the movie she planned. Maan was lost in himself so not paying much attention to her queries. Viraj too get inside to join the. Armaan was busy in buying tickets while Ridzi go for a washroom. Geet is standing all alone. Two vagabond boys seeing her alone and their ill intentions pulled them to her. One of them is about to touch her when Viraj's strong arm came btwn as a shield. Geet was shocked seeing his arm wrapping around her waist. Viraj glared two of them but still they dont moved from there. Geet saw both and realize their intentions. She felt protective inside Viraj's embrace. Meanwhile Armaan too came there and sence the tension there. As the no.of well built boys increased here too,both's courage leave and they too. Maan came inside and saw Viraj's arm on Geet's waist. He felt burning sensation in his whole body. Unaware of the real situation his blood boiled over Viraj's advancements. He clenched his fists hard and felt his chocked breath. His all veins get stiffled.

'i m sorry Geet wo boys ki wajhse mujhe hath rakhna pada.so pls dont take it other way and stood with me until we get inside the hall ok?',Viraj cleared his actions before she misunderstood him and adviced her to stay with him for her safty sake. Geet nodded yes. Ridzi came to them and all moved from there. Viraj still holding her which is absolutely not delighted for Maan. He quickly buy a tickets and dragged Sam harshly inorder to follow them. He wants to keep his eyes on her. When coming to an sitting area. Armaan and Ridzi sit together to spend some time. Viraj again coverd her here which is not hiding from the eyes of Maan. In his anger he grapsed her hand hardly and made her winced in pain.

'Maan leave my hand,you hurting me.',she cribbed for mercy.

Maan leave her hand jerkly. Mostly all eyes struk to screen when movie starts but Maan's eyes only gluing to Geet and Viraj,who are very much enjoying the movie and laugh,giving hi fi to each other. As few moments passed,Geet's phone buzzed and she came out side to ans the call. She talk for 2mins and again stepping to went inside,when someone grasped her both arms and pulled her to a lonely corner. Geet first scared but when she looked at those fire emitted eyes her fear shaped into an anger.

'how dare you? Leave me Maan',she orderd him recentfully.

'What if i dont?',he argued.

'what are you doing here?',she wriggles more to free herself.

'kyu yaha aane ka sirf tume or us Viraj ko hai?',he gritted and squeezed her more.'mujhe laga ki tume sirf Armaan me intrest hai but no yaha to line kafi lambi hai.',he taunts.

'to tume kyu farak padta hai?main kahi b jau kisi se b milu its none of ur business.',she glared him and snap back.

'yes ofcourse.and what about them? Unse tumhara kya rishta hai?',he asked recklessly.

'you dont have any right to ask me anything?',her anger boiled over and she shove him away. Before she she leave from there,Maan held her wrist and tugged her against wall. Rage in both's eyes towered. She stared him with her big browen eyes. She raised her hand to shove him away,but he clapsed her wrist in his hand pinning it to the wall beside her head. She raised her another hand but it was met with much the same treatment.

'Maan',she moaned as his grip tighten more. Her protest raised his aggression and he slammed his lips on hers. It held an urgency, a passionate hunger,that swept her away. She was in confusion completetly and trying not to respond him. Her fist tightn as much,which turn her knuckles white. He didnt know what he was doing she tasted so sweet,her lips felt like heaven bneath his. Now he seeking entry into her mouth. Geet not allowed him,which rosed his anger and frustration. He bite her lips harshly and made her parted her lips. With no further thought of resisting,her lips parted to allow that sweet but rageful invasion. Within seconds her head was swimming and her evry soul had lost its way. He devoured every ounce of her,without knowing why he doing so. When finally he let her go,dazed and shaken to the core,she sank limply on a floor while,he just passed away as if nothing had happned. She was not in herself. When she not came after a long Ridzi came out in her search and found her cuddled in herself. She sat on a marble floor with her legs curled up. Ridzi sat next to her and saw her faded face. without asking her she pulled her in her embrace. Ridzi stroked her arm tenderly and composed her.

Maan leave from there without informing Sam even. She get very angry on Maan's annoying behaviour. She calls him several time but he didnt reply any of them. She angrily moved to her home back.

Next day was very important for all of them coz selectors are coming to select the final players for team who went for inter-collage tournament. All players reached to ground except Maan. His friends making best to contact him but he was not available. Last day incident disturbed him badly. He had failed to find ans of his own wired actions. Jelous, insecurity, ego or somthing else? Which is completely unknown to him. He doesnt felt guilty or bad but confused over it. He wants to stay alone so cut off from all and forgot about his tournament. Final team is selected and Maan loose his chance here too. First he loose play's role and now team's captionship and a chance to play. Although Sam is very angry on him but still she manage to find him and told about the decision taken by the selectors. Maan was locked in his own room. The flashes of last day swimmed in his mind only when Sam knocked on his door.

'Maan where you are?what's wrong with you? Aaj tumhe team me select hona tha or tum khelne hi nahi aaye? Maan you missed the chance have you any idea?',she burst on him with her entrance.

'kya farak padta hai.',he said fridgly.

'Maan pls dont talk like a loosers. Tum to aise bol rae ho jaise tum apna sab kuch har chuke ho.kis baat ki itni narazgi hai tumhe?',his ans made her head spin.

'Meri kismat mujhse ruth gai hai.or ab jab wo sath nai hai to kisi b cheez k koi mayne nai hai.now can u pls leave me alone?',he said meekly.

'Maan tume ho kya gaya hai. Main kai din se dekh rai hu tu mere sath hote hue b sath nai hote. I mean physicaly you were with me but your attention,ur mind all are absent. Na tum kuch sunte ho na theek se jwab dete ho.',she complaints for his annoying behaviour.

'i wish i have all the ans you need to know.',he murmured helplessly.

'ok so u dont wanna share.fine i m leaving for reharsals.when you feel to talk come and meet me.',she fed up with his behaviour and leave from there. Maan not feeling to go anywhere but unknowingly he steped towrds the collage and went to reharsals. It was the last day so all rehars till evening. At 7pm all students leave except Armaan and Geet as all responsibilities are of them. Except to perform she also had a responcibilities of checking the probes,costumes, and all other needs of this play. Getting exhaust with this hetic shedule she falls on a chair to grab some peaceful sleep momnt. Maan peeping from far. When he confirms that she was in deep sleep he get worried for her as no one is there. Maan gazed her lovingly and cant stopped himself from going near to her.

'ye dost hai tumhare jo tume aise akela chhod gae hai',he whispered while caressing his tips in her hairs gently. Absent mindedly he scooped her and was about to went away when Armaan and Ridzi came there and struck his way.

'kaha le ja rae ho ise? Maan y dont u leave her alone?',Ridzi gritted while scolding him.

'ek min Ridzi. Maan Geet meri zimmedari so leave her. Isse ghar pahuchana mera kaam hai.',Armaan cooling the air and said softly.

'for ur kind information,she is still my wife in uncle's eyes,understood.',Maan stare both.

'But i dont trust you.',Ridzi said stiffly.

Maan didnt ans and moved forwrd. Ridzi trying to stop him,to which Armaan signaled her and she leave his way. Maan took her to Handa mansion.

'Ami why?',she raise her questioning brow and he tugged her to his hard frame. He kissed her and she lsapped him on his arm.'Ami maine kuch puchha?'

'coz sweetheart our plan is working.yai dekhna chahta tha main ki Geet ko yaha itna late ruke dekh use kuch frak padta hai ya nahi or...',he chuckled over his sucess.

'or use frk pad raha hai.nice',she grinned wide.

'nice nai awsome plan hai.wo team me select nai hua is baat se zada farak use Geet ki activities se padta hai. First time he think about her more then himself.',both winked and leave from there.

Next day competition started. All collages perform one by one. In last their turn come. Geet is nervous but Ridzi stand by her side as her biggest support. Viraj and Sam starts first. As they are the loving couple who escape for their love sake. Hermia and Lysander they potraying a couple in love but her father select Demetrius for her played by Armaan. Helena,played by Geet who was so much in love with Demetrius sacrifies her love and told him about their running plan. Demetrius follow them in jungle to get her back. Helena cares for him only and in fear of hurting Demetrius she also followed him. All 4 in jungle now. Geet came on stange in pink coloured gown and Maan's eyes struck to her only. She calling her lover's name and searching him in dark jungle. Meanwhile puka who is cupid angel send by Angel's god for solving their prbolem came. When both boys were sleeping he sprayed love portion on their eyes. The effect was that to whom they saw first they will fall in love with that girl. By mistake both boys saw halena and start fighting for her. Hermia's heart broked. Seeing this blunder angel's god came himself.

Angel's God again made them slept and spelled that they find their tru love when they awake. He vanished and when all awake all 4 get their true love. Hermia and Lysender both are together and Demetrius also realized Helena's true love for him. He hugged her tightly and kissed passionately. Maan was so lost inthe play and take it as this also associated with his own life's confusion. He assumed himself in place of Armaan. When whole hall filled with the noise of claps and his trance broke he found Geet in Armaan's arm again and his blood strt boiling again. Although Sameera was also in Viraj's arms but less he pay attention on them. All leave the stage and waiting for results. Judges gave their result of Armaan's play Midsummer's night dream. All shout in excitement as their collage wins again. Honarable chief guest present first prize to the whole crew. All hugged each other in over joyful moment. Armaan hugged Geet tightly and she resciprocate too. Aal are lost in this happiest momnt except Maan coz Geet's closeness with Armaan make him impatient. Armaan's eyes only on Maan. He chuckled on his win in both sences. He is winning in his both onscreen and offscreen performances...

PRECAP:- PARTY AT RIDZI'S FARMHOUSE😉

Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
yeh maan geet ko kiss kase kar sakta hai😡
cheap man
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hmmm Maan ka dimag khrab ho raha hai...abi aage pata nahi or kya karega... I m waitinggg for party 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update

Maan is feeling big J seeing Viraj hand on Geet waist

Armaan plan is working as now Maan is restless seeing Geet in Armaan arm
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago

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