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Posted: 12 years ago
What an awesome dare Annie. Love u for the dare u thought of with this mouth watering teaser.
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rashmi waitng 4 ware r u??
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Aww poor geet ... Dono khuranas uske Japan ke peeache padae hai... 😆 I m loving it...
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U r UPDATING
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(Shruthe love you for the banner🤗)


Thank you so much for your beautiful likes & patience and also for waiting patiently for the updates😳

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Thirty-Five



"Babaji! Yeh sab kya ho raha hain?!!"

Geet was very much uncomfortable with what was going on. Her friends, who had come for sleepover, were totally involved in flirting with Maan after dinner & he too flirted mildly with them just to make Geet a bit jealous & no wonder he was very successful as Geet fidgeted with the fork & spoon!. Unable to take it any more, she finally snapped.

"Girls...we have come here for a sleepover...& not to improve ourcommunication skills."

All heads turned to her in surprise. Maan smirked,

"Arz kiya hai..." his voice was husky.

Annie coughed hearing that, receiving the biggest shock of her life!

"What!!!!! Bhai & shayari!!!!!!!! Impossible!!! Geet ke toh aashiq hi ho gaye hain!!"

"Wah Wah Wah Wah!" Tulip, Diva & Juhi chirped excitedly.

Maan continued in his velvety voice, staring at Geet through the corner of his eye.


"Arz kiya hain….

Deewane hain aapke, is baat se inkaar nahin,
kaise kahein ki hamein aapse pyaar nahin..
"

Even though her eyes were lowered, Geet could still sense the passionate stare of his eye which darkened the crimson color of her cheeks. Maan continued huskily

"Deewane hain aapke, is baat se inkaar nahin,
kaise kahein ki hamein aapse pyaar nahin.

kuch toh kasoor hai aapki adaon ka
akele ham hi gunehgaar nahin.."

While everyone cheered, Geet just got up & left as she blushed uncontrollably. Maan smirked passionately.

"Babaji!! Yeh mujhse hamesha flirt karte rehte hain... Pehle toh privately karte the, but now in front of all... Aur aaj toh unhone shayari bhi suna di..." she muttered under her breath while sauntering along the coridoors.

"But that shayari was not for you!"

Maan mischievously appeared in front of her and wasted no time in placing his hands on either side of her head trapping her completely between him & the wall while the white curtains fell on them.His eyes were hooded & dazed.

"Mere liye nahi thi, toh phir kiske liye thi???"

She looked at him gloomily as his words hurt her. Maan leaned closer.

"It was for Mishty whom I deeply love but she doesn't knows that.So I am thinking of impressing her with shayari …." His voice was deep & he looked at her intently.

But Geet was completely shattered hearing that. Obviously as she couldn't comprehend who his Mishty was.

"What are...What are you saying...how can...how can you love some else???!!!"

She rued unknowingly, having a lump in her throat.Her hazels dejectedly looked at him.

"Why? Am I prohibited to love someone else?" his eyes possessed a glint in them.

She turned her eyes away from him.

"I want to introduce you to my Mishty, I am sure you will like her!"

Geet was broken even more. Controlling the tears which threatened to flow out, she said,

"I don't wish to meet her."

She walked away. Maan smirked,

"Is Dharti Se Us Ambar Tak Do Hi Chiz Gajab Ki Hai,
Ek Toh Tera Bhola Pan Hai Ek Mera Deewana Pan…"

He sighed to himself.

The sleepover party were in Annie's room playing Truth or Dare'. Geet took Truths everytime & gave blunt replies. She just sat there motionless throughout, completely unaware of her surroundings, for her mind was filled with hate thinking about the other girl in Maan's life.

"Who is this witch called Mishty...what magic she has done on Maan ki woh shayari karne lage hain...Maan aisa kaise kar sakte hain...woh kisi aur se..."

She clutched her fingers. The bottle turned to her

"Geet, Truth or Dare?" asked Divya.

"Truth."

"What is this yaar!" Juhi exclaimed her displeasure, "You have taken so many truths before, now you have to take dare. That's final!!"

"Nooo...What are you saying...I am okay with truth!" Geet was flustered after coming back to her senses

"Leave it Juhi. Are you expecting her to take a dare! What a joke!" Annie taunted.

"What is the dare?!!!!" Geet asked sharply.

"Go to Maan Bhai's room & kiss him.Right now!!!"

There was silence. Geet had forgotten about Mishty & kept on looking at Annie with wide shocked eyes. Annie smirked

"You have to kiss him on the cheeks not anywhere else."

But that hardly brought any courage in Geet to fulfil the dare.

"I am not going to do any such dare, understand?!!!!!!" her heart was beated violently at the thought of kissing Maan.

"No problem. Annie, can I kiss him on her behalf?" Tulip asked excitedly. Divya & Juhi too asked the same thing but Annie's eyes were fixed on Geet.

On the other hand, Geet despised imagining someone else kissing Maan. That probably made her to accept the dare.

"Fine! I will do it." Geet got up. Annie smirked inwardly.


"Bhai has never let any girl to even touch him slightly, forget coming close. If he allows Geet to kiss him, it confirms my strong belief that he loves like crazy."

"Babaji...Maan ke saath aapka contract kabhi expire hoga bhi kya???... Ek toh I am not able to find Mishty's Truth...upar se I got a Dare to kiss Maan...!"

Geet was walking towards Maan's room with faltering steps & sweating palms with a pounding heart. Annie followed to keep check.

"Waise, you can even kiss him on the lips if you want, I won't see!" Annie chuckled

Geet was beetroot red shamefully imagining what Annie had just said! She peeped inside Maan's room.. Her knees weakened just by seeing him working on his laptop...

"N-No...I can't kiss him..."

She turned around to leave but Annie's teaseful gaze made her to think once more.

Maan's sharp eyes had already noticed Geet standing secretly near the door. He smirked inwardly & faked a phone call...

Aap hume bhool jao hume koi gham nahi
Aap hume bhool jao hume koi gham nahi
Jis dhin humne aapko bhula diya
Samajh lijiyega is duniya main hum nahi

Geet turned his gaze at him & saw him talking on the phone. She assumed him to be talking to Mishty which dismantled her heart into some more pieces. She felt jealous. She somehow wanted to convey her own feelings to him...so that he completely forgets about that Mishty...

Unaware of the dare & Annie keeping a watch on them, Maan got up with a start when he saw Geet almost marching towards him. She came & stood way too close to him & looked straight in the eye. Before he could react, she cupped his cheeks & stood on her toes bringing his face closer to her lips & kissed him deeply on his cheeks with a throbbing heart...

He was lost in a passionate reverie. His beats raced violently after registering the fact that his Mishty had actually kissed him...He was aroused...The feel of her soft lips drenched his entire being in the raging fire of love for her which made his eyes intense with passion...

Seeing him so hopelessly lost in Geet, Annie got to know what she wanted to & left silently.

"I know your Mishty will be angry but then it was a dare & I had to do it."

Her scum words broke his trance. If only she had looked at him than she would have realized his eyes had always, right from their first meet, had mirrored her as his Mishty.

He shook her closer but she still averted his gaze

"I love Mishty a lot..."

His dense voice broke her completely that she couldn't realize what he actually meant. She walked out of his room. Maan smiled quirkily...

Geet stood by the window side guarding her tears while her friends were chatting & gossiping. Her face was pale & colorless as the thought of another girl in Maan's life instilled excruciating pain in her heart...It was her first love, she never had harboured such strong feelings for anyone else & when you see the person whom you love crazily with someone else, the pain you feel is unimaginable...

Annie walked up to her seeing her standing motionless.

"You are okay na?"

"Kind of..." she replied bluntly.

"What happened?"

"Nothing much..."

"I hope you are not planning to sleep over alone. So be kind enough to join us okay!"

Geet went & sat with them so as to divert her thoughts but she wasn't successful.

"Leave it Geet...It's too late now...Maan is not at fault...perhaps...perhaps it was you who took him for granted since he was always there with you..."

She sobbed inwardly, even now trying to defend Maan, strictly controlling her tears...

It was at 6 a.m when everyone finally felt asleep but Geet was not. Tears finally left her hazels & she cried silently...The pillow was wet with her overflowing tears….Her head was heavy & she didn't know when she drifted to sleep.

Maan was completely oblivious that his mischief this time was affecting her adversely...

It was at noon when the girls woke up yawning & stretching. Annie got a hint of something being wrong with Geet since her eyes were red. She tried to ask her about the same but Geet avoided it. After having lunch in the room itself, everyone left. Geet had made up her heart & mind to just do away with her feelings for him but before leaving, she still had an urge to see Maan...She spotted him in the hall where Maan was already mischievously pretending a recite a shayari on phone...

Dur Humse Jaa Paoge Kaise,
Humko Bhool Paoge Kaise.
Hum Who Khushbu Jo Saanson Mein Utar Jaye, Khud Apni Saanson Ko Rok Paoge Kaise..

But this time Geet could take no more. She hated Mishty to the core! Racing down the staircase, she grabbed the phone from Maan's hand which startled him!

Geet was about to threaten the caller on the other end but soon realized that Maan was faking the call. He smirked seeing her stunned expressions. What shook her even more was the fact that Maan had saved her number as 'Mishty'...So the truth was out...

"Iska matlab...Iska matlab Maan had been playing a prank on me all this while..."

Shattered, Geet felt a dagger piercing her chest into her soul...She was even more hurt to face the reality...

"So this was---"

He halted as his mischievous eyes were horrified when he saw her tearful hazels engulfed with pain which shook his entire existence & he realized that this time he had gone a bit too far with his mischief...That hit him to an infinite extent Geet was numb & broken & he knew it was because of him...Her eyes were downcast...She did not utter a word to him...

He didn't know his prank would cause her so much grief. But it was too late to realize what he shouldn't have done...He hated himself. He stepped towards her but she just ran from there...

"No! Geet Wait! Listen to me!"

Distraught, he ran behind her desperately but she did not stop...

"He was fooling around with my feelings...I am just an object of time pass for him...Unhe koi pharak nahi padhta..."

Her heart cried so did her innocent hazels...





O...kay? Should I expect jootas & chapples from you all???😳😆😆. After the teaser, I don't think anyone would have thot the update wud turn out this way😲.But this is a reality. 😳 Now lets see how Maan manofies his Mishty😉


The shayaris are from the films 'Teri Meri Kahaani' & 'Fanaa'😉


Please give me lots of likes & comments-- suggestions, criticisms anything!😃


Another important thing, my exams will begin in a few days. Sonext update will be on 2nd April, not before that. So I would need your continued support & love for this story & also for my exams!🤔


Love you all🤗

Rashmi.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice Update

this time Maan pranks n mischievousness did hurt Geet a lot
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

rshmi shayri wala updttt...

annie ne maan ki deewangi cnfirm kar li.geets kiss s supr,bt she s hurt.bt i trust maan vo apni misty ko mna lega so waitng 4 maan manofying geet updttt...
nd rashmi all de bst 4 ur exams .u vil surely rock it like ur ffs😊
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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OMG!!!! Maan ki shayari😲 me too got stunned like Aniee...Ye kya haal kar lia hai Maan, You are not able to control yourself around Geet and always do mischevious things😳😆

Oye!!! Hoye!!! Pappi Shappi wala update☺️😆 *Thud* *Faint* OMG!!! Kya authoritive KISS thi...I'm in MAANEET Dreamland😉

Awww!!!! Ye kya ho gaya, Maan's prank went little overboard and Geet Gussa ho gayi😔...!!!!
But that means again we'll get serious with passion and intense wala romance⭐️...Geet i have a request iss baar jaldi se mat manana...Aache se pareshan karna Maan ko😆


This shayari from Maan to Geet...

Tum hasti ho mujhe hasane ke
liye,
Tum roti ho mujhe rulane ke liye,
Tum ek baar rooth ke to dekho,
Agar marna bhi pade to mar
jaunga tumhe Manane ke liye…
Edited by _MGArti_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jatke dar update.khushi se suru hua and gham me jake khatam.Maan ne isbr limit hi cross kr di.bt that kiss part was awsme.all the best fr your exam.will miss u r update.cnt sn.
Edited by sanjukta19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
haye main mar jawan maan ki shayari pe...😆

dekha ab geet ko naraz kar dia na, n rashmi u hv to make it for troubling geet.😆 i want double update😆
Edited by Slov_perfringes - 12 years ago

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