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StripePurple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Hi Gargee. These One Shots of yours, woven around some beautiful songs, are incredible. I particularly loved this last one. One of my favourite songs, and you wrote about Khushi's pain, her anguish beautifully. I loved reading all of them, actually, and hope to see many more such unexplored moments from IPK recreated here.

On the side, there are these two songs from a film called Raincoat, called "Piya tora kaisa abhimaan" and "Mathura Nagarpati", which you could listen to if you like. Also, "Kitni baatein" from Lakshya. Absolutely soul-stirring songs, and I would love to see you write something around them. Will definitely come up with more when I come across them. :)

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mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

khushi was struggling to put together what was it about him that made her restless if he didnt see her as she is it could have been better in the serial and you gave newer depth to her feelings ...one suggestion can you do that with arnav too...i want to read what went through his mind after he was kidnapped how he ended up saying ilu to khushi over phone ...and these people never showed their actual conversation between them when they admit their love for each other ...

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Shegarf71

@Shegarf71

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

👏Gargee...just beautiful...heartfelt and Arshi...🤗...loved reading it...u wrote it beautifully and could envision it rite on the show😃thank you for posting😛

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Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Khushi's grief, sadness and loneliness is palpable.

"Come back, Arnavji... Please... Come back to me..." Her plaintive call for him to come back is echoing all over the universe where a lonely soul is calling for its other half who completes her and she can not even imagine an existence without him.

Needless to say, I have been saying this since the 3rd week in November 2012... Also...I too am missing my Arnavji and Khushi...and my IPKKND so much.

It is only thru wonderful writers like yourself who still write that keeps the magic alive!!!!

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katunkka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

this is thebest yet so sad.

please make arnavji comeback 😭

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

You have no business making me cry like this, every time! I want a happy and romantic Rehna Tu next, please?

Itna accha mat likho, I felt my heart tug painfully in my chest; the airport scene was the most painful, that was perhaps the point where I hated Arnav the most, God that stubborn arrogant moron! How could he not see ?

Beautiful, G. And me too loves the song. But please, a happy one next time ?

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Snehal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

oh wow..i jus discovered if not nething else i can hybernate preety well...😆

with this gorgeously preety lady keeping me hooked n stalked for her always...aaah...bas ..enough now..😡😡😡

ye dekh G..ab bahot ho gaya..tere har ek FF pe mere har ek body part hybernate horela hai..ab toh body parts bhi kam padrele hai.chup chap..i mean it..chup chap apne keyboard pe khatkhat karna shur kar aur har ek..har ek FF ko update kar...🤢

teri uni ka result ka toh pata nahi lekin tera result ab solely humare haath mein hai...bwhahaha

samjhi???????

jaaniii...!!!!!

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Hey G, I don't know if you are going to give us more updates. But please, whenevr you have time, can you make an update based on the song Saajna from I, me aur main? Thank you :)