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MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 91

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Around eleven at night Geet heard some commotion from Maan's room. She wasn't sleeping n was only waiting for him. After their kitchen encounter he had left again or may be was in the mansion only, she had no idea; she didn't have the guts to ask Rohan even who left in the evening.


But at night when Maan didn't come to his room she grew impatient n worried. Now hearing the noises she was in dilemma if to go check or not. Not able to hold she came out of her room n peeked inside his from the balcony.


Geet don't just stand there, help me. Rohan said n she came in.


What is all this?


Your hubby was adamant to go out so we went to a club. I thought it would get his mind off Jia for some time but Mr. Smarty pants got is ass drowned in alcohol. Rohan stretched once Maan was on the bed. Oh god I am going to have cramps tomorrow. He is so heavy. What do you eat?


At least not other's heads like you. Maan said with a smirk, his eyes were squinted n hiccup made its way out in the end. Geet understood just how much drunk he was… very much.


Oh shut up. Rohan said irritated. Geet now over to you. Take your revenge, today he won't mind. Rohan waved his hand n left. He himself seemed a little drunk. Both brothers were one and the same, Geet thought as she proceeded to remove Maan's shoes.


Kya kar rai ho Geet. Don't touch my feet. Maan said in panic as he stood up, swaying from side to side.


Geet smiled for the first in the day. He just looked so cute while drunk. I am just removing your shoes.


Nope. He raised a finger in attempt to look stern but the pouty lip just ruined the feel n made him appear even more adorable. I will do it myself. N he started the fight with his shoes. In standing position only he pulled his leg n tried to remove the shoe stumbling in the process, Geet held him stifling a giggle.


The stubborn man he was only took breath after removing his shoes then stood up straight-as much as he could-n smiled victoriously. See. Geet nodded. Now you can remove my clothes. He smiled cheekily.


Her smile vanished. There is no need to remove them, you… you can sleep like this.


No. Maan whined. I am uncomfortable. Geet, he cupped her cheek. Please. He kept her hands on his belt.


She first fiddled with the buckle but finally was able to remove it and later removed his shirt n jeans. Her heart cried again seeing the injuries as he stood there in his vest n boxers.


Before he could do something more or ask her to remove the vest n boxers, she made him lay on the bed. When she started leaving he held her hand n asked her not to leave, saying he was scared.


And she couldn't have argued after that look he gave her. She was not sure herself but he was injured at the moment both mentally n physically n she just couldn't make herself to leave him alone. She kept her dubatta on the chair n got into bed taking another blanket for her.


This is big enough. He said holding the blanket that was over him, up from her side. Come here.


She was hesitant. Her crazy heart wanted to take advantage of the situation n be close to him, he probably won't remember anything in the morning but who was she trying to fool. She was doing damage to herself only. What would all this get her, another memory that would just make her weak, more vulnerable?


Maan got restless n pulled her into the blanket. She fell over him, the fight going on inside her ended n heart won, the temptation was too much to overlook. Still she tried to create some distance between them but Maan snaked his hand below her waist n stopped her from moving away. Sighing she placed her head over his chest careful not to hurt his wounds in the process.


His steady heart beat was so soothing to Geet n Maan was in complete ecstasy. Geet.


Hmm.


Don't tell Jia that I was drunk.


Okay I won't.


Maan again remembered his princess wasn't there. She left me. I want her, I need her Geet. I don't know how she doing. His eyes became teary n she felt the sting of them in her own eyes.


Maan. She titled her head up to look at his face. Just a day more n she would be back n she is fine, don't worry. Just him being drunk made it so easy. For the time being she wasn't scared of him becoming angry or blasting at her, hurting her.


What if she never came back? He asked his worst fear coming to the surface.


She will back Maan. Geet said cupping his cheek. Why wouldn't she?


You don't know. He said his heart abruptly beating faster. He knows.


Who? N what does he know?


Shreya's dad. He knows.


What?


That.. Tears fell from his eyes, he looked so weak as if the next set of words would burn his tongue. That Shreya is her mother but I am… He thinks I killed her… she died because of me. But it wasn't my fault Geet.. I never.. I am not her father.


His words were broken n he was blabbering; Geet wasn't sure what he meant. What did you say? She asked doubtful of what she heard. About what? He said tilting his head a bit.


About you not being her father.


I am her father. Maan growled sitting up. She is my daughter goddamnit. He held his head. She kept her hand on his shoulder unable to see him like that. He wasn't that weak. She didn't know that he had so many problems; he never showed any emotion to her other than anger, the only she saw another side him was with Jia. She thought he was happy before she entered his life, got married to him. But now the glass seemed to be breaking n falling, revealing a totally different picture. Why Shreya's dad wanted Jia n why did he deem Maan responsible for his daughter's death?


Nobody believes me. What if Jia too… He was horror stricken when he again looked at Geet with his most vulnerable expressions. What if she also starts hating me? Everyone else does.


She wouldn't Maan. Geet said. She loves you.


Do you love me?


She stiffened. He shifted closer desperately. I love you. My toy girl. Her eyes watered n she couldn't breathe. She used to hate when he had first started calling her toy girl but don't know when she became so fond of it and then it just turned into a bad memory. The name mocked her at nights, echoing in her ears like a death song. It was all a lie that she based her life on. She didn't want to go through that phase again.


Why don't you love me? He asked making a baby face.


Because I am not a fool. She half said half screamed.


But I am. I can't stop loving you. He almost cried. Believe me Geet. He pleaded holding her face. May be if he was sober he wouldn't have the strength to do so but with alcohol in his system he had lost his mind n heart had taken the complete control.


Why did you marry Shreya then? Why? Why did you hide it from me?


I didn't know. I… how do I explain? His mind was jumbled n vision blurry. He wanted to explain n convince so desperately that words failed him, she failed him. She was not ready to hear, trust. That hurt so badly, he thought why couldn't he just die.


You loved her Maan. She cried her voice breaking. You…you..nev..er loved mee..


I did. He said n wiped her tears, she threw his hands away, and he took them back to her face. Don't cry. I love you. I can prove. Something lightened in his eyes as he scooted even closer to her slipping his finger into her hairs.


She in vain tried to push him away but he was in for a mission. Yes I can prove it. He kissed her neck n she gasped sharply, both with the suddenness of the kiss n the sensation it created. His tongue darted out as he dragged his mouth kissing and licking all over. I could never do this to her. He said taking a second to stare into her hazels n again burying his face into the crook of her neck. I love you Geet. I can prove it.













Precap- Jia back, phew












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Muhahaha me first 😃 😆
Wonderful part dear 😃 👏
Looove rohan 😆 he is too good.
Maan is vulnerable and cute at the same time. A tough task for geet to handle 😳
So he confessed he is not jia's father.
He didnt get close to shreya and he proved it to geet 😳
Hope this nasha will help him confess more of his past 😉
Cant wait for more. Jia is coming back 😃
Edited by sonu4ever - 12 years ago
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wow lovely emotional update.. te way geet restless want to know abt my maan was lovely.. oh god both khuranas brother drunken but my maan look so cute baby, hot baby, i want to eat him alive.. te way his cute antics and te way he is saying he will remove te shoes but naughty maan in ur drunken state too u want ur geet to remove ur dress .. was so lovely cute scenes.. te way my maan asking his geet to be with him and te way geet ki fight between her heart and her mind but atlast her heart won was lovely.. te way my maan pouring his heart and te way geet asking him was lovely emotional.. is jia is not her daughter ?.. te way my maan trying to prove his love for his toy girl, but pls maan dont break ur geet ki heart bechari..i love te update..

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