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Posted: 12 years ago
part 7
nice part...
poor Khushi...
Muskaan is so selfish...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice twist.poor kushi.wat will happen wen dev knows d truth.
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Posted: 12 years ago
now he knows...but will arnav tell Dev?
lets wait and watch...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg, that was so selfish of M. what will Dev's reaction be? Not only is K grreat to make sacrifice for her sis but even Arnav has a big heart too. So made- for-each other they r !!
thnx 4 pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmm So Khushi did all these for Muskaan..
And now what will he do?
Dhruv also will be shattered..?
Like the update
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Posted: 12 years ago

I thank LaxshaLOVEArshi for making such a lovely banner for my FF.


Pt 8
Dev wakes up from his sleep.

Everybody wishes him happy birthday.He is surprised.

Muskaan gives a small cake to Dev.
D:Oh!What a surprise..I never expected cake.

Mus:I wanted to surprise you.So you got surprised.Right?
He smiles:Yes.You made my birthday special.
She smiles.

Arnav stares at Muskaan.
He thinks:Look at her pretending like Khushi.
Suddenly Dev puts the cake's cream all over her face.
She is irritated.
Mus:What did you do?
Arnav watches it with a smile.
He thinks:Now Muskaan will show her real nature.She can't control her anger.Slowly she will expose herself.However we try to hide the truth,one day the truth will be out and Dev will understand the truth.
Muskaan is about to burst out.Suddenly she comes back to her senses.
She thinks:Control..if I get angry,Dev will doubt..Khushi is very calm.She does'nt get angry.
Slowly she smiles.
Dev laughs:You look very funny.

She also laughs.
Arnav is wondered.
He thinks:Muskaan is a great actress.See how beautifully she acts like an innocent girl.

Evening birthday party...
Dev has worn a black shirt and brown overcoat.Arnav has worn a black outfit which makes him stylish.
Unknowingly Arnav's eyes search for Khushi.Finally Khushi arrives.Arnav's eyes glitter.He looks at her deeply.She has worn a red designer saree Her straight hair is flowing.Arnav can't take his eyes off her.Khushi looks at him with discomfort and tension.

She is uncomfortable as she is aware of the fact that now Arnav knows her identity.She bends her eye balls due to overconsciousness.



Arnav goes near Khushi.
He looks at her face deeply.
Suddenly they hear a voice:Khushi!
They are shocked to hear Dev call her 'Khushi'.
Khushi thinks:Did Arnav tell him the truth?
Arnav thinks:How did Dev know that she is Khushi?
Muskaan comes there.
Mus:Dev..why are you here?
D:Hi Muskaan'I came here to call Khushi.I was searching for her.Now only I found her.

He looked at Khushi:Khushi'don't take too much of time to dress up. The party is going to start.
Muskaan laughs:You fool..I am Khushi.That is Muskaan.
D:Don't try to fool me.You are Muskaan.That is Khushi.I can recognise my Khushi.


Khushi and Muskaan are tense.They started sweating.
Mus:No,I am Khushi.


D:No way.Look at the appearance.Khushi is not that stylish like you.
Khushi:Dev...I am Muskaan.Not Khushi.Khushi had a make over.That's all.
Khushi is nervous thinking whether Dev will believe her or not.
Arnav tells him softly with a slight smile:They are telling the truth Dev.She is Muskaan.Otherwise why should she be with me?
D:Oh I am so sorry.How di I feel that Muskaan is my Khushi?How could I mistake my on wife Khushi to be Muskaan?

Mus:It's ok.Come.
D:Ok.Arnav..Muskaan..come...let us start the celebration.
A:We are coming bro.You both go.
D:Ok.
Dev and Muskaan go.Muskaan is still nervous as she had a narrow escape.

K:I got scared.I thought you told him the truth.


A:Don't worry.I will not break my promise.


She smiles softly:Thank you Arnav.


He smiles.


Dev cuts the birthday cake and gives a piece to Muskaan.She feeds him cake.Then she puts the cream all over his face.

D:Hey...

Muskaan chuckles:In the morning you did this to me no..

D:Hey you naughty..I don't know why..you have changed a lot.You have become bubbly like Muskaan.

Muskaan becomes dull.

D:But I love your nature.

Muskaan is relieved.She smiles.

D:Thanks a lot for arranging this grand birthday party.I am lucky to have you as my wife.I love you.

Muskaan blushes.

Arnav got irritated.He said in his mind:Bro'.you don't know that she is fooling you with her sweet smile.I am sad that you are not a lucky husband.That's why you got a cunning wife like her.


The song is 'Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Jab koi baat bigad jaaye jab koi mushkil pad jaaye
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz

Na koi hai na koi tha zindage mein tumhaare siva
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz
Tum dena saath mera o humnawaaz..'{Jurm} is played.
Dev-Muskaan start dancing.Arnav goes near Khushi.Slowly he holds her soft skinned hands

and dances.

Arnav is not able to take his eyes off Khushi's innocent face.Khushi is really uncomfortable with it.
Arnav thinks:I fell in love with Khushi thinking that she is Muskaan.After knowing that she is not Muskaan also am I longing for Khushi?
He is confused.

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i first to comment
🤗nice update loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update👏
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was a close escape
muskaan n khushi need to be careful
wow arnav is falling for khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update..
Dev started to like bubbly wife means Muskaan
He started to accept her
While Arnav started to hate Muskaan and love Khushi
Muskaan is in love with Dev what about Khushi??
Thanks for pm

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