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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
it was great:-]<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
ur dam good. I couldn't have expected a plot of this sort...hope they are nt half- sibblings...hate that deepali
Plz plz plz do continue its an awesome story
wld love to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Wow..loved both of the parts..they both are in love with each other..😉..yuck Deepali ruining it as always..pls continue soon..and clear what's gonna happen in party ? How his father died? What was Madhu doing there??? So pls continue soon n thx for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: didlr

hey good great...jst loved it...so was madhu responsible fr his dad's death?

Thanks fr pm
N do continue

Thanks
U'll have to wait to knw that
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
note-thank u so much to the ppl who have snt pms requesting me to continue...i'll definitely try my best to continue tomorrowTo the ones who have liked n commented...thanks guys it means a lot...let's c whether they are half-sibblings or not. Same with madhu being responsible fr mohan kundra's death
Edited by jack-12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jack-12

note-thank u so much to the ppl who have snt pms requesting me to continue...i'll definitely try my best to continue tomorrowTo the ones who have liked n commented...thanks guys it means a lot...let's c whether they are half-sibblings or not. Same with madhu being responsible fr mohan kundra's death

Thank u so much<3<3<3:-S:-S:-S
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
HI
JUST READ IT TODAY
IT IS A LOVELY STORY AND MOVING SO FAST😊
BUT THERE IS SO MUCH MYSTERY😉
AND YOU HAVE DIPALI TOO😡
FOUND IT VERY INTERESTING
DO CONTINUE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for the sudden ending guys, but i was not in a mood to write more...but because of your comments and pm asking me yo continue i wrote this part. Hope you'll like it!
Chap-6Rishab couldn't believe that he was sleeping when so many things had taken place. He was angry. Angry with Madhu. How could she do this to him...Rishab knew that some how it was Deepali who was responsible for Madhu's sudden disappearance. He knew her Madhu could not behave in the manner described by Deepali Bhatia. He had faith in her. He would not loose her again. He would tell Madhu how much he loves her, how very important she is in his life. He had to find her and so he went to the appartment he had alloted her.*****************'I'm sorry sir but Madhu is not here. She'd called last night to inform that she would be staying at your place." her room-mate was worried for her. But she could not understand what RK was doing...searching for a mere employee?'Its k...if she comes do inform me and no need to tell her that i was looking for her." making sure that she understood him well he went away.Where are you Madhu? I would never let you leave me again...I'll find you...even if thats the last thing i do in my life.
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How could he do this...Madhu had never expected that her Rishab could behave in such a manner. She still did not want to believe all this. But then how did Deepali know?
I wish everything would fall back into place.
Madhu was sitting in her private place...the place where she used to come to spend time with herself. The place where she would usually find her answers. She was sitting on the beachside. It was near the light house. When she was young she used to always be fascinated by this. It was the only beachside in entire Mumbai which had a lighthouse.
'What are you saying ma?" Madhu was dumbstruck. She had herd her wrong.
'She's telling the truth my love'" Mohan Kundra and Madhu's father appeared together. They both were heavily drunk. Mohan was looking at her with the same love in his eyes that he always had for her. But her own father was looking at her as if she was a piece of dirt.
'You b****. How could you do this? " Mallik slapped Padmini. He was shocked to hear this. Pointing towards Madhu he said bitterly" I had been taking care of dirt...considering her as my daughter...I want you both out of my life now."
" No papa. They are lying. I'm your daughter, only your daughter." Madhu was crying hard now. She could not believe her father saying such bad things about her. She went to touch his hand, to ask him to comfert her. But he shook her away. Not ready to even touch her.
Madhu was angry now. " you" she went and started shaking Mohan badly..." you are responsible for all of this. I hate you. I wish i would have never met you...i wish you could just die..."
Madhu had wished this...and that had hapoened
After a lot of argument between the three Mallik had left. Padmini and Madhu forced Mohan to bring Malik back... he had left without another word...
And the next thing she knew they got the news that he was dead. He died in a car accident as he was heavily drunk. Madhu could not believe this and somewhete is considered herself responsible for his death...if she had only not wished.
Malik had refused to acknowledge Padmini and her as a part of the family now. He had forced Madhu to leave the house but still kept Padmini with him. He wanted to torture Madhu...he wanted her to live her life alone. And she did. Her mother used to send some money to her every month and Madhu stayed at her aunt's place. But when Padmini died dye to undetected lung cancer, Madhu was thrown out of the house. She had completed her schooling and did manual jobs here and there to support herself. She could only earn enough to pay her rent and eat her mean twice a day. That was a real hard time...
She had gathered all courage to ask Malik for a dna sample to know the truth. It was reveiled that she infact was Mallik's daughter. But after knowing this she never went back to him...
Life had always been tough for her, but she still lived it and she would still do without anyone.
A trear dropped from her eyees as Madhu remembered her past.
"I had thought you might have changed this i'm-helpless-crying habbit of yours. But no you are still the Crying Queen." Rishab said smiling at her.
Madhu was shocked to see him.she couldn't belive her eyes. What was he doing here... Was any part of his revenge still left?
"I know you must be shocked to see me. Why would't you be...I'm so dam handsome after all. And its very rarely you find good looking-rich-smart-caring guys like me. " Rishab added playfully.' now you must be thinking how i got to know about this place...i used to follow you here sometimes. You always looked peacefull when you were here...and you looked more beautiful..." After saying this he bent down and sat on his one knee. ' Miss Madhubala Malik, i know we have had a bad past and a more bad present due to Deepali,i don't know what all that b**** has told you, its all lie...but i want to have a happy and beautiful future with you. I love you Madhu. MARRY ME!
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That day both Madhu and Rishab had been shocked. Madhu because she got to know that Deepali was telling a lie to sepate the two and Rishab because he got to know the bitter past which was hidden from him for such a long time. But after hearing the entire thing, he made Madu believe that she was in no way responsible for his father's death. Their parents had commited some mistakes in their lives and they repaid what what they did.
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Finally Deepali was thrown out of the office. Madhu and Rishab got married soon and within a year Madhu was pregnant with thir first kid.
. . . THE END
Sorry for completing the story so soon, but i wasn't in a mood of writing more. Anyways hope you all liked it. Do let me know:)
And sry fr the errors:P
Edited by jack-12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Awesome ending buddy..!!Loved it...👏👏

P.S - ME FIRST...!!!!😳🤣
Edited by dilnasheen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Nice Update 😉Thankyou for Updating

sorry i know it was a sudden end but i was in no mood of writing more. i had planned something else, but still...hope u'll understand
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Ending to a beautiful story

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