TR ff:kahin pyar na ho jaye ch 11 pg 140

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ShivTRSS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#931

Nice banner, par thoda bada kyun nahi rakha. But mast. Update fast, its been ages

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#932

Hey guys...me again with an update...hope u all like this.

Enjoy...

Taani open her eyes slowly...she saw the clock and its showing 6:45 am.

Taani felt some wait on her stomach. She saw whats it and smiled seeing it...

Both rey and yug's hands are on her belly...like they are hugging a teddy bear...

Taani saw both of them are still sleeping peacefully...she kissed yug's forehead...

Then he slowly take yug's arm and put it aside.

Then she hold rey's hand to put it aside...she hold his palm but to her surprise as she put his palm in his...he ibtertwin his fingers with her...taani look at him but he is still sleeping...taani felt sonething when he intertwin his fingers...she felt like if this hand is forever with her life will happy and full of love...

But she suddenly through out all thoughts out of her mind and put rey's hand around yug...

Taani wake up and went in wash room for shower...

She came out of wash room. Her hairs are wet...water drops are falling down on the floor.

She look on the bad but yug was not there. Only rey is sleeping...she thought may be yug in his dadu's room.

She start to dry her hairs with towel. While drying her hairs some water drops fell on rey's face and his sleep disturbed...

Rey:aammm...

He stratches his hands and open his eyes and first thing he saw is his taani...his naughty bird in front of him...he smile looking at her ...

She is walking unknowingly that water is on the floor...

As she take a step she slipped and fall ...of course she was near the bed so she fell down on rey...

Her hairs stuck on her face and some hairs are touching rey's face...

Suddenly yug enter in the room and saw them. He ran from there...

Here taarey are in the same situation...rey put her hairs behind her ears which are touching his face...

He saw her angelic face...but her hairs not let him to see her beauty...

He touch her cheeks and start to remove the strends of hairs...

As he touch her cheeks she shievered...she closed her eyes...

Rey put her hairs back and caress her cheeks...

She open her eyes and look in to his honey brown eyes...she felt like she is getting lost in his eyes...

He look in her chocolatey brown eyes...and today it show some different emotions...distance between their face is decreasing ...

Yug enter in the room with camera in his hand...

He click a picture of taarey...

Yug:aaww...mumma papa...u r looking so cute...

Now taarey come to their sense and look at yug...

He quickly click another picture of taarey...

Taani stand up.

Ta:yug...aap ye kya kar rahe ho??

Yug:mumma...yug to bas aap ki aur papa ki photoes le raha hai...

Ta:yug...

Yug:mumma...

Ta:ok chalo fresh ho jao...me breakfast ready karti hu...

Yug:ok mumna ...

Taani goes from there...and yug run and jump in rey's lap...

Yug:papa...ye dekho...kaisi hai aap ki aur mumma ki picture??

Rey:bahot achhi hai...aur kyu na ho mere yug ne jo li hai...

Yug:thank u papa...ok ab chalo hum ready ho jate hai varna mumma gussa ho jayegi...

Rey:ha aur angry bird ban jayegi...

Yug:angry bird???

Rey:ya...your angry mumma...i call your mumma angry bird whenever she gets angry...

Yug giggles and said:yug's mumma angry bird...

Rey:ok chalo hum ready ho jate hai...

Yug:yes lets go...

Both went into wash room. First rey help yug to get ready and then he get ready...

Here taani is waiting for them...she is angry now why they are late...

Td:beta...abhi aa jayenge...

Ta:pops aap na unki side nat lo...abhi dono ki khabar leti hu...yaha late honge phir college me bhi late honge...
Just then reyug came and saw taani fuming in anger...

Both sit...

Taani serve breakfast angrily...

Yug and rey are whispering in eachothers ears...

Yug:papa u were right...mumma is so angry...

Rey:i told u na...abhi na kuch bolna mat...eat silently ok my baby...

Yug:ok papa...

Both are having their breakfast silently.

Ta:(to herself)no one is talking to me...

Suddenly yug:mumma...

Ta:kya hai yug??

Yug:why r u angry???aap ko pata hai u r looking like an angry bird...

Hearing this rey split out water from his mouth which he is drinking ...

Ta:yuuggg...and she glare at rey...

He make cute sorry face and looking this face taani couldnt help but smile...

Ta:ok mera bachha ab jaldi breakfast khatam karo...mumma ko college bhi jana hai na...

Rey:aur papa ko bhi jana hai...

Ta:ha...dekho papa ko bhi der ho rahi hai...

Just then sharon come there...

Sh:good morning uncle...taani rey...good morning shona...

Yug:good morning mom...

Sh:rey...taani...chalo hum late ho rahe hai...

Taarey:ha chalo...

Ta:bye beta...bye pops...

Rey:bye yug...

Yug:bye mumma...bye papa...ek min...papa...

Rey:ha...kya hua yug??

Yug:papa aap ke paas do phone hai na...ek mujhe dijiye...

Ta:yug...aap ko kya jarurat hai phone ki??

Yug:agar yug ko papa se baat karni ho to kaise karega??

Rey:ok ok...ye lo...bye ab hum chalte hai...he kiss his forehead and goes from there.

In the college:

After three lectures gang is in the RH.

They are sitting down. Suddenly
Vi:guys lets dance...

All:lets dance...yeee...

Vicky:put on a song...

The song is race 2 title track.

All are dancing in a group...taarey are in the middle...dancing together...suddenly vicky mistakly hit taani abd taanu directly go in rey's arms...their bodies are touching...rey put his hands around her back ...taani look at him...and then she goes from there and sit ...

All finish dancing and all sit with taani ...

Taani is listening songs in sharon's phone...

Suddenly her phone vibrate...she remove earphones and take the call...

Ta:hello...

No response...

Ta:hello...

Someone:hello ...aawaz pehchanti ho???

Taani is shocked hearing his voice after four years...her phone fell down in her lap...her eyes filled with tears...

All are shocked seeing taani like this...

Sharon take her cell and put it on speaker...

Vih:hey ...kya hua???pehchana nahi mujhe...me tumhara vihaan...

All heard this...and all look at taani...taani look at them...her eyes are teary...reyam cant see this...

Sharon :u moron...why u called taani???

Vih:who r u??

Rey:how dare u call her???

Vih:who r u??i want to talk with taani...

Rey:but she doesnt want to talk with u ...

Vih:who r u???

Swaron&gang:we all are her friends...

Rey:and dont ever try to hurt my ta...

All look at him.

Rey:our taani...u get that??

Vih:well...hurt to usne mujhe kiya tha...usne aur uske papa ne mujhe slap kiya tha na...ab dekhna...

Rey:tumhe to hm sab slap karenge...dont think she is alone...we r with her...understand???and never try to call her again varna tumhare liye achha nahi hoga...

And rey cut the call...all look at taani ...who is sitting like a statue...

Sw:rey tum taani ko ghar le jao...

Sh:ha rey ...tum jao...hum college khatam hobe ke baad aate hai...

All stand up...but taani is still sitting...sharon made her stand up...

Sh:rey u go...

Rey:ok...chalo taani...

Taani is not listening...

Rey shook her and said:taani...chalo...

But she just kept looking at him...

Rey hold her hand...she look at their hands and remember the morning scene...

Rey drag her with him to his car...

He open backdoor and taani sit in...rey also sit beside her...

Rey:chalo driver...aur ha taani k ghar le jana gadi...

Driver:ok sir...

Taani's eyes and head are heavy because of crying...

And after some time she felt asleep...

Rey saw her sleeping...he take her head and put it on his shoulder...

They reach home...but taani is still sleeping...

Rey get out of car and put taani's hand around his neck and pick her up in his hands...

Rey:ramukaka...aap mere sath chalo...

Bith reach at the lift .

Rey:ramukaka...vo button press kijiye...

Dri:ji...

The lift open and they are in the lift now...

Rey:ab vo vala button press kijiye aur phir teen number ka button press kijiye...

Dri:ji...

After two minutes they are on the third floor.

Rey:ramukaka...door bell baja dijiye...

Dri:ji...ramukaka ring the bell and then goes from there .

Taani's dad open the door and saw that taani is in rey's arm...her arms are around his neck and her head is on his chest ...

Td:beta...ye...

Rey:uncle...taani so rahi hai...

Td:ok jao...usse room me le jao...

Just then yug came there...yug kuch bhi bole us se pehle...

Rey:sshh...yug...dont say anything...your mumma is sleeping...

Yug kuch nahi bolta ...

Rey go in their room and put taani on bed...

He is going back but taani's hands are still around his neck ...

He remove her hands gently and kiss her on forehead and then came out of the room. He saw yug standing there...he witnessed this scene...

As rey came out yug hug rey...he wrap his hands around rey's leg...rey pick him up and hug him...he took him in hall and both sit on the sofa...taani's dad is also there...

Yug:papa...

Rey:hmm...

Yug:thanks...

Rey:thanks kyu??

Yug:for loving yug ang yug's mumma...

Rey:i will always love u...

Yug:aur mumma ko??

Rey:i will always love your mumma too...

Rey look at taani's dad...he is smiling...rey smile back...

Taani's dad:thanks beta...i know it...u love my daughter...and i m so happy...

Yug:papa...chalo hum coffee banate hai...jab mumma uthegi to hum unhe coffee denge...

Rey:ok...chalo...

Both go in the kitchen.

Precap:taani little bit realise her feelings...

Vihan's entry...

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NSohi13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#933

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Nice update Dips... Rey was sleeping on the same bed with Taani ... Then their eyelock just beautiful

Rey and yug bonding is great... Rey really loves him so much...

That's very gud ke sab ne milke achhi khabar li Uss Vihan ki... Idiot kahin ka...but Taani's pain... And aww Rey is so sweet he is so Carey loved this Rey ... Wow Taani's dad know that Rey loves his daughter :)

Thank you for the update Dipsu... Loved it :)

Edited by NSohi13 - 12 years ago

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-CussTheWorldUp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#934

Wow Dipu di!! Loved it!! Agar aap abhi mera expresaion dekhti toh aapko pata chalta how much i loved it!! Precap! Hope Taani realises.her love for Rey soon... n i hope Rey kills that Vihaan too!! I don't know why.. But i love rey fighting for taani!! Update soon...

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Natasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#935

Yug is a sweetheart, he is so smart and cute two deadly combination lol. Aww Taarey little romance was awesome Rey can't stop staring at his Taani and little genius clicking their pic was perfect. Father and son are too naughty calling Taani angry bird lol. The nerve of that idiot to call Taani love Rey reply to him. And love how Rey promise to always love yug and Taani. I love the update, Dipsy u are incredible and so is your imagination and writing skills. Plz continue soon.

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chinudolly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#936

⭐️😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😃😃😃😃😉😉😉😉😃😃😃😃😃😛😛😛😛😊😊😊😊😊😉😉😉romance ,emotions , cuteness of yug , sweet , lovely ,super duper awsome ,👏👏⭐️⭐️👏👏👏

interesting and shocking precap⭐️

Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago

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shriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#937

hey very nyc update
first of all i loved this part

Suddenly her phone vibrate...she remove
earphones and take the call...
Ta:hello...
No response...
Ta:hello...
Someone:hello ...aawaz pehchanti ho???
Taani is shocked hearing his voice after
four years...her phone fell down in her
lap...her eyes filled with tears...
All are shocked seeing taani like this...
Sharon take her cell and put it on
speaker...
Vih:hey ...kya hua???pehchana nahi
mujhe...me tumhara vihaan...
All heard this...and all look at taani...taani
look at them...her eyes are
teary...reyam cant see this...
Sharon :u moron...why u called taani???
Vih:who r u??
Rey:how dare u call her???
Vih:who r u??i want to talk with taani...
Rey:but she doesnt want to talk with u ...
Vih:who r u???
Swaron&gang:we all are her friends...
Rey:and dont ever try to hurt my ta...
All look at him.
Rey:our taani...u get that??
Vih:well...hurt to usne mujhe kiya
tha...usne aur uske papa ne mujhe slap
kiya tha na...ab dekhna...
Rey:tumhe to hm sab slap karenge...dont
think she is alone...we r with
her...understand???and never try to call
her again varna tumhare liye achha nahi
hoga...
And rey cut the call...

wowy soo nyc frnzz
sab toot pade us stupid vihaan par!!!
hehe loved it...

n nw
i love woh night scene wala part

Taani open her eyes slowly...she saw the
clock and its showing 6:45 am.
Taani felt some wait on her stomach. She
saw whats it and smiled seeing it...
Both rey and yug's hands are on her
belly...like they are hugging a teddy
bear...

n dis too

Then she hold rey's hand to put it
aside...she hold his palm but to her
surprise as she put his palm in his...he
ibtertwin his fingers with her...taani look
at him but he is still sleeping...taani felt
sonething when he intertwin his
fingers...she felt like if this hand is
forever with her life will happy and full of
love...

wow love ia building
bed wala bhi bohot acha tha but agar sab likhane lagi toh page kam pad jayega..
hehe
over all i loved whole of ur update!!!!
pls upd soon
n ya dairy bhi!!!
pm bhejna mat bhoolna