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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 19 - Finally they got married without any more hurdles

Achcha hua jo brij jungle me phas gaya aur yaha maaneet ki shaadi ho gayi
Rani missing geet but feeling her well being




Yeah Maaneet happily married
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Brij😡 is in his right place
Rano is repenting

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Now waiting for next part



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A big Thank you to Geet Handa and Rakhi Dutta for allowing me to use the pics from their pages for my banners.
Hugs to Kavya Kaushi for editing them
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Thank you to Aash and Nauri for their help
Nauri has given some awesome lines
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PS : Friends I am not very good at writing such scenes but have tried and Aash helped me too. Hope I haven't disappointed u all.
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Part 20




I entered OUR ASHIYAAN kicking the rice kalash. Before Maa could put the kumkum water thaal on the ground Maan stopped her and Aadi brought a wet clay slab and placed it right in front of us on the ground and Maan gestured me to put my right foot on it. I had just lifted my right foot and was about to place it on the slab. I saw Maan too did the same thing and both of us placed our first foot forward together on the slab inscribing this special moment forever...


Slowly lifting my foot off the kumkum thaal. I walked in the house leaving my footprints on the floor and heading towards the puja room, where after lighting a diya and we did aarti together. Dadimaa ordered Maan to lift me up. My eyes widened, had I actually heard it right but the next moment I was up in his arms walking towards a wall of the puja room as directed by Dadimaa. Bela di had got another thaal with kumkum. Dadimaa told me to place my hands in it then leave my handprints on the wall, all the while Maan holding me in his arms. This was their family tradition.


Sitting in the hall surrounded by all the guys teasing and girls pouting as I had lost the game of finding rings from the milk and rose petals thaali. Everytime I would get the ring he too would grab it at the same time and keep holding my hand and finally to loosen his grip on my hand and free it from his grip, resulting the ring would slip out and he would win. "Cheater!" I muttered under my breath to which he whispered in my ears, "Everything is fair in love, war and..." he left the sentence unfinished winking at me and all I could do is stare at him.

Suddenly the house buzzing with wedding teasing and celebrations became absolutely silent. The announcement by Dadimaa and Maa that all of them would be leaving for Delhi in sometime didn't go well with all. I too didn't quite like this idea but was required. Panditji had informed Dadimaa that tomorrow before noon, is a very auspicious time for my Griha-pravesh in Khuran Mansion. Inorder to get the preparations done they needed to leave now. Though it would be a low key affair but still Dadimaa and Maa didn't want to take any chance. Only Aadi and Pinky were to stay back in the hotel and would accompany us back to Delhi in the day.


I was escorted to our room by Annie and Meera. A shudder ran through me when I entered the room it was decorated with white orchids and red roses, with candles lit all around. The whole ambience was so romantic still a hitch caught me as I remembered that night when a similar decorated bed was set up and I was made to sit on it, only to be harshly pulled up and thrown out of the room.


Gathering myself out of those painful memories I walked forward to embrace my future. Past is left behind because Babaji had different plans for us. And here I am , once again in the same situation, the difference being this was my dream.

Since I had learnt to dream, I had dreamed of Maan. Of being his . Of Our Togetherness.


They settled me comfortably on our bed. I felt a very unusual feeling in my stomach. I knew it was silly to feel this way, since we had already been together. But that night, it had been about need and desperation, about loneliness and penance.


But this time it would be for love. Our Love!!!

My reverie broke when I saw Annie and Meera settling the floral curtain properly and were about to leave,they were unusually silent, I was feeling bad for them. Stopping them I spoke.

"Kuch hi ghaanto ki baat hein phir hum saath honge, hamesha ke liye."

A smile lit on their face, bringing back all our past memories. Now we would be together , no restrictions , no deadlines, nothing and I too felt relieved seeing them back to normal. But it was short lived as much to my horror Annie proudly stated about her devious plan, " Dadimaa ne bacha liya warna toh aaj Bro ko hum itni asaani se nahi chodne wale the, agla peechla saara hisaab barabar karnewale the".


I heaved a sigh of relief under my breath," Babaji thank you! Aap ne aur Dadimaa ne bacha liya warna pata nahi yeh log kya karnewale the".


Annie and Meera walked out of the room. I could hear they giving a tough time to Maan for their 'Nek' (good luck). Slowly the noise died down and I assumed the matter was finally settled and Maan was allowed in the room. We had completed all the necessary rituals for the day and now it was time for all to leave. We escorted them to the main door bidding them a goodbye.

Suddenly everything became so silent and a sense of emptiness settled around. I turned to walk back to our room. A different feeling had enveloped me, I was feeling nervous, shy, hesitant. The very thought about us being together was setting up different sensations in me. I was about to walk only to be stopped by Maan. He was right behind me, his breath falling on my nape, a shiver ran down my body with his proximity.

Before I could frame few words, he silenced me with his,

"Sssh Geet! Do u trust me?".


His simple statement had sealed my lips. He removed a piece of cloth and blindfolded me and next moment I was in his arms. He turned around and started walking. A sudden chillness enveloped us and I assume we were out of our house. The smell of the damp earth was mingling in the air with aroma of flowers around. The weather was calm as if resting after a tiring and long day. As he walked ahead I could hear faint sounds of ripples of water so he had probably walked towards the river and the fragrance of flowers getting stronger.

As Maan lowered me to the ground, I felt my legs touch something soft and the sweet intense aromas gave away the fact that it was a lawn of rose petals strewn below my feet. I felt his hands opening the blindfold, and the panorama that met my eyes made me hold my breath. It wouldn't be wrong to say that my heart may have skipped a beat or two. The sight that my eyes met was spell bounding. It can't be for real!!!!





The view just sweeped me off my ground. I was standing on the bank of the river amidst a heart made by rose petals and they were few more such hearts in the row, the idea being I have step on them making my way to the floating raft in the river. The raft was just like a mini house floating on the water, beautifully decorated with white satin curtains all around, white rice pearls lights adding on to its beauty and it was layered with a combination of red rose and mogra (jasmine) garlands all over it spreading its aroma in the atmosphere. The white beauty gleaming in the moonlight and the reflection of the same in the water felt as if white silver was sprinkled all over illuminating the water.The raft was safely harnessed to a pole on the bank.

I just turned around instantly to hug him tight, all my shyness of moments ago forgotten as now all I felt was his love filling me through and through.


His love ran through my veins, awakening my body and my dormant heart which had forgotten how to beat when I had lost him. A tear escaped my eyes, not one of pain, but of happiness.


Before the tear could travel down my cheek, Maan's lips claimed it as his. he hugged me tighter, trying to assimilate my very being in his.


My lips moved in a smile as I felt his lips on my cheek, his beard tickled me and I smiled wider, it was the most pleasurable pain I had felt.

Geet's dimple showed and I was staring at my wife and was lost in that smile. As I kissed her cheeks, making them go beet red.

I wanted to claim her totally. Her love her pain. Her tears her laughter!!!

My shyness returned as I met his naughty eyes, which held promises of a pleasurable night ahead.

I laughed at my bundle of innocence and guided her steps over each heart towards the raft, not letting her feet tough the ground. As we reached inside the raft I slowly let the rope loose from the iron pole but not removing it completely as the raft was harnessed at all four corners loosely as it floats firmly in the middle but keeping us safe from the waterfall and avoid flowing down towards the valley.


We entered, as Maan was busy loosening the rope from the pole I turned to look around the raft. It was so amazingly decorated. The white curtains hiding us from world all around, the garlands of mogra and roses seemed to be woven with the seams of the curtains spreading their fragrance in our life for our new journey. There was a big mattress placed in the middle of the raft covered with white satin sheets and mogra and rose petals sprinkled on it. The mattress too was curtained with white transparent drapes and garlands of roses and jasmines falling around it. Towards the rear end away from curtains there was a small fireplace made of bricks to keep the interiors warm in chilly weather at night.

I just wondered how can one be so perfect!!!!!



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I sat on our bed. Dressed as his bride waiting for him...

Iss pal main hoon ya tum bhi ho, ya dono hoke bhi na hain

kyun ho, kya ho, ho bhi ki na ho, ya kehna sunnna mana hain

I raised my eyes in adoration to see my bride sitting on our bed, looking at me in adoration. My breath hitched in my throat as the vision of loveliness raised her hands to my face, tracing my each and every feature as if committing it to memory.

Our eyes locked and it felt like time stood still, waiting for permission from our heartbeats to move on. He took my hand in his, and pressed a kiss in my palm, closing it to preserve the kiss.

I had been lost in hedonistic pleasure, feeling my husband, convincing myself that THIS MOMENT IN TIME was real.

But suddenly she broke off our eyelock and looked away, hiding her thoughts. I saw her tremble, and was mystified over her nervousness. I gripped her chin and turned her face back towards me, and saw her eyes were wet and pain lingered in them.

iss pal main hoon ya tum bhi ho, ya dono hoke bhi na hain

However hard I tried flashes of my past would surface out, haulting me, scaring me, restricting me to move ahead. Nodding a no, Maan held me firmly. He always understood my unsaid pain and words. His presence and warmth instantly put all my fears to rest.

(Music)

I didn't need her words to read her self-doubts and pain, because I shared it too.

I gently framed her face in my hands, and wiped off the precious pearls as they fell of, and took her lips in a kiss as soft as a feather.

His lips tenderly brushed against my eyes, my cheeks, leaving behind trails of fire as he anointed me with his love.

I grabbed his shoulders, hugging him hard, crying, unable to believe that this was true and I was really in his arms.

Tumhein dekhke yaad aayi, wohi bisari kahaani

deewane ka kissa, ya phir ek deewaani

dono sang sang rehte har dum, aisa yeh mene suna hai

iss pal main hoon ya tum bhi ho, ya dono hoke bhi na hain

kyun ho, kya ho, ho bhi ki na ho, ya kehna sunana mana hain

I came back to her lips, drinking in her cries of pain, promising her that I would never leave her. My hands roamed over her back.

His touch leaving trails of fire, making me burn for more.

Our kiss intensified, as both couldn't get enough of each other. Finally we broke apart for air, but our hands still roamed over each other bodies.

Maan's lips turned to my neck, biting and suckling the soft skin there, pushing my choli off my shoulder for more access for his foraying lips. His hands loosened the dori which was holding my blouse in place, pulling it to loosen it. I was too lost in the world of sensations to realize when he divested me from my clothing, and I was bare in his arms.

He pushed me down gently on the bed and trailed kisses from my collar bone till down beneath.

Ishq hua



Tum bata do yaad koi, kya puraani leke aau

ya nishaani deti jau, ya kahaani leke jau

ya ki maan chhod doon jaaye, yeh jaata, jaata jahaan hai

is pal main hoon ya tum bhi ho, ya dono hoke bhi na hain

kyun ho, kya ho, ho bhi ki na ho, ya kehna sunana mana hain

iss pal main hoon

Geet's hands went to my shoulders digging in her nails, as she fought to control the sensations shooting through her body.

We both wanted to forget everything except ourselves.

I wanted to make up for the wounds. I had unknowingly in my arrogance and prejudice inflicted upon her, while she wanted to cosset me in her love to make my nightmarish childhood dissolve, never to blacken our lives again.

We hit our moment together and became ONE. A UNION OF OUR HEART, MIND, BODY AND SOUL...

Still trying to let our moment sink in our soul. I heard Maan saying

"Tera haath mere haath me ho agar

Toh safar hi asal hayaat hai

Mere har qadam pe hain manzilen

Tera pyar agar mere saath hai

Meri zindagi ka har ek pal

Tere husn se hai juda hua

Tere hont bikhren to subhen hain

Tere zulf bikhre to raat hai!"

[These lines are by Nauri]

Kissing my forehead as I settled myself in his embrace treasuring OUR PRICELESS MOMENT!!!

Time and the moon stood testament to the tempestuous of two souls, who had loved and lost, and been reunited by the Creator to grace the word LOVE.

They were lost in a world of passion, expressing their love n need in a language as old as time.




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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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*sticking my tongue out at aashu*
Edited by Maaneet099 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
usse kyun naraz hai be 😡
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Edited by heytal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

usse kyun naraz hai be 😡



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hmm tum sharma rahi ho matlab daal main kuch kala hai 😳
Edited by Maaneet099 - 12 years ago

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