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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey all... thanks for liking the FF... till now it was almost parallel to the show, but with this part, it is going ahead of the show... hope you all like it...

Part-6

Both Ayaan and Zoya gave hi five as the whole plan was discussed…. while Asad was still socked…

And do you both think this is going to work? are you nuts…. said Asad….

Bhai jaan, hamaara apko court jaane se rokna ka plan successful tha ya nahi?

yes but that was a different case….

So don't worry Mr. Khan, if we can fool you, then why not to that Razia….. but this is to be implemented tonight itself…. said Zoya….

Don't worry Zoya begum, I will start my work now….. said Ayaan….

hey don't call me bagum…..or I will not help you……

while Asad was still worried for both of them…Ayaan, Ek crazy kam thi meri life mein that you also on same footprints….

Mr. Khan, agar koi problem hui to aap hain na? smiled zoya…. and Asad gave up in front of her beautiful smile….

ok… Ayaan, first its your turn, then I will collect the complete material required tonight….

Ok Bhaijaan, Zoya beg….no,no… just zoya, will you give me your mobile?

but why mine?

because this number is unknown to mumani and also this number will be useless by day after tomorrow once you leave….

Asad felt very restless on listening, infect he was feeling restless every time when someone says Zoya is leaving in two days…. but being a man of less words, he didn't say anything just looked towards her and she too… both shared a sweet but painful smile, wanted to speak a lot but both were quite….

but if she calls back on the number….asked Asad…

Zoya held the phone, made some settings and said….. don't worry Mr. Khan, this number will be non existing to Razia now….

finally ayaan called Razia….

Hello… said Razia…kaun bol rha hai?

Hahaha…. Ayaan laughed badly…. while zoya was controlling her laughter on listening to him…

kon badtmeez hai?

Gudiya Factory….. qtal ki raat….hahaha…..

Razia was scared on listening….. kya chahte ho?

aaj raat gudiya factory….12 bje….. and Ayaan cut the call…..

Ok… now we should leave, we will meet at ten pm at doll factory… Miss Farukhi let's go….

Bhaijaan, keep this doll at your home, it will be safer there…Ayaan gave the doll to Asad..

Asad smiled and took zoya to back home….

Asad went to his room directly, placed the doll in his locker while Tanveer was standing on the door….

Asad, aap kab se gudiya ke sath khelne lag gye ya us bachi zoya ke sath rehte apko bhi bavchon jaisi adat ho gyi?

Asad smiled… its nothing so tanveer, this one is important…. come , have seat… today my room has been cleaned by you na?

yes, you know na I don't like dirty or messed things…but how did you know? Tanveer asked..

from these pillows placed at the corner… I know your habit, instead of placing pillows on the resting side of bed, you always place them on corner…..he smiled…

but it is quite difficult to share room with zoya, I should not say but she is quite messy….. tanveer said…

Asad didn't say anything just smiled….. when tanveer noticed , it didn't affect Asad, she changed the topic, I mean, her dressing style…. her eating habits, all are quite different na?

yup, she is brought up in New york, so she wears differently otherwise she is very nice girl….

it was first time when Asad was trying to protect zoya from someone's comment which he used to make himself earlier on her habits and dressing….

anyways, you here?Asad changed the topic….

yes, I just came to talk to you, we are meeting after so long…..

they both sat together on the couch, talking remembering about their childhood and smiling….when suddenly zoya entered with the room with a bang as usual without knocking the door……..Mr. Khan, your black and bitter coffee….. but was taken away by seeing tanveer sitting on the couch with Asad and both smiling together….

Zoya ji, aise kisi ke room mein bina knock kiye nahi aana chaiya, ye achi tehzib nahi hai…..suddenly said Tanveer getting chance to make zoya bad in front of Asad….

I am sorry……….. I could have knocked…..… I am sorry for disturbing you, I just brought coffee for Mr, Khan, he must be carving for it… said zoya slowly feeling sad and she turned bad after keeping the coffee on the side table near Asad and turned back to go..

Thanks Miss Farukhi, I badly needed it… said Asad to make her feel good…

and zoya went away…..

and Tanveer smirked on her success to bash Zoya in font of Asad.

After dinner, Asad signaled zoya. she made an excuse to sleep early and said no body to disturb her…

She went to her room… in the room, she placed pillows on the bed covering with blanket , so that Tanveer may not find about her absence….

Tanveer took Asad out for a walk… After five minutes, zoya called Asad… Asad pretended to go for an urgent meeting and went to his car where zoya was already waiting for him….

on the way….

Mr. Khan, ye Tanveer aapki kuch jyada hi achi friend hai?

yes, she is my childhood friend….any problem?

Na…No Mr. Khan… just asking for knowledge…..

after that she kept quite for the complete way….

As they reached there, they arranged camera near the grave where skeleton was found, fixed microphone …. Ayaan checked the main door and arranged it with a strong rope almost invisible so that it may open and close without touching by just pulling the rope….and Zoya dressed herself as spirit wearing white saree with a white wig and quite dark white makeup on her face…. as she came out Ayaan shouted……… bhoot.. bhoot…… all of three laughed together…. infect Ayaan and zoya's thinking level was same so their bonding was getting stronger while Asad was looking on new side of zoya… her interference in every task that used to irritate him, now he was liking how much she was helping him in every thing……

As everything was set.. ayaan went outside with door arrangement, Asad was handling his laptop to which camera and microphone was connected… and zoya was hidden somewhere in the hall waiting for Razia…. it was quite dark and light was kept quite dim so that no one can see anyone else… while zoya,Asad and ayaan were connected through microphone…

It was Twelve at midnight, when Ayaan saw Razia at the door, as she tried to open the door, Ayaa pushe dit with rope… and door opened itself… as she entered, Ayaan closed the door behind her….. it was the first point when Razia got afraid….

She went in the hall and asked for somebody…. koi hai? kisne bulaya hai mujhe?

Asad played high laughing sound through microphone, she was afraid a bit more, she turned to go back… and it was time for zoya to appear….

As zoya Appeared , she called her… Razia….

Razia turned back and afraid a lot….

Kon ho tum, kya chahti ho? Razia screamed…

Main? Pehchana nahi mujhe? Main wahi hun… Satrah saal pehle …. yhan jisko tumne…… hahaha… zoya left sentence intentionally…..

NNN…Naadira? Razia whispered……

Zoya was shocked on listening the name….but controlled herself…..

Ye kaise ho sakta hai? tum to mar chucki ho…. Razia pleaded….

Wo to sirf mera jism tha… par meri rooh……. wo to aaj bh jinda hai… aur mujhe shanti tabi milegi jab main apne katil ko maar dungi…..

Nahi… mujhe mat maro… Maine tumhe mara tha kyonki tum mere aur mere pati ke beech aa rhi thi…. wo sirf mera tha….. aur tum use wapis hasil karna chahti thi…… mere kehne pe hi factory ko aag lgayi gyi thi ta ke tumhari laash bhi na mile….. nahi mujhe chod do..

nahi… main tumhe nahi jane dungi… zoya went very close to Razia that's he could see her face….

As Zoya saw her face, she was a bit shocked and felt as room was revolving…. she was controlling herself….

Razia ran to back door….Zoya was about to fall, when Asad felt so, he asked Ayaan to open the door and let razia go and he himself ran to hold Zoya who was about to fall….

As Asad reached zoya, she fell into his arms unconscious…..

Asad was shocked…. he picked zoya, brought her to backside the hall,put her in his lap and sprinkled water on her face….

Zoya got up with fear clutching his collar badly… Mr. Khan… that lady…..

What happened Zoya… are you ok? he caressed her face…. … zoya got up from Asd's lap ….Ayaan also reached there..

what happened? asked Ayaan…..

She felt unconscious….. Asad said while zoya was in tears…..

Mr. Khan, I think I know that lady…..

and that made you so much afraid? you must have seen her somewhere….

no Mr. Khan…. I think she is related to my past…..

Precap: Zoya's past revealed……

So hope you all like it... this is my last update of this week, next will be on Monday... do hit like button and leave your feedback... that is precious for me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part.
a filmy plan but it worked.
so nadira was zoya's ammi.
cont soon.
p.s.-I said asya are married after reading the prologue. I know that is coming track.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshilksg

nice part.

a filmy plan but it worked.
so nadira was zoya's ammi.
cont soon.
p.s.-I said asya are married after reading the prologue. I know that is coming track.


Thanks dear... yup it was a filmy plan but i tried to justify it by giving all details how door opened and how they recorded with scientific touch keeping away all the superstitions... next part will be on monday...
Edited by jeenia123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

This update was too hilarious. And sad at the same time. Poor Zoya...

Continue soon dear. Waiting for the next.

Love,

Diya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaforlife

This update was too hilarious. And sad at the same time. Poor Zoya...

Continue soon dear. Waiting for the next.

Love,

Diya


Thanks a lot dear... next part will be def sad one but will be my theory if we go by timelines in the show... and i will try to update on Monday...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...precap is more interesting.👍🏼
Thanx for PM dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: titli4love

nice update...precap is more interesting.👍🏼
Thanx for PM dear...


Thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely waiting for zoyas past to b revealed...n thnkz for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: scarletgirl

lovely waiting for zoyas past to b revealed...n thnkz for d pm


thanks dear... i hope you will love next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update :-) loved how Asad took Zoya's side and not Tamveer's

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