#2 Forever Yours-A Swaron FF chp 21 pg 65 28th may'14 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update :-) loved how Sharon was comfortable with him, but I hope SwaRon get together soon :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing... i lyk ashish... sharon is happie nd swayamis jealous nd some wat hrtd also... good going...
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Posted: 12 years ago
firstly sorry for not commenting on previous parts... was busy with my studies and work...

awesome parts... loved it
specially the way u are taking this story... great workšŸ‘
and want to say i like ashishā˜ŗļø
update asap
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a nice update Sneha...liked how you sketched Ashish, and teh way you depicted Sharon's current state of mind, esp fresh and on the rebound from the fact that Swayam has becum beyond her reach...waiting for the next part eagerly😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv

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Such a super awesome update. I really like the Ashish part in it. I first was wishing to slap the guy who she will dating, but now i happy and sad too as she is feeling attracted towards Ashish which i don't wish. I really hope coz of him Swayam understands and Swaron gets together. 😃

Haw, Swayam is super hurt and jealous too! 😊

I know i have bugged you a lot for updating so sorry for that dear! 😳 But kya karun, i love your FF! šŸ˜†

Update next chapter soon and PM me.


I've been waiting for your comment!šŸ˜‰
Awww Thankyou so much.
I know Ashish is that kinda character who you'd start liking. 😃
You'll see what happens. 😃
Awww, no need of sorry and all. It feels great when all of you ask me to update and tell me that you love the FF..😊 If i could, i would update every single day. But right now, it's not possible.

Will update asap. 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey SwthrtšŸ¤—

I am really late...m sorry for the delay as m inactive here...i loved the update...Ashish seems to be the force which will unite swaron...sharon excited and attracted towards the new guy...swayam..hurt and jealous ...i just loved the way swayam conveyed his hurt...when he said ...sharon is treating him as a piece of trash...i want to sympathize with him but i can't ...i don't like people who can't stand for their love...this FF sharon is my fav ...loving the new twist..and Kriyansh as always...are the best support for sharon...


Lovely update swthrt...😳

Luv
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update!

ashish prt was vry nice!!

i hope coz of him swayam
understands and swaron gets
together!!

swayam is hurt and
jealous too!

kriyaansh are as usual superb!
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
upgrade as soon as possible
luved d upgrade
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update!!!
omg ashish!! i m really happy that sharon is finally smiling, happy for something. but swayam in pain well itz important for him to know what sharon might be feeling when he was doing alll that!! looking forward to know whatz next.
ps: sorry for late reply

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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 17:

Recap: Sharon/Ashish date.

As the days went by, Sharon and Ashish grew closer than ever. They shared everything. But Sharon still didn't tell him about Swayam and her. She made Ashish meet her parents, Rey,Kria and Swayam and Preetha too, since they were there. She didn't know why, but she always found Preetha whenever she went to Kria's house. Swayam was always welcome there, though, on account of being old friends and all.

Finally, it was Christmas. Sharon loved setting up the Christmas tree and getting gifts for her friends and everything. This year she got a gift for Ashish too. They had to go to the Christmas party at one of her friend's place that night. She went to Kria's first and asked if she wanted any help. After helping her out with few things, Sharon returned back home. She got a call from Ashish. They spoke on the phone a lot these days. All of them were first coming to Sharon's house and then leaving together.

Finally, it was evening and everyone came. She had to invite Swayam and Preetha too, so she did. Rey and Kria were the first to come, then Swayam and Preetha. Ashish came in later. "Hey.." he said, hugging Sharon right in front of everyone. Sharon didn't mind that at all because Rey and Kria were family and Swayam and Preetha, well why should she care about them? "Your late." Sharon said to Ashish. "I'm sorry'I'll make it up to you, I promise." Ashish said. Sharon smiled at him.

Someone knocked on the door after a few seconds. "Who else did you invite? Dad and Mom aren't in town." Kria said. "I invited Lily too." Sharon said. "Oh okay.. she's really sweet." Kria said. "I know." Sharon said, opening the door. Lily hugged Sharon. "Merry Christmas darls!!" Lily said, and handed her present to Sharon. "Thanks. Merry Christmas to you too. Here's your present." Sharon said, and handing the one which Sharon had gotten for her. Everyone talked a lot and the exchanged presents and then it was time to leave for the party.

Since it was an informal party, Sharon just wore a sweater, Jeans and Uggs since it was cold outside. The other girls had worn similar clothing. They all left for the party. Sharon and Kria met a lot of school and college friends , the guys did too.

They had a lot of fun. There was music, they played a lot of fun games and talked. It was pretty much like the one they had when they were back in school. Someone shouted "Merry Christmas." Sharon and her usual group were sitting together. Slow music began but no one was in the mood to dance. All they wanted to do was talk and keep talking. "Will you dance with me, Sharon?" Ashish asked. "Sure. Why not?" Sharon asked, and went with him and they started dancing. Swayam was getting very jealous but he wasn't showing it because he wanted to show that he had moved on. Preetha pulled Swayam out on the dance floor and he had to go. Rey asked Kria if she wanted to dance but she said no. Lily was already dancing with someone.

"This is a fun Christmas party." Ashish said. "Yea, it is. Especially since it is very informal and you can have a lot of fun. " Sharon said. The lights dimmed a little. "Sharon, I really like you. You're the most amazing person I've ever met." Ashish said. Sharon blushed at his comment. "I really like you too." Sharon said. Ashish moved a little closer to her. Sharon could feel butterflies in her stomach. Ashish leaned in and kissed her. Sharon didn't object but she actually liked it. She didn't want to stop. But neither of them realized that they were kissing under the mistletoe. It was Swayam who saw it and he was boiling. How could she? It always used to be me, kissing her under the mistletoe. Oh'chuck it. It's your fault, Swayam. You chose to leave her. Now let her live happily. What the hell is your problem? But he had to go from there. He couldn't see them together. Atleast Sharon used to argue with him before, but now she didn't even turn to look at him whenever the gang hung out. It was as if he was invisible to her. Now, who does that to your ex-boyfriend? "Hey, what's wrong?" Preetha asked. "Nothing. Nothing at all." Swayam said. "Okay'.omg! Look at Ashish and Sharon. Under the mistletoe. I've never been kissed under the mistletoe. Does that mean..?" Preetha started, but Swayam didn't let her continue. "Hey, It's just a myth. Nothing will happen if you don't kiss under the mistletoe. I don't know who made this thing up. It's ridiculous." Swayam said. "Omg'you are a non-believer of all these fun things'" Preetha said, getting a bit annoyed. I was a believer. Till now. I need to get out of here. Swayam looked at Sharon and Ashish once again. They were slow dancing with Sharon's head on his chest. Swayam couldn't take it anymore. "I'll be back in a while." Swayam said, and rushed out. He never thought that he would feel this bad when Sharon was with some other guy. He was sitting out for a long time when his friends came and joined him. "Hey dude'why are you sitting here?" Rey asked. "Nothing..i just needed some air. Is it time to leave?" Swayam asked. "Yea, Swayu'it is. Let's leave." Preetha said. "Don't call me Swayu. How many times do I have to tell you?" Swayam asked. "Fine. Let's leave SWAYAM." Preetha said. "We'll leave right now. Lily'll go home directly from here. Ashish and Sharon are already waiting in the car." Kria said. All of them went to Rey and Kria's house. Ashish went home from there and didn't stay while the other three did.

Sharon made Hot chocolate for all of them. Swayam was very happy drinking it because Sharon made the best Hot chocolate ever. But he was very upset too because Sharon didn't even give the cup to him. He had to take it himself while she gave it to Rey, Kria and Preetha.

Note from author: Their conversation will have French. Please http://translation.babylon.com/french/ open the website ,translate and read if you don't know French. It's just for fun. So have fun!!!! 😃

p.S. BHAVNAON ko samjho, GRAMMAR ko nahi (Stupid Translator site. It doesn't know proper English) [SPECIAL thanks to Sowmya(Joshua_Tanha) for telling me about the wrong translation]

"Why are you doing this?" Swayam asked.

"What are you talking about?" Sharon asked.

"You know exactly what I'm talking about." Swayam said, a bit irritated.

"Aucun je ne fais pas. Pourquoi ne me dites-vous pas ?" Sharon said.

"Why are you talking in French?I don't know French." Preetha said.

That is why we are talking in French. "I used to tutor him in French when we were in school. I'm just checking to see if he remembers." Sharon said.

"Parle Swayam." Sharon said.

"Ah, ainsi vous ne connaissez rien. Ne feignez pas. Vous tes celui circulant embrassant d'autres personnes." Swayam said.

"Pourquoi vous inquitez-vous ? Vous ne m'aimez pas. Et thankgod vous m'avez dit cela. Je suis heureux de passer." Sharon said.

"Je ne m'inquite pas bien. Je suis trs heureux en ce moment, merci." Swayam said.

"Voix pour, votre accueil. Par la manire, votre la personne qui circule brisant les coeurs des personnes, vous ne vous rappelez pas ?" Sharon said.

"Je ne veux pas avoir cette conversation." Swayam said.

"Vous tiez la personne qui l'a commenc." Sharon said.

"Rey, I'm just going to go kay. Good night." She said, and went to her

room. Swayam was very angry at this behavior.


"Why do you guys keep fighting?"Rey asked Swayam.

"We are not fighting." Swayam said.


"Dude I know French alright." Rey said.

"Yea i know man!" Swayam said. "Okay bye i'm leaving. See you tomorrow. Tell i said bye to Kria too. Come on Preetha." Swayam said, and left.

After dropping PReetha, Swayam took the phone and texted Sharon.

We need to talk. -Swayam.

Sharon was listening to music when her phone beeped.

She read Swayam's message. As much as she wanted to talk to him, she couldn't. Swayam had told her that he didn't love her anymore. Then why should she talk to him?

I don't think there's anything left between us to talk. So NO. -Sharon.

Swayam read the message and his anger increased. He hit the steering wheel with his fist. He wanted to talk to Sharon, and he will. She cannot show so much attitude. Especially not to HIM.


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Heya guys! How you doing? So i finally updated. *pats to myself* Well, this chapter didn't turn out the way i had expected it to. But i hope you guys like it. And sorry for the French part, if you don't like it. It was just so much fun to translate and all, so i did it. 😊 Also to improve my French skills. šŸ˜† Enough about French now. šŸ˜› I think the next update will be after u spam till Page 50. That's not very long right? šŸ˜‰

Till then, Keep reading, comment and Like. Toodles! Au Revoir!

xoxo,

-Sneha.


P.S. Thankyou for all the wonderful comments. I'm sorry for not replying. But your comments mean so much to me. So keep commenting. 😊

Edited by damonelena - 12 years ago

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