FF: Kya aapko Qubool Hai :Last Part, Page-137 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Awesome update :-) loved the last AsYa scene and also how Zoya was jealous
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
hey dis ff is really nice. plz cont it n do add me to ur pm list. i'l comment on all da parts after i finish reading dem together.
love,
Nimra.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Ohh its almost like the real one nd more better but i dont like the new entry in the show too lets c wt hppns next...fantastic update waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Awesome update :-) loved the last AsYa scene and also how Zoya was jealous


thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rarepearl

hey dis ff is really nice. plz cont it n do add me to ur pm list. i'l comment on all da parts after i finish reading dem together.

love,
Nimra.


thanks a lot dear... will def pm you when i will update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: scarletgirl

Ohh its almost like the real one nd more better but i dont like the new entry in the show too lets c wt hppns next...fantastic update waiting for the next part...


if we really want story to progress, the new entry was much needed even i didn't like anyone between ASYA but story cannot progress without new entry otherwise, it is finished before start...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc story line... Keep writing ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey all... thanks forliking the previous update but really sad with less response... anyways, here is next chapter...

Part-5

It was the next day morning, when Asad came for the breakfast on dining table, Zoya also came there running from her room and wished good morning excitedly but as usual Asad just nodded even without smile…asad called ammi for breakfast, but it was Tanveer, who started serving him, he passed a smile to her and she shared the same. zoya was feeling jealous on seeing the same…. as she had breakfast, she excitedly said, phuphi, breakfast was too yummy today…… just loved it…

dilshad smiled…. ye to Tenveer ne banaya tha…

Thanks Tanveer, said Zoya with faded smile…

ji shukriya…. she said…

Tanveer, food was really tasty, I just loved it, Asad said….

Zoya was feeling ignored by Asad when he talked to Tanveer , so she was almost quite….

Zoya, everything ok? asked Nazma…

yup, why she asked…

nahi, wo aaj tumne koi shayari nahi sunayi na? nazma smiled….

yes nazma, everything is fine, bus packing karne lagi thi wapsi ke liye…

on listening asad's hand stopped for a moment… finally he said…. but Miss Farukhi, your work has not finished yet….

but I don't have any other option Mr. Khan, I will have to leave by day after tomorrow….

Kaisa Task? suddenly Tanveer asked….

Wo…. Asad was about to speak…

nothing,it was something personal… zoya said and left the table….

Asad could feel tension in her voice. He finished the breakfast and went to his room for picking up files, he received a call from his secretary for a meeting after one hour, but he had to go to court for hearing, so he postponed his meeting in the afternoon when he saw door of zoya's room was closed… he knocked the door, but she didn't came…. he slowly pushed the door, it was open, he went inside and saw, zoya was laying on the bed and she was weeping…he went by her side, hesitatingly placed his hand on zoya's shoulder…. Miss Farukhi…

Zoya got up… Mr. Khan , you here? she said while wiping her tears…

what happened?

nothing … just wanted to redevelop that snap but could not do it properly…. and now my wish to meet my father will be incomplete…she started weeping again but wiping her tears… when dilshad and Tanveer came there…

Tanveer said: Asad , I want to go to my old house, will you please take me there….

while dilshad went to Zoya and wiped her tears asking what happened…

asad thought for a moment, called her secretary and cancel all his appointments for next two days… Zoya was shocked to listen how much Tanveer matter to Asad while tanveer was very happy...

Ok, lets go miss Farukhi… we will first go to court and then we will finish your task…

what? both zoya and tanveer were shocked….

Asad, I thought you are taking me along…. said tanveer….

Tanveer, you will be here for long yet but miss farukhi has only two days and her work is quite important… I am sorry…

Tanveer didn't say anything just gave a faded smile while zoya was in tears…. and jumped on the bed in happiness, seeing Asad held her head thinking no chance of improvement in this girl….

As Asad and Zoya into the car, Asad called Ayaan and asked him to reach at court first….

At court Asad gave statement that he was just mistaken as he saw Mr. Rashid Khan there saw the skeleton… so he took back his FIR, Rashid was freed from all the blames…..

All were happy on listening, while Asad went into the corridor outside, … rashid came to Asad… while zoya too ran after them…

Asad beta….

Mr. Rashid khan, I did not do it for your sake, I did for justice…. I had proof that you are innocent, that's why I did it…

Asad beta will you not forgive me for my mistake….

leaving us alone was not a mistake, that was your plan and if you were innocent, why did you not tell to ammi, she was your best support na? why did you lie always… infect Mr. Rashid Khan, you are a spineless person, who can't stand for himself, how will he stand by others…

saying this, Asad left the place and went to his car…. Zoya who was standing behind them followed Asad…. As she reached there, Asad was sitting in the car , zoya too came inside the car……

Mr. Khan, you left me alone there… but I am happy for you, finally you took right decision…

he didn't reply…..

Mr. Khan… …… you know my appi always says I am strong one, I never show my feelings to anyone but don't know how I open up with you always…whenever you are there with me, I speak everything to you, may be I see a friend in you, that I never get in my life with whom I can share everything….. but the thing is am I your friend too?

she slowly placed her one hand on his arm…. Asad picked his face above… zoya could see tears in his eyes…she slowly picked her hand and touched Asad's face, Asad placed her head on zoya's shoulder taking her into hug… zoya too responded to his hug…. for the first time, Asad cried to his heart in front of someone…..

Suddenly Asad's phone rang and he and zoya parted, it was Ayaan…

Ayaan, come to lake side… same place, its urgent…. Said Asad and cut the call…. Zoya was quite for moments… when Asad started the car…

Mr. Khan…. finally zoya broke the silence….

humm… Asad said without looking at her…

why don't you forgive your Abbu? when you know he left you people just for your safety seventeen years ago…

its too easy to say Miss Farukhi… he left us when we had nothing… I was eight years and nazma just one year old… ammi too was at home, he never turned back to look at us, how we survived…. how ammi struggled for us…. if he was so much innocent,he could tell ammi everything… or at least he could try to make us understand…. no, I can't….

but Mr. Khan….

I just ask you one thing Miss Farukhi… Asad cut her in between….

yes?

you came here alone to find about your abbu na?

yes…

but will you be able to forgive him if you come to know, he knew you were alive but he never searched for you?

zoya was stunned on listening the question….

he left you when your ammi died and you were alone and just three years old… he made you orphan and never even once came to see you…. you don't even know his name but are still searching for him… but will you be able to forgive him if you find he is living happy life here with another family and has even forgot about you?

zoya was all sad and thinking hard on listening…. he just bowed her head down…

your silence tells everything Miss Farukhi…. you are here because you have some hope that your father thinks you are not alive that's why he didn't search for you… but my abbu knew na we are alive, could not he come once to see us? but he never tried…. today what I did, I did for my ammi only…. and I will definitely find out, who was there behind the whole planning after that doll factory murder as well as why he planned Mr. Rashid in that case…..

In the mean time they reached lake side… Ayaan was already there… as they got out of the car…. Ayaan hugged asad and thanked him for getting their father released….. ayaan also thanked zoya and both shook hand…

Zoya, I thought, you will not be able to convince bhai jaan, but pehlibaar koi takkar ka milahai, i mean mili hai...…. laughed ayaan….

ayaan, I too thought till now, you are brother of Mr. Khan…. and both Ayaan and Zoya laughed giving hi five to each other while Asad smiled….

when zoya received a call from her jiju and she went at a small distance…

Ayaan teased Asad…. Bhaijaan… agar asi ladki ghar mein guest ho to bahar jane ki jarurat hi nahi hai…

shut up Ayaan… and don't even think so about zoya, I mean… miss farukhi….

kyon bhai jaan? apko pasand hai kya?bhabhijaan bnayoge kya meri? ayaan again teased asad….

Asad punched Ayaan, please… she is nice girl but she is not of my type…. infect she is quite missfit for my family…..

ahaan… to bhai main chance maar lun….

Asad showed him anger when Zoya returned back…. it was jiju… he was worried about my return….

Zoya aap ja rhi hain? ayaan asked…

yes, I will have to, mera visa expire ho rha ha…. day after tomorrow… so I will have to leave….

to hum appko rok lete hain… nikah kar lijiye humse aur permanent visa le liziye India ka… ayaan joked..

shut up ayaan, tumhe to har cheez majak lagti hai… said Asad in anger… while zoya punched ayaan badly…

sorry bhai jaan,I was just joking to solve zoya's problem….

Ayaan maine isi liye tumhe bulaya hai… you have to help us to find this person…. you know much more about bhopal… Asad showed him faded picture of zoya, her mother and someone else with them….

but this picture is not clear….

Yes Ayaan, I tried to redevelop it… and made it little bit clear… zoya showed the picture to him in her tab….

Ayaan look d the picture carefully… bhaijaan, mujhe ye shakal jani pehchani lag rhi hai…

what? both zoya and Asad were shocked…

yes… I think I have seen this picture somewhere else too….

try to remember Ayaan, I will be quite thankful, please…. pleaded zoya…

I think I have seen a long ago but not able to remind… said Ayaan after some time…anyways give it to me , I will check it today itself….he took the copy of picture. by the way bhaijaan, you said na, you had a proof which proved abbu to be free, whats that…

yes ayaan, I have Asad brought the doll from his car… this is about Mr. Rashid khan but don't know who s it…. Asad pressed the doll and ayaan shocked on listening the voices…. Bhaijaan, these voices are of Mamu and mumani….

what? Asad was shocked…. this means they made plan against Mr. Rashid Khan….

this means the murder was done by these two and these forced to fire the doll factory to your abbu? asked zoya….

now we need to bring main culprit in front of all…. give it to me… I will show it to all…. said ayaan…

no ayaan…. you will not be able to prove anything with this doll… this just proves your abbu to be innocent but this doesn't prove them culprit… said zoya…

we need to think something big to catch them red handed…. said Asad…

but how? asked zoya…..

I have a plan…. said ayaan…

both zoya and asad looked towards him…

operation pyasi aatma…… Ayaan smiled… same was zoya.. while asad was shocked on listening both's stupid plan……….

Precap:- Razia scared on seeing an atma in the doll factory...…

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thats fine ..actualy i had read the previous 4 parts n a go jst an hour bak. U came with dis part... I am stil wanderng n IF since morng..i cant get dis asya stuf out of ma head. I am havng xm 2mrw stil i cant stog being here
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ksen

great.continue soon


thanks dear...will try to continue soon...

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