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Sakina

@arshi_sunshine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#671

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Loved The Update...
Thanks sooo much for the long chapter...
It was waiting...

Edited by arshi_sunshine - 13 years ago

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#672

Wow...wow...wow... i was totally on d edge reading d update... it reminded me alot about the earlier days of ipk... u totally did justice to d scenes... recreated d beauty of magnificiently..!!! Arnavs arrogance was at heights... and how does arnav know shyam manohar jha? Very well watever be d reason khushi defntly needs to give him a piece of her mind..buaji should never had said something like this to her.. d update was faaabulous!!!! U have yet again cast another spell and

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#673

Am sorry... i resd twice.. sorryyy

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#674

Eagerly waiting, the ring scene was a favourite scene of mine in the serial, cant wait to read yours xx

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#675

This is awesome..
The update may be late but the content and length made up for that.😊
There were few similarities with the show like the ring is precious for you, aapko kya farak padta hai but then it was different the way you carried on with the egoistical Arnav Singh Raizada.
Gosh how can he be so bossy to order her to break her engagement?? He doesn't know Khushi Kumari Gupta much then, does he think she will comply to his whims and fancies just because he wants her to😆
He had the audacity to throw the ring out of the window????
Seeing his dress change tactic I remember Khushi's dialogue during resignation times "Aap haarte bahut bura hain Mr. Raizada"😆
Aww you used one of my fav dialogue from that episode "Bhaad me jaye aap aur bhaad me jaye aapki naukri"😛
Stars calmed one tonight but gave no solace to another!! She is confused why she still wants to go to AR and he doesn't like his confused state if she will come next day or not. Aww. so now he is thinking to use his charm over her.😳
So she is back and now Arnav Singh Raizada knows the full name of his fiancee.. Me superlikes😊
This was a fabulous update Juhi. Totally loved it..
I don't mind if you update only thrice a week if the chapters are so damn good😊

Edited by aquagal - 13 years ago

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Take_That

@Take_That

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Posted: 13 years ago

#676

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I was like what's happening when I read the starting of this update! What's with the cliff and all? But then when u explained it further, I got it! Thrilling, exciting and at the same time quite scary- maybe that's how Khushi feels when she is around Arnav!

Oh my heart goes out for Khushi here! She is feeling so helpless! She knows there is something between the two of them but she doesn't want to acknowledge it! She is committed to someone else and she cannot think of walking away from that commitment!

And I hated Arnav in this update! He is taking advantage of her situation by bringing forth the penalty clause of the contract and handing over clothes which are not acceptable to her. He threw her ring.😲 Now what will Khushi do?

Yeah I am being careful when I say I hate ASR in THIS update! Another update which talks about Arnav's pov will turn the situation 180⁰, I know that!😊

Arnav is just not ready to admit that she is engaged!

Khushi knew she was caught off guard when he questioned if she is into the engagement whole- heartedly.

I love the concern NK has for Khushi...

The engagement news breaking scene to Arnav and that almost suhag raat scenes have been blended so well in this update! There is no reason to be nervous coz this chapter has come out so nicely!😊

Now about the last part of this chapter, was it Arnav who spoke about SMJ and NK who questioned it again?

Updating thrice a week is fine!

Thank You!

Edited by Nexus_13 - 13 years ago

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#677

The introductory lines were simply superb..loved the way you have portrayed Khushi 's inner feelings that moment

Loving the pace of the story...so Arnav wants her and would do anything to have her...

Looking forward to the next chapter..

Edited by apara_loves_IPK - 13 years ago

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Katelyn

@Katelyn

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Wow, I really love your long update! This is so well written that I crave for more! Arnav is so arrogant here and super confident too! I love that in a man! 😳 Loved the romance here! ❤️ He sure made Khushi question herself! You did a nice job in describing Khushi's turmoil! What a cliff hanger! I'm anxious to know what's going to happen next!

Juhi, you did an awesome job on this chapter!

You have nothing to worry about because you've never disappointed us!! I'm happy with whatever time you have for us to update just as long as you continue with this captivating SS!!

Edited by Katelyn - 13 years ago

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Newbiesoapfan

@Newbiesoapfan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#679

Wonderful update Juhi.. he knows the name! Hope Shyam is married to anji!

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nnhk

@nnhk

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#680

3pm here . jalebi chai and a new chapter from you. ahhh!

i read the whole chapter thrice and all i can say is i wish the ring scene in the episode was exactly like what you have wrote and that Anjali had not disturbed them and Arnav and Khushi would have had the same conversation.

Juhi, i miss our chats and wish we could do them more often but i know how busy you must be now. vacation mode off ho gaya hai na :)

waiting to see how arnav knows shyam