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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

Originally posted by: iamursforever
Aww!..poor rey!..
Loved it:)
Thnkz for the pm:)
Cont. Soon:)

thanks dear...i will...

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BeingFoodie

@BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

hi guys...i m again with an update...i know tomorrow is my exam but i m ready for it...sab kuch padh liya tha to socha ek update hi de du...so here it is...enjoy...

sh:u heard right rey...yug is not her son...

rey:so...what is the truth??(teary eyes)

sh:taani found yug near the tree and she took him with her and now she love him a lot as he is her own son.

sw:wow...so sweet of her...

rey:means...she doesnt love anyone...sharon i love her so much...but kya uske sath jo vihan ne kiya uske baad vo mujhse pyar karegi??i mean kya vo phir se pyar pe trust karegi???

sh:rey ...u have to made her to fall in love with u...she believe in love i know...just vo khud se ye baat kehne se darti hai...kahi phir se usse dhoka na mile...

rey:i will never cheat her sharon...

swaron:we know it rey...u love her so much...

at taani's apartment:

taani and her dad come in the hall and sit...taani is lost in her thoughts...

pa:taani...kya hua beta.??yug ro kyu raha tha??

ta:(burst out crying and hug her dad).

pa:taani...shhh...ese rote nahi beta...kya baat hai...kyu ro rahi ho???

taani broke the hug and said:p...pa...papa...vo...

taani's dad get up and give her a glass of water...

pa:pehle paani pi lo beta...

taani drink water...

pa:ab batao ...kya hua??

ta:papa...vo...aaj yu...yug ne vo baat boli jo usne kabhi nahi kaha...

pa:esa kya kaha yug ne???

ta:us...usne kaha ki...ki...he want his d...d..dad...

pa:kya??

ta:ha papa...yug want his dad...ab me kya bolu usse??

sharon's apartment:

sh:lets go rey...hum taani ke ghar chalte hai...

rey:ha thik hai chalo...

swaron and rey reach taani's apartment.

they ring the bell.

ta:who is this now???

she wipe her tears but her face is still red...

taani open the door and saw shareyam there...

rey saw her red face and feel pain in his heart...

ta:aap sab...

sh:where is yug??

ta:he is sleeping ...come inside...

all come inside and sit on sofa.

ta:shar tum yaha par...

sh:ha vo bas yug ko dekhne...

ta:ab vo thik hai...so raha hai ...

sw:but sharon...why yug called u mom???

sh:yug ese hi bulata hai...he call me mom and taani mumma...

rey:u know what...yug and i meet in park everyday...

shani:what???

ta:so u r his friend???

rey:yes...

sh:friend???

ta:yes...yug keh raha tha uska koi friend hai jo roz uske sath park me khelta hai...

sw:rey...me nahi janta tha tu park me khelne jata hai ...

rey:ha wo jab se yug se dosti hui tab se jata hu...

just then yug wake up and came outside.

he come and directly sat in taani's lap and hug her...

ta:yug...

yug:hmmm...mumma...pehle meri baat suno...

ta:(wrapping her hands around him)ha bolo shona...kya baat hai...

yug:yug is hungry...yug ko khana khana hai...

taani smiled and said:aww...shona...abhi serve karti hu...

yug get down from her lap and taani go into kitchen...

just then yug saw rey...

yug:mummaaa...mummaaa...

taani heard yug's scream and ran to him...there is fear on her face...she bent down to him and said:yug...kya hua???

yug:are mumma...yug ko kuch nahi hua...

ta:to phir aap chillaye kyu??

yug:mumma...yug ko bas itna batana tha ki ye dekho...ye mere park wale friend hai...

taani sighed and said:to esa bolo na...ese chillaya to me kitna dar gayi...

yug:of o mumma...aap bhi na...

yug to rey:friend aap yaha kya kar rahe hai???

rey bent down and said:wo kya hai na aaj aap se mila nahi to socha aap se mil lu...

yug:sacchi...aap yug se milne aaye hai???

rey:yes...

and yug hug him ...

all smile at yug...taani also...and rey smiled seeing taani smiling...

ta:ok me dinner serve karti hu...rey sharon and swayam...aap sab bhi aaj yaha par dinner karenge ...

rey:par taani...

yug:no...aap sab yaha pe dinner karenge...ye yug ka order hai...

all agree with him and all sat on dinning table...

taani serve dinner to all and she also sat...all start eating but yug is talking constantly...

yug(to dadu):dadu aap ko pata hai...friend na roz mere sath park me khelte hai...phir hum bahot masti karte hai...phir friend yug ko icecream bhi dilate hai...aur...

ta:yug...first finish your dinner than talk...

yug:ok mumma...

while eating yug is talking with rey and smilling...taani is happy that yug is happy. . . . .

all finish their dinner.yug is in the hall.

swayam is thinking something...

ta:swayam...aap kya soch rahe ho???

sw:ha vo apni sister k bare me soch raha hu...

hearing this sharey become sad and look at each other...

ta:aap ki sister???

sw:ha vo bhi ese hi khana banati thi mere liye...

ta:banati thi...???

sw:ha...vo...she is no more...and a tear drop roll down on his cheek...

taani feel so sad for him. she know pain of losing some loveable one...

she go near him and wipe his tear and said:aap mujhe apni sister hi samjiye...

hearing this swayam couldnt control him self and hug taani...

sharey 's eyes also become teary...

taayam broke the hug...

ta:swa...

sw:no swayam taani...call me bhai...

ta:bhai...

swayam kiss her forehead and gave a quick hug to her and said:thats like my sister ...

pa:and my daughter...ok ok chalo jaldi hall me varna yug naraz ho jayega...

all:ha chaliye...

all go in the hall and sat with yug...

yug:mom...yug aap se naraz hai...

sh:are...what happen to my boy???

yug:aap yug ke liye chocolate nahi layi na...

sh:ooww...chocolate...vo to me layi hu...

yug:what...sachhi???where is it???yug ko chahiye...

sh:in the fridge...

yug ran to the kitchen and take a big chocolate bar and came back in the hall...

he gave chocolate to all.

after some time...

rey:swayam...ab hume chalna chahiye...

sw:yes dude...lets go...

yug become sad hearing this...

all stand up and just going when yuh held rey's hand...

rey:kya hua yug??

yug:aap ja rahe ho???

rey:ab...jana to padega na yug...

yuh:kyu??aap yaha kyu nahi reh sakte???

dadu:beta...

yug:dadu...aap bhi samjaiye na ki ye yahi ruk jaye...

ta:yug...unko apne ghar jana hai na ...

yig:no...aap bas yahi rukenge...aap...bas ...yug want u as dad...

all are shocked hearing this ...

ta:yug beta...

yug:no mumma...i want papa aur friebd hi mere papa hai...

ta:yu...but rey stop her.

rey(to yug):yes yug...i m your papa ...

yug:sachhi???aap mere papa??his eyes become wet...

rey:yes...i m your papa...

yug hug him tight and said:p...pa...papa...

rey take him in his hands and go in taani's room and said:aap abhi so jao...papa abhi aate hai...

yug:ok...

rey went in the hall.

ta:rey aap ye...

rey:taani...me jo kar raha hu vo thik hai...

ta:but rey...

rey:taani...i will pretend as yug's father...tumne dekha na vo kitna khush hai...

pa:ha beta...vo thik keh raha hai...

swaron:yes taani...yahi thik hai.

ta:thik hai...

sh:ok taani...hum chalte hai...

ta:ok sharon bye...bye bhai...

sw:bye taani...

swaron goes from there and taani's dad also goes in his room.now taarey are alone.

ta:rey...

rey:hmmm...

ta:thank u so much...

rey:anything for yo...

taani shocked hearing this ...she looked in his eyes...

rey:yo...yo...yug...anything for yug(in his mind:and you too...i just love u both so much).

just then yug came there.

yug:papa chalo na...kitni der laga di aap ne...aaj to yug mumma aur papa dono k sath soyega...chalo...he drag both of them with him.

they lie on the bed...yug is in between taarey...holding both 's hand.

yug talk with them sometime and then fell asleep.

as yug become silent...taarey look at him and saw him sleeping peacefully.

they both put their hands on his chest at same time...and both 's hand are on each other...taani's hand is down and rey's hand is on her hand...

both look at each other and llhh between them.

but taani come to her sense and take her hand back.

ta:sorry...vo ...

rey:its ok taani...ab so jao...kal college jana hai...

ta:ha vo me papa ko dekhkar aati hu.

she check her dad and then come back and saw rey and yug sleeping...yug wrap his hands around rey... taani smile at both of them...she cover both with blanket...and bent down to kiss yug...and her hair fall on rey's face...rey can feel her hairs on his face.

taani lie on bed and close her eyes.

rey open his eyes and admire her sleeping beauty and then sleep hugging yug.

finally done with this long update...plz like and comment...

precap.

little taarey romance.

taarey and gang dancing in RH.

vihan call taani.

rey's answer to vihan.

Edited by Dipu_taarey - 12 years ago

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Ayesha

@Ayesha05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#793

Omg luvd it
Deeepu u r awsum
Nd alll the best for exam
Taarey ke baare m mat sochna exam ke waqt...hehehe

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love_taarey

@love_taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#794

awesome yr

i was waiting 4 ur update dear

continue soon😊

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Neha

@miss_neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#795

Awesome part as always, i just love all of your stories, u r soo creative!!!! rey as yugs father, how sweet and also the precap looks damn interesting, taani rey n yug make the perfect family, truly proves u dont need blood relations for a family, love is the most important thing!!

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Archana

@Archi_Taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

Awsome n thnks for pm n ya exam me b tarrey k bare me mat sochna 😆

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samiha

@samiha_taarey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#797

awsome update... luvd taayam's nd reyug part... both r very emotional nd sweet... thnx di 4 the update nd best of luck 4 ur xms...:)

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bhagyashree

@bags07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#798

hey dips loved the update it was so gud esp reyug part...loved cute yug when he said he wants rey as papa..awesm n precap is intersting..pls update soon😆

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dh19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#799

loved it dear.
awesome and emotional update.
Rey is so much in love with taani.
loved Taayam as a bro -sis .
Rey as a yug's father ...
thanks for the pm and all the best for ur exam.