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Posted: 13 years ago
a big thanks to all those who have liked my updates:

and thanks everyone for such lovely comments😳

so without wasting anytime here's next chapter😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 6A

"This number has been bought in Delhi Sir, by a certain person named Ashok Shawat!" Shree said after a few minutes.

"Ashok Shawat?" Arjun said, turned towards Riya and asked her to bring Aisha in the conference room.

They all waited till Aisha came, while Arjun had a feeling that something was amiss. This sounded so easy for someone to let himself be caught by sending a MMS from his mobile. "Just how come can someone be this stupid?" Arjun thought to himself.

When Aisha came, all were very worried for her, but they had to ask her about this Ashok Shawat. But since no one had the courage to ask her anything, Arjun took that matter in his hands.

"Aisha, do you know of any Ashok Shawat?" Arjun asked.

Aisha stared confusedly at him, and nodded a no.

"The one who sent you this MMS, it was from his mobile!" Arjun clarified to Aisha.

"Ok, so we'll leave for Delhi right now, we have to catch this Ashok," Rathore said.

"But doesn't it sound too easy?" Arjun said not believing that it could be easy.

"Dekho Rawte, we dont have much time to waste!" Rathore said a bit irritated.

"But Rathore, just think about it yourself! How can someone be so stupid to send a murder evidence through his own mobile!" Arjun persisted.

"I agree, but apart from him, we dont have any other clue!"Rathore said, "Ok, Chotu will go with me to Delhi, while you people try to find more clues about Reena's murder!" and they both went away.

Arjun turned towards Aisha and said, "I know it's very hard, but we need to ask you some questions!"

"I'm ok Sir, i'll try my best to answer every question!" Aisha said with courage.

"This question sounds very typical, but do you have any enemies? Anyone who hate you so much to kill your sister?" Arjun asked.

Aisha flinched, when she heard about her sister, but this time she controlled her tears and answered, "In this profession, we only get enemies sir! I dont know how many people, criminals, i have sent behind the bars."

"Still, can you please prepare a list of everyone who has a grudge against you! This will take time, but i'm sure we'll finally catch that person!"

The whole remaining day was spent in preparing Aisha's suspects, and cross-checking them. It was almost midnight, when Arjun declared everyone to go back home now.

"We'll continue tomorrow. By then Rathore would have met that Ashok and got some answers!" Arjun said.

Everyone turned to look at Aisha, wondering where she'll go this night. They didnt feel like leaving her alone. Riya assured everyone that she'll take Aisha at her place and wont leave her alone at all. The next morning, when everyone reached the office, Rathore was there telling them that the Ashok's lead was nothing but bogus. Someone had stolen his mobile, and sent that MMS, Rathore had already verified everything. Right now they didnt have any clue.

The next month passed with Reena's funeral and other rituals. Despite searching for different clues, they hadn't got much of a lead. They had also interrogated that man who had been smitten by Reena in the disco, but it was nothing at all. They had also checked Aisha's list, but most were either still in prison, dead or missing. Still they continued on that path, hoping that the man who killed Aisha's sister must be related at least with this list itself. Arjun and Rathore were getting angrier at their helplessness to catch the murderer. Though they knew Aisha wasn't angry with them, they still felt guilty for failing her. In the meantime, Aisha had gradually accepted her sister's lost, and somehow learnt to live without her. She had also been staying at Riya's place since the past month. Both had become even closer with time. It had been precisely one month since Reena's death now.

Somewhere in another city

It was late at night. A man was enjoying his whisky at a discotheque. Finally after one month of hiding and relaxing, he was going to have his next job. Just last night, he had got a call to come to this disco at 8pm. He had been waiting for one hour, when the waiter suddenly handed him a packet.

"What is this?" he asked to the waiter.

"I dont know. There was a man there who gave me this packet to give to you!" the waiter said and went away.

He emptied his glass, took his packet and left the discotheque. He returned back to his motel, and opened the packet. He was dying with impatience to know who will be his next target.


so how was it?

so who according to you is the next target???

and please excuse me for spelling mistakes😳

Edited by haruhi26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dhinka chika
me first widout pm yay:
loved d concern of team fr aisha.!.
phew arjun ji insticts grt..!!!!!!
case super thrilling di...
hm its very difficult to live widout ur dear ones...
di guess krne se kya fayda lol
target hoga whi jo apne socha h rofl
nice ch di
p.s. huh apne mere os par reply ni kiya maine apka demand pura kr diya..!!!
Edited by Payal_156 - 13 years ago
fly.high thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey the part ws lovely bt u update very late
plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
feeling bad for aishaa😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 !!

is aisha d next target???

update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum update...!!!
loved everyone's concern for aisha...!! feeling bad for aisha..!!!
omg they still haven't been able to track that person...!!!
omg whose the next target...!!!
cant wait for the next part..!!!
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
well maintained thrill...case is interesting...

superb part...

One more target...

Love the way whole team is supporting Aisha..:)

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nyc part!!! Continue soon!! and plzz upload 'love and Deception' and 'the challenge' too
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt dr😊
da case is movng yet no result
mms wala point vi dead end hogaya ...dat ws a stoln mobl😡
riya s realyyy cearng tk aysha 2 hr place
no1 hv da crg 2 ask aysha abt hr enems
bt arjun lead it(hero haina wo to age aega hii)
bt poor aysha😭🤢
month passd
whos ds killr
whts his next trgt??
gtn qurious dr
pllzz updt soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
And u were saying ki If only main suspense hai 😆😆😆 Koi psycho killer hai .. Ayesha ko hurt karana chatha hai and
ETF dead end par hai ...
Kuch toh Choot raha hai yaar
aur mujhe jaldi se next update chaiye plzzz😆😆

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