Os-~Anokha Love~(MG)(Replies-Pg5)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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TREAT FOR YOU ALL BUDDIES, SORRY FOR NOT UPDATING...😃 WILL SOON BE BACK WITH BIG UPDATES LIKE THIS ONE... LONGEST EVER WRITTEN BY ME..HOPE YOU ENJOY IT.. NEXT UPDATE MY DEVIL, ENJOY...😉


~Anokha Love~

"no papa,not now" I said angrily to my father. Come on! I am just 23 years I don't want to get married, this is not the age to get married. I want to fulfill my dreams, the dreams I am seeing from my childhood to be a doctor. I want open my own clinic, and here I am told by my family that I should get married. Oh come on!! This is not done. I am not ready for this all. I can't handle any responsibility and they are telling me to get married. I heard my mother saying "beta, we are not telling you get married, just once see the boy, everything will lie on your decision". I said "oh come on mom!! You think by saying this buttery words you will make me agree!! My answer is a big NO". I quickly said "bye papa, my mom" and kissed their cheek and went away to my college on my dhano.

My dhano, she is my scooty gifted by my father on my 18th birthday. From that time till now its my companion in everything I do. I sat on my dhano and reached my college. I parked my scooty and quickly ran to canteen. Canteen why?? Because my best buddy my pinky darling is found their only at this point of time. i entered the canteen and saw pinky busy eating alloo ke paratha. I reached her and hit her head with my hand softly "jab dekho you are busy eating". Pinky saw me and smiled "geet, you know I am dieting, and getting less food" I quickly said "that I am seeing ". Pinky said "vahi tho, you know I just ate one paratha". I was going to reply when I heard a thud sound,I saw towards the source, other nautanki channel came, pari Pari singhaniya. Daughter of Rajeev singhaniya. She stood up and came to me running "geet have I heard right, pinky just ate one paratha, oh my poor baby". I really sometimes thinks how on earth they are my friend. Pinky and pari hugged each other and started their drama of crying. I said "will you both stop". They saw towards me and smiled. Pinky said "pari dekh na, she don't understand me". Pari said "you are saying true pinky", I said "oh god!!". I quickly said "finished!! Now can we move to our class".

My everyday goes like this only, I woke up mom and dad forcing me to agree to meet the boy and then drama of pinky and pari. Though I get irritated but I love this life, simple and sweet. One day I entered the college and found all busy staring at one direction .i really found that weird. I walked towards source and saw a handsome boy there, as I excepted some "make-up ki dunkaan" girls are trying to woo him. Wait wait , I just said a boy handsome!! Whats happening to me, in my history I just hate boys. I quickly left for canteen and saw pari and pinky gossiping something.i quickly said them "what happen". Pari replied "you know a new boy has joined the college for some day, geet I know pakka, he is my mr dreamy". Oh I forget to tell pari's mr dreamy is every next boy he meet. I quickly said "like last one, principal's sectary " and laughed. Pari said "you are very bad geet, but you know what he is different" and she is again lost.

We ran to our class and took our seat. We were discussing something when I felt someone sitting beside me and quickly saw the person, he was the new boy in the college. pari again fainted,I really wondered how much pari faints, leave it. I saw him smiling at me and said "hey I am maan and you". I said "I am a girl" and saw towards my book, yet another flirty , pari saw me dangerously, I ignored her. She said "hello I am pari, she is pinky and this girl is geet". I saw him smiling at pari, arghh. Wait why I don't like it , pakka in company of pari I am also getting mad. Pari asked him "do you liked the college?". The new boy/ maan replied "its good, I like it". Pari smiled and finally the class started. After the class finished, we all were packing our bag when I heard maan "can I join you?". I was going to say no when idiot pari replied "ya sure, why not".

I was hating it, pari and pinky was talking to him like they haven't talked to any boy!!, we sat on our seat. Pari asked "lets bunk and go to movie". I was going to reply when maan said "studies are more important, movie tho ati jati rahe gi". I really liked him answer, a real admiration captured me. First time I found any boy so logical, it not that boys are logical, but still. Finally college finished, I saw maan waiting for something, I asked him "maan waiting for someone?". I saw a smile on his face a real glow. He replied "I was seeing a taxi". I replied "can I drop you somewhere?". I saw him confused and he replied "okie". He sat on my dhano and I started my dhano. He told me the address . I stop on a signals , a little boy came to me crying for food, I don't have anything with me. I saw maan going towards the shop leaving the scooty. I saw him buying a chocolate for the poor boy, that boy smiled and me too. I really find him good. i dropped him and came back home.

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nest- twist😲

Its an os with just two-three parts

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chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oyye hoyye it seems you are back to writing that is
well this sure was interesting beginning
so maan too has made his entry
but why do i think he could be the boy they want her to see
but i can be wrong there you know
awww itni bhi kya jaldi hai geet ki shaadi ki
so its a routine for geet it seems with the shaadi discussion and then listening to what pinky and pari say
were we feeling tinges of jealousy geet with pari and pinky talking to maan
cant wait to read more
cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Coool


maan joined college fr few days?????


Conti soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely dovely update..cant wait for next update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start
continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome,will wait for ur next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow !! lovely start 😊 interesting 😊 cont sn dear 😃 and plz add me 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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cute and lovely one
awesome
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was so lovely start..
continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely start. maan is same boy whom geets parents wanted her to meet...

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