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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#651

oh such an eventful update dear...
truly adore this stronger version ov akaash...
n of course, i hate u shyam...
awsm chapter...
n thnxxx 4 da pm dear...

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Niks

@NiksAngel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

Wonderful update...loved it...best part of the chapter was the ' weak heart beat' damn was never so happy...i so wish he makes it...even paralyzed form of him is fine...since u hav craved his character in such a lovely manner i wud hate to see him dead...!!!

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Awesome update loved it... Lord Akash hats off to u not only in front of ur paresnt u confessed ur love and ur intention in front of all 👏 Mami behaved as usual what we expected... Loved the answer given by Payal... brave girl... Poor Garima I felt so bad for her when she said my husband will be back soon... Arnav wanted them to stay in castle for there could be better medical help and that too quickly... But I loved that Khushi denied it taking a brave step... Lordy wanted khushi to join their carriage oh bad but Lordy at the moment her father's health is far more important and I know u know it too... hmm the creature I wont guess anything which is it but waiting anxiously to see his transformed form... BTW Lin did he attacked Shashi ji and if yes will he get infected ?

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#654

'ello milady's!!!

Me late as usual!! *sigh*

~~~Updates~~~

OMG lot many thing happened in a single update!!

@Akash... well done mate!! i am proud of you!!

@Manorama... ohh u disappoint me Manno dear!! whatever happened to my hysterical Manno ?while all i got is ...

@Arnav... ya come baby come... yours was the most awaited here ...

@Payal... That was BRAVADO!! i love it!! muuaahh!!

@Arnav...@Khushi... *sigh* you continue your 'romance' amidst all this as well!!?

@Guptas... ohh!! why such wretched turn of events had to be bestowed upon such good souls?

@Khushi... Do i love you or what? Oh Hell YES!

@Arnav... what are you upto? y mellowed down suddenly? not that i dont know but u looking out for her has confused me... whats the point in you doing all these? when all you are gonna do is lash out on her again given a chance or not for reasons known to u alone!!

@Khushi ...@Payal... ohh babies!! i really hope things are not as bad i am forced to think!!

@winged creature... had fun eh?

@Lin... a terrific update!! really!!

Thanks hun!!

~Leena

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sansu

@sansu

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#655

hi!!!

first of all, how are you dear?..

now, coming to the update,

"The butler Rahim Chacha waked to the center of the ballroom and clapped his hands"

yes plz continue, you have my full attention...!

i noticed that all characters have made an appearance in this update...atleast all frequenting characters could be seen together...even master shashi n shyam made their own presences felt...!!

lord akash proved his words true...he had made is proposal voiced..but, what he couldnt do was conclude the subject...

but, everythimg takes its own time, so, lets wait for it..!!

"did Lady Manorama look a tad bit suspicious as she watched her son through her mask?"

payal is very curious n anxious, isnt she?...she has been watching the reactions her mother, buaji, lady manorama n that of akash in a matter of secons or minutes...

"NO!" exclaimed his mother flatly"

this expression was expected of her n she is very true to her character...i can also say that she is a strong woman, isnt she...

she has the guts to place her opinion in front of all...it was rude ,but, not everyone would voice their stance bravely...now, we know where akash gets his boldness from...😉

Was it what happened between them that had weakened him so? Or was it something "else?"...very keen observation,but,

khushi dear, im in no place to answer your question...

you would have to find it yourself...or you could wait along with me for the story teller to tell us...

" Is it dormant insanity or mental blindness that led you to ..?"...

did he really say that...im like 😆😆😆...wanna know why?...

its because it was like referring to his own actions with khushi...

he had been all alone without talking to anyone about it n the first comment he makes seems like a burst out of his feelings...!!!

"But Lord Arnav didn't move. He simply stared at his brother, and his brother locked back at him, each reading the firmness in the other's eyes and letting the truth take form.

Lord Arnav was taken aback. He let the realization sink in before replying to his aunt."

there is such a wonderful bond between the brothers...the frimness in akash eyes told him the truth of his heart??...did the firmness confirm to arnav that akash was serious?..but, why was he taken aback??

"Well, where is he, then?" asked someone from the crowd"

yes, exactly...plz give that man a standing ovation for yelling my thoughts out loud..where the hell this jayprakash n master shashi?..

"She smiled in return, hopeful that he will come"...that was heart-breaking...a woman's hope that her husband struggling for life is gonna come back...

payal's response was that of earlier...so, expected...

"Lord Arnav's gaze was drawn to the girl standing beside Payal."...

ofcourse, he would look at khushi only...isnt that a hard n fast rule??😆

what does he feel at this very moment??...i really need a monologue from him...plz give me one...im longing to hear his heart or atleast mind...

"There..'.there is a body lying'..'" he began"...

yes, thats it!!!...what happened... i was running with the others to peep into the scene...

"I can feel his vein but his pulse seems weak."...thank goodness...plz save him fast!!...

then, comes khushi n her defiance...

did i see arnav not retaliating to her answer??...

is this really happening??..

has he become that much affected by the events that occured??>..

"Lord Arnav nodded abstractedly, not noticing her tone",...too engrossed in his own mind...it also tells that aman is not under arnav's ordrs...he has taken his own decision this time...

now, what is gonna happen??...

will there be any signs or marks on shashi's body that can reveal the cause of his state??...or was it just a panic attack that has gotten him to this state??>...

loved it...

waiting for more...

n 🤗

p.s...i really dint realise that the comment was this long...sorry for making you read so much...

Edited by sansu - 12 years ago

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Mischief-Managed

@sarahehsan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#656

I hate to write this, but I have to, for now atleast..
Reserved..
Edited :
Okay, so Akash Bitwa here has finally got the courage which he had somewhat lacked in Ipk, to fess his love infront of Arhasia.. Boy, is he brave!
The Eye-talk between Akash and Anjali gives a warm sibling feel..
Payaliya, you have to understand sweetheart, in your Saasuma's tone : Ooke Akash Bitwa k liye Miss Arhasia hi fitiya sakath hai, konu Rags nahee chalegi, samjhio k naahi! Hello Hye! Bye Bye!" You're so unaware of Manorama's attitude, darling, but we still hope she gets to see sense soon and gives in her consent already, to your marriage with her Akash Bitwa!
Omg! JP had to let the news so unexpected just when he had decided to plan a family of his own..
What really warmed my heart in this cold night was : The Hopefully Would Be Son-in-Laws had rushed to look after Master Shashi even before Garima or Buaji could reach him.. It so gives a hope to the readers seeing both the Lords concerned over their would-be-family..
Buaji, calm down, your Goddess of Mischief and the Lords wouldn't let anything happen to your last remaining 'Bond of Blood', also, the Lady in the Hood is somewhere planning all the remedies for Your Shashi Babua and hopefully visits the Herbalist before any of you do, so that the needful is done before hand..
Lord Akash was beside his brother immediately and to Kushi's amazement, Lord Arnav and Lord Aksah conjointly lifted Master Gupta from Garima's lap as the mother trembled with tears and they helped him up.
This bit had me there! I want to give you a bear hug, Narrator Sahiba, for creating such a wonderful scene, we can never thank you enough for all the efforts you take to pass on the story to us, givin't a real touch and making it even more beautiful than it already was, to begin with..
The fact that both the Lords themselves had helped in lifting Master Shashi and not asking their housekeepers to do so, only shows how much they hold the man in question, in high regard and of great importance already, to help him, themselves.. Love you ASRs!
Oh yes, I do want to know what the Beastwa (winged creature) had done that has led Master Shashi into this situation..
Please, dear narrator, come super soon with the rest of the tale and you shall find us all at the Inn even before you plan on turning up.. Oh yes, I gotta have something warm to drink after being exposed to this cold a night.. 😛

Edited by sarahehsan - 12 years ago

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Aquiline

@Aquiline

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#657

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#658

It's me again!!! :)

Ahhh... i see The throne Loves me too! Hayeee...! ☺️

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Thank u so much dear Lin...I m glad u like my image choices.. 😳

150th Narration!!! OH WOW!! Iss great achievement k liye...and for the statuesque update above...

Splendid work Lin...!For me, u r among the most terrefic writers!!!

And for this update as well...i have pics from the rain hug too. Thought they would suit the situation best keeping the weather and surroundings in mind. Besides, i had another reason to choose them...the rain hug scene has been my most favorite in the show...and ijust found it be best opportunity of rejoicing with these pics as the chraracterstics from the update resembled to tht scene too.

so here we go...

She didn't think.

She just ran.

Ran with all her remaining strength towards him

He stood there, knowing she was coming to him,

she cried aloud pressing her tired head against his stiff shoulder that was wet with the rain.

Kushi's tears caught in her throat, and she stared at the space before her as realization crept into her exhausted mind.

With a sudden movement, she stepped away from him, his hand slipping away from her, and they stared at each other, one bewildered and the other concerned.

She stood there for a few seconds, watching him go and slowly succumbing to the shock and the embarrassment rising in her senses that she had let herself cry on a cold Lord's shoulder.

So for me...the update was awesome!! off course it had to b...when .in a way, u just made me re-live my most favorite scene from the show...Thank u! Other than these words...i m speechless! Ur words and it's magic is still looming around in my head!!

BUT...m glad to know tht at the end just deserving one...will see the end of his life.

PIC Credit : UPLOADERS

Edited by crazy4ArnavSR - 12 years ago

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BublyKhushi

@BublyKhushi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#659

Hey,I am 2nd here for the first time... 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

I am your true fan yaar

what you write was amazing.today's update is fab...

👏 👏 👏

congrats on 150 and also for 5th thread...

Edited by BublyKhushi - 12 years ago

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Mouktika

@Mouktika

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#660

Wow 150 congrats and I loved the pic with msg in the Pm

Wonderful one especially the end part which depicts their innerturmoil perfectly.

They r so uniq,she approaches him without any hesitation or fear and he receives her with equal intensity forgetting his mask as well if he approaches her she reacts to him in the same manner leaving everything behind as if they belong to eachother.so in love but can't realize.

Edited by Mouktika - 12 years ago