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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely chapter dear...
at last Krishna confessed. now Arjun's turn...
loved the way Riya handled herself.
hope Aisha wont do anything stupid!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyccc!!!

awww...my riya 😭 😭 😭 😭!!!

ae aisha kaha chali gayi!!!???? poor aisha!!!

update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it,Pari dear.
Beautifully portrayed emotions.
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Posted: 13 years ago

pyaar wo ehsaas hai jisme you can be both selfish and selfless... its upto you what you choose to be...

firstly superlikes for this quote...

pata nahi khush hoon ya should feel bad 😊😭

Arjun is lucky ki there 2 ppl who loves him madly😊

riya ke liye bahut bura lag raha😭

nice update overall


Edited by rocking_gal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww feel crying so badly don't know what to say
couldn't see riya in pain😭
if it's not ariiya, u shouldn't bring her back yaar
where did ayisha go? poor girl
will she do something bad?
so it's confirmed arjun krishna
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum update...
finally kishu accepted that she loves arjun...
ooo poor riya... feeling bad for her... glad that she is taking it in positive manner...
aisha kaha gyi?? hope she doesn't do anything...
continue soon...
cant wait for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
back with part 30...


On the otherhand, sameer and Krishna go towards OT. Doc comes out so the duo rushes to him.


Doc: darne ki koi baat nahin hai… ghav thoda gehra hai to bharne mein time lagega. Kaafi blood loss hua hai. But he is fine. Weakness to rahegi. We ll shift him to ICU now. In two days to his ward.


Krishna: thank you so much doc….


Sameer: haan doc., aap nahin jaante ki aapne humare liye kya kiya hai..


Doc: well it was my duty… excuse me…(he went)



Arjun was shifted to ICU. After two days he was shifted to his ward. He was given sedatives. Most of the time it would be kishu who would be with him, o else any other team member.


Aisha was a volcano in herself. She was so damn angry on Krishna. She thought she had to do something before Arjun knows about her feelings.


It was about 5 days after the shootout. Arjun was far better.

that day, an officer came to them

B'lore police officer: hello sir. This is inspector rajat upadhya. Ummm… we actually need help from you and your team sir…


Sameer: yeah tell me…


Officer: actually sir, we are…..i mean there is a play home which is been under the custody of a terrorist group… there are about 25 small kids. We are waiting for our commando team but that will take time. So I spoke to comm.., of blore and they told us to take your help… sir please, bacchon ki zindagi khatre mein hai….


Sameer: oki… hum chalenge. Humare sirf 4 officers can come. Humare do officers are injured.


Officer: Fine sir… hume abhi chalna hoga…


Sameer: fine.. (he calls kishu, chotu and Aisha, brief them. He informs shree and anvi then leave)


They all reach the playhome. It was a two story building.it had two exits.


They all were ready with their bullet proof jackets and guns. Krishna had her unconventional weapons with her too…


Krishna: sameer, hume sab bachon ko sahi salaamat bahar lana hai… we have to be very careful….we don't know how many terrorists are inside. (to herself) chahe mujhe kuch bhi ho…. Bacchon ke saath saath I ll keep you safe too…. shaayad ye mere zindagi ka aakhri mission ho... kya pata... agar mujhe kuch hogaya to...
i love you arjun...


Sameer: haan, wo dekho un parents ko….wo apne bacchon ko safely dekhna chahte hai... We have to save all kids….

Lets go…

The entire building was surrounded by police. 4 ETF officers entered the building stealthily. Sameer and Aisha went from back door, kishu and chotu from front. Very soon they started clearing the area and within no time the ground floor was cleared.


Sameer: mere hisaab se bacche iss waqt 1st floor pe hai. aawaaze to wahin se aa rahi hai…. We need to be more careful…


Trio nod and they move ahead. As soon as sameer stepped on the platform, he saw a man with gun. Krishna immediately shot him. sam nods at her and they proceed. They slowly separated at the end of stairs. It was a vast area with many toys and game tables. At the end of the room, were about 25 small kids, crying for help, and 3 devasted teachers. Krishna's heart went for them. Aisha and chotu were at the ground floor.The entire hall was draped with colourful curtains. Sameer and Krishna scanned the room. Sameer went behind the curtains and turned the switches on. Suddenly music player started. One of the 3 terrorists turned towards it and saw no 1.


T 1: ye kaise chalu hogaya? Kaun hai yahan???


T 1 and T2 went towards the switch and the stairs to check calling out their gang members. S-K were quick enough to twist their neck and make them fall on ground with small thud. T3 turned around and saw two police officers pointing gun at him. he immediately raised gun and shot Krishna. She moved aside but bullet hit her left arm sam immediately shot him in his stomach.


T3: tum log kuch bhi karlo…. Humare saathi tumhe nahin chodenge…. Agle 15 min mein ye building blast ho jaayega….


Krishna: sam, we don't have time…. Chalo….. chotu Aisha…. Ready raho… take a batch of about 8 students with you out….. they were successful in taking all students out. When she came out a small boy pulled her hand. She bent down to his level


Boy(crying): aunty, ander meri dost hai… wo a yahan humare saath nahin hai… aap please usse baahar laao na… wo ek hi hai jo mujhse ache se baat karti hai…. Please aunty…..




to be continued...

please do like and comment...


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Posted: 13 years ago
PARI licious update.
Awesome one it is.
Jaldi se jaldi kuch karo.
Precap seems scary nd interesting,as well.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsum update...
ohh kishu bhi hurt...
ye aisha kya karne wali h...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hola...
m back with part 31...
i just cmplted it...
its bit short when compared to other updates...


Boy(crying): aunty, ander meri dost hai' wo a yahan humare saath nahin hai' aap please usse baahar laao na' wo ek hi hai jo mujhse ache se baat karti hai'. Please aunty'..


Kishu saw all the children running to their parents.


"kaash wo sab na hua hota to aaj ansh mere paas hota... kaash...mera bhi ek hasta khelta pariwaar hota...

(she wiped the lone tear that fell from her eyes.)

najaane ye kyun lag raha hai ki main mere pariwaar ko ab se nahin dekhungi!!!

agar aisa kuch hua to shree ko wo video mil jaye jo maine ready kiya hai un ke liye...

krishna focus... wo bacchi ander hai... she is in danger aur bomb... o god i dont have time..."




she saw the rest team members sending them away from building. she did not have time to call them as she had only 10 min in her hand. She dashed into the building with her gun ready.


She once again scanned every corner of ground floor and first floor then made her way to 2nd floor.

on her way she called sam and explained him the situation and asked him to hold a impact absorber ready. Sameer wanted to go in but she refused and cut the call.

She went to second floor and shot the one who came infront of her. 5 min left. She scanned entire hall but found no one. She went through the room again hoping the kid was safe. She spotted a purple frock behind the large cupboard and saw a person holding a small cute purple bundle in his hand. A girl of about 4 was crying loudly now.

Krishna saw the time. 2 min remaining' she shot the person at his arm and caught the girl before she fell down. She dashed towards the window across the room... below which sameer was ready. 1 min. in her hurry she failed to notice the person stood and had aimed the gun at her back.

*Gun shot* target krishna's shoulder. She clutched the little bundle and made towards the window without making noise.she heard him saying something to her.

"arre ACP saahiba... itni bhi kya jaldi hai... aaj to aapki bhabhi aur bhatiji(i guess its correct... if not pls tell me) humare haath nahin aaye... par sikander saab to aap logon ka besabri se intezar kar rahe hai...

kya hua agar hum unko haasil na kar paaye... aap ko to hum bakshenge nahin... sameer aur arjun ki jaan ho na tum... ab maro..."


*gunshot**gunshot* to more bullets bored her back. She did not yelp. She was near window sil. She took out a cloth and tied around girl's eyes and told her she was safe and her bua loves her a lot. she took her chain and gently laid it around her neck.then She gently dropped her down. Every one waiting below were shocked when they saw girl falling down. They sighed in relief as they saw she was caught safe and taken away by sameer.


5 sec. Krishna was feeling difficult even to stand near window sil.she turned around and shot the person and immediately turned to window... before he died, *gunshot* target krishna's back. She missed her balance and fell forwards. At the same time **BOOM** the top floor of the building exploded. Sameer turned back and saw Krishna falling, followed by severe blast. KRISHNAAA''''''.

Everyone rushed towards her. She was on the impact absorber with her face down. Her back was burnt and legs had fire on'. They could see about 4 bullets on her back. They extinguished fire on her legs. Sameer turned her and saw here face had many bruises and her neck region bit burnt'.


to be continued...

i know it was terrible...

but i felt it necessary to bring sikki into direct picture...

hope the outcome is good...

please do like and comment...it means a lot and inspires me to write...

and yes, those who want pm for waaris, do comment there...

and aparichit, i ll update tomorrow...
Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago

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