Thorns of destiny&love FF Muskaan's re-entry - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Nice update...
Waitng 4 d nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Wonderful part...
Cant wait to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Nice update..
I think Dev will marry Muskan. Muskan really love Dev where as Arnav loves khushi and her soft character.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am guessing Arnav is going to marry Khushi

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Pt3

Dev and Khushi's wedding…..
Dev ties mangalsuthra around Khushi's neck.
Khushi felt blessed to be Dev's wife.She felt that she was the most luckiest person in this world.



Dev's and Khushi's room..
Khushi is trying to remove her necklace.Dev comes and holds her hand.They both look into each other's eyes.Slowly Dev removes her necklace.
He loosens her hair.Khushi feels very shy .Dev cups her face in his hands.

D:I love you Khushi.
They both look into each other's eyes.
D:We are made for each other.
K:Yes.I knew that when I saw you for the first time.No one can separate us Dev.

They forgot themselves and melted in each other.


Muskaan gets a surprise parcel.She opens it.It's a pink grand salwar kameez.She sees a chip.It's written "With love your Arnav.."
Her mobile rings.She attends the call.
"Hi Muskaan..I am Arnav".
Mus:Hi..
M:Did you get my gift?
Mus:Yes.
M:How is it?
Mus:Very beautiful.
M:I want you to wear that and come with me for a date tonight.
Muskaan:Ok…I will come.

Arnav and Muskaan meet outside.Arnav is bowled over by her beauty.
M:You look very pretty Muskaan.
Mus:Thanks Arnav.
M:You must have got a lot of compliments for your beauty.So my compliment may not be exciting you.
She simply smiles.
M:You have won the beauty contest in the college.Right?
Mus:Yes.
Arnav leads her to the car.
They reach a cool place where there is water fall.
Mus:Wow!Water fall is so lovely.I love it.
She touches the water with her fingers.She moves away.Arnav pulls her shawl.She becomes conscious.Arnav goes closer to her holding her shawl.
Muskaan becomes insecure.
Arnav does'nt realize it.He puts his arms on her shoulder.He is becoming closer and closer to her.He caresses her face with passion.He is in another world where there was only him and his Muskaan and their passionate love.He leans over her to touch her sweetly with his lips.Muskaan becomes nervous.
Mus:Arnav..what are you doing?
He asks in a husky soft voice:Why..?I thought since you are a modern girl you don't mind all these.After all we are going to get married soon.
Mus: But..
M:But what?
Mus:But..i think this is not needed now.
M:But why Muskaan?Why are you hesitating?
Mus:Arnav..
M:Tell me Muskaan..we love each other.Then what's the problem?By the way I won't cross limits before marriage.Though I am modern I don't follow western culture.Just romance Muskaan.

He went closer to her.Her wet eyes captures his vision.
Arnav becomes becomes serious.
A:Muskaan?I never thought our intimacy hurts you this much.You are so modern.You love night parties like me.So I thought you won't have hesitation.

Mus:I am a modern girl.But Arnav…In India even the most ultra modern girls can romance only the person they love.They can't have physical intimacy with anyone else.

Arnv could not believe it:What?Muskaan…what did you say?

Mus:I'm sorry Arnav.You are not the person I love.
Arnav is shocked:Muskaan!
Mus:I am sorry Arnav.

Arnav got angry and held her shoulders tight.
A:Then whom do you love?
Her lips shiver:Dev!
Arnav is shocked.He can't believe his ears.
Tears dwell in his ears.
A:Dev?
Mus:Yes.It was love at first sight.But dad chose Dev for Khushi.I lost Dev.
Muskaan cries.Arnav's heart pains.
A:Then why did'nt you tell me before?
Mus:Because I did'nt want to hurt Khushi and my dad.But i can't cheat you anymore.Because I feel you love me like crazy.Your love is giving me pain as i don't feel the same for you.
Arnav is broken completely.
A:You broke my heart Muskaan.
Mus:Arnav!
Arnav fumed with anger:You cheated everyone.How will Dev,Khushi and our parents react if they come to know the truth?I hate you Muskaan.


Muskaan has no answer.She is really shattered.

He walks away with suppressed pain.Muskaan cries.

Arnav was hattered.

He said silently:I loved you madly.But you cheated me.How can I live without you Muskaan?

Arnav heart cries loudly out of pain.His pain bursts out as a tragic melody...

Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai
Hai kya yeh jo tere mere darmiyaan hai
Andekhi ansuni koi dastaan hai
Lagne lagi, ab zindagi khaali
Hai meri
Lagne lagi har saans bhi khaali
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere

Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere
Bin tere, bin tere, bin tere
Koi khalish hai hawayon mein bin tere...(I Hate Luv Stories).

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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Yayme first to comment.The story is moving fast.Dev-Khushi got married.OMG Muskaan loves Dev.Now what about Arnav.I feel sorry for Arnav.What will happen when Dev-Khushi come to know about it?Its gonna be complicated now.Waiting for ur next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
amazing update omg they married
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
OMG wats going to happen now??
khushi n dev r married n nw arnav knows the truth..
hw will khushi n dev react wen they'll know the truth?
i dnt think arnav shud tell them rite nw!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Poor arnav
First khushi now muskaan

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