YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2):PG.155 NOTE - Page 84

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Posted: 12 years ago
Please don't do this 😭
Kays94 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: romanticgurl070

Please don't do this 😭


sorry guys! I know I'm letting a lot of you down, but understand my point. People say they r busy and try to comment every other update or so.. I mean if you guys have to think twice before writing 2-3 sentences out, I should definitely have to think ten times before posting such long updates!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
❤️❤️❤️I LOVE ZAAINE!!! ❤️❤️❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KryRan14

❤️❤️❤️I LOVE ZAAINE!!! ❤️❤️❤️


meee tooo 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

If you love zaine then please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sameeha456


If you love zaine then please continue


sorry, but this time my decision is final
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here's a small ending, just so it's not left in middle...

chapter 17

Around midnight Jeevika was downstairs working in the office finishing her paperwork and updating her files online for the hospital. She was really tired after having a long day in the hospital with Zaaine. Viren was upstairs on the laptop in their bedroom sitting on the sofa while Zaaine slept. He was about to go downstairs to bring Jeevika when he heard Zaaine starting to cry and move around. Viren went to the bed and sat next to Zaaine who got up from the bed and hugged Viren sitting in his lap. Viren just rubbed his back trying to get him to quiet down.

v - "Shh... Zaaine its okay. Close your eyes and sleep"

Zaaine slowly stopped crying while still laying on top of Viren. Viren just got on the bed instead of going down, now that Zaaine was asleep on him. He kept kissing his cheeks and his head as he slept. He looked so innocent sleeping like that. Viren was too scared to even move because he didn't want Zaaine to wake up again. He turned the tv on and put the volume on low as he was getting bored. Jeevika came in around 1 am looking dead tired and about to crash. She got into bed and saw Zaaine asleep on top of Viren.

v - "He started crying again and then fell asleep on me" he whispered to her looking at him.

Jeevika got closer to him and pecked a small kiss on her son and then on Viren making him happy as well. Jeevika cuddled up with Viren as they both placed their heads on top of each others and warmed up under the blanket like the most perfect family. Virika were truly two bodies one soul, and one heartbeat!


Okay that's the end of Heartbeat. I didn't even want to give it a proper ending, but this is only for the people who regularly commented. Thank you to those people for always supporting me and this story; only because of them did I come back with Heartbeat (2). It would really make me happy if everyone liked and commented on this last update as a thanks for giving it a proper ending.

Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I told you that you can't stop yourself from stopping writing stories so it doesn't matter what i say now 😡



Fine talking about last update i found it cute and emotional as well ... I love it coz at some point it was emotional ... I would miss Zaaine 😭

He was so cute and the way he used to talk was just so cute ❤️

Thank you dumbo for writing all the stories ❤️
Edited by Dhoxi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭 u ended it.
Ayesha gonna miss zaaine a lot.

Luv d ending, it was just perfect.
It couldn't get better ending thn this.
Totally agree virika r two body n one soul n wth zaaine virika family is complete.
Suprb work👍🏼
Edited by Virika-luv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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even though i'm extremely sad that this story is ended :((
thank u so much kays for writing this last part eventhough it was against ur will..really appreciate
wat a way to end this brilliant story...loved it
feeling of togetherness...sweet, cute n perfect little family
thanx for pm...hope 2 read more amazing stories by u
Edited by vishwa94 - 12 years ago

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