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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Ya Allah! Riya is playing with fire aapi!
Jaldi rukiye usse! Warna jalkar rakh ho jayegi!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
very lovely and enjoyable dear😊
it was like down memory lane😆
but riya just kept on talking and talking and talking
and like expected, a volcano erupted and baap re baap kya gussa tha
meri doll ko rula diya😭
please continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
vidya :


commenting on the three updates together ..i liked the way you have tried to portray Ariya's initial interactions differently , for a moment felt bad for arjun when riya's antics reminded him of roshni .. and riya's extreme stupidity of trying to posing as his gf in public .. has she lost it completely ? in fact as i read the updates, my own reactions were same as arjun ..how is this girl an ETF officer in the first place 😕? itna bakwaas toh main khud bhi nahi karti ! she's a police officer for heaven's sake, not a college girl !


update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
nice part vidya di
feeling sorry 4 riya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
nice update yaar😊

w8ng to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Hello Ariyans...back with a new part...pls read and comment on it..

I know many of the things seem funny and ridiculous...but I am just trying to make it funny and different from the original happenings...

Polly, yeah she behaves like a college girl...she doesnt know anything about Arjun at this point and she teases him just like she would have played around with Shree and Chotu!

Thanks to all who liked it and commented on it...

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Part4:

Nobody had ever spoken so rudely to her…..it was the first time that someone did that…..

Riya's eyes flooded with unshed tears while he took his purse out and pulled a couple notes and thrust them into her hands…."yeh lo….ab hui hisaab baraabar!"

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She was numbed for a few seconds……never once had she been subjected to such a harsh thing…She was pampered daughter of her family….None spoke to her like that…..Nobody raised their voices while talking to her…..And this was above all that…she felt all bashed up, insulted, hurt…And it was the limit that she could take!

She wasn't going to leave it like that…..he cant walk away just like that after hurting her….she wiped her tears fiercely and spoke up in a loud voice "Excuse me Sir…."

He turned around hearing her loud call and looked at her with raised eyebrows thinking to himself "ab isse kya chahiye?"

She walked closer to him……"aap mere senior hai par isska yeh matlab nahi ke aap mujhe kuch bhi kahe aur main chup chaap sunnthi rahungi….I wont take that Sir…..its just not acceptable….aapne toh apni baat kehdhi, right? Ab meri baari…."

Arjun: [flaring up] mujhe ku….

Riya: [holding her hand up and gesturing him to stop…..cutting him short] ek minute…meri baat abhi poori nahi hui….aur aapko yeh sunna hi padega…..main maanthi hoom ke pehle ek misunderstanding hui mujhse but woh kisike saat bhi ho saktha hai aur main toh bass meri duty nibhaa rahi thi….meri galthi na hote hua bhi, maine aapse sorry bola…..but what did you do in return?? Aapne apne akdu sadu attitude dikhaaya aur wahaan se chale gaye…aur woh bhi mere clip lekhe…[When he tried to talk, she stopped him and continued again] …..phir uss pizza corner mein, mere saat pizza share kiya, acche acche looks diye aur mere haat bhi pakda…..phir achaanak na jaane kya hua, mere haat ko aise phekha jaisa ke koyi used tissue ho….Shaayad aap apne girl friend, kya naam tha usska [trying to remember her name]Roshni or whatever, se fight karke aaye ho….but usska ghussa mujhpar kaise uthaar sakthe hai??? I wont take that Sir! I am not your punching bag…..[thrusting back the money into his hands] Aur yeh….isski koyi zaroorat nahi…..uss pizza piece jo aapne khaaye usse mere meherbaani ya ek compliment samajh lijiye….I am not like the ever demanding girls who feature in your list of girlfriends sir! Main aapki Roshni jaaisi nahi hoom, samjhe aap?

[That was the limit to what he could hear….no that's an understatement…..she had crossed the limits long back…but now...how dare she compares herself with Roshni?? And how dare, she even drags her name into this brawl?? His hands raised automatically…..He slapped her straight on her face….even that didn't calm him down…his eyes were furious and his hands didn't shiver or hesitate once…..he didn't think twice about slapping a girl…..Roshni's name was enough trigger to forget all other things…all other ethics…..And this girl deserved it….she asked for it…..He gave her the looks which could literally burn her down to ash….and walked away

Riya was shocked by that….she didn't expect it…her voice ceased to come out further as if someone had pulled out her tongue…..Her cheeks were red as his fingers left its signature on it…..Her entire body shook up…she felt herself trembling…..she felt her head spinning out of the power of his slap and also due to the sharp pain she felt! She stood there feeling totally lost the battle…like a wounded warrior and kept staring at his retreating back…..]

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After about 10 minutes which seemed to be the longest 10 minutes of her life, she gathered herself up and walked back wearily to the hotel room…..

She kept staring at her reflection on the mirror…..and tried wiping away the marks of his fingers…..The long finger marks had left a long lasting impression on her and it was stubborn like him….it didn't want to disappear from her face so easily!

<Imagine the picture where she keeps wiping her face after she shoots that guy...i tried my best for that pic but didnt get it>

Her tears weren't ceasing either…the realization that a guy had slapped her was beyond her ability to digest……she washed her face again and again to wash it away…….it was getting worse now….

An hour later, Shree and Chotu came to check up on her…they wanted to confirm if she was back from her errands….They were already having a sense of responsibility around her and they knew Goa wasn't a safe place for a new comer like her….especially during the night….

Also they wanted to take her with them for dinner

The loud knock brought Riya back to her senses….she wiped her face with a towel and came to open the door….

Though she tried her best to hide it, it didn't remain hidden from them…Afterall they were cops too and that too ETF cops….

Shree was the first to ask "Riya, yeh tumaare ghaalon pe kya hai??"

Chotu added "haan itna laal kyun hai?? kuch allergy hai kya??"

Riya: arre woh kuch nahi…bas kuch itching ho rahi thi…shaayad mera nails lag gayi hogi…

Shree: tumaare nails ya kisi aur ke ungliyan……kuch chupaa rahi ho right?

Chotu: haan Riya, bolo na? koyi problem hai kya??

Shree: ab hum sab ek team hai Ri…..humein bathaao…

They were going on and on insisting and forcing Riya to come out with the truth…Riya narrated the incident and lied to them that a guy from the group who teased her slapped her…..and that's how the marks came up on her cheeks….but she assured them that she had given them back nicely and asked them to chill but Shree was all raged up.."aise kaise, tumpar haat utaayega…..abi chalo, dikhaavo kahaan pe hai woh badmaash……main aur Chotu usse dikhaate hai ETF member se ulajhne ka matlab kya hai….tum bathaao toh sahi…"

Riya: arre nahi yaar…chodo uss baat ko….chalo dinner karthe hai….mujhe bohat bhook lagi hai…

Shree not yet convinced by her but then agrees and they walk to the dining area where Arjun and Rathod are seated at 2 extreme corners…Rathod greeted them with a formal smile and so they went to his side…

Arjun was as always in his I don't care attitude and having angry stares at none in specific..but yes, he was having one special glare especially to Riya's side….Riya didn't even bother to acknowledge it…she ignored him totally and tried to act like her bubbly self as if to show that she was least affected by him and his slap! She kept her palm on her cheeks to avoid anyone else seeing the marks….

But, in between their chit chats, Shree and Chotu spilled the beans unknowingly and Rathod got to know about a guy slapping his team member, and that too a girl….he was furious and all flared up "how the hell could someone be so harsh on a girl?"

The sight on her face only made Rathod angrier….

Rathod spoke up angrily "usski itni himmat?? Kaise kar saktha hai woh aisa?? Aur woh bhi ek ladki ko?? Riya you should have called us….this is not done!"

Riya was again having a tough time convincing and cooling down her fuming chief officer….Rathod was not going to cool down so easily…..he insisted on knowing who it was but she didn't reveal his name

On the other hand, his ears weren't deaf to all those conversations…and his eyes weren't failing to notice Riya's lightly swollen up red cheeks…..Did he feel a bit of guilt within him? May be he shouldn't have slapped her? What was her fault anyways? She didn't know who Roshni was…..but another voice in him argued back….she asked for it…..remember what all she told……..His conflicting thoughts weren't ceasing at all…..but he showed nothing of it on his face!

All through, Riya's eyes were darting to his side in search of a changed expression on his face….was he even repenting his deed?? Or was he not at all bothered about it? She was unable to read it from his face….it appeared expressionless!

[To be continued]

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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Me first !!!! Yipee ...first time aayi hun😆

Coming to the update ...dhamkedaar !!!!!!
Riya answering back was good ...but inclusion of Roshini in the converstion based on her assumptions were completely real...we definately tend to do it ...
But the slap 😡😡...anger does wins over rational thoughts ...and i liked the way Riya tackled Shree & Chotu and even Rathore over the issue
They were so protective for her 😃
I always had loved the trio Shree , chotu and Riya please i can get some of there interactions ..
P.S - Not fond of slapping but make sure Arjun apologises...but thinking of it ...both were actually not completely at fault but were angry ...
Edited by sips_crazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Omg...!!Arjun Slapped Riya???
How could he...???
Rathod is sure angry... infact he should be...!!!
Pata nhi kya hoga jab pata chalega that it was Arjun...!!!!
Wish he comes to know soon... I want rathod to samjhaofy Arjun soon...!!!

Awesome part...!!!!
Please continue soon.//!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
di thank u fr d note above
me in rollarcoster ride 1st time in any update
jhatka riya answer back
omg arjun slap me total shock riya ka pta ni..hehe+
epi ki yad dila di ..gng to watch again dwnloaded h lol
phew shreetu n rathod right in their place..
uff i think arjun before slap told her who rosh is..!!!!!
hmm i think rathod got to knw n play a cupid to made arjun realise or apologise
p.s. phew pehli nazar fr riya very expensive nw..
me running di
i knw aapne chappal utha li hogi pakka..
love u di
tc..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thappad mara? 😲😲 *rubs her eyes and reads again*

He better make it up to her... 😡 Kharoos kahika!

Awesomely written Vidya di! Can't wait to read more! Cheddi cheddi update karo!😃

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