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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

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add me to ur pm list

pm me when u update dear

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Krupa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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inthan ho gai intejar ki ayi na koi khaba tumhare update ki ye hume hai pata wo nahi hai khfa phir waja kya hui itni der ki?

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Krupa

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Posted: 12 years ago

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it is long long time no update on this ss have u already finish and i dont new or u never update after 6th part?please do reply-thanks idunno

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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

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waiting for next part dear

cont soon

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chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#335

please update na
iss mahine toh update bhi nahin hua
please jaldi se iske saath aa jao na please
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freya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

hey where r u?

plz update soon

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Shilalipi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#337

ANGEL'S DEVIL

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LAST PART

maan got a call in the office...Geet? why is she calling me now??? is there any problem?? he thought & picked up the phone..

yes geet..

maan..uh..wo..wo...

maan sighed ...what happened geet?

wo...whom do u love the most??

WHAT!! he was really surprised that geet can ask this...though his mouth was itching to tell her name...bt he stopped..

yes..he wanted to tell her..bt not like this..not now...in phone..when they are miles away from one another..he smiled mischievously...

i love my brother ..then leo & eugene(if u don't remember they are the pet tigers of maan)

oh..anyone else???

he smiled..no geet..who else can be...

oh..ok!!

her voice at the end did sound abnormal...bt he shrugged it off by thinking..maybe she got emotional cause i didn't uttered her name...

wait geet..i will tell u my feelings..bt that day..when u remember me..

here...leo & eugene were given food by geet...yes she was working..bt she never looked like a human being..it looked like a lifeless robot was doing its work...until..tears made their way through her eyes..after eugene & leo finished eating...she hugged them...& cried..cried like never before...not like this...not even when she was in that hell...

i am sorry...eugene...leo...i am sorry..bt..i...i..have..to do this...i am sorry...i am sorry..pls forgive me..

after sometime she took them to their special beds ...

time passed...hello yash...

yes sweety...oops sorry..bhai would kill me if i call u sweety...chal koi nahi..i will call u sweety even after i die & become a ghost...he laughed..

wo..u promised me to take me for a tour...

oh yeah..i am EverReady sweety.. just tell me when i should come..

maan enetered his flat..bt their was a strange calmness

that's weird..umm..maybe not...as he was used to geet greeting him stammering cutely...

bt that's not possible today..was it?? cause geet has gone with his brother for a tour..

oh..ok..i guess i have to wait..

he went to his room & saw both leo & eugene were in deep sleep..

or maybe not..maybe they were just lazing around as geet is not here...

he switched on the tv to pass the time..

that's strange...leo & eugene weren't moving at all..he called them..

LEO..EUGENE..come here..

they didn't respond..

didn't u hear me?? i said come here..he roared

still they didn't move an inch..

he went closer to them..

he touched them..& jolted his hand back...their bodies were ice cold...

LEO >>EUGENE!! I SAID GET UP!!..he said gulping the lump on his throat...they were with him from the day he stated his life of struggle..they were like his family..

he called the best vet...

7pm..8pm..9pm..10pm...11pm..12am...1am..now maan was worried..why isn't geet here till now..?? first his leo & eugene ,then...no no.. he relaxed remembering that geet was with his brother....yash would not let anything happen to her..bt who killed leo & eugene?? & why??

just then a his phone buzzed..

hello mr. khurana..we are from xyz hospital...its ur brother..

maan ran through the corridors in search of his brother ...he saw geet standing outside a room with no expression on her face..it was blank..

geet ..geet are u alright?? what happened?? how is yash in this condition?? geet pls answer me..geet ..geeet...!!!

he shook her bt her facial expression remained the same...

dr came..mr khurana...i am afraid that their is very less chance of ur brother's survival..

maan held the dr's collar..don't u dare to say that...he hissed..u have to save him..for urself..if anything happens to him...i will kill u.

mr khurana..i can't do anything..the poison has spread all over his body..

poison??

yes, someone had poisoned his drink.

the dr went in to attend yash ...just after that..the police appeared..

mr khuarana..i know..it wil be hard for her bt this girl ..

Geet..

huh?

Her name is GEET officer & DARE U INSULT HER..

i am sorry mr khurana..bt i just wanted to say that madam was with brother the whole time..she must know something..it will be important information for us..

pls Ms Geet..tell us..

u were there the whole time right??

was anyone there?/

did anyone offer any drinks to him??pls tell us..

she fumbled as the inspector bombarded her with questions..

maan saw at her disheveled state..& decided to take her back home & return..

geet lets go..

bt sir she hasn't answered any..

i will ask her...now MOVE..

the inspector moved aside fearing him..knowing the power of his wrath.

after reaching home...maan gave geet water to drink ..bt she didn't take the glass..she continued to sat like a zombie...

geet he pushed her curls behind with his hand & cupped her face..don't worry..nothing will happen to yash..& who ever did this to yash, leo& eugene i won't spare that person..

what will u do??

huh?

what will u do to that person...?

i will make that person's life living hell geet..i will neither let him live in peace..nor let him die...

& if the person is me??

huh??

geet removed his hands from her cheeks & stood up..

she started to laugh...after the spasms of laughter died ..her face became blank again...

i was the one who poisoned leo,eugene...& yes..ur beloved brother??

GEET!!?? maan could only whisper in horror & disbelief...

no geet..u are joking right?? its a bad time for joke..

JOKE!! huh!! she snorted..joke u say...U...U MAAN SING KHURANA..U were the one to make my life a joke..by snatching every happiness..every joy...EVERYTHING!!! Everything in my life...my love was snatched by u...

as maan continued to look at her in disbelief..she continued...

can't believe mr khurana ?? oh yes..i remembered EVERYTHING!! i remembered how FOR U... for UR LUST FOR MONEY..My parents died...

maan drew his hand in a fist as his anger was rising with every minute..still he managed to say with grating his teeth..NO..u didn't remember anything...someone just told u..why didn;t u just kill me??

i wanted u to live & go through the same pain..i am going through..i pain of seprating from ur loved ones...the pain of ur LOVE betraying u...JUST LIKE U DID TO ME

if u wanted to detach me from my loved once..then why did u tried to save yash??

as a compensate for ur saving me from that hell & bring me to another one...

maan's facial expression changed..who told u those things..

dev bhai..

she looked at him..what the difference..?? it's the same..whether i remember or not...the fact won't change that U were the reason f my parents' death..i LOVED U..by u snatched my love also...HOW CAN I LOVE SOMEONE WHO KILLED MY PARENTS??

now maan started to laugh like a maniac...after sometime he stopped laughing...

u are right...that's what i tell myself always...

he said in a deadly whisper...

HOW CAN I LOVE SOMEONE WHO KILLED MY PARENTS??

Precap- Epilogue

Edited by Shilalipi - 12 years ago

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#338

nice..

how can geet do this..

cant believe..

in real geet is the one whom maan must have taken revenge

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#339

wow lovely painful update.. oh god te way geet asking whom he love more, if my maan have said her name she have killed herself, oh god.. te way geet talking to pets was so lovely.. oh god te way geet saying tat my maan killed her parents and te way she taking revenge was so painfull. now wat will be my maan ki answer..i love te update.. but leo and er died me crying for them..