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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Wow didoo...!!!
Par ye toh bohat hot ho gaya😛
Loved their fights...amazing...Kya ladai karte hain dono!😛
Do continue ...would love to see how it goes on
Great job 👏
Edited by lola123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Hey guys, awesome grilling and answers by Fiza.
Fiza, get well soon.
I have a challenge for you as well, writting of OS on the spot, but since you are not well write it whenever you can :D

One of my favorite concept:
ONE SHOT:
Riya loved Arjun but could never confess, now Ayesha joined ETF too. Riya noticed the clashes between them and how Arjun gets impressed by Ayesha sometimes but he consideres Ayesha nothing more than a friend. Riya feels like she is no where suited to Arjun and tried to stay away from him, but Arjun doesn't like her ignoring him so he confronts her and a confession.

Quite a long concept you can use it the way you like as in add some background or future but respecting the concept.

Will be waiting for the ONE SHOT from you, whenever you can. :D

Luv u<333
Kashish

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: kunchu

lo Fiza...

you provoked my devil...
so here it goes...😆😆

"Its Ariya's wedding day... Arjun and his family over her home as baraat.. him waiting at the mandap, eagerly waiting for her... "


so write his thoughts about her...
NB: no dialoges... just his thoughts... it should be cute... and lovely...

hihi... kaise lagi...???👍🏼


here it is helen uff it was a tough challenge i dont if it how it was supoose to be
hope u like it


OS: Socha Na Tha
I was sitting at the mandap waiting for my bride to be, my Beautiful Dulhan ,My Riya to come down the spiral stairs and come and sit next to me.

I was dying to see her and even though I had just arrived at her house with the baraat it felt like hours of waiting .

I had nothing to do but be patient so I sat her lost in thought thousand memories rushing back to me about every thing that happened in the recent months .

I was finally happy and the old Arju as Sam would say

Kismet I tell you (shaking my head and smiling hard

I never knew that the first day we had met just because I stole your red flower clip that you would end up stealing my heart .

Now that I think of it how fast did our love story start and how fast I changed.

All are choti choti baatein mulakatain I still remember very clearly

Jaise tum jaise clean freak aur woman power jaise larki aaj thak nahi dehka maine

Tumare coffee cup ki rim ko hundered times whipe kar na , aurat hone main lecture dena ya wahi aurat ka advantage le ke kaam nikalna .

That day I cant forget itne hot jo lag re thi ( he smiled ) jab hum office gaye the case ki liye and muhje papers nahi de re the who .

How you handed me your diary and pull out your pony tail and shook your head and walked over to the front desk . pata nahi kaise aur kya bole the tum

But kaam hogya for the first time you shut me up at leaset that's what I thought but no humsaha you do and will .

God kitna time lag ra hai yeh sab … but I know it will be worth the wait after all itne beautiful ho tum riya ki … ready hone main time tho lage ga na .

But when you dress up always all eyes are on you. The Kalki Devi case bhi uff most eligible bachelorette jo thi tum wa haan. im very lucky tum mere ho re ho tum … us din muhje kya pata tha ki who aunty jab bole ki main tera pati hoon ki actually ek din asia hoga .

they say na foreshadowing of coming events .

Finally there you are Arjun beta kya lucky ho tum I thought meri riya is looking drop dead gorgeous.

Finally she is sitting near me .

Uff ho pandit jaldi nahi kar sak the kya … control arjun control im acting like a college kid

Finally phere I took a deep breath and thought

Aaj se Riya jaise I have always protected you and supported you I will , I still remember from whether it was saving you from the the shot out when I hid my self in the money truck or giving support and courage to shot you for 1st time.

I still remember how you always cared and protected me as well tumahre yeh hi chote gestures muhje majboor kare tum se pyar kar ne

Jaise jab resort millennium pe I traped my self in the car the whole night kaise mere liye ek cutting chai order ki , ya jab hotel main naxlites muheje gun ki saat saar pe mare how you were rubbing my head .

And do sab se important baatein ek ganpati ki din tum jo coin diye force kar ke muhej mere jaan save ki

And last but not muhje pyaar kar ke muhje jeena wapas sikhayya.

Aaj mere life eki sab se ache din hai he thought

The phir ended her lifted his sehear and put her the sindoor and mangla sutra

Shaadi sampan hui he heard the padit say
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
thank you fiza for accepting my challenge...
that was a cute OS dear.. loved it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
di..congozzz being d Writer of d week :-)
i knw am too much late bt still...plz manage wid that...
very much well desercving writer we hv this week... :-) :-)
n m simply amazed hw u r easily coming up.with ur challenges **claps**

.can I give u a challenge too ? 😳 i dunno whether d time period has ended or not...

if nt then i hve a challenge fr u...

my challenge is -
write one HOT story onn Rathore n a fictional char Sanjana...
from their meeting to d wedding night 😛

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