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i am back with a lengthy os about sameer-arjun(sam-jun o should we call armeer??? its left to you...) idea was given to me by payal di... i wrote it dunno how it has come... do read and lemme know...
its very lengthy... do bear with me...


CS:

Dustin Coelho: comm. Of Mumbai (guest)

ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod: ETF chief

ACP Arjun Suryakant Raute: ETF second in command, super cop

Shreekant sen: ETF tech expert

Chotu: commando

Aisha: ammunition expert



ETF is given a high profile case related to drug mafia.

With Sikander killed, lot of things had changed in ETF. Arjun was no longer living corpse, he started to live again…. He had a void in him after his mission and just immersed himself in work completely. His attitude towards Rathod had changed a lot but their relation did not move any further than mere professional.

This particular case had made every member in ETF shudder.

The mafia did not target any teenager, any other person. But their targets were small children. School going, innocent children.

They had suspected that very influential people were involved and they could not go and investigate in public. They had to solve the case undercover.

Arjun was very troubled knowing this. He knew this case involved risks and putting any of his team member were his last thoughts. So he argued with his entire team, commissioner and all authorities and convinced them to send him alone…

PRESENT………

ACP Rathod was pacing to and fro his cabin was an understatement. He was right from the beginning against sending Arjun alone. aakhir Wohin hua jiska usse dart ha…

Shree: sir Arjun sir ka koi pata nahin hai. I am trying from past 4 hours but no result sir..

Rathod: Dammit!!!! Ab hum kya Karen… I am sure ki ye uski koi mind blowing theory ka anjaam hoga… pata nahin apne aap ko kya samajh ta hai….

Shree: ek aur baat hai sir….

The monitor is showing his microphone gps in the same spot all this time…

Rathod: Shree… couldn't you tell me this earlier?? Lets go….

They all leave and as per shree's direction they reach a secluded spot near beach.

They spread out and search for Arjun.

Aisha: SIR… ye dekhiye…. Ye to Arjun sir ke microphone hai….


All rush to that place and finds arjun's microphone, a rod and few drops of blood….

Sameer: o God… iska matlab raute museebat mai hai…


Team, search thoroughly the entire area… there must be some clue…. Fast……………

Somewhere else…..

A person was hanging upside down, shirt ripped, bare chest…hands tied at back and was unconscious. Blood trickled down from the wounds on his chest, back and arms… portions of his face had turned purple and black and blood stains on his forehead and nose….

Voice: arre yaar ye kis mitti ka bana hai??? Itne maar khane ke baad kabhi koi insaan jeeta hi nahin, ye sirf behosh hai…..

Back to ETF team

Comm..: Arjun ka kuch pata chala Rathod? Itna time hogaya…

Rathod: not yet sir.. we are working on it…

It was already about a day Arjun went missing. Nobody knew where he was. The entire team had put their full force to search him but there was no fruit.

All of a sudden, sameer had something in his mind. He called his entire team and instructed them their task. He sent chotu and Aisha to the place where Arjun investigated first. And asked them to be connected with Shree who would be at headquarters.

He them zoomed off on his bike to the place where they found microphone.

Sameer scanned the whole area once again but found nothing. He groaned in frustration.

"kuch to choot raha hai par kya?"Suddenly he saw something glistening on the sand. He went close and lifted the object in his hand. He gasped looking at the object. It was roshni's chain which always Arjun had around his neck no matter what. He0 suddenly jerked back to see the place where he found the microphone and then again turned back to the chain. Chain had lot more blood stains on it and also he noticed faint drag marks on sand. He followed the trail but soon lost it. He muttered some profanities under his breath and then again went in search for any clues.

Soon he saw some tire tracks on sand and also of someone being dragged. He even saw some blood stains and immediately knew what might have happened. He immediately rushed to nearby shops and enquired about anything unusual in the place a day back. All the vendors refused. He was utterly disappointed and turned around and marched a few paces towards his bike.

Suddenly a voice"bhaiyya…"


Rathod turned around and saw a small boy running towards him with a sheet of paper. Boy stood next to him panting and handed him a paper and ran back. Sameer stared at the retreating boy and then at the sheet he was handed over. He immediately called shree and asked him to find details of a black SUV model car.

The sheet had a pic of a man being dragged by two other men to a car. The boy had clearly given the no., plate of the car in his drawing…

Sameer mentally thanked the boy.

Soon he knew the owner of the car and went to his home.


Somewhere else……

The man groaned in pain when a well built person held him by his hair and made him to face him… another person started to bead him with a whip. The man endured all pain and just muffled voices left him.


"wo data tune kahan rakha hai bol…. Warna hum tujhe zinda nahin chodenge…"

"chahe kuch…aaahhh….karlo… mai…n tum logon ko nahin bataoonga….ouchaaahhh"

"to yahin mar saale…. Tu yahan se bhaag bhi nahin sakta…. Seedhe seedhe bata warns…. "

"warna kya? Maarega mujhe??? Arjun maut se nahin darta…. Samjhe ya samjhau???"

" hahaha…. Ye hume samjhaye ga…. Haalat dekh iski par akad nahin gaya…. Abe tukku, iss saale ko tab tak maar jab tak ye apna muh nahin kolta ya mar nahin jaata…. Aur ha paani bhi iske naseeb mein na aane paaye…. mujhe Samjhata hai saala…."


He went out of the room hearing whipping sound followed by painful groans….

"ACP Arjun… tu iss chakkar mein padke bohut galat kiya…. Ab tujhe kaun bachayega….HAHAHAHAHAAA"


Sameer was infront of a minister's house, fully frustrated. Of course the car was in his name, but he had lodged a complaint that his car was stolen a few days back and had even relevant proof


He went to his bike and fished his pockets for the key. He took out his key and saw arjun's chain was tangled with it. He slowly started to detangle it. He noticed something behind the depression of the locket and inspected it, only to find a chip. He immediately pocketed it and started bike towards ETF.


ETF office..

The entire team was shocked to see the data in the chip, which was actually memory card. It had every detail of the drug mafia and it even had about two o three godown pics in it. Rathod divided his team and marched towards the target places.


They unleashed their powers at the places and confiscated large amount of drugs and took many men under custody.


At the place where sameer had raided, he just found large amount of drugs and no people. He immediately sent his subordinates with drugs to main branch and ordered rest of the team to interrogate the people they had caught.


He decided to take a look at the godown and suddenly saw a man sneaking out. He immediately shot at his legs and grabbed him b4 he could run. He bet the person black and blue and got to know the place where Arjun was kept.

He immediately zoomed off to the very place where Arjun was kept after handing over the goon to local police.

The godown where Arjun was kept…

"abbe tukku ke bacche…. Ye kamina apna muh nahin kholega…. Wo botal leke aa jaa…. Garam tezaab padega to bolega ye…. Bhains ki chamdi hai iski…. Jaldi laa jaa…."


Then they took acid and poured drop by drop on arjun's tied hands. It trickled down burning the skin.


Arjun screamed in utter pain….in between the screams

"ziyad, tu mujhe maarega bhi na to bhi tu nahin bach sakta…. Maine wo memory card aisi jgah chupayi hai jahan se wo ETF ko aasaani se milegi…aAHHHAA……"


"kutte sale….. tera wo ETF humara kya bigade ga??? Sikander bhai ko tune maara aura b mere dhandhe mein bhi taang ada raha hai…. Tujhe to main tadpa tadpake maaarunga…"

Sameer parked his bike at some distance from the godown… he clutched his gun firmly and moved like a cat through the shadows.

He silently brought doen two and made his way inside. He scanned the entire place and found only three more people guarding the place. Within no time they were dead.

"aahhh"

Sameer heard a cry of pain from somewhere nearby. He knew it was Arjun, his buddy…. He stealthily moved and peeped through a slightly open door and gasped at the sight infront of him. he saw Arjun, hanging upside down with blood all over his upper torso and legs… burn marks cuts…..


Sameer closed his eyes unable to absorb the sight infront of him. how could he see his best friend in pain??? He gathered all his courage and kicked open the door and shot the person who had just lit fire around Arjun….. the flames were quiet high… he shot another bullet to ziyad's torso and hand and brought him down. He hit the back of his head with posterior part of the gun and made him fall down unconscious. He immediately tied him and went towards Arjun. He searched for something with which he could put of the fire and lower Arjun from his position. His team entered and saw the terrible scene infront of them.


Sameer had jumped inside the fire ring with a wet blanket and was lowering Arjun. Arjun saw his friend and smiled at him with great difficulty…


"RJ please himmat rakho… I am here na…"

"i….knew…..you……would come ………………SAM……."

He went unconscious…

Soon the fire was under control and sameer with the help of chotu brought Arjun out and laid him on stretcher.

"RJ… mujhe maaf karde I came soo late…. Ab tu jaldi theek hoja mere dost…. I cant see you like this… pleasse… ab mujhe aur saza mat de mujhse door hoke….."

With that he broke down completely….

Arjun was taken to the ambulance….

Entire team prayed for him….


kaisa tha???? i know its very lengthy but could not help...

ande joote tamatar sab kuch welcome...

if anyone wants the translations of hindi dialogues do lemme know.. its actually easy for me write in hindi... i can update the translations if you want...

do like and do comment...

payal di hope ki aapko accha laga... sorry for delay... internet problem...



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Moumimon thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me First..
Awsome CS
Amaizing start...
Continue soon dear...
Edited by Moumimon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pari dear..
awesum re..
baap re itna torture..
lols thoda zyada ho gya..
bt it was so emotional end
truly loved it..
sam wow..
arjun amazing..
thank u dear
love u..
fr fulfiling my requests..
hugs..
tc..
claps..!
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
note:
this os has just one part... pata nahin will there be any sequel or no...

happy news ye ki arjun will be fit and fine.i dont intend kill him at any cost... sam and arjun be back as supercops+super friends...

hope all liked it... give me your views through your likes and comments... aur koi request hai to pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Payal_156

Pari dear..
awesum re..
baap re itna torture..
lols thoda zyada ho gya..
bt it was so emotional end
truly loved it..
sam wow..
arjun amazing..
thank u dear
love u..
fr fulfiling my requests..
hugs..
tc..
claps..!



haha...jaanti hu di ki torture kuch zyadda hogaya. filmon mein dekha tha itna torture... lekin kya karun... mere haath ruk nahin rahe the...😉😆 aage se dhyaan rakhungi ki main zyada apne haath ki na sunu...😆😉 aap ko acha laga to mujhe khushi hui...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum os...
very emotional...
poor arjun... kitna torture kia uspe un goons ne... :(
awww sam worried for him... and trying all means to find him...
glad that he found him... and saved him...
write a sequel if you can... :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Pari i loved ur writings dear..
thank u..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os
felt bad 4 arjun
bt he survived all the pain

very nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Too gud
Love story.. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
great OS :) loved it
goons tortured poor arjun too much :(
loved sam's concern for arjun
glad that sam finally found him

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