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Anjali

@cutiepie2244

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Posted: 12 years ago

#911

Aahhh u updated u updated... m jumping like a 5 year old kid..hahaah lol...😊😊
Now back 2 the update... it was really a cute n lovely update... (uff anjali ktni bar ek hi line repeat karogi... hahaha par kya karun tm log speechless kar dete ho mjhe)😆😆
Loved the convo between Vayansh,, Virat n Viren... the way virat said (shadi ki pehli rat us se dur) hahahha i was laughing like mad... the character of virat in ur story is really damn awesome yr... his feelings,, his love 4 her lady love always made me like awww😊😊... Just love him like mad...
Loved this line of virat (Sochna bhi mat. Aap dono ki wajha se main problem mein pada tha, aaj aap pakde jaoge toh meri taraf se return gift samjh lena. Aur yahan se bhagne ki sochna bhi mat, jab tak main Maanvi ko mehndi nahi laga deta, aap dono mere saath hi rahein ge.)... hhahhah he is too sweet n cute...
Awww felt bad 4 Vayansh he still loves her really who can forget his/her first love... (uff kahan me phir emotional hogai😆😆)
Loved the song on which maanvi danced i was just imagining her dancing while reading ur update seriously dear...😊😊
As usuall loved the ending scene of VIRMAN.. their convo,, their nok jhok,, their feelings they r just amazing... n by the essence of ur writting u make them double amazing...
This whole scene was just too awesome i was blushing n smilling really hard (Maanvi shot a angery glance at Viraat.

Viraat: (both hands raised in the air) Mazak tha Maanvi.
Maanvi: (turns her back towards him) I Hate You.

Viraat slowly moved his fingers on her bare back, and started making patterns on her back. Making her lose all her senses in his mere touch, all her anger melted at his touch.

Viraat: (huskily) But I Love You.

Viraat started placing soft kisses on her neck, moving down to her shoulder and back. Maanvi gulped hard and closed her eyes tightly, as his lips moved against her soft skin.

Maanvi: (eyes closed/heartbeat increasing) Vir..aat..

He wrapped on of his hand around her waist, and turn her around with his other hand.

Viraat: (looking into her eyes) I Love You.) just loved it 2 the core...
I just loved this lines of VIRMAN (Viraat: (close to her ear) Tumhe aise dekhne ka haq, kisi aur ka nahi hai. Sirf aur Sirf tumhare Hone Wale Pati ka hai. Mr. Viraat Singh Vadhera ka. Samjhi?
Maanvi: (smiles at him) Would be Mrs. Maanvi Viraat Singh Vadhera samjh gayi.) SO SWEET OF U 4 GIVING SUCH AMAZING DIALOGUES...
Hope that we will get another update from u soon dear... just waiting 4 the next part desperately... plz update it soon... plz plz plz plz plz... thanxx 4 the pm dear...

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Arti

@Angel4Love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: avika26
lovely update...loved their bonding

Thnk u soo muchhh...😊

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Arti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#913

Originally posted by: cutiepie2244

Aahhh u updated u updated... m jumping like a 5 year old kid..hahaah lol...😊😊

(Yay..I made u happy..😛 juz kiddin..thnks a lot Anjali...m so gald u jumped lyk a kid.lol...😛😆)

Now back 2 the update... it was really a cute n lovely update... (uff anjali ktni bar ek hi line repeat karogi... hahaha par kya karun tm log speechless kar dete ho mjhe)
😆😆

(THNK U SO SO SO MUCH...Hume bahut khush huye yeh jaan kar ki humari writing se aap speechless ho jaati hain..lol, I dn't knw y m talkin lyk dis😃)

Loved the convo between Vayansh,, Virat n Viren... the way virat said (shadi ki pehli rat us se dur) hahahha i was laughing like mad... the character of virat in ur story is really damn awesome yr... his feelings,, his love 4 her lady love always made me like awww😊😊... Just love him like mad...

(Thnk u sooo muchhh...I also luv him..😛😳)

Loved this line of virat (Sochna bhi mat. Aap dono ki wajha se main problem mein pada tha, aaj aap pakde jaoge toh meri taraf se return gift samjh lena. Aur yahan se bhagne ki sochna bhi mat, jab tak main Maanvi ko mehndi nahi laga deta, aap dono mere saath hi rahein ge.)... hhahhah he is too sweet n cute...
Awww felt bad 4 Vayansh he still loves her really who can forget his/her first love... (uff kahan me phir emotional hogai😆😆)
Loved the song on which maanvi danced i was just imagining her dancing while reading ur update seriously dear...😊😊
As usuall loved the ending scene of VIRMAN.. their convo,, their nok jhok,, their feelings they r just amazing... n by the essence of ur writting u make them double amazing...
This whole scene was just too awesome i was blushing n smilling really hard (Maanvi shot a angery glance at Viraat.

Viraat: (both hands raised in the air) Mazak tha Maanvi.
Maanvi: (turns her back towards him) I Hate You.

Viraat slowly moved his fingers on her bare back, and started making patterns on her back. Making her lose all her senses in his mere touch, all her anger melted at his touch.

Viraat: (huskily) But I Love You.

Viraat started placing soft kisses on her neck, moving down to her shoulder and back. Maanvi gulped hard and closed her eyes tightly, as his lips moved against her soft skin.

Maanvi: (eyes closed/heartbeat increasing) Vir..aat..

He wrapped on of his hand around her waist, and turn her around with his other hand.

Viraat: (looking into her eyes) I Love You.) just loved it 2 the core...

(Thnk u, Thnk u, Thnk u...m so happy u lykd it..😊)

I just loved this lines of VIRMAN (Viraat: (close to her ear) Tumhe aise dekhne ka haq, kisi aur ka nahi hai. Sirf aur Sirf tumhare Hone Wale Pati ka hai. Mr. Viraat Singh Vadhera ka. Samjhi?
Maanvi: (smiles at him) Would be Mrs. Maanvi Viraat Singh Vadhera samjh gayi.) SO SWEET OF U 4 GIVING SUCH AMAZING DIALOGUES...

(Thnk u so much...m on da 7th heaven..😛)

Hope that we will get another update from u soon dear... just waiting 4 the next part desperately... plz update it soon... plz plz plz plz plz... thanxx 4 the pm dear...

Will try 2 make it soon,,,thnks once again 4 ur lovely long comment dear n ur most wc...😊😊

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imsid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#914

wen r u gonna update yar
m waiting arti
make it fast and a hot romantic wala update... Pleaaase *m so shameless*

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Arti

@Angel4Love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#915

Originally posted by: imsid
wen r u gonna update yar
m waiting arti
make it fast and a hot romantic wala update... Pleaaase *m so shameless*

Sorry 4 da delay...n 4 making u wait...

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imsid

@imsid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#916

Originally posted by: Artii159
<font color="#330099">Sorry 4 da delay...n 4 making u wait...</font>

its okay arti bt when exactly r u gnna update dear.?

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Arti

@Angel4Love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#917

Originally posted by: imsid

its okay arti bt when exactly r u gnna update dear.?

I m updating 2day...😊

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Arti

@Angel4Love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#918

Hello guyz,,m bck wid part 30...thnks a lot 4 ur comments guys...And I really hope u'll lyk dis part as well...EnJoY..(VirMan/VirIka's Sangeet performance was inspired by VirIka's performance frm Dabbu's sangeet)

VirMan...Kuch Iss Tarah...Part 30...

~Recap~

Viraat smiled at her cuteness, he wrapped his hand around her shoulder, and walked out of the room, after opening the locked door.

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Viren: (hands foled, with a smile) Namaste, main hun Viren, aapka host.
Jeevika: Aur main hun Jeevika, aapki dost. (winks at Viren/smiles)

It's VirMan's Sangeet Function, all the guest were already present. But VirMan were still missing from their own function.

Viren: Toh aaiye, hum humare iss function ki shuruwat karte hai, Dulha aur Dulhan ki grand entry se. So here we go, (pointing towards the stairs) Viraat and Maanvi.

Everyone started clapping as Viraat and Maanvi started walking down the stairs, hand in hand. Maanvi was looking very beautiful in her turquoise and maroon shade lehenga choli, her hair left open with soft curls, and with matching jewelries. Viraat on the other hand, was looking very stunning in his maroon indo-western sherwani. They finally reached, where their seats were and sat down.

Maanvi's Outfit: https://www.cbazaar.com/brides/lehenga-choli/aesthetic-embroidered-net-lehenga-choli-p-ghdhm76.html
Jeevika's Outfit: https://www.indusdiva.com/4741-maroon-net-lehenga-saree.html
Viren's Sherwani: https://www.bodylinestore.com/products/awesome-indo-western-sherwani-bl1034/pages/sherwani/indo-western
Viraat's Sherwani: https://indiaemporium.com/men/sherwani/maroon-jamawar-banarasi-fabrics-indo-western-sherwani.html

Jeevika: Toh ab hum shuru karte hai humare pehle performance se, jo hai Shlok aur Dabbu ki...(excitedly/clapping) zor dar taliyaan.

Jeevika and Viren moved out of the stage as Shlok and Dabbu made their way towards the stage. They started dancing on the song 'Mahi Ve' from 'Kal Ho Na Ho'. (VirMan's actual sangeet function's performance) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BSSfrsblUKs

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Everyone was laughing after Dabbu and Shlok's performance ended. Viren and Jeevika came to the stage laughingly.

Viren: That was one funny act.
Jeevika: Sahi kaha Viren ji. (to the audience) Umeed hai aap sab ko inka performance acha laga hoga.
Viren: (smiles) Haan, mujhe toh bahut maza aaya Jeevika. Lekin ab baari hai humare dono Chachu, aur dono Chachiyon ke performance ka, dekhte hai choton ke baad yeh bade kya karte hain. Please give them a big round of applause.

Once again, Jeevika and Viren left the stage as both Chachi's and Chachu's entered. They started dancing on the song 'Chamak Challo' from 'Ra-1'. (VirMan's actual sangeet function's performance)

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Viren and Jeevika once again, came back to the stage.

Viren: (close to Jeevika's ear) Wanna Be My Chamak Challo..
Jeevika: (nodding her head possitively) O ooo...

They both laughed looking at each other.

Viren: (smiles at Jeevika) Jeevika, ab tum guess karo ki agla performance kiska hai?
Jeevika: Hm..Mujhe lagta hai, (wide smile/looking at Beeji) Beeji ka.
Viren: Nahi.
Jeevika: (looking at Dadaji) Dadaji?
Viren: Nahi.
Jeevika: (looking at Viren) Um..Vayansh ka?
Viren: Nahi Jeevika.
Jeevika: (pouts) Toh aap hi bata do kaun hai woh?
Viren: Acha ek last time aur guess karo.
Jeevika: Ok...(smiles) Viraat aur Maanvi ka?
Viren: (smiles widely) Correct. Par woh akele nahi honge. Unke saath honge hum. (to the audience) Arey Bhai, taliyaan bajao, hum perform karne jaa rahe hain.

Everyone clapped for VirIka and VirMan.

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All of a sudden, the lights turned off, the hall room was pin drop silence. Everyone was looking around curiously, they heard Viren's and Viraat's voice in the background.

Viren: Aaj hum aap sabko do prem kahani sunane jaa rahe hai.
Viraat: Do aisi jode ka, jo ek dusre se be-intehaan mohabaat karte hai.
Viren: Aaiye sunte hai, pyaar ki yeh kahani.
Viraat: Humari zubaani.

The lights turned back on, there stood Viren and Jeevika, their back facing each other. Jeevika was wearing her simple salwaar suit, and Viren was in his white blazer with black t-shirt and jeans.

Viraat's Voice: Yeh kahani hai, Rishikesh ki ek simple si ladki ki, aur Chandigarh ke ek handsome sa ladke ka. Dono the ek dusre se anjaan, par taqdeer le aayi inhe ek dusre ke paas. Miley the dono pehli baar, ladki thi sharmili aur ladka tha bekarar.

Jeevika and Viren turned around to face each other. Their eyes meet and both fell in love at first sight.

Kitne hi dur dur ho, un dono ke raaste, mil jaate hai jo bane, ek duje ke vaaste...ek duje ke vaaste...

Jeevika and Viren started walking towards each other. As she reached where Viren was standing, she slipped but Viren wrapped his arms around her waist, preventing her from falling.

Viraat's Voice: Aakhein mili, hui baatein chaar, pehli nazar mein ho gaya inhe pyaar.

They were lost in each others eyes, unable to move their eyes away from each other.

Jaise dil hai dhadkan hai, Ek duje ke vaaste,,,Jaise aankh hai darpan hai, Ek duje ke vaaste Jaise barkha saawan hai, Ek duje ke vaaste,,,Ek sajni ek saajan hai,,,Ek duje ke vaaste...Ek duje ke vaaste.

Light were turned off, everyone's eyes were still glued on the stage. Soon the lights were turned on, but this time, it wasn't VirIka who were standing on the stage. This time it was VirMan, their back facing each other. Maanvi was wearing her simple patiala suit, and Viraat was wearing black jeans with lime green shirt.

Viren's Voice: Jahan hua tha ek jode ko pehli nazar mein pyaar...wahan hui dusre jode mein nafrat bhari takrar.

Viraat started walking towards Maanvi, with an attitude.

Viraat: Ladki kyun? Na jaane kyun? Ladko si nahi hoti.

Maanvi turned around to face Viraat, rolled her eyes at him, and started walking away as Viraat followed her behind.

Viraat: (index finger on his head) Sochti hai zyada, (slightly hits on Maanvi's head) kam woh samjhti hai...(stands in front of her) sochti hai zyada, (she pushes him and starts walking again) kam woh samjhti hai, (hand on his chest) dil kuch kehta hai, kuch aur hi karti hai, (pointing at Maanvi) ladki kyun? Na jaane kyun? (pulling his collar up, proudly) Ladko si nahi hoti.

Viren's Voice: Nokh-jhok se hui, inki milakat, kya ho sakhega, in dono mein pyaar?

Maanvi: (pointing finger) Eh itna hi khud se khush ho toh, (turns around/walking away and Viraat followed) peeche kyun aate ho? (picked up a rose, from a nearby table) Phool kabhi toh hazar tohfein (looking at him, irritatedly) akhir kyun laate ho? (making wired faces at him) Bikhra bikhra bematlab sa tuta phuta jeena. (fake smile) Aur kehte ho aalag se hain hum taan ke apna (hits on his chest) seena. (pointing finger at him) Jeene ka tumko dhang sikhlati hai, (fixing his hair, with her fingers, which irritated him) tumhe janwar se insa banati hai. (pulls him by his collar) Uske bina ek pal, (nodding her head negatively) rehna sakhoge tum, ussko pata hai yeh, (pushes him back, slightly) keh na sakhoge tum. (smiles widely) Iss liye (pointing at herself) ladkiyan, (pointing at him, while nodding negatively) ladkon si nahi hoti. (hits her shoulder with his) Iss liye ladkiyan, (smiles/nodding negavitely) ladko si nahi hoti.

Lights turned off and then turned back on, this time, Jeevika and Viren were standing together, facing each other with a smile on their face, holding rings in their hand.

Viraat's Voice: Dil ke taar judhe the jab, kismat chamki inki. Parivaar ne jab tai kiya rishta, zindagi mehki inki.

Viren held Jeevika's hand and slipped the ring into her finger, same did Jeevika with Viren. Both were lost in each other's eyes, still holding hands.

Mere haath mein tera haath ho, saari janatein, mere saath ho...Mere haath mein tera haath ho, saari janatein mere saath ho. Tu jo paas ho, fir kya yeh jaahan, tere pyaar mein ho jaun fanna. Mere haath mein tera haath ho, saari janatein mere saath ho. Tu jo paas ho, fir kya yeh jahan, tere pyaar mein ho jaun faana, mere haath mein tera haath ho, saari janatein mere saath ho.

Lights went off again, everyone was enjoying VirIka and VirMan's performance. They were eagerly waiting for the lights to turn back on. The lights were back on, VirMan were standing in the middle of the stage, facing each other, while shaking their hands.

Viren's Voice: Nazdikhiyan(closeness) badhi, hui dosti inki...pyaar toh nahi, magar hui partnership inki.

Viraat: (trying to balance his steps) Chadhi mujhe yaari teri aisi, jaise daaru desi. (holds Maanvi's hand) Khatti mithi batein hain nashe si, jaise daaru desi. Chadhi mujhe yaari teri aisi, jaise daaru desi. Khatti mithi batein hain nashe si, jaise daaru desi.
Maanvi: (pretending to lose her balance) Ladkhadane lagi (smiles) muskurane lagi, (walking around) bewajaah har jagaah aane jaane lagi. (looking at Viraat) Tu mujhe main tujhe, (rans towards him) jo bhi ho dil me woh khul ke bataane lagi...
Viraat: (dancing along with Maanvi) Chadhi mujhe yaari teri aisi, jaise daaru desi. Khatti mithi batein hain nashe si, jaise daaru desi.

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Viraat's Voice: Pehli nazar mein pyaar hua, par izhaar na hua. Shadi bhi hogayi par ikraar na hua.

Viren and Jeevika standing in the middle of the stage, facing each other. Viren was in his sherwani, and Jeevika was wearing her lehenga, with dupatta covering her head. Viren took pinch of sindoor in between his fingers and applied it on Jeevika's forehead.

Tumhi dekho na, yeh kya ho gaya...Tumhara hun main aur tum meri. Main hairaan hun, tumhe kya kahun. Ke dil mein hui kaisi chaandni. Jaagi jaagi si hai, fir bhi khwabon mein hai, Khoyi Khoyi zindagi. Tumhi dekho na yeh kya ho gaya. Tumhara hun main aur tum meri.

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Viren's Voice: Bichdha pyaar milaya, khud ki fikar na karte huye. Dosti nibhayi, maut se ladte huye. Mila diya apne dost ko uske pehle pyaar se, khud dur hone lagi, apni zindagi, apne yaar se.

Maanvi was sitting on a chair, hugging herself and crying her heart out. While Viraat was dancing happily.

Maanvi: Kyun? Phoolon ke, khile khile, rang udh gaye..Kyun? Phoolon ke khile khile rang udh gaye...kyun, inn dino, khud se rehati hoon main khafa khafa, khafa khafa?
Viraat: (hands spread out) Kyun? Phoolon ke (spinning around) ude ude rang khil gaye. Kyun? Phoolon ke, ude ude, rang khil gaye...Kyun inn dino hosh mein hai mere (running his fingers through his hair/happily) nasha nasha, nasha nasha.
Maanvi: Kyun? Phoolon ke, khile khile rang udh gaye...??

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Viraat's Voice: Ruthi woh unse, jab dekha usse kisi aur ke saath. Izhaar kiya pyaar ka, jab rone lagi woh tham ke uska haath.

VirIka were sitting on the floor, holding hands. Jeevika placed her head on Viren shoulder, while sobbing quitely with a smile.

Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam, tere ho gaye hain hum, teri kasam...Oh Ho Ho, hum dil de chuke sanam, tere ho gaye hain hum, teri kasam. Yeh...Duniya kare sitam, tujhpe mitegein hum. Teri kasam. Hooo..Hum, dil de chuke sanam, tere ho gaye hain hum, teri kasam.

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Viren's Voice: Ehsas hua pyaar ka use jab chali gayi woh usse dur. Samjhta tha jise woh sirf apna dost, woh thi ab uske liye kuch aur.

Viraat was dancing with joy, all around the stage with Maanvi's picture in his hands.

Viraat: (blushingly) Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai, jaane kya kar gaye, jaise andheron mein tum chaandni bhar gaye. (looking up, with a smile) Kare chaand taaron ko, mashoor itna kyun? (looking at Maanvi's picture, lovingly) Kambakht inse bhi khoobsurat hai tu. (smiles) I Love You..Tu ru ru yeah...(dancing around, while holding her picture close to his heart) I Love You, tu ru ru yeah yeah...I Love You Hoo ooo...

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Viraat's Voice: Achanak ki khuda ne aisa faisla, zindagi aur maut ke beech mein phas gaya uska hausla.

Viren was standing beside a bed , where Jeevika was lying lifelessly, with tears in his eyes. He held her hand in his, while crying his heart out.

Meri duniya mein aake, mat jaa, mat jaa...kahin mat ja. Meri duniya mein aake, mat jaa, mat jaa, kahin mat jaa. Meri duniya mein aake, mat jaa mat jaa, mat jaa...meri duniya mein aake mat jaa, mat jaa..kahin mat jaa.

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Viren's Voice: Tut sa gaya woh jab khula ek raaz. Khadi thi usski zindagi maut ke paas.

Viraat and Maanvi, standing face to face with teary eyes. Maanvi was looking very weak and Viraat looking very broken, tears streaming down from both of their eyes.

Tune jo na kaha, main woh sunta raha, khamakha bewajah khwab bunta raha. Jaane kis ki hume lag gayi hai nazar, iss shaher mein na apna thikana raha. Dur chaahat se mein apni chalta raha...khamakha bewajah khwab bunta raha.

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Viraat's Voice: Khushi ho ya gum, ansun ho ya hasi, the dono saath saath, maut ho ya zindagi.

Viren and Jeevika together, dancing, looking in each other's eyes. His hands protectively wrapped around her waist, as her hands were wrapped around his neck.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe. Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe. Ho tum jo aaye, zindagi mein, baat ban gayi, sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke, dekhti hun, ab kayee, din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi. Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi...

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Viren's Voice: Har kadam par saath nibhaya tha usne, pyaar mein jo karne se dartein the log, woh kar dikhaya tha usne. Hadh zindagi ki hoti hai pyaar ki nahi, yeh sach fir dohray(restated) tha usne.

Maanvi was sitting on the floor, her head was covered with her dupatta. Viraat was standing in front of her, with a electric shaver in his hand, close to his head. Both were looking into each other's eyes, tears were continuously rolling down their cheeks.

Tu hi meri aashiqui jaaneman, tujhse hai meri khushi, bin tere kuch nahin ab meri zindagi...Tu hi meri aashiqui jaaneman tujhse hai meri khushi. Tere liye hai bechain dil dhoonde tujhe hi meri nazar, chahun tujhe main kitna sanam, tujhko nahi hai uski khabar, khwabon mein tu, aankhon mein tu, dhadkan mein tu, saanson mein tu. Dekha karun main jisse raat bhar, tu hai vahi chaandni, bin tere kuch nahin ab meri zindagi...Tu hi meri aashiqui jaaneman, tujhse hai meri khushi...

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Viraat's Voice: Di dono ne apne khushi ki kurbaani, khona pada inhe apne pyaar ki pehli nishani.

VirIka sitting on the floor, hugging while crying. Jeevika's hands were wrapped around her stomach, and Viren hands were tightly wrapped around her shoulder.

Sau, dard hai...Sau, rahate...Sab mila dil nashin...ek tu hi nahi...

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Viren's Voice: Har din, har raat, saath tha uske. Har pal, har ghadi, paas tha uske. Duayein ne asar dikhayi aur aayi ek farishta, maut se chhin layi woh pyaar ke uske.

Maanvi was happily dancing and jumping with some kids, and Viraat, who was standing in a corner, was continuously staring at Maanvi lovingly, with a huge smile on his face.

Zindagi se chura ke, zindagi mein basa ke, zindagani banaya hai tujhe...Roothe rab ko mana ke, aasmaan ko jhuka ke, zindagani banaya hai tujhe, tu mila jis tarah saba mile tu mila jis tarah sila mila, tu mila jis tarah dua mile, bakhuda. Tu mila toh jaise main jee gaya, tu mila mukammal main ho gaya, tu mila toh phaila hai noor sa, bakhuda.

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Viraat's Voice: Bahut saari mushkilon ke baad bhi, har nahi maane woh, dukh ho yaa sukh, saath the hamesha woh.

Viren and Jeevika, standing together, looking deeply into each other's eyes.

Sa re ga re ga ma ga re sa...Sa re ga re ga...

Viren: (holds her hand) Zindagi mein aaj lamhe khaas aa gaye, (pulls her close to him) aate aate dono ke dil paas aa gaye..

Sa re ga re ga ma ga re sa...Sa re ga re ga...

Viren: (swaying while holding her in his arms) Zindagi mein aaj lamhe khaas aa gaye, aate aate dono ke dil paas aa gaye...
Jeevika: (smiles at him) Tere kadmon pe hi rasta thehra hain mera, (hands on his cheeks) meri aakho ki toh manzil chehra hain tera..
Viren: (smiles) Tu hi tu hai, Tu hi tu hai, jeene ki adaa...
Jeevika: (looking at him lovingly) Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai, saanson ki hawaa...
Viren: (lost in her eyes) Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai, khwabo ki duaa
Jeevika: Hoo...(places her head on his chest) Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai, ek mera khuda..

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Viren's Voice: Din guzre, tab pyaar ka aaghaaz hua, tha pyaar usse bhi yeh ehsaas hua.

Maanvi was sitting on a chair, holding a bear in her hands, lost in her own world, smiling to herself. (dis is based on my story, Maanvi realized her feelings after getting cured)

Maanvi: (hugging the bear tightly) Jaane kyun khwabon mein khoyi khoyi si hai yeh nazar...(blushes) hosh mein hun kiske (hits her head slightly) ab khud ki nahi hai khabar...(stood up) Yeh pehli dafa mujhko ehsas hone laga, ki hai koi jo (pushed the bear away from her) dur se (pulled it back and hugged it tightly again) paas hone laga. (spinning around) Din badalne laga mujhpe chalne laga jaadu...(stops spinning) baheki hai zindagi mera khud pe nahi kabu...(dancing around with the bear) hua kya hua kya hua yeh pyaar mujhe bhi , hua kya hua kya hua? Hua kya hua kya hua yeh pyaar mujhe bhi? (hands spread out/smiles widely) Hua yeh pyaar mujhe bhi hua.

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Viren's Voice: Hua izhaar, kiya Ikrar. Par kismat ko tha kisi aur ka intezaar.

Viraat and Maanvi, standing in the middle of the stage, hand in hand, with teary eyes. Both slowly, started walking backwards, looking at their hands as it slipped away. They turned their backs towards each other, tears streaming down their cheeks.

Do pal ruka, khwabon ka karwa, aur fir chal diye tum kahan hum kaha. Do pal ki thi yeh dilon ki dastan aur fir chal diye tum kahan hum kahan. Aur fir chal diye tum kaha hum kaha.

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Jeevika: (walking towards the stage, where VirMan were standing) Lekin fir bhi, kismat haar gayi aur jeeta inka pyaar.

Viren walked towards Jeevika, and VirMan, who were hugging each other.

Viren: Yeh thi do jode ki kahani, Pyaar aur Takrar. Umeed hai aap sabko pasand aaya hoga.

Everyone stood up, giving standing ovation to the couples on the stage with a huge smiles on their faces. The last performance was the family performance on 'Khushiyaan hi khushiyaan ho' (same as in actual show/VirMan's sangeet)

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It was around 11:00 pm, everyone were off to sleep.

~Maanvi's Room~

Maanvi just came out of her bathroom, after changing in her night dress. She walked towards her wardrobe and neatly hanged her outfit. She turned around as she heard some sounds, and saw someone's shadow in her balcony.

Maanvi: (scared/worried) Ka..Kaun..Kaun hai wa..wahan?

She quickly grabbed a flower vase, and slowly started walking towards the balcony door. As she opened the door and was about to hit that person, she felt herself pushed towards the wall, and pinned against it. That person was covering her mouth, so she doesn't scream. Maanvi's eyes were still close, she didn't understand what to do. She was still holding onto the vase firmly. She could feel that person's gaze on her, she opened her eyes slowly and saw the person, who was looking at her with a cute smile on his face.

Maanvi: (shocked/surprised/little angery) Tum? Tum yahan kyun aaye?

That person was none other than Viraat Singh Vadhera, who secretly sneaked into his would-be wife's room.

Viraat: (cutely pouts) Toh aur kya karta? Tumhari yaad aa rahi thi.
Maanvi: (irritatedly) Bakwas band karo apna, hum koi do sau saal baad nahi mil rahe hai. Abhi neeche se upar aaye hai, mushkil se do ghante bhi nahi huye.
Viraat: Tum do sau saal, ya do ghante ki baat kar rahi ho, (leaning close to her face) main to tumse do second bhi dur nahi reh sakhta.
Maanvi: (pushes him away, slightly) Apni yeh romantic baatein shadi ke baad shuru karna, abhi hato.
Viraat: Shadi ke baad romantic baatein thodi karunga, (wrapped his hands around her waist) uske baad toh baatein kam hongi aur action zyada hoga.
Maanvi: (trying to push him) Viraat, hato mujhe jaana hai.
Viraat: Arey, tum kaisi ladki ho? Shadi se pehle har ladki chahti hai ki uska hone wala Pati usse milne aaye, woh bhi raat ko, shadi se ek din pehle, aur toh aur romantic baatein kare. (pulling her close) Par tum ho ki mujhe khud se dur jaane ko keh rahi ho.
Maanvi: Haan, kyun ki main bakiyon jaisi nahi hun. (pushes him away) Hato ab.
Viraat: Isiliye toh naam diya hai single piece. Ek aur naam dena chahiye tha mujhe...
Maanvi: (looking at him with raised eyebrow) Kaisa naam?
Viraat: (smiles) Moment ruiner.
Maanvi: (gasps) Main, main moment ruin karti hun?
Viraat: Haan, aur nahi toh kya.
Maanvi: Chep...

Maanvi raised her hand to hit him with the vase that she was holding, but Viraat held her hand at the right time.

Viraat: (taking the vase away from her hand) Yeh kya hai? Iss vase ke saath mera sir phodne ka irada tha kya tumhara?
Maanvi: Aur nahi toh kya? (hands on her hips) Aise choro ki tarah kamre mein aao ge toh maar hi padegi na.
Viraat: (putting the vase away) Bilkul Sherni ho, by god.
Maanvi: (smiles) Soh toh hun.
Viraat: Par shadi ke baad mujhe Sherni Biwi nahi chahiye. (pulls her towards him by her waist) Mujhe bahut hi romantic, hot, and sharmili Biwi chahiye.
Maanvi: (fake smile) Na hi main hot hun, na hi romantic aur na hi sharmili. Agar koi aur chahiye toh abhi bhi time hai, kisi aur ko dhundh lo.

Saying that, Maanvi pushes Viraat slightly and started walking away from him. He quickly held her wrist and pulled her back to him.

Maanvi: Viraat kya kar rahe ho?
Viraat: (leaning close to her ears) Hot toh tum ho, Romantic ho ya nahi, yeh toh shadi ke baad hi pata chalega. Aur sharmili toh tum hamesha se thi, bas Sherni ke picche chup jaati thi.
Maanvi: (rolled her eyes) Main apni shart wapas nahi lene wali.
Viraat: (looking at her with an unbelievable look) Kya? Yeh shart kahan se aa gaya.
Maanvi: Hamesha se yahin tha, tumne thik se dekha nahi. Bhuli nahi hun main, teen din pehle jo hua, abhi bhi yaad hai mujhe.
Viraat: (frowns) Sahi naam diya hai maine tumhe, MOMENT RUINER.
Maanvi: (angerily, pushes him away) Acha? Toh jao na uss Chipkali ke paas, jitna chipakna hoga, utna chipakna. Nahi aayungi main tum dono ki moment ruin karne.

Viraat pulled Maanvi by her waist, towards himself, and pinned her against the wall yet again.

Viraat: (looking deeply into her eyes) Dusro ki itni fikar karna chodo, mujhe usse nahi, tumse chipakna hai.

Viraat slowly raised his hand, and started carrasing his finger seductively on her cheeks and ears. Maanvi shuttered under his touch and her heart skipped a beat when she felt his finger moving down from her cheek, to her chin, to her throat, to her neck and finally it stopped at her shouder, after moving her sleevs down a little. She immediately closed her eyes, when Viraat leaned in towards her shoulder, and starts rubbing his warm lips on it. He moved up towards her neck, without pulling his lips away from her soft milky skin. It was getting difficult for Maanvi to breathe properly, she pulled him more close to herself, as he was kissing her neck. Viraat slowly tangled her hair in between his fingers and moved his lips towards her cheek.

Viraat: (his lips brushing against her cheek) Kal humari shadi hai. Last din jab hum ek dusre se alag honge. Uske baad, main tumhe apne aapse ek second ke liye bhi dur nahi hone dunga. Bas aaj raat, kal se tum par mera, aur mujhe par tumhara pura haq hoga. I Love You. (placed a soft, cute kiss on her cheek) Good Night.

Viraat walked towards the balcony and turned back to face Maanvi, who was blushing all red.

Viraat: (half smile) Aur haan, kal haldi tumhe sabse pehle main hi lagaunga, so taiyaar rehna would be Mrs. Viraat Vadhera.

He gave her a flying kiss and climbed down the ladder. Maanvi while blushing, went to her bed, and fell asleep in no time, waiting for her wedding day, with her Partner, her Life, her Viraat.

Ishhh...Long update,,I dn't knw if it was worth reading or not,,,only u guyz can tell me,,,so plz leave ur precious comments 4 me n hit lyk if u lykd it..Tc..n Thnk U...Luv Aartii...

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