VirMan SS...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 29 pg 146

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Posted: 13 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: avika26
sorry for commenting late...

loved the update...pls continue soon

Thnk u soo much...n its ok..will continue soon..😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: cutiepie2244
Hey dear Artii it was really a great update... loved the concern of virat towards maanvi... ooh i should correct myself not concern its his love towards her...😊😊

(Hey Anjali..Thnk u soo much, m so glad dat u lykd it..)

Any ways it was really a sweet update... waooo yr whole update was of just VIRMAN so thats y i loved it more n more😊😊... the starting scene was just too awesome i just can't say that how sweet it was...😊😊

(Thnk u 4 luving it..i tried my best 2 make it interesting...)

Loved this dialogue of virman (Maanvi: (looking at him, while holding his hand, which was on her cheek) Tum shayad rahoge mere saath har kadam par, magar main, main nahi janti ki main tumhara saath har kadam par de bhi paungi ya nahi Viraat. (tears continuously rolling down her cheeks) Pata nahi kab mujhse Bhagwaan naraz ho jaye aur mujhe tumse dur kar de.
Viraat: Aisa kabhi nahi hoga. Tumhe mujhse koi bhi dur nahi kar sakhta, Bhagwaan bhi nahi. Woh chahiye gein bhi na toh main tumhe unse chhin kar apne paas le aunga. (trying to cheer her up) Arey shadi ki hai tumse, meri Biwi ho tum, aise kaise koi bhi alag kardega tumhe mujhse.)... Sorry yr in ur story kuch is tarha also i was just writting ur dialogues in the comment but what should i do yr i just loved ur each n every dialogue of both the stories that much... i was reading the dialogues of VIRMAN again n again... hope u don't mind that m writting the dialogues again n again...

(I don't mind at all dear, m actually happy dat u lykd dat dialogue's dat I wrote...thnk u so much 4 luving dem,...)

The hospital scene was just out of the world dear... loved the maanvi's trust on virat... n now i think she's slowly slowly realizing her feelings towards virat...😊😊... hope that soon she realize her feelings 4 virat n confessed it...😊😊

(she will definitely realize her feelings soon...n confess as well)

Ok now its really late so i should go.. n i know its a bit boring comment sorry 4 that but i didn't have words to say c0z u made me speecless by ur update...

(It's not boring at all, lyk always,,I hve a big smile on my face..😃...thnks a lot dat really means a lot 2 me...thnk u 4 reading n commenting)

U said that we''ll soon see a very sick maanvi... u said that may be in 2-3 upadtes... now the 2 updates r gone so i think it will happen in the next upadte... "fingers crossed"...😊😊

(Yes, I did said dat, n m working on it...in da nxt update, u will c a lil sick Maanvi, but in da nxt update she'll b in vry bad condition...)

Dear plz make the next part as soon as u can... seriously i can't wait... thanxx 4 the pm...😊😊

(I will try 2 make it soon Anjali..thnks a lot 4 reading n commenting, even though u hve 2 study 4 ur exams, u still did...m really thankful 2 u..thnks once again, n gud luck..😊😊😊)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#483

Hello guyz,,m bck..thnks a lot 4 ur lovely comments n lyks...Dis part is similar to da actual part dat happened in da show, not much interesting, but still I just hope dis is up 2 ur expectations...Enjoy...

VirMan...Tum Ho Mera Pyaar...Part 19...

~Recap~

The nurse walked out of the room. After three hours, Viraat woke up Maanvi and they both went back home after getting her medicine.

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~2 Weeks Later~

Viraat and Maanvi were getting ready to go down for their breakfast.

Viraat: (looking at Maanvi/concerned) Maanvi tumhari tabiyat thik hai na?
Maanvi: (looking at him irritatedly) Viraat, tum yeh baat mujhse hazaar baar puch chuke ho.

Viraat was very concerned about Maanvi, as in past four days, her health was getting worst, after her 3rd chemo. She was suffering from high fever and body pain. But for Jeevika, it was just little sickness, she was still unaware of her cancer.

Viraat: Toh kya hua, agar puch liya toh. Pichle chaar din se tumhari halat kitni kharab thi pata hai tumhe.
Maanvi: Haan, toh ab thik hai na, dekho main bhali changi toh khadi hun tumhare samne.
Viraat: Haan thik hai, ab chalo neech, (strictly) aur wapas aane ke baad apni davaiyan le lena, woh bhi time pe samjhi.
Maanvi: (smiles) Mujhe uski fikar karne ki zarurat hi nahi hai, kyun ki tum ho na mera khayal rakhne ke liye.
Viraat: Bandariya. (smiles) Chalo ab.

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After having their breakfast, Dadaji and Inder Chachu went to their office. Kadambari Chachi, Swamini Bua and Vanshika Maa, went out with Shlok. Viraat and Maanvi joined VirIka, who were sitting in the main hall, after giving Maanvi her medicines.

Viraat: (sitting on the couch, along with Maanvi) So Bhai, aaj aap ghar par, kuch special hai kya?
Viren: Nahi woh, aaj office mein mere liye zyada kaam nahi tha toh ghar par hi ruk gaya.
Maanvi: Acha kiya Jiju, waise bhi aapko meri Di ke liye bhi time nikalna chahiye na. (pretending to be sad) Meri Di kitni bore ho jaati hai, bechari aapka intezaar karte karte.
Viraat: Haan, sahi baat hai.
Jeevika: (laughs at Maanvi) Nautanki, teri tabiyaat thik kya hui, natak shuru ho gaya tera.
Maanvi: Of course Di, (proudly) woh Maanvi hi kya jo nautanki na kare.
Viren: (smiles at Maanvi) Wah, sahi hai.
Viraat: Haan, iska naam Maanvi Vadhera nahi Maanvi Nautanki hona chahiye tha.
Jeevika: (laughingly) Sach mein Viraat.

Viraat reiceved his call as he heard his phone ringing.

Viraat: Hello?
Rohan: Hey Viraat, kaisa hai yaar tu?

Viraat smiled widely after hearing his best friend Rohan's voice.

Viraat: Main toh thik hun, tu kaisa hai?
Rohan: Main bhi first class hun. Suna hai ki tune shadi karli?
Viraat: (blushes, while looking at Maanvi) Haan yaar woh...
Rohan: (angerily) Hadh hai kamine, shadi karli aur bulaya tak nahi, dekh li teri dosti.
Viraat: Sorry yaar, sab kuch jaldi jaldi mein ho gaya batane ka mauka hi nahi mila.
Rohan: Thik hai, par mujhe Bhabhi se milna hai.
Viraat: (smiles) Anytime yaar.
Rohan: Thik hai toh aaj mere ghar par party hai, aur main chahta hun ki tu aaye woh bhi Bhabhi ko saath le kar. Maine humare group ke saare friends ko bulaya hai.
Viraat: Nahi yaar Rohan, main nahi aa sakhta.
Rohan: Kya? Tu aisa kaise kar sakhta hai Viraat? Tanya bhi aa rahi hai.
Viraat: Main sach mein nahi aa sakhta Rohan, samjha kar na.
Rohan: Arey aa na yaar, itni footage mat kha. Will have fun.
Viraat: Sorry yaar, main nahi aa sakhta. You guys enjoy. Bye. (hangs up)

As Viraat hanged up, he saw Maanvi, Viren, and Jeevika looking at him with narrowed eyes.

Viraat: Aise kyun dekh rahe ho aap teeno mujhe?
Viren: Kiska phone tha?
Viraat: Woh Rohan ka, aapko yaad hai, hum saath mein college gaye the.
Viren: (smiles) Oh haan, yaad hai. Kya kaha usne?
Viraat: Woh uske ghar mein party hai, so woh chahta hai ki main wahan jaun Maanvi ke saath.
Jeevika: Toh jao na Viraat, tumne mana kyun kar diya?
Viraat: Bhabhi, Maanvi ki tabiyaat thik nahi rehti, aise mein hum bahar party mein kaise jaa sakhte hain.
Jeevika: (smiles at her over concerned Devar) Viraat, Mannu toh abhi bilkul thik hai, uska fever bhi utar gaya hai,
Viren: Haan Viraat.
Viraat: Par main koi risk nahi lena chahta.
Maanvi: (frowns) Oh hello, yeh bahana banana na tum band kardo, mujhe pata hai tum mujhe apne friends se milwana hi nahi chahte isiliye yeh sab bahane bana rahe ho.
Viraat: Main koi bahana nahi bana raha, sach keh raha hun.
Viren: Viraat, tum dono jao party mein, Maanvi bhi acha feel karegi.
Jeevika: (smiles) Haan Viraat, tumhe jaana chahiye.
Viraat: Thik hai, (looking at Maanvi) hum jaiyein gein.

Maanvi smiles widely at Viraat, who looked helpless at that moment.

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~VirMan's Room~

Viraat was sitting on the bed, while Maanvi was looking for the perfect dress to wear for the party.

Maanvi: (showing him two of her dress/confusedly) Viraat, main yeh pehnun ya yeh?

Maanvi walked towards Viraat, when she didn't get any response from him.

Maanvi: (near his ear, loudly) VIRAAT?
Viraat: (shocked/confused/panicked/stood up) Kya? Kya hua Maanvi? (hands on her shoulder) Tum thik toh ho na, kahin dard ho raha hai? Main abhi Doctor ko bulata hun.

Maanvi looked at Viraat worriedly, she stopped him as he was about to call the Doctor.

Maanvi: Viraat, kuch nahi hua hai mujhe. Main thik hun, relax.
Viraat: (looking at her, questionally) Kuch nahi hua?
Maanvi: (nodding negatively) Nahi.

Viraat hugged her tightly, where as Maanvi stood there in shock.

Viraat: (pulling her close/eyes closed) Kuch nahi hua.

Maanvi placed her dress on the bed, and sat down along with Viraat.

Maanvi: (pulls away from the hug) Viraat kya hua?
Viraat: (avoiding eye contacts with her) Kuch bhi toh nahi hua.
Maanvi: (hands on his cheeks) Viraat, sach sach batao, kya hua hai?
Viraat: (teary eyes) Pichle kuch dino se tumhari tabiyaat bahut kharab thi. Shayad usski wajha se mujhe lagta hai ki hume iss party mein nahi jaana chahiye, agar tumhe kuch ho gaya toh?
Maanvi: Mujhe kuch nahi hoga Viraat. Jab tak tum mere saath ho mujhe kuch ho sakhta hai kya? Nahi na. (Viraat nodded) Toh fir?
Viraat: (hand on her cheek) Main tumhe kabhi kuch nahi hone de sakhta Maanvi.
Maanvi: (smiles) Viraat, main ab thik hun. Aur hum iss party mein jaa rahe hai samjhe tum?

Viraat just smiled at her, as she picked up her dress from the bed.

Maanvi: (showing her dresses to him again) Ab batao kaunsi?
Viraat: (pointing at one of her dress) Yeh wali.
Maanvi: (smiles) Mujhe bhi yeh zyada pasand hai.

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Viraat: (annoyed) OF Ho Maanvi, aur kitna waqt lagaogi, der ho raha hai.

Viraat was standing downstairs, calling out for Maanvi, who was still getting ready in their bedroom.

Viraat: Maanvi? (turns his back towards the stairs) Hadh hai yaar, itni der toh tumne humari shadi ke din bhi nahi li thi taiyaar hone mein.
Maanvi: (irritatedly/walking down the stairs) Kitne Chep ho tum Viraat, mujhe thik se taiyaar bhi nhi hone dete.

Viraat turned around and saw his angel descending the stairs in her beautiful red and black anarkali suit. Her long beautiful hair left straight open, with matching earrings, and very light make-up. He was lost in her beauty, she was looking drop dead gorgeous. After reaching where Viraat was standing, her cheeks went bright red as she saw him lost in her.

https://www.gravity-fashion.com/2071-dazzling-diva-black-red-salwar-kameez.html

Maanvi: Ab der nahi ho rahi hai?
Viraat: (coming back to his sense) Ah, haan, chalo..

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Viraat and Maanvi entered Rohan's houses, which was big and had huge amount of people in there.

Maanvi: (nervous) Itne saare log Viraat? Tum college padhne jaate the ya dost banane?
Viraat: Jaata toh padhne tha, par pata nahi chala kab itne saare dost ban gaye.

Rohan saw Viraat at the door, he immediately ran towards the door with a huge smile on his face.

Rohan: (happy/excited) Viraat, tu aa gaya?
Viraat: Yes, ab main tera dil kaise tod sakhta tha.
Rohan: Thanks Yaar. (hugs Viraat)

Maanvi just smiled looking at the two, bhichda hua dost's meeting.

Viraat: Anytime. (breaking the hug) Yaar, tumne pure college ko invite kiya hai kya?
Rohan: Nahi yaar, you know na, girlfriends, boyfriend, wives, husbands...
Viraat: Ya Ya Ya..I know. Waise tu abhi bhi single hai ya koi mil gayi.
Rohan: (frowns) Kahan yaar, meri wali abhi bhi hide and seek khel rahi hai mere saath.
Viraat: Acha hai, single hi reh tu.
Rohan: Bahut bak mat, main...(stops when he saw Maanvi/pointing at her) Yeh Bhabhi hai?
Viraat: (looking at Maanvi) Oh sorry, introduce karana bhul gaya. (hand around Maanvi's shoulder) Maanvi yeh hai (pointing at Rohan) Rohan mera sabse acha dost aur Rohan (pulling Maanvi close) yeh hai Maanvi, my wife.

Maanvi blushed as Viraat called her his wife, with his hand around her shoulder.

Rohan: (smiles at Maanvi) Heloo Bhabhi ji.
Maanvi: (smiles back) Hi.
Rohan: Acha ab hum andar chalke baki sab se bhi mil lete hai.
Viraat: Chalo.

They walked in the middle of the hall, and everyone walked towards Viraat.

Priya: Hey Viraat, (hugs him)

Maanvi looked at Priya, who was wear a really shot dress, disgustingly.

Priya: (breaking the hug) Look at you. Kitne badal gaye ho tum.
Viraat: Tum bhi kafi badal gayi ho Priya.

Maanvi shot Viraat a deadly glare, who was still busy with his so called friend.

Priya: Oh you still remember my name.
Viraat: Of course.

Maanvi was fuming in anger as she saw Viraat hugging other girls, who were wearing short dresses.

Neha: (looking at Maanvi) Yeh kaun hai Viraat?
Viraat: (turned his face towards Maanvi) Oh, sorry..(hand around her shoulder) Yeh Maanvi hai, my wife.
~*~OMG Viraat Vadhera, You Got Married?

Everyone turned to see the owner of the voice. It was none other then Tanya. Maanvi looked at Tanya from head to toe, she was wearing a very short black dress, her face glowing with so much make-up.

Viraat: Tanya (spreads his hands for Tanya to hug him)

Maanvi angerily looked at Viraat and than at Tanya, as she walked towards him and hugged him.

Tanya: (hugging him tightly) God Viraat, I missed you so much.

Maanvi looked down disgustedly, she didn't know why, but she was jealous of this make-up ki dukan, Tanya.

Viraat: (breaking the hug) I missed you too. Kitna time ho gaya na hume miley hue.
Tanya: Exactly, but I don't think you missed me.
Viraat: Kyun?
Tanya: (glaring at Maanvi) Cuz your married.
Viraat: So what? Tum toh meri best friend ho na, main toh kabhi bhi tumhe miss kar sakhta hun.
Tanya: (smiles) Yaa.
Viraat: By the way, meet Maanvi, (wrapped his hand around her waist) my life partner.

Tanya and Maanvi looked at each other with fake smile on their face.

Tanya: Hey Maanvi. (extended her hand)
Maanvi: Hi (shaking her hand with Tanya's)
Tanya: Viraat, tumhari taste kafi badal gayi hai na.
Viraat: Kyun?
Tanya: Jab hum college mein the, tab toh tumhe short dresses wali ladkiyan pasand thi, (looking at Maanvi, head to toe) and now...
Viraat: Ya, but tab ki baat alag thi.
Tanya: Jo bhi ho, I still remember (looking at Maanvi with a evil smile) tum kaise mujhse chipke rehte the, aur sabko lagta tha ki hum relationship mein hai.
Viraat: (smiles) I know, aur humne unhe galat hints bhi diye the.
Priya: That was rude guys, hume toh sach mein laga tha ki tum dono ke beech mein kuch hai.
Rohan: (smiles) Haan, par mujhe sach pata tha.
Tanya: Ya right, Viraat ka chamcha. Acha ab dance karne chalte hai. (hands around Viraat's arm) Come Viraat, lets dance.
Viraat: Nahi Tanya, please. Tum jao.
Tanya: Oh come on Viraat, its just a dance. Hum baar baar thodi na miley gein.
Rohan: Come one Viraat.
Viraat: (smiles) Ok.

Tanya dragged Viraat towards the dance floor and started dancing, while Maanvi was burning in jealousy, seeing her husband dancing with some other girl.

Rohan: Bhabhi aap bhi aaiye na, dance ki jiye.
Maanvi: (smiles) Nahi, main thik hun.
Rohan: Arey aaiye na.
Maanvi: Nahi, mujhe dance karna nahi aata, sorry.
Rohan: Ok.

Rohan left towards the dance floor, leaving Maanvi behind, who was burning in jealousy, looking at Viraat and Tanya, dancing so close to each other. On the other hand, Viraat was trying to push Tanya, who was leaning onto him, while pulling him close to her face.

Viraat: (trying to make distance from her) Tanya, I think bahut dance ho gaya, Maanvi mera intezaar kar rahi hai.
Tanya: (pulling him close) Oh com'on Viraat. I know you don't love that bahenji. I'm 100% sure you just married her because of your family.
Viraat: Tanya, tum hosh mein nahi lag rahi ho, tumhe ghar jaana chahiye.
Tanya: (hands around his neck, pulling him more close) Oh Viraat, kash main apna hosh pehle hi kho deti, toh tum uss Maya ya iss Maanvi ke paas na jaate. You know na Viraat I Love You so much.

Tanya started kissing Viraat on his face, pulling him as close as she could. While Viraat was trying to push her back.

Viraat: Tanya...Tanya please..

Maanvi, who was looking at the way Tanya was behaving with Viraat, stormed towards the dance floor, where Viraat and Tanya were. She pulled him with a jerk towards herself, leaving both Viraat and Tanya shocked and surprised.

Tanya: Hey you...(pointing fingers) how dare you?

The music stopped and everyone towards Maanvi, Viraat, and Tanya, as Maanvi, who was fuming with anger, slapped Tanya right across her face.

Maanvi: (pointing fingers) How dare you? Tumhari himmat kaise hui mere Pati ko chhune ki huh?
Tanya: (fuming) Just shut up. Kya Pati Pati laga rakha hai, ussne tumse shadi sirf apni ghar walo ke liye ki hai samjhi tum.
Maanvi: Usne mujhse shadi chahiye kisi bhi reason se ki ho, usse yeh sach nahi badal jaata ki main uski Patni hun.
Tanya: Usse yeh sach bhi nahi badalta ki woh tumse pyaar nahi karta.
Viraat: (pulling Maanvi, by her shoulder) Maanvi chalo yahan se.
Maanvi: (fuming in anger) Woh mujhse pyaar karta hai ya nahi, isse tumhe koi farak nahi padhna chahiye.
Viraat: (pulling Maanvi) Maanvi let's go.
Tanya: Isse sabko farak padhta hai, you know why? Because He Hate You. (loudly) He Hates You Maanvi.
Viraat: (on top of his voice) Enough Tanya. Just Shut Up.
Tanya: Viraat tum mujhe kyun keh rahe ho? (pointing at Maanvi) Isse kaho, kaho isse that you hate her. (held his collar, pulling him close) Tell her Viraat, tell her that you hate her, (hands on his cheeks, as he was trying to push her) tell her you love me, tell her Viraat. Leave her Viraat.

Viraat pushed Tanya away with a jerk, and wrapped his arm around Maanvi.

Viraat: Bas Tanya, bahut ho gaya. (looking at Maanvi) Chalo Maanvi. (walking away with Maanvi)
Tanya: (shouting) Main tumhe nahi chodungi Maanvi...main tumhe nahi chodungi.

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It was around 8:30 pm, the journey back home was very silent, neither of them said a word. Maanvi went straight to the bed after changing, while Viraat was sitting on the couch, thinking about the party incident.

Viraat: (softly) Maanvi, kya zarurat thi usse thappad(slap) marne ki?

No response.

Viraat: (turns his face towards her) Maanvi tum sun rahi ho?

No response.

Viraat: (stands up) Maanvi main janta hun tum soyi nahi ho.

No response.

Viraat: Maanvi, I'm talking to you. (shouting at her) Answer me damn it.
Maanvi: (sits up on the bed) Toh aur kya karti main Viraat? Aur kya karti main? Woh tumhare saath kitni batamizi kar rahi thi.
Viraat: Iska matlab yeh toh nahi hua na ki tum usse thappad marogi?
Maanvi: (looking at him, with unbelievable look) Agar main usse thappad nahi marti toh woh apni hadh paar kar deti.
Viraat: (angerily) Woh jo bhi kar rahi thi mere saath kar rahi thi. Tumhe beech mein aane ki zarurat nahi thi.

Maanvi got out of her bad, and walked towards Viraat.

Maanvi: Kaise zarurat nahi thi Viraat, Patni hun main tumhari, aise kaise kisi aur ladki ko tumhare paas aane dun? Aise kaise kisi aur ladki ko tumhe kiss karne dun?
Viraat: Maanvi hum sirf dance kar rahe the, woh naashe mein thi, isiliye woh sab...
Maanvi: (cutting him off) Woh naashe mein thi toh kya tum usse khud ko kiss karne dete?
Viraat: (turning his face away from hers) Maanvi I didn't mean to say that ok?
Maanvi: (walked infront of him) That is exactly what you wanted to say Mr. Vadhera. (tears rolling down her cheeks) Tum yahi chahte the, isiliye tumne usse kaha ki tumne mujhse shadi apni family ke liye ki hai. Isiliye usne kaha that you hate me. Nafrat karte ho na mujhse tum? Shadi karke pachta rahe ho na tum?

Maanvi's every single words pierced Viraat's heart. He felt like someone ripped his heart out of his chest. The person, whom he loves the most, is saying that he hates her. He regrets his desicion of marring her.

Viraat: Tum iss topic ko kaha se kaha le kar jaa rahi ho Maanvi. In sab mein humari shadi ki baat kahan se aa gayi?
Maanvi: (tears rolling down) In sab se hi humari shadi ki baat jodi hai Viraat. Jab woh tumhare upar chadhe jaa rahi thi toh tumne usse apne aapse dur hi nahi kiya. Jab woh tumhe kiss karne jaa rahi thi, tab tumne usse rokna sahi nahi samjha. Humari shadi ko do hafte ho gaye hai, liken aaj tak tum mere kareeb nahi aaye, aaj tak tumne mujhe kiss nahi kiya. Iss sabka main kya matlab nikalun? Yahi ki tum mujhse nafrat karte ho? Bhoj(burden) bann gayi hun main tum par shadi ke baad?
Viraat: (angerily) Bas Maanvi! Tumhe problem kis baat se hai huh? Iss baat se ki maine Tanya ko roka nahi ya iss baat se ki humari shadi ko do hafte ho gaye hai aur main aaj tak tumhare kareeb nahi aaya? (after a long pause) Thik hai, yahi chahti ho na tum, toh yahi sahi.

Viraat held onto Maanvi's shoulder and pinned her against the wall. Maanvi was shocked at his sudden action, she was just looking at him with widen eyes, where as Viraat's eyes were blood shot red.

Viraat: (upper body touching hers) Itna kareeb bas hai Maanvi?

Maanvi's heartbeat increased as she saw Viraat's gaze on her quivering lips. Viraat looked up at Maanvi's eyes, which were filled with tears, he slowly moved one of his hand away from her shoulder, towards the back of her neck, while the other moved down towards her waist, pulling her more close to him. The next second, Maanvi felt his warm lips crushed onto hers.
Her eyes widden in shock as his lips were moving against hers, fiercely. Viraat was lost in that kiss, he was lossing all his sense, all his anger at that moment. Maanvi slowly closed her eyes, while moving her hands from his chest, towards his shoulder. She slowly started moving her lips aganist his. Viraat opened his eyes as he felt Maanvi's lips moving against his. He saw her eyes closed, her hands slowly moving towards his neck. He immediately pulled back from the kiss, and looked at her, angerily.

Viraat: Mil gaya tumhe apne sawalon ka jawab? Agar mere tumhare kareeb aane se yeh sabit hota hai ki main tumse nafrat nahi karta, ki tum mere liye bhoj nahi ho. (stepping close to her) Toh main tumhare kareeb hamesha aunga samjhi tum!

With that, Viraat stormed out of the room, leaving a shocked and confused Maanvi behind.

Maanvi: (touching her lips) Yeh kya...Maine...(smiles with teary eyes) Yeh...

Maanvi was happy after whatever happened between her and Viraat.

Maanvi: (smiles widely) Viraat mujhse nafrat nahi karta...woh mujhse nafrat nahi karta...(after a pause/saddly) Magar woh tujhse pyaar bhi toh nahi karta na Mannu...(confused) Aur main itna khush kyun ho rahi hun yeh jaan kar ki woh mujhse nafrat nahi karta?

The next mintue, her body started aching, her head spinning, her vision getting blured. She wrapped her hands around her body, as the pain was getting unbearable. Her body was shivering very badly, and her knees were going weak.

Maanvi: Aaahhh...(sliding down to the floor) Aaahhh...(low voice) Dii...Vi..Vir..Viraat...Di..

And the next thing she knew, everything was blanked out, her eyes closed as she lied on the floor helplessly, while enduring the unbareable pain.

A very long update, I hope its not boring...now b4 u say continue, m tellin u dat in da nxt update, u mite cry, so think about it...Plz leave ur feed back 4 me...thnks a lot..tc Luv Aarti...

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imsid

@imsid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#484

awsum update arti *charan sparsh* ashirwad do mujhe.. Mujhme me bhi thodi bahot writing skill aajaye..
U r a great writer..
loved jealous manvi
Loved virat -''itna karib kafi hain?''
bt wat hapnd to manvi in d end??

pls pls pls update kuch is tarah 0

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#485

I m speechless...i hv no words...ill give my comment later...ohhh goddd

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AMNA

@AmnaZaYa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#486

kya update hai yaar... awsum...

cont soon and thanks for pm😊

Edited by amnavirman - 13 years ago

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#487

Phweee...ok let me think 1st wat should i write...hmmm???...u n ur updts r fab, amazing, mindblowing, awesome, fantastic, superb, mismerising, n lots more...seriously the last scene was damn awesome...i think i m not that able to comment on ur talent...bcs i m absolutely nontalented lolzzz...cont soon

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AsadZoyaILU

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Posted: 13 years ago

#488

plezz can u do one more update today

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#489

i loved the update it was jst awesome :)
Again tanya and her nautanki hate tht lady bt still thankful to her coz of her virman romance ;)
Manvi faint nw virat will regret on what he did nd thts nt good :(
Pls update soon