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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
OMG OMG OMG. one more Taarey love birds forever story & that too by you again. I cant wait for this one now.
I'm already so excited for this one. So many characters & it seems really interesting just like the other one.
When I read "Bade bahiya" was "Mr. Karan Shikhawat", the first person that comes to my mind after reading the name "karan" is our own HOT/SEXY/HANDSOME KARAN SINGH GROVER. I can't imagine any other Karan at all. I just wanted to share this, bcz I'm just CRAZY like that. LOL
Anyways All the Best for this new one, & hope this is as ROCKING as the other one you are writing.
I'm still not getting you pm's so plz pm me. I love reading these stories of yours.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER:-71
Rey went to chemistry lab n nil was thinking why rey is hurting taani n he get worried by seeing both rey n taani n he decide to talk to rey n he goes of frm canteen to meet rey..
vicky:are nil kaha ga raha hai..
amar:ye to gaya.
bharath:yar samajh nai araha ki aaj kal ho kya raha hai..
neha:neha thinking same
simmi:guys pata nai q bt sab alang n ajeeb nai hora phele rey taani ki ft thn shivam rey ki ft n now nil ajeeb behaviour.. {al were thinking when nil enter chemistry lab n rey see him n say}
rey:dude tu yaha kya kar raha hai?
nilesh:q nahi asakta kya?
rey:nil tujhe ho kya gaya hai?tu mujhese aise q bat kar raha hai?
nilesh:q rey bura laga?aur jis taraha se tu taani se baat kar raha hai wo kya hai..
rey:dekh main janta hu main taani se baat karne ka way rt nai hai bt main kya karu wo sab galat kar rahi hai n us par se wo mujhese jhut pe jhut bolrahi hai..
nilesh:rey tuhi hamesha kehta hai agar koi humse jhut bol raha hai to use bat karne ki khoshish karo console kar n tu{rey cut him}
rey:dekh dude tu puri baat nahi janta hain n main bohut bar taani se bat karne ki koshish ki bt wo.
nilesh:rey plz yar tu kuch bhi bol tu jo taani ke saath kar raha hai wo galath hai n swayam ye jante hui bhi wo tujhese kuch nai kahega as tu uska bstfrnd hai..dekh rey main nai janta tere aur taani ke bich kya prob hain bt main itna suggest karunga ki ye prob kitna jaldi ho utna jaldi solue karle is phele ki der ho jaye dude...{rey luk at him n thn he goes 4m there...rey get angry on himself}
rey:nil ne sahi to kaha main hi galath hu mujhe taani ko is taraha sab ke samne wo sari bate nahi karni chaiye thi main use pyaar karta hua aur main hi ye sab kar raha hu...use insult kar raha hu..why why why main ne taani ko kitna hurt kiya..q kiya rey q kiya.{start throughing everthng here n there he mess the table in lab brk testtube n pushes all the chemical here n there n finally frututed sit down by puting his head down n tears roll down frm his check meanwhile the chemical which have fallen get start reacting n slowlly they create fire n it slowly it catche the papers n bences n rey stil dnt realise as he was lost...}
{In canteen swayam reaches n sit n thn they start talking whn suddenly they see tht college student running smewhere so vicky 1studnt n ask}
vicky:kya hua sablog bhag q rahe ho?
st:wo aap logo ko nai pata chemisty lab mein aag lagai hai..
all:wht?
kriya:waha to rey gaye the..
swayam:wht?
sharon:ha wo kuch kam se bt wo waha se nikla nai..
swayam:guys wait main cal karta hu..{he dails n put it on speaker n rey get out of his thaughts n say}
rey:ha dude bol.
swayam:kaha hai tu?
rey:main wo chemistry lab mein hu q?
swayam:dude tu pagal hogaya hai kya?tu waha kya kara tujhe pata hai waha kya hua hai.
rey:kya hua.?
swayam:rey waha aag lagi hai..
rey:wht{get up n see n was shocked to see it he stand there seeing fire like statu...4 smetime n swayam was caling him}
swayam:rey rey rey..{cme to sense}
rey:ha dude wo maine ntice nai kiya{al were shock...}
Edited by lovelypriya - 12 years ago
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CHAPTER:-72
swayam:abh tn notice kiya na to nikal waha se..hum arahe hai tabtak nikal waha se...
rey:yaa{swayam ct the cal n sharon n kriya were crying al were realy swayam,sharon,kriya n team goes run to lab...n as they reach they see that the lab was alrounded with fire they get shock to see this n stand there as they mind dnt get wht to do...sme students were trying to put off the fire...so vhcky,amar,bharath n swayam start helping the boys n n girls were consoling kriya as she was crying alot...swayam say}
swayam:guys jaldi paani lao...
st:wo kal se clg ka water supply nai chalra n paani bhi bohut kam hai.
swayam:wht?{til thn the fire grew more n the studnt get scared n vicky,amar,bharath n amar try to push bck the studnts n help to putoff the fire n swayam cal again rey}
swayam:rey kaha hai tu bhar nai aya..
rey:{get fratuated n was unable to talk clearly}sway...am.. wo...aag..bo..bo..hut...zadi ..hah aur main... yaha se nikal nai pa..ra... {n get fruated start coughing n in fruation the slips 4m his hand... n he get down on his knees n then faint n fall down n on othrside swayam shouts}
swayam:rey rey rey..rey rey.,..
sharon:swayam kya hua rey ko.
swayam:kubh nai main andhar jake rey ko leke aata hu{n try tn go when vicky n amar hold him}
vicky:pagal hogaya tu..itni aag lagi hai aur tu adhar jayega to rey to kya tu bhi nai bachega..
swayam:bt guys rey adhar phas hu hai..
amar:ha swayam to hum yaha se aag bhujani koshish karena bt agar tu adhar jane ki bat karana wo pagal panti hai samjha tu..n hamne firestation kn cal kiya hai wo log aate hi honge..tab tak hum try karte hai fire bujane ki..{al again start helping n trying to put off the fire n otherhand nil enter the fireexit with sudden n taani get shock n nil was heavily breathing n he tels taani..}
nil:taani wo wo chemistry lab mein aag lag gai hain n waha rey phasa hua hai..
taani:wht?{get stunned to hear this n thn she start running to lab n nil follow her she reaches n clash with swayam who was putting off fire}
swayam:taani kaha thi to {til thn vicky say}
vicky:ye le swayam paani.{swayam take it n nil too join them n taani ask swayam n he ans with busy in puting fire off}
taanh:bhai rey rey kaha hai.
swayam:taani rey adhar phasa hua hai...n shayad aag n smoke karan wo bhehosh hogaya hai..
taani:wht?to aap kuch karte q nahi bhai plz kuch kijiye rey ko bachaiye..
swayam:taani i m trying n main andhar jana chata hu bt ye log mujhe jane nai dere..n tum tension mat lo hum rey ko kuch nai hone denge,{til thn kriya start shobbing very badly n taani see her,sharon n al girls n boys every1 where worried n trying to putoff fire in anyway bt the fire was grewing taani tears also start flowing n kriya say}
kriya:maine rey ko kho diya?wo pata nai kaise honge i dnt want to lose him
sharon:nai kriyj rey ko kuch nai hnga hum kuch nai hone denge..{taani got scared to hear kriya she was standing infrnt of labdoor n al were putting water on fire she fell heq everythng lost n was finish n thn she run in.}
Edited by lovelypriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER:-73
taani run in...n swayam see n cal her loudly...
swayam:taani...{by this everyone luk at him n as swayam was go inside again vicky n amar hold her...}
swayam:vicky taani..taani andhar gai yar..
nil:dude humne dekha yar dnt worry we r puting off fire na they wil be ok now just dnt waiste time n aag bujane mein help karo jaldi...{al again start in helping each othe sharon was little bit satisfied by taani n kriya was shocked bt they ignnre n were worried 4rey n now taani too meanwhile inside taani was shouting n caling rey she was holding the locket in her hand n was shobing n caling rey n now it has been 5min bt she cnt find rey as he had fallen down n a brk was over him so she cnt see him fire was getting frurious n frurious n taani was trying to find rey finaly she rey hand 4m a coner n she rushes to him n take out the bench sit down the locket slips 4m her hand she dint nt notice it n take his head into his laps n call him}
taani:rey..rey..rey.plz rey plz uthiye...rey..{bt rey was nt responding..}hey krishanji rey uth q nai rahe..{thn she a tab in lab n put rey head aside frm her laps n thn she run there n find a smal bowl n collect water 4m it n again cme to rey n pour it on him by this rey smewht cme to senses n he was til fratated due to smoke n was nt fully concious n he was nt able to open his eyes fully n taani say}
taani:chaliye rey yahase...{then she help him to get up n keep his hand over shoulder to give him support n trx to get out 4m there the fire was now ful they were unable to find way everywhere there was fire al thigs were bunning as it was lab chemicak reactions were creating sunds n fire was becming more curious...outsidew swayam say}
swayam:guys 15min hogaye hai bt na taani bhar aayi na rey plz maujhe jane do main dekh ke aata hu...
nil:bt{til thn nil see taani n rey try to cme towards door n he say}taani rey{al turn bck n see them al weqe happy tht they r cming out bt thn rey left hand was abt to go in fire bt taani hold it n her hand get burn al put water n water n swayam go til door n help taani to get out taani was in middle n turn sideway so tht swayam cn help rey frst n swayam was helping rey when taani take out his hand 4m her neck n try to leave bt rey hold her hand tightly...al were cnfusd to see this at the smetime taani see her hand empty n realise tht her locket was nt there..}
swayam:taani tu ruk q gai tu bhi bhar aaja..
taani:bhai phele aap rey hospital lejaiye..{try to relise her hand n finaly do tht n swayam take rey ut when he see taani again going in..he cal her}
swayam:taani taani...{al luk at him whn v.p sir cme n asj thn to take rey hospital n swayam says}
swayam:guxs tum log rey ko leke jao main taani ko dekgta hu..
nil:bt{swayam shouts}
swayam:maine kaha na leave..{thn vicky,kriya,vishaka,bharath,amar,neha leaves n remaining stay asa they leave swayam go inside the lab...}
sharon:swayam...{til thn inside taani go where rey was there n see locket n hold it near her heart n due to fire shefaint}
swayam ask nil n vicky to take rey to hospital...n nil say bt swayam shouts n til thn v.p sir cme n say to take rey immedaitely to hospital n kriya,vicky,neha,bharath n vishaka go..n reaming stay n asa they go swayam run in the lab til thn sharon caried 4 swayam..n swayam reach inside n search taani n he find her n then go to her as he was abt to touch taani face whn he see the locket n was shocked he was nt able to undstand wht was going on...as he saw taani n rey pic in it as it was open as he was thinjing he hear nil words tht fire station was there n fire is undr cntol n he then luk at taani to locket n thn locket to taani n thn he carry taani in her hand n take her out as he cme out al get tensed n sharon,nil n al try to wake taani bt were unsuccerful...whn v.p sir give his car key n ask swayam to take taani hospital nil take the keys n al go n swayam go n start the car fast n drve to hospitak n asa they reach he take taani in n seeing taani al get tensed...n she was taken to ward...al were worried n swayam was shock n was unable to undrrtand wht was going on n thn he ask kriya abt rey n she say he is in i.c.u...al weqe standing,sitting consoling eachothr n waiting n waiting aftr 2hour of waiting dr cme out 4m taani ward n infnrm
dr:dnt worry the lady is 5n now just due to smoke she was unable to breath n had fainted bt she is 5n just sme minor injurious r therd..
swayam:thk u so much dr thks alot..{dr smiles n tab swayam shouldr n leave sharon says tht thksgod tha taani is 5n n al were now worried 4 rey aftr 1hour rey 4m i.c.u cme out n say..}
dr:ur frnd is alrt now he is 5n n in smetime he wil be councious n take care oe him n ya dnt give him stress
swayam:we wil take care dr n thks alot 4 ur help..
dr:tk mujhe nai use boliye jisne thik samay pe apke frnd ko aag se nikala warna hum kuch nai karpate...{al think abt taani n dr leaves n taani cal swayam 4m bcl n al turn to her}
taani:bhai{run to him n hug him...bt swayam brk the hug n hold tightly n say in low tne...}
swayam:taani mujhe tujhe bat karni abhi..
taani:bhai ha bt plz kya main ek bar plz rey ko dekh sakti hu plz bas ek bar plz bhai plz{hnld his hand n sobs alot swayam was unable tn see taani n nodes his head in yes n she run to i.c.u n thrugh i.c.u mirrow luk at rey who was coverd with needle,injection n oxygen mask n was shobing badly whn swayam see kriya noticing taani n was shocked so he cme to taani n hold her hand n drg her into her room.taani eyes were full of tears.they reach the room n swayam ask her}
swayam-taani kya chal raha hai tere aur rey ke beech. sach sach bata tujhe meri kasam. taani-wo...wo..
swayam-taani bol
taani-bhai wo actually mai rey ko pasand karti hu..
swayam:wat??
taani:haa bhai aur maine rey ko bataya.bt rey sirf aur sirf kriya se hi pyaar karte hai
swayam-taani sab teri wajah se ho raha..abh rey ko guilty feel ho raha hoga ki wo mujhe kaise face karega.mujhe bura is baat ka lag raha hai ki tum donone mujhe kuch nahi kaha.rey ne bhi nai bataya
taani-bhai m sorry.
swayam-abh main sorry ka kya karu taani..sab tumhari wajah se ho raha hai.sab kuch.rey teri wajah se frustruated hai n aaj rey ki ye haalat hai to sirf teri wajah se..actually tujhe yaha hona hi nahi chahiye.
taani-haa bhai dance competetion ke baad mai wapas jodhpur chali jaungi
swayam-nahi tu aaj hi jayegi.jaise hi sab log hospital se jayenge mai khud tujhe train main bitha dunga.{taani was shocked to ths.her eyes were stil wet...til thn here outside doctor cums n says}
doctor-aapke frnd ko hosh aagaya aap jake mil sakte hai.
sharon-thank u doctor.{al moves into rey room n kriya goes to him} kriya-rey aap thik to hain
rey-yaa...{rey luks at everyone n was searching taani.}
sharon-kisse dhund rahe ho rey
rey-wo..wo..swayam nahi dikhai dera.
vicky-haa wo bahar hai aata hi hoga
rey-kk
sharon-tum thik hona rey..
rey-hmm..bt sharon mujhe aag se bachaya kisne???
sharon-wo taa..{bt before she can complete a voice comes frm behind}
voice-kriya...kriya ne bachaya tujhe.
{by al looks bck n it was swayam..al were shocked}
rey-wat?kriya ne mujhe bachaya??
swayam-haa rey kriya ne bina apni jaan ki parva kiye tujhe bachaya.{by ths al were confused.n rey says}
rey-thanks rey
kriya-its k rey bt
swayam-rey i thnk tujhe rest karna chahiye. chalo guys
all-yaa.bye rey{al leaves bt as swayam was abt to leave rey stops him}
rey-swayam
swayam-haa bol
rey-wo taa..taa.. taani nai dikhai de rahi
swayam-taani wo rohan mumbai aaya hai na to usse milne gayi as wo abh thode dino ke london jaa raha hai na{by this rey gets hurted}
rey-usse ye sab pata hai
swayam-haa maine bataya tha bt wo rohan ke saath time spent kar rahi hai.{by ths rey was literally so hurted.swayam leaves frm there.reys eyes were filled with tears...here swayam cums out n team were there}
sharon-swayam tumne rey se jhut kyun kaha.
swayam-sharon plz main jo kar raha hu wo rey ke ache ke liye hai so plz guys jo mai kar raha hu usmain mera support karo plz jab tak rey thik nai hoga tab tak tum log kuch mat karo plz
al:kk 5n..
swayam-guys tum sab abh ghar jao mai yaha rehta hu.
kriya-nai swayam mai bhi yahi rey ke paas rehti hu.
swayam-k.sharon tum n puri team jao.its late tum log kal subah aao.
sharon-yaa..{al leaves n kriya goes to reys roo n swayam goes to taani room..}
kriya- rey aap aaram kariye{til thn nurse cums n gives injection n rey sleeps.til thn here in taanis room}
swayam-chal taani.
taani-bhai mai jaane se pehle ek baar rey jo dekhna chahti hu.plz bhai
swayam-ruk mai kuch karta hu... {swayam moves to reys room n tels kriya}
swayam-kriya chalo ham dinner karke aate hai
kriya-nahi swayam khane ka man nai hai
swayam-khane ka man to mera bi nai hai bt dinner to karna padega na chalo...
kriya-hmmm {kriya n swayam moves out of room.as they moves taani enters reys room n luk at him.her eyes were filled with tears.}
Edited by lovelypriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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priya...loved it...rey in the lab...and taani too run in...kya hoga ab aage...plz update soon...cant wait...
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awesome update.
loved the way Nil explaining rey..
and god how much taani loves rey that she didnt care about herself and just went into fire to save Rey's life...
and the pendant part was just awesome...
hope now truth will be reveal soon or it will be reveal atleast infront of sharon , swayam or rey..
pls. pls. do update the part 74 and 75.. soon.
am eagerly waiting for it..
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omg...swayam came to know about taarey...but he doesnt know that rey also loves taani...update next soon priya...
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chapter 74-a
{as kriya n swayam moves out taani enters rey room.taani luks at rey n her eyes were filled with tears..she moves to him n sits on table beside the bed.she takes reys lft hand in her right hand n holds it..rey was in deep sleep bt he was able to feel taani.she was crying like hel n her tear fals on his hand.she says} taani-mujhe pata hai rey ye sab meri wajah se ho raha hai.na mai aapki lyf mai aati aur na aapko itna sab sehna padta.m sry rey.bt aajse meri wajah se aapko koi problem nahi hogi kyunki mai hamesha ke liye jaa rahi hu.hamesha khush rehna rey.aur mai sirf aapse pyaar karti hu aur hamesga karti rahungi..{saying ths taani stand up n kisses on reys forehead n thn on his cheek..thn she was abt to move bt rey in sleep was holding her hand very tight.she tries to free it bt was unable to do.til thn swayam cums there n sees ths.seeing ths he also cums n try to free the hand bt was unable..aftr a long time the hands get separated n swayam drags taani n takes off frm there..they reach home.taani was stil crying.swayam rushes to taanis room takes out a bag n strt keeping everythng in it.. taani sits on bed folding her clothes lost in her thoughts..swayam keeps al the things tht were outside n thn opens the cupboard.opening the cupboard he sees al rey picture.almost every picture of rey was there with written my swt heart,my prince charming on it.seeing tis he luks at taani who was lost in thoughts..swayam keeps everythng in bag n zips it.thn he covers al the photos with a red cloth..he takes the bag n says.}
swayam-chal taani.{bth moves to car n they reach the railway station.swayam takes ticket,some food n water bottle..n gives it to taani saying}
swayam:yele ye teri ticket,tera liye water bottle n raste mein khane ke liye kuch...{taani takes them til thn train wistles n taayam luk at train n swayam turn to go when taani stop him..by saying}
taani:abh aap mujhe last hug bhi nai karenge bhai.. {swayam eye fel with tears n he immeditely turn n walk to taani n pull her into tight hug...n close his eyes taani smile with a teary eyes they stated hug 4 smetime thn taani puts her hand bck of swayam whn swayam open his eyes n move bck n say..brking the hug}
swayam:ja tu abh..{taani walk to train n step in n train start off n taayam keep luking at eachother with teary eyes til they get disappear to eachother n swayam go bck to hospital...Next day morning al cme to hospital n swayam was taking coffee 4 kriya whn team enter n nil ask}
nil:swayam abh taani kaisi hai...
swayam:wo thik hai..
sharon:kaha hai apne..{swayam cut her}
swayam:wo rohan aya hai to use milne gai hai..
all:wht?
sharon:bt uski tabiya thik nai hai...na
swayam:she is 5n now
nil:bt {swayam again interps him }
swayam:k main wo formalities baki hai main wo karke ata hu thn hum rey kn lejayenge.k{al nodes they head n move to rey}
sharon:how r u rey now..{rey smile n say 5n n he again see here n ther n ask}
rey:sharon taani kaha hai?{sharon was abt tn ans whn swayam enter..}
swayam enter n say
swayam:chal rey tere discharge papers ready hogaye hai...tere ghar pe kaam chalrana to tu mere ghar pe rahega..{rey thnk how to stay with swayam as taani was there.bt swayam says.}
swayam:tu tension mat le main hu na.,{rey smile to each other n thn they al leave for swayam house n rey was taken to guest room n thn swayam ask him to take rest n team go out it was evening...n rey take rest n team leaves 4 they house n thn in nt swayam prepare dinner n take with him 4 himself n rey n go his room thn rey get up n they have dinner it was 1st time when reyam were togeather n there was a silence...thn they finish dinner swayam give medicine to rey n thn as swayam was going rey stop him..
rey:swayam rukna yar
swayam:kya hua kuch chaiye kya?
rey:ha chaiye thoda sukun yar main thak gaya hu do din se aise bhete bhete plz mere se bat kar na..{swayam nodes n go n sit near window..as he sit there rey get the flashes oe how he is to cme 4m it to meet taani n how he use to hide 4m swayam n hnw he use to gn close to taani...he was lnst n swayam notice this til thn rey cme out of his sense n thn say to swayam}
rey:maine tujhe mujhse bat karne ko kaha tha...{thn swayam get up n cme n sit near rey n there was silence 4 2min thn swayam brk the silence..}
swayam:k to kal se dance practice suru karna haina waise bhi do din hai
rey:yaa
swayam:k main kal kriya ko samjhdunga..concept..
rey:nahi uski zarupat nahi hai hum koi aur conbept karenge
swayam:bt why?
rey:bas aire hi mujhe wo concept nai karna {swayam think tht as taani was there he dnt wanj to do n thn he ask}
swayam:to kya concept karoge..
rey:let kriya decide it main use kal boldunga k.
swayam:k chal abh tu soja gudnt.
rey:gudnt,{swayam leaves 4m there n rey was trying to sleep bt he get the flashes of as he was in fire al were shouting,he is in fire n smeone cme take him out hold his hand n thn the vision of hospital sme 1cme to him talked with him take hir hand n kissed him n then he holding smeone hand thn the person far 4m him...was going going n going when he shouts n get up}
rey:taaniii..{he was sweating heavly n was nt udrstndg wht happen whn swayam enter his room with coffee n say}
swayam:gudmrng rey uth gaya tu...
rey:{seeing swayam try to be normal n say}gudmrng..{swayam give him coffee n say to get ready as team wil cme...aftsme time team cmes except kriya n sharon ask swayam how is rey n he say he is k til thn rey cme out al hug him...thn the whole team have their brkfast n kriya comes n go rey n say hi n was abt to hug rey bt he move saying hi...team notice this n swayam say }
swayam:k rey phir tumlog practice karo main music lagata hu..{swayam go n play music n rey n kriya start dancing bt rey was nt able to dance with kriya as she cme very close him n he stop dancing n move bck..n say sorry n again they resume n again the same happen swayam see this n say}
swayam:its k rey tu thodi der aram kar..thn rey say tht they wil change concept n al get shock bt..thn al agree.
{the whole day goes on like this..they practise separate.whenever they practise together rey leaves steps.it was night.al moves to their houses..reyam has their dinner together.swayam says}
swayam-rey kal tu aur kriya yaha practise karlo.main n sharon,sharon ke ghar par karlenge n team kal college jaa rahi hai.k abh tu jaake soja
rey-kk.{they bth moves to their respective rooms..next day morning kriya cums n swayam leaves.rey get ready n they have brkfast thn they strt dancing separate.here swayam was nt concentrating.til thn sharon gets a call frm simmi.}
sharon-hello..wat the hel simmi cant u do a single work.i told u to handle again u r disturbing me.wo sab tumhe acs ko puchna chahiye...n weaklings ka stage kyun tum dazzlers ka stage lo.no need dazzlers one is the bst..{thn she hungs up the cal n swayam}
swayam-mai jaata hu
sharon-swayam practise?
swayam-nai practise ki kya zarurat hai aap to diva hai dazzler hai
sharon-wat the hel swayam ab ismein dazzler bich mai kaha se aaya.
swayam-nai sharon wo to pehle se hi tha bas mai bhul gaya tha mai aapki barabari karne chala tha{n he leaves.it was already evening..here rey n kriya completes practise }
kriya-rey mai aapke liye coffee n kuch khane ko banati hu.
rey-nai kriya its kk.
kriya-aap yaha bhethiye mai banati hu.{rey sits there n kriya goes to kitchen..mean while rey gets some sound of windows.}
rey-ye aawaz to taani ke room se aarahi hai.lagta hai room mai koi nai hai mai jau..nai..par mujhe sirf jaake windows hi to bandh karni hai... {n he go to taani room n go near window n close it n as he was retuning he hear sme snund n turn n see that the cupboard door was moving he go to clnse it..bt then suddenly the window again get open due to wind n the cloth on rey pic fal bt he turn to window n dnt see it n go to close window as he turn he get shock to see his pics in the cupboard n go near it see al sweetheart n al pic each n single pic of him then he eye fal on a big photo frame which was covered he remove the cover n take it out n see tht it was pic of taarey which was clicked by rohan in goa n it was written to lovely taarey 4m rohan..he get shock to read this n then he see there was a dairy behind on which was written TAANIS PERSONAK DAIRY,...n he keep the photo n go to take dairy bt kriya cme to so he quickly close the door kriya notice this n she say him tht}
kriya:wo rey apki coffee...{he nodes n leave kriya too leave behind him thn rey take coffee kriya goes to kitchen til thn kriya phone ring it was neha kriya gn n pick the phone n get busy in talking n rey was here luking magzines...til thn both get some smell rey rush to kitchen n see tht the smethng has burned on gas he off the gas til thn kriya cme there rushing n see wht happened her phone was on...}
kriya:oh shit!sab kuch jal gaya.
rey:tum kaha thi?pata nai gas pe rakha hai to gas ke pas rehna chaiye
kriya:wn neha ka call tha
rey:oh grt to chit chat hori thi...
kriya:i m Sorry main phir banadeti
rey:iski zarurat nai hai..
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its awesome i feeling so sad plz yeh sad track jaldi se khatam karo and plz continue soon

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