TR ff:kahin pyar na ho jaye ch 11 pg 140

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PreciousHeart

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Posted: 12 years ago

#711

Dipppsss I love u yaar! Omg taani agreedomg taani's past 😭vihaan 😡🤢thank god now everybody knows 😳precap😲😲😲sab ko pata chal Gaya !omg now toh can't wait for rey's reaction hope not soo bad😆but in the precap swayams line-what the hell Sharon u have a son ! Omg that cracked me up🤣loved it update soon

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vibhaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#712

sorry 4 then late reply

awesome update dipu👏👏👏👏👏

finally rey admit he loves taani

love jelous rey

love taarey dance.

love taarey convo.

hate vihaan😡😡😡

precap intresting cant wait to see rey reaction.

cant wait. update soon. thanks 4 pm me. do pm me.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#713

Dipu!!
update this ff alreadyy!!
please!!
i wonder the gangs reaction to taani's answer 😕😆

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christy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#714

gr8 update dr sry for late commenting bulbu nd the update was awsum rey luvs deepika lolzz luvd their dance ,,,,,i hate this vi vo n sis how dare they hurt taani arghhh was waiting for thid precp 1ly hehe gonna be interesting upd soo dr

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Yukta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#715

lovvvd it di...it was sooo beautiful..hated vihan and lovved rey aur ab TAAREY bhi...<3

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#716

Dipu , y no update yaar , what happened , this is my fav of ur ffs i was waiting for this

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dh19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#717

pls. pls. pls. update soon. cant wait more for this update and make it lamba wala pls.

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shriya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#718

hey nyc upd
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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#719

Hi guys...i know i m late...sorry guys*holding ears*...but now i m here with an update so enjoy and like and comment...

Flash back ends...

All are like statue...all of them's eyes are teary and taani...shhe is also crying...

Rey is boiling with anger...he want to beat up him blue and black...

Sharon stand up and hug taani...

Sh:taani...tumne itni badi baat mujhse chupai??

Ta:m sorry sharon...but me kya karti...me tumhe bhi dukhi nahi karna chahti thi...

Sh:promise me taani from now u will not hide anything from me...

Ta:promise shar...

All girls stand up and hug both of them...

Si:taani we r with u...

Ne ri aa:we also ...

Boys:and we also...

Taani smiled through tears in her eyes...rey saw her but feeling happy seeing taani smiling...

All gather in a group ...and taarey are beside each other...both look at each other and smile ...

Sw:so taani...r u ready for dance??

Ta:yes swayam...i m ready...

Sw:good...just forgot about your past and enjoy your present...

Ta:aap thik keh rahe ho...mene bhi yahi socha hai ki ne sab bhul kar move on karoongi...

Rey:thats good naughty bird...

Taani smile looking at him...

All sit down...

Sw:rey...taani...

Taarey:ha...

Sw:aaj to sabko batana hi padega ki tum dono ek dusre ko ye naughty bird ,mr.akdu mr sweet...kya kya bulate ho...ese kyu bulate ho tum log???

Taarey smile...

Ta:swayam...vo kya hai na clg ke pehle hi din hamari fight ho gayi thi...aur me gussa ho gai thi to inhone mujhe angry bird keh diya...to mene bhi unko attitude wala samaj liya aur mene unhe mr.akdu bol diya...

All:angry bird ...mr.akdu...kya name diya hai...good good...

Rey:aur ek baar class me ye ro rahi thi to mene usse senti bird name de diya aur mene usse samjaya ki rona nahi chahiye...so she gave me name mr.sweet...and...aap sabko uski canteen masti to yaad hi hogi na...

Si:oh god...how can i forgot...

Rey:to us din k baad mene usse naughty bird name de diya ...

Ta:aur aur...rey ka ek aur bhi name hai...

All:(except rey)ek aur??

Ta:ya...mr.crazy...

All:mr.crazy???

Ta:ya...u know what guys...rey is crazy for someone...

All:(except swaron bcoz they know it)what??

Swaron look at rey who is staring at taani...

Vi:dude...tune bataya nahi ...

Nil:ya...ladki ka name kya hai???

Rey:stop it guys...esa kuch nahi hai...

Ta:are kya nahi...guys she is...

All:she is...

Ta:"DEEPIKA PADUKONE"

All:what??

Ta:yes...

Vi:oh...hame laga usne sach me koi ladki pasand aa gayi ...

Rey:guys...esa kuch nahi hai...

And he look at swaron who r looking at him...

Rey give him "what" look...

Swaron give him "baad me batate hai" look...

Swaron look at each other...

Sw:tumhe pata hai??

Sh:tumhe bhi pata hai??

Swaron:yes i know ..

Vi:hey guys...kya pata hai tum logo ko...

Sw:vo...guys...vo...

Sh:are dance routin...fix karna hai na...

Sw:ya...right...

Nil:ya dude...u r right...

Sh:ok guys...so abhi to hum ghar chalte hai and sharp at 8 pm at my apartment...

All:ya...ok...

Taarey are not answering.

Taani is thinking"yug wait kar raha hogga...mujhe jaldi chalna chahiye varna vo phr naraz ho jayega..."

And our hero is staring at her...

Sh:taani...

Sw:rey...

Taarey:ya. .kya hua???

Sh:at my apartment at 8 pm...

Taarey:ok...

All:ok then...meet at sharon home...

Ta:ok...sab decide ho gaya na ...

Sh:ya...

Ta:ok...so chali japdi shar...mujhe der ho rahi hai...

She stands up and grab sharon...

Ta:bye guys...bye mr.crazy...

Sh:bye guys...sharp at 8 pm.

All:bye...we will be there...

Rey is staring at her back untill she disappear...

Swayam came near him and whisper in his ears "wo chali gai rey..."

Rey look at him and swayam laugh...and then all are back at home...

Today nither yug go to park nor rey...

Taani prepare dinner and then go to sharon's apartment...

Door bell rang and sharon open the door ...

Sh:hi taani...

Ta:hi shar...

Sh:yug ko nahi layi??

Ta:vo jimmy k sath khel raha hai...

Sh:ok...coffee??

Ta:ya sure...

Sharon go in the kitchen and just then door bell rang...taani go and open the door...its rey...

As taani open the door...rey saw her and lost in her eyes...

Ta:rey...

No response

Ta:rey...

Still no responce...

Taani shook him and said:reyyy...

Rey come to his sense...

Rey:ha taani...kya hua??

Ta:andar aaiye...

Rey comes in and sit ...

Then all members come and sharon give all of them coffee...

They discuss about their routin of dance...how many hours and which time to reherse...

With yug:

He is playing with jimmy abd just then jimmy's dad came...he cane and hold him in his hands and hug him...

Yug thinking"i also want dad...i also want that my father love me...take me in his hands ...take me to the park...play with me...his eyes filled with tears...he couldnt take it any more and ean to sharon's home...he knew that taani is there...

He enterd in the hall crying...bcoz of tears he couldnt see anyones face clearly...

Hearing sobbing voice...

Sh:yug...(taani is in washroom)

Rey:yug????

Yug came near sharon but he is crying...sharon sat on her knees and cup his face...all are shocked seeing the scene...

Sh:yug...kya hua???ro kyu rahe ho??

Yug hug her and can say only one word .."mom"...

She put her hand on his head and said:ha...kya hua???

Sw:mom??

Rey:mom??(sharon yug ki mom hai??)

Simi rinni neha:mom??

Nil amar vicky:mom??

Yug is still hugging her...

In wash room taani hear yug sobbing and came running outside...

Sw:what the hell sharon...u have a son??

All:ya sharon...what is this??

Sharon look at them...

Yug open his eyes which are still teary...but he recognize her mumma standing there...

He said:"mum...mummaaa..."

Sharon free him and he ran to taani and hug her on her legs...

Taani took him in her hands and patted his back...

Rey:mumma???

All boys and girls:mumma???

Ta:shona...kya hua???aap ro kyu rahe ho???(to gang)he is my son...

All:what???

Rey is totally sbocked...

Rey thinking:i thought taani called shona to sharon...but she call shona to yug...is she married??widow??divorced???her mind is now full of questions now...

Yug:"m...mu...mummaa...y...yug...want dady...who love yug...play with yug...eat icecream with yug..."

Taani stood there like a statue hearing this...sharon also shocked...

Sw:taani...who is his dady???

Taani's mind blank...she coildnt think what to answer...

Rey is staring at her...his eyes are teary...

Rey:(yug is taani's son means...kya vo mujhse pyar karegi??kya me kabhi usse apna bana sakunga??

Sh:taani...u go home...i will handle here...

Ta:ya...

Taani go from there and here gang also left except reyam...

Swaron saw rey...who was heart broken...sitting on sofa...

Sw:rey...controll your self...

Tears are now flowing from his eyes...

Rey:swayam...kya taani kabhi mujhse pyar karegi???aur taani aur vihan k bich to kuch bhi nahi hai to yug...

Sharon put her hand on his shoulder ...

Rey:sharon...

Sh:there is something...which is very important bcoz u love taani...

Rey:ab kya baki hai sharon??

Sh:he is not taani's son rey...

Reyam:what????

Rey look at sharon with mixed expression confused and happy both...

Rey:what???what did u say sharon???

Here with tayug...

Taani came in and go directly in her room...yug is crying so badly that he fell asleep in her hands...

She make him sleep properly and wear him a blanket...

Taani's dad come there and ask:whts happening???

Taani turn off the light and said:we will talk in the hall...

Both go in the hall.

Here with shareyam:

Rey:what??what did u say???

Sh:u heard right rey...yug is not his son...

Precap:rey will know about how taani and yug met...

Rey pretand as yug's father and stay with him.

So guys...thats it for today...plz tell me hows it??