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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Kashmakash me khoo kayee

Well said dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

I am fine dear...

half update is written...
schedule going really busy...

Thnx for informing
Update at your time
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Thnx for informing
Update at your time


ha teek hi hai update at your time ...

sada kee hai aisi to always waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Well said dear 😊



geet jaha kahi bhi khoee ... nuksaan to hamara hai my dear writers
Edited by maansee - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



mee too😆
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waiting for ds one's update..
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where r u?? waiting eagerly for this story
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Posted: 12 years ago
Will update in a
today girls
Sorry for all this delay
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 35

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Geet removed her anklets, bangles and bindi and kept it in cupboard.

In the breakfast table when Geet came and started serving the food everyone felt something different, but to Maan that something irked. He couldn't know what.

Geet moved around the table to serve to everyone and then everyone realized, her movements were not making beautiful sound today. How used to they have been to her dangling sound, especially Maan. She had made him so used to it, the coming of Geet nearby means those musical sound in his ears.

Geet sat opposite to him, Maan's curious eyes went on her and something looked missing in her, something he had unknowingly been used to see. Ohh... she looked beautiful as ever, but something was missing.

She had no bindi and jhumka as well. Her hands were empty, except those one bangle in each hands that were his mothers and now hers. And now he realized, she did not have her anklets too' Ohh!!! Showing me attitude!!!.

But she was quiet too, this didn't look good either. He somewhere has been used to her teasing. Though he would believe it irritated him but those teasing of hers gave life to his dull life.

"Geer beta, yeh kya? Aisee saadgi kyun" "woo maa bas yun hee" and Geet looked at Maan and their eyes met for while but Maan soon broke the eye lock. Savitri and Rajendra understood, there is something between two but they kept quiet.

The problem was it was Sunday and Maan made point to stay at home atleast on Sunday to give time to his parents.

After spending time with his family Maan was back in his room and was trying to look into some company stats on his laptop'

Though he was in study, he could not concentrate. He had in just few days been so used to sensing her by sound of her movement in room that today when it was quiet, it irritated him. It was not that he could not sense her coming and going in room but the silent that carried along with it irked him.

Some how the day passed and it was sleeping time. Her turns in sleep made no sound today. She did not make any fun of him today, nor did she tease him. Maan felt pain along with irritation somewhere. While he was trying to sleep, he could feel the pain of seeing her so plain and dull. Actually she has re-imprinted the image of Mishti in mind and this Mishti was very much alive rather than the dream one.

Maan had not realized that he has stopped dreaming or imagining of Mishti coz Geet was always there infront of him and she has successfully replaced his imagination with her live self. And the fact was he could not afford loosing all this in her.

He knew he have hurt her but he had yet not reached a point where he will go asking for sorry from her, so he kept quiet.

Next morning again, Geet did everything for him but no teasing. She offcourse smiled a little while giving him tea but everything was so plain.

Maan generally have someone bring his bag down to him after breakfast while Geet would go up to room and check herself and collect her files and bags. But today Maan went to room himself to take his stuff.

They were about to leave the room when Maan called Geet from behind "Listen" Geet placed her hand on her heart, closed her eyes. Hearing him call her after whole 1 day..

"Ji" and she turned. "Listen I did not ask you to change your ways, I mean your dress up and all. I just said don't expect you to involve me in those things. You mistook my words, you can dress up and be as you want, why should I ask you to change your ways. Just live as you wish"

"ji" Geet nodded and Maan immediately left.

After Maan left downstairs, Geet sat down to feel his words. For a moment she felt like running and wearing all those, knowing how happy he will be, though he will not show. But then her naughty mind stopped her. Let's see how far it can go.

Maan waited for her downstairs thinking she must be getting her things on but Geet soon came down, with plain look. Maan was irritated to core "ohhh showing me attitude, galti kee maine isse baat kerke."

"Will you make it fast; we are going to office if you need to be reminded."

Geet looked and walked with him. Smiling within, knowing he was irritated. Ohhh.. she has started loving this kind of irritation of his.

In office too, Geet would come to Maan with reports, quietly get her work done and leave. He was angry on himself. Why had he been so used to her with those chirping sounds and seeing teasing brightness in her eyes. He knew she will take it away one day then why had he allowed himself to fall for it.

Three days has passed and now Maan's anger, irritation and restlessness have taken toll on him. He could take it no more, no more will he let her change his life as per her wish.

That day before leaving for home, Geet went to submit report to Maan but he had already left. Geet was little confused as Maan worked much longer in evening.

As Geet entered her room, she found Maan. His look said he was waiting for her.

"Do you need anything" "close the door" his look scared her. She quietly did as he asked.

Maan then forwarded his hand in front of her, one had pair of anklet and other had a set of bangle

"As you don't care of other's feeling but I do. Maa doesn't like you this way and naturally she is going to blame me for all this you are doing. So I selected these, now you can wear them"

Geet could not believe what she was seeing. After whole two days of cold war, he was here with all those stuff and he selected it himself. Her happiness would have clearly shown on her face had she not turned the other side.

Still he did not say he wanted her to wear those, how much she wanted him to say that.

Geet said in serious tone hiding her excitement.

"I will explain Maa, you don't need to worry. You don't need to trouble yourself with these stuffs"

Geet started to move towards the door when she felt his strong hand on her arm and next she knew she was turned and has hit his hard chest.

Ohh'. The feel of contentment to be near him, to be in contact with him took her to different world. Their eyes met for a while and then he threw her on the bed. Geet was confused. His actions were scary, telling he was angry but she was loving this physical manhandling from him. At least he felt his right on her in all ways to behave with her in such ways.

Next what happened was completely unexpected to Geet. He pushed her salwar a little up and he was placing the ancklets on her anckle. Geet could not close her eyes to feel the moment because she wanted to live it. How his sexy long fingers were playing with ancklet and her feet. Geet's felt light as if she was floating in some different world.

Maan then bent down to press the clip ancklet from his teeth. His lips rubbed with her soft skin'

"Is he planning to kill me today? " and then he took her other leg and did the same process, driving Geet to entirely new world.

Maan who had complete serious expression, which said nothing but was doing crazy things to her.

He then took the bangles and slowly placed on her hand, it was so delicate. Geet's eyes were fixed on his s**y hand and her heart was completely out of her control.

Was it now needed from his mouth to say that he wants this all for himself. His acts said it all so aloud.

As for Maan, it had been difficult to handle the sudden emptiness that her new Avtar has brought. He could not let her play with his emotions all the time. She has come and made him used to all this and how dare she took it away from him at her own wish.

After Maan was done, he got up and before turning "don't show me attitude next time" and he turned.

Geet smiled, her heart was overflowing with happiness that she could not care of his harsh words now. Maan was leaving the door and geet was not able to hold her heart'

Maan was about to open the door when he heard the sweet dangling sound running towards him and next he felt her all over him, hugging him from back.

"Maa-aan" is only that escaped her lips.

Maan turned and their eyes met'. Both kept looking into each others eyes and read it.

Maan could clearly see all submission in her eyes and Geet felt his eyes were blank, said nothing but definitely denial was not there at all.

Part 36

Next: Jiay jale Jaan Jale, naino tale jiya jale. But only if I get long and lots of comments and lots of likes'. Till then want to say something:

I am on Face book too now

All,

Though my belief is love needs to be felt and not proved but still have patience Geet will also prove her love in many ways.

-Anu
Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
finally maan did what geet wanted

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