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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

hai anu dear..

i have seen this ff many times
but did not have time to read..
but kept bookmarked..
today i was in office,,
thought 2 get a break from the accounts
n i started to read urs..
i cant stop myself
n read it in full go..
i forgot my work too drowning in this story
it totally stole my heart..
from start when geet was in ego
n hurting maan n breaking his love n his parents n humilating him..
dancing before him with other men
she left him to burn..
n vice versa it happened..
when geet wants a chance
he dont want to believe it as real
he has totally changed into a tough man..
n geet tried in all ways..
it was really emotional n painful to see maneet close yet far..
geet successfully made her entry in km..n now in his room..
loved her teasing n making sounds of bangles n anklets to irritate maan
totally now im in love with urs..
n im eagerly waiting for ur next part..
lovely work dear..

Thank you so much dear and am happy that you liked it.
When I started this FF at start I was so scared, if readers will accept it or not but the comments made me confident about the concept.
First time such big comment from you... BIG HUG from my side.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 36

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Thanks again to Shruthe for this awesome banner

Maan turned and their eyes met'. Both kept looking into each others eyes and read it.

Maan could clearly see all submission in her eyes and Geet felt his eyes were blank, said nothing but definitely denial was not there at all.

Maan was in his football ground, practicing is favorite game to make his mind clear. He was fed up of his confused state. Since last week when he had made her wearing those ornaments, few questions were not leaving him behind.

Did he not trust her love? And everytime the clear answer he got was YES.

Was she not his love? How much he had tried to deny but always the answer was YES.

Was he able to keep himself away from her : Again even after denial, he ended up in conclusion that he wanted to crush her in his arms.

Did he not see, she was waiting for his acceptance : Yes, her all acts, every word, every gesture and submittive eyes all said only one thing' That she was just waiting for him to accept their relation. All she did these days was waiting for him to accept their love.

So what is he doing, punishing her, her who is his LOVE? He was even punishing himself and for what. What is he doing, safeguarding himself from further pain and in return giving her pain, she who is his love.

She has accepted all her feelings for him and confessed everything to him like an open book, is it easy for a girl to make such open confession, but she did. And after all this was his aloofness not a punishment for her.

Maan have been thinking all this for whole last week.Maan came out of the football ground when it was almost dark, he got fresh and directly went to dinner table. When everyone was seated, Geet started serving, Maan looked at her. Ohhh his looks gave her jitter in her belly. No it was not his regular intense gaze but she could feel the softness in his eyes for her. Geet blushed and served him.

Maan could clearly see his effect on her. He knew he had made her wait too long, and he was almost sure that in real all she needed was him and only him.

For Geet, the next two days after the ornaments episode; she was in euphoria, trying to believe that it all actually happened. And then she gave him his space, anyways on office front he had loaded her with work load.

All the while and after dinner they where having family talks, and Maan could not stop looking at Geet. Same question was repeating in his mind and he observed Geet to confirm his answers.

Maan's look; the way his gesture were changed towards her, Geet could not stop thinking about his gesture.

Geet got in a soft silky night gown, she stood in front of mirror but closed her eyes, she held herself tight and hugged herself

Jiya Jaley Jaan Jaley Nainon Taley Dhuan Chaley Dhuan Chaley
Raat Bhar Dhuan Chaley Jaanun Na Jaanun Na Jaanun Na Sakhi Ri
Jiya Jaley Jaan Jaley...

Geet was lost in her world when she heard door open close, she immediately opened her eyes and turned. Seeing Maan standing there at door she immediately straightened herself.

"wooo woo' new night gown.. hehe" she was all confused, stammering.

"Jhalli, what exactly were you doing. He will think you are despo..haan tou kya' ok shut up now" she was blabbering in her mind, giving nervous smile to Maan.

Maan could clearly see how he has made her wait for him. Since he has started thinking from her prespective, things looked different to him.

Now believing that she truly loves him, all she is doing is with true heart, he felt different.

Maan was forwarding towards her in slow step and his eyes were direcly on her eyes and his face was calm, said nothing.

"That day he left me, today definitely he is going to kill me' see how he is slowly walking, looking into my eyes, like a lion on his hunt'. What lion on hunt' Geet you have gone completely out of your mind"

Dekhte Hain Tan Mera Man Mein Chubhti Hai Nazar

But as Maan forwarded more towards her, her steps automatically kept going backward, she could not tell at all what was in his mind.

Soon Geet's back was resting on the wall and Maan was standing exactly infront of her. Geet's running mind completely stopped working, all her smartness gone by the way he was standing so close to her. He was just kept looking into her eyes ' it looked pure, her face, her milky white soft skin.

Geet gave her mind a break from thinking and rather decided to enjoy his handsome face in front of her. She did not look into his eyes, as those big chocolate brown eyes scared her, the intensity in them so she better rested her eyes on his lips' wow, what a perfectly M shaped lips, they were so tempting. At the same time, Maan's eyes also went on her juicy lips and his eyes stopped there


Honth Sil Jaate Unke Narm Hothon Pe Magar
Ginti Rehti Hoon Maein Apni Karvaton Ke Silsile
Kya Karun Kaise Kahun Raat Kab Kaise Dhaley
Jiya Jaley Jaan Jaley...


Soon Geet felt his hands on her face, Maan's finger went on curls on her face. Geet was all gone now, she completely gave all her thinking ability, closed her eyes to feel whatever he was doing to her.

Maan's finger's started playing with her curls, giving thousands of jitters in Geet's belly. As he placed her curls behind her ears, his fingers touching her cheeks and her ears, Geet felt so week even to stand, she held side of her gown tight in her fist. She was tempted to hold tight onto him but feared that she may disturb him and he will stop. She thought Maan is in his trance but Maan was completely in his control. He knew what he was doing.

Maan's finger slowly went down her neck and his fingers were moving so slow on her skin, completely teasing her.

"why don't he strangle me with his bare hand rather than this slow torture"

Kya Karun Kaise Kahun Raat Kab Kaise Dhaley
Jiya Jaley Jaan Jaley...

Maan's hand then slowly slid down her arm giving goosebumps in her whole body. Unable to take anymore, Geet hugged him tight "Maa-aan" escaped from her mouth, giving relief to her torture.

Maan looked down at her body which was gluing to him, completely submitting her whole self to him. he could feel her soft skin against him, her budge pressing hard on his hard chest. Both were lost in feel of other's skin against, the feel was unique, the feel of completeness, the feel of contentment. Maan's hand slowly lifted up, there was first a hesitation but then slowly he lifted it up to encircle his hands around her as she was encircling around him. Though his hug was not as tight as geet's but with light touch he hugged her.

"I love you Maan, I love you with my body and soul"

She knew Maan needed that consolation. She felt and realized while hugging him that Maan was ready to start relation between them that he was burning like her but he was hesitating. It was her job to get him out of this hesitation.

"I love you Maan, I love you more than anything, mjore than my own self"

She kept on saying and Maan kept on listening. Her submission, her open confession for him was like balm on his wound. She had harsly told him on their first night that he should not imagine to touch her so he badly needed to hear her open confession again and again to get out of hesitation. Geet was exactly doing what he needed her to do.

She kept saying I love you Maan is all different ways and Maan kept on absorbing her words.

After a while Geet said "Maan you are supposed to pick me in your arm and place me in bed like a romantic hero'" "What?? "

"What what? Whole night we can't stand up hugging each other, we need to go to bed and that was romantic way, so I suggested."

Geet said as she knew Maan is definitely not going ahead this, at least for this night.

"hmm.. I am sleepy, it's already late and I need to wake up early." Maan went to bed.

Geet giggled she loved teasing him. Maan closed his eyes on one side of bed, smiling to himself at her teasing.

Hi All,

It is getting tough for me to send PM due to time constrain. I get very less time free and I will prefer to write an update on those limited time than using it for sending PM.

I will notify on facebook whenever I update. So please join me there as at present main purpose of that account is update notification.

I will send one or two PM giving same notice so that everyone is notified.

One in a while I can send update PM but I cannot promise it to be a regular process. Sorry for inconvenience.

Thanks for all your love and support for all my FFs.

Special thanks to all who spam my threads with pictures, I Love them.

Also sorry for the mistakes coz all updates are written in hurry.

Also i will be on vacation for 10 days, so most probably no update till 12 March.
-Anu
Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me first today ... what a wonderful update..
Maan realizing the love for geet actually going forward hope he don't make her wait long now...
nice choice of song ...
Edited by change12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update, loved it totally


This line was superb ---


"That day he left me, today definitely he is going to kill me… see how he is slowly walking, looking into my eyes, like a lion on his hunt…. What lion on hunt… Geet you have gone completely out of your mind"

Geet trying different way to confessed her loved to him so that he can take step in their relation as she very well know tht he is in need of consolation as she was the one who had reject him on their first night.

Loved the way Geet teasing Maan and he too understand it
Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago

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