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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome teaser dear.
waiting for update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow tadakta bhadakta teaser.

Update bhi dhasu hoga.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ha...ha..ha nice teaser,, loved the eng translation of teda pooch wala kutta ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
teaser ke sahare aur kitna din rehna hoga dear????????????????????????
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey hi! Its been a long tym since u updated. Hope u r fine n nt much busy. Waitng for a hemlock update. U gave such a superb teaser n left teasing us! Do update soon n take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
update de do na

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Posted: 12 years ago
cool concept lovd..it..pm me de nxt update plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago



Crdit goes to
"26-chaitra" for making this hot and devil green title...thank u babes...really an awesome jov..huggies..(Not a diapar😆)









"U want to know the real reason?...Then fine...I'll tell you...I am here because of u...I want u...Physically."he suddenly got Serious.and boared into her eyes.



Geet looked at him with bursting eyes...In front of his gaze...she suddenly felt she was bare.




No words left her lips...her brain got blank...but only one instinct was saying her to cover up her chest by her hands from that disgusting person...



seeing her backed away covering her chest...He said..,"I want u physically...but not for my personal carnal needs Geet..."



Maan smiled and nodded her head as if geet is a baby and did some kiddish antics...



"...U naughty girl...the word "physical" doesn't deliver double meaning all the time..."



"ENOUGH...!!!...enough...!!!"





"Chall bata...kaise aya tu andar...???"(tell me how u came inside)Geet gripped the knife firmly.




"By Osmosis.."he was now looking around the drawing room.."hmm...Chinese partitions...nice."




"Huh...osmosis...??"she went to the door and gasped loudly...!!!



the door's lock was melted down by acid and the metal made the door a disgustingly damaged one.



"Hwww...!!! U son of a bitch...!!!and a chor..!! mumma mujhe maar dalegi...!!"(and a thief..mumma will kill me) geet turned and banged on maan's chest...and suddenly she got scared like a lost puppy.



"Geet...so sweet name...just like ur face...but ur persona...is to die for..."
Maan grazed her face to move those loose strands.Geet tried to protest...but maan held he more close and kissed her ear softly,"So my geet is afraid of her mumma...okk i will help u fix everything...but u have to say yes to my deal...what say...jaan..?"





"Chor mujhe...teda pooch wala kutta...!!"(leave me u spiral tail-ed dog)




"I want see u tomorrow...in the conference room of ur college.."Maan jerked her again in his arms to make her serious...




"Kyu...??"(why)geet now got scared..




"cause I will kiss u there...again" he trailed off placing his lips on hers.





His lips touched her soft ones and his whole body got electrified with a chill...a completely different feeling...with acute intensity...of satisfaction of having her soft lips in his mouth.



With a helpless groan he pulled her lips more into his hungry mouth by pulling them with his teeth.



It was obviously true that there were a lot of women constantly changing in his glamorous life...all of them provided him pleasures...but not satisfaction...but this simple girl...this 'odd' girl was giving him the satisfaction he didn't know existed.



He was amused at his own choice...but right now he is really enjoying having her in his arms.



He angled his face over hers to get better access.his mild rough stubble scratched her soft chin...and she whimpered out of pain.



Geet was on the other hand...completely shocked. she had never thought in her entire life that anything like this could happen to her.she forgot to protest even.geet's eyes tightly pressed automatically...



Her palms fisted and that LONG passionate kiss was nothing but a pitch black background with a sharp narrow continuous noise for some seconds...of stiffness.for her.



Maan stopped his mad kissing feeling the 'object' of his passion, stiff.



He stopped and looked at her staying on that position.



One drop of tear flowing down her left eye...made no sense in him...he kissed her cheek and told huskily, 'u r not that clever and strong that i thought u to be...it's easily guessed that u were never kissed before...and u were not pretty happy about it in ur mind.'


geet with all her strength...pushed this disgusting strong creature, and raised her hand to place the first slap of her life for a stranger...



But his swift hand held it impressively and swept her around to face her back to him...



Hugging her adoringly from back...he put his bony chin on her shoulder and said,'You know i had many gfs in my college life...i know there r many types of girls in a college...some are hot...some are bookie...some are rich...some r small town...vagera vagera...i've dated all types...for different purposes'


'...but u...u r something different...u r not hot...u r not that brilliant...u r not rich...u r not well dressed which attracts guys...phirbhi...something caught my eyes...i don't know what...''



geet's eyes plopped out hearing his words...she was feeling helpless...she imagined herself as a rat...who was desperately trying to ran away from the vicious cat who was playing with it's food before eating.



''...ur body..??naah...i've been with great bodies...ur face?ur not beautiful enough to attract MSK.''



''do u know what attracted me so badly...??hmm..??''



''U dirty dog...let me GO..!!!''geet bent and tried to bite his hand which was grabbing her waist.



Maan chuckled and said,''exactly...u'r attitude...is out of this world...i really loved it...ur aura is different...it's like a breath of fresh air in my life.''



''so...let me meet u...and invest u...for some days till i get bored of...and then u'll be prized with whatever u want in cash.''





Did he say invest...???



Geet's face burnt with embarrassment and shame...this filthy person was shamelessly pointing out her physical faults and demanded her time...!



'what the hell r u...?how do u call yourself a human..??let GO off me.!!!'
geet screamed moving away from him.



He casually sat on the sofa and said,'I broke up with my current GF for u to see u onwards...,she is...well was was a supermodel..as she won't have the limelight of being with me anymore.'



'hey wait...u just kissed me...then u told me bunch of things to make me feel low about myself and then...oh that the hell...U KISSED ME..!!'



'how DARE u..??'she said with controlling her tears.




''U missed on thing...the most important one...U r going to spend 4 hours with me everyday till i say so.''




''What type of Dog are u..???''geet uttered unbelievably..!



"One of a kind..."Maan took a cigarette out and lit it...''Now...so we have a deal or not...?''



''go to the dustbin and smoke there u poodle...the answer is a Big NO...!!''



'I'm not leaving without a yes...''



''toh tu maar kamina...!there is no chance in hell i'm gonna say yes...tera himmat kaise hua jo tu mujhe bol raha hain to sleep with u..???''



''I will not have sex with u geet...u are not that sexy to be my bed partner...''he said with a smirk.



''just some kiss...and some mushy stuffs...only if i like...but i promise not sex...''Maan exhaled the smoke and looked at her with a smile.



Geet kept looking at him baffled...this dog is continuously harassing her...she was speechless to response.



She took a deep breath...and said calmly..''please go away...i don't have any time for this craziness...i am enough crazy...so i don't need to put extra masala in my life.''




''oh but i do...''maan said putting the ashes on the table.




''plz go away from here...see i'm talking to u nicely...uski izzat to karo aap''
geet helplessly said.




''If u do not say yes then u'r papa's job will terminate tomorrow.''




''What...???''




''Yep...''Maan said getting up...''and he will never get any job i promise u that...he will be accused of theft.''




This last sentence broke all her self control...she fell down on the sofa with a thud and covered her face with her palms...and started to cry bitterly.




''...p..pappa...!!''she said with a shaky voice with hiccups...she was totally unable to tolerate any words against her parents.



And his words came to her as a shock.


''Or maybe rape attempt...??'' maan said with a devilish smirk.



*Geet got up from the sofa in a jerk and punched him hard on his cheek*



''what r u thinking..??do we have a deal or not??''




geet's thoughts broke by his voice...she really thought she should punch him hard like she thought in her mind.






''U know what..??u keep amusing me by crossing ur limit every time u utter a line...do u even know that?U want me to be ur 4 hour comedy show...and in return i get to preserve my father's name and dignity in this society right...??'
'geet bit out wiping her tears...she can't be weak in this situation...she has to be strong...and fight back.




''no...u'll be paid a 'large' amount of money...u just have to follow my Order that's it..clear?''



"Why r u doing this..? plz..spare me!" geet said in a helpless voice.



"look Geet,I havn't slept all night and i can't sleep now too...so i have no time for this emotional drama...so it's a yes..??"




"do i have a choice..??"



"for now...no."



''i am not a doll on a toy shop u bloody...''



''a..a.a...no badmouthing baby...my assistant will give u the legal papers...u will sign it...then we will meet at the conference room...sharp 1am...ok?''



"..1am my ass..."geet mummered.



''Did u say something...??''



''I have Biochemistry lab that time...i simply can't come...we'll be free at 2:30...then i'll have lunch...and then i'll come...and what legal papers...??''



''this relationship is a deal..a business between u and me...and it's confidential...No one i repeat NO ONE should know about it...and i said 1am...then it's 1 am...otherwise it will hamper ur papa's job.''



"yeah yeah...We'll see that later...first fix that door...and it has to be exactly how it was before..."




"Excuse me..??"Maan was a little backed off...he thought her papa was her turn off switch...but guess she has changed her switch to a new place.



Precap:The legal paper


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Ok...i gave a pretty large update...phew...
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But plz...plz...hit the like button like ur life depends on it...
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Me on a playful puppy mood today...
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so i want bigger comments too.
No rush...u can badmouth MSK as much as u can
me too gave him some of my personal fav words.
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Valli di u can spamm if u want too..
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Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago
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I m in love with this Gundi Geet.. Perfect for that ghamandi Maan Singh Khurana..😆 Maan U will be mad at the end of the day!! She will really make U that.. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
so chweeet
mushy..
lovely words by geet to maan in ur own way..
ur words played making geet accept maans deal..
she is helpless before this demon..
haha..he broke the door n she was worried what will she say 2 her mom..
n atlast too she asked him to make it...lol..
n maans doble meaning words also..
u proved ur devil mind..
haha..spamming..ok let me do...
ur wish how can i not fulfil it...😉
anything for my mushy..
in this thread only na😉
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago

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