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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys! you know what! aaj aditya mujhse bohot naraaz hai! uske bina kuch bhi accha nahi lag raha! hum dono ka jhagda ho gaya! aaj to epi dekhke uski aur yaad aa rahi hai! humne kal raat se baat nahi ki hai! i am feeling like crying!😭 aur isi tarah maine ek poem likh diya! i wanted to share it with you all! well jahaan pe maine apna aur aditya ka naam likha hai wahaan pe taani aur rey imagine kar lena!


ADITI / TAANI SIRF ADITYA / REY KI!


aditya / rey kaise kahoon tumse / aapse

kitna hai mujhe pyaar,

tumhare / aapke baho me samane ko

mai hoon bekarar!


ab maan bhi jaao / jaayiye

aisi bhi kya berukhi humse?

mana galti ki hai maine

par maafi maang rahi hoon na tumse / aapse!


na subah milne aaye

na raat ko baat ki,

kyun itna ho naraaz

mai to aditi / taani hoon aditya / rey ki!


tumhare / aapke bina mai kya hoon?

behti ret kisi haath ki!

bas itna kahna chahungi

mai ho nahi sakti kisi aur ki!


hey guys so how was it? bahut dukhi man se likha hai maine! please comment! it is really needed! this poem is my real feelings! pyaar aisa kyun hota hai krishna ji?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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res
unres !
yeh!!!!!!! me 1st!👏😊😛
oh that was a wonderful poem😊 more than taarey my attention was more on you and aditya
i hope d matter solves soon!
n ya all d best 4 future!👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aw, very sweet. I hope tera adi man jaye. And sachi very light which adds a sweetness. Feelings matter
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesom peom adi as ever.
Keep it up
Love
sonu
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShivTRSS

Aw, very sweet. I hope tera adi man jaye. And sachi very light which adds a sweetness. Feelings matter

hope so too! kuch special to socha hai manane ke liye! hope wo work kare!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg! i dnt knw what to say...

...jus speechless...

it was amazingly awesome... =)

and hope ur adi jaldi se mann jaye... so that next time ek bahut happy wala poem likna...

*big hug*
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww so beautiful dear... I hope Aap dono ki baat jaldi ho... I will pray for you Sweety... God bless darling :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awesome, very sweet!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome 1 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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such an amazing poem .. hope that your adi jaldi se mann jayee :)

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